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Ma journée (Ou doit il être "Mon Jour"?)
Je me réveilles à cinq heures.
Je fais mon lit.
Je mange le pétit déjeuner à cinq heures quinze.
Je me brosse les dents après ça.
Je dois être à la piscine à 7h00 jusqua 8h00 pour faire de l'excercise.
Je douches.
Je vais au travail à 9h00 et demie.
Je revenis à la maison à 17h00.
Mon temps libre est jusqua 20h00.
Je bois mon thé pour le dormir à 20h15.
Je vais à 21h00 au lit.
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
Start to learn English
Hello. My name is Tatiana. Iam from Russia. I live in Spain now. I like traveling with my husband. I really want to learn English, but now I study spanish, because this language very important here. Today was first class in english and I don't know how long time I need to start speak english. Some word y construction I know in my school, but I forgot everything. Wish me luck :-)
July 2, 2025
Text of today.
Today I'm gonna write a short text because I'm not pretty sure a concrete topic to write about. At this moment I'm watching some Youtube's videos about personal growth, law of attraction, etc. Today, after almost one month, i'll go to the gym, thats a new gym in my neighborhood, it is close to me, it is 5 minutes walking from my house.
July 2, 2025
Der erste Tag in Langcorrect
Ich habe langcorrect von Deepseek erkannt .
Ich heiße Essa Allahham.
Essa ist mein Vorname und Allahham ist mein Nachname.
Ich bin 27 Jahre alt und komme aus Palästina.
Meine Hoppys sind Fußball spielen und schwimmen.
Ich hoffe, dass ich viele freunde hier machen.
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
Vamos al hospital
Hoy yo con mi marido fuimos al hospital. Él necesita me ayuda, porque el no habla español nada y yo hablo de español un poquito. Entiendo todo lo que dice el doctor y respondo a todos las preguntas por mi marido. Me gusta esta experiencia. También después de una cita yo fui a la farmacia, porque me necesito comprar los medicamentos por una receta.
July 2, 2025
Keep moving
8pm, late evening, sitting at a room.
I turned around, look at the outside.
I didn't notice that it's night, only the small, blur light by streetlight, apartments, and lighting from cars in the highway.
The sound of dogs barking, someone fixing vehicle maintenance, the fan spinning towards me, children laughing with their parents.
But I'm sitting here, looking onto my computer, stress about money, worrying of my career, my future ahead.
I'm tired of this life, of the people around me, of how powerless I am.
What can I do? If I had the same, all my life would be a slave of them, of the people with money, power?
I noticed how stupid I am, by looked through a book and read summary of the 48 laws of power.
I have a lot of mistakes, but the most important thing I'd been fix was stop blaming others.
Because then I could focus on myself, not others, to change my mindset, leading to action, to get out of this.
Today will be the 8th day of writing streak on LangCorrect.
It's nothing impressive, but by writing everyday, I've been receiving so much useful lessons, love of you guys.
(I don't know which word fit better instead of "love", what I try to is you guys take care, care about me, leaving encourage comments).
That encourages me to write more, to not being depress by negative thoughts.
Thank you for supporting me. Hope you guys could achieve goals you want.
I'd like to make correction if someone try to learn Vietnamese haha.
I think my post sounds weird.
Perhaps you find anything unnatural, if you'd like to, you can leave a comment beside. I'd be very grateful for your help.
And which word or phrase is better instead of repeating "you guys" like me XD
July 2, 2025
Being a celebrity : a dream or a nightmare?
Every day we watch the world's most popular celebrities, admire them and want to be as famous as them. Everyone thought about it at least once. But is it really worth it?
Certainly, we all agree that being a celebrity has many advantages. For instance, you have a lot of fans who admire and love you. Another advantage is going to the fancy events where you meet and chat with other celebrities like you. Furthermore, being famous means being rich and wealthy. You won't worry about money.
On the other hand, being a famous person has disadvantages, and they are very important. For instance, being popular means having a lot of crazy and obsessive fans and paparazzi chasing you everywhere. They easily violate your personal boundaries, break into your house, and threaten you. In addition, obviously, you will have fans, also have haters who can hate every your move. Those horrible people can even wish you to die.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, and being a celebrity has both advantages and disadvantages. Remember that, only you decide which side you will take.
July 2, 2025
Rainy day.
Rainy season is one of my favourite season. To be honest, I enjoys the most when its rainy outside. The first smell of wet mud feels so good. When it starts raining suddenly everybody runs here and there to avoid it to not become wet. This rainy days remind me of my father, he used to pickup me from school when I was a little kid. Me with younger brother used to intentionally ride our bicycles from muddy places . Our mom doesn't like that thing because it makes our clothes too dirty. These rains are a blessing from God, through rain the farmers yields produces foods to eat. For me it reminds me my lost childhood memories.
July 2, 2025
動物
大人になると、年を重ねるうちに同じことに対する考え方が変わるのかもしれないと思っている。
今日はペットを飼うことについての物語を聞いた。
この絵本の主人公は、両親から特別なペットをもらい、一緒に生活を始めた。
そのペットは主人公のことが大好きだけど、いろいろと迷惑もかける。
たとえば、主人公のぬいぐるみを壊したり、夜ごはんを食べてしまったり、学校についてきてトラブルを起こしたり…。
そんな生活の中で、主人公がよく言っていた言葉は「ダメだ！」だった。
でも、両親がそのペットを庭に閉じ込めてしまったとき、主人公は少し寂しさを感じた。
そして最後は、ペットと仲良くなって、同じベッドで眠るようになったんだ。
私も子供の頃は動物が大好きで、自分の犬や猫と暮らしたいと思っていた。
でも大人になった今は、自分にそんな情熱がまだ残っているのか、ちょっと疑問に思う。
SNSで犬や猫の写真や動画を見ても「可愛いな」とは思うけど、「飼いたい」という気持ちはあまり湧いてこない。
この絵本を読んだときも、「こんなペット、本当に飼う必要があるのかな？」と少しイライラしてしまった。
子供の頃はただ「可愛い」と思っていたのに、今は「うるさい」「面倒くさい」と感じてしまう。
どうしてなんだろう？
子供にとって、ペットは友達のような存在で、一緒に遊んだり、餌をあげたりするだけで楽しいものだと思う。
甥っ子も猫を飼いたがって、お姉さんが飼ってあげたけど、実際にご飯をあげたりお風呂に入れたりするのはお姉さんの仕事になってしまった。
甥っ子がやっているのは、放課後に猫を抱いて撫でることだけ。
私も時々、寂しいときに「ワンちゃんがいたらいいなあ」と思うことはある。
でも実際は、住んでいる部屋は狭いし、仕事も忙しいし、もし気分が悪いときに弱い動物にあたってしまったらどうしよう…とも考える。
ペットのご飯はいくらするんだろう？
外に連れて行く時間はあるかな？
病気になったらどうするんだろう？
そんなふうに色々考えてしまって迷ってしまう。
だから私は動物の「可愛さ」は好きだけど、動物のすべてを好きとは言えないのかもしれない。
絵本を読んだときも、真っ先に気になるのは「壊したものはいくらだろう」「掃除は大変そうだな」という現実的なことばかり。
子供のときは「楽しい！」が一番大事だったのに、大人の私は少しつまらなくなってしまったのかな…。
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
Il fait chaud, partie deux
Ce matin, on a fait les courses après que mon mari a fini sa course à pied et sa douche. Comme ça, on peut rester dans la maison pendant cette journée chaude.
J'ai fait encore mes exercices pour ma cheville et mes mains. Maintenant, je les sais par cœur et je n'ai plus besoin des vidéos pour les démonstrations.
Vu qu'il fait encore trop chaud pour travailler dans la maison ou le jardin, je pense jouer à un jeu vidéo. Il s'appelle « Strange Horticulture ». J'y ai déjà joué, mais ça fait quelques ans. Il y aura bientôt une suite et j'aimerais la jouer, donc c'est pour ça que j'ai pensé à rejouer le jeu. J'ai oublié tous les détails, du coup il devrait être toujours amusant. En plus, j'y jouerai en français cette fois.
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
L’écoute
Les lecteurs de ce journal pensent sans doute que je suis quelqu’un de très bavard… Pourtant, en réalité, je suis plutôt quelqu’un de peu loquace. C’est parce que, dans une conversation, je cherche à saisir non seulement les mots en surface, mais aussi les émotions et les valeurs qui se cachent derrière. J’aime découvrir qui est réellement la personne en face de moi. Et ce que je recherche avant tout, c’est l’enseignement que je peux tirer de chaque rencontre.
J’adore réfléchir dans ma tête. C’est pourquoi, après avoir parlé avec quelqu’un, je commence pendant un moment une conversation avec moi-même au sujet de cette discussion. Et ce moment-là est pour moi un plaisir inestimable.
Bien sûr, lorsque je parle avec un ami cher, il m’arrive d’exprimer un peu plus mes opinions. Mais même dans ces échanges précieux, j’éprouve toujours une préférence pour l’écoute.
Et pourtant, on me dit souvent : « Tu m’as donné de l’énergie ! »
C’est étrange, n’est-ce pas ? Moi qui n’ai presque rien dit…
July 2, 2025
Mercoledì 2 luglio
Sono di fretta oggi, ma ho già sbrigato quasi tutte le faccende. Di solito, non ho la testa tra le nuvole, però oggi mi sono permessa di rallentare un po' il ritmo.
Ieri sono rimasta delusa a causa del vecchio progetto. Qualcosa di specifico sarebbe dovuto succedere quando ho lasciato il progetto, ma non è successo.
Ho fatto finta di niente riguardo alle persone che sono rimaste su quel progetto e la cui etica lavorativa è bassa. In realtà, ho deciso di metterci una pietra sopra, perché non volevo scatenare reazioni a catena.
Insomma, c'è una regola di cui si deve tenere conto quando qualcuno lascia il lavoro su quel progetto. Tuttavia, per me non è successo come sarebbe dovuto succedere.
Nessuno è tenuto a bada ormai, ma non è più un problema mio d'ora in poi. Ho avuto un diavolo per capello per due giorni e non vedevo l'ora che la situazione si risolvesse.
Ovviamente nessuno al comando ha fatto niente, quindi non ci sono cascata dalle nuvole. Non so cosa mi aspettassi; in fondo, sapevo benissimo come andassero le cose.
A parte questo, ho voluto trovare un nuovo hobby manuale, però non ho il pollice verde, quindi badare alle piante è fuori discussione.
Ho iniziato ad adottare una nuova mentalità in generale e, anche se sono in alto mare, sono sulla strada giusta.
July 2, 2025
I due primi anni difficili
Ieri ho scritto sul caldo. I due primeri anni con grandi ondate di caldo in Francia sono state 1976 e 2003.
A quanto pare, nel 1976 c'erano cinquanta gradi al sole davanti alla casa della nonna! In 2003 c'erano al meno quaranta, mi ricordo, ero un bambino. Nei due anni, migliaia di persone sono morte perché nessuno era abituato a tali temperature, ma 2003 era l'anno della presa di coscienza: penso che molti abbiano capito che queste fornaci estivali non sarebbero state eccezioni, ma si sarebbero ripetite sempre più spesso.
Hanno istituito piani di vigilanza, soprattutto per le case di riposo e gli anziani di manera generale e direi che siamo più pronti a affrontare queste crisi. Ma ecco il problema: queste "crisi" stanno diventando la norma! L'Italia o la Spagna sanno cos'è il caldo, la Francia non è tanto abituata e i paesi come la Germania o il Canada (che ora conoscono anche temperature estreme) sono sconvolti. Il funzionamente, la struttura delle nostre società non sono concepite per adattarcisi. Le ore di lavoro, la concezione delle case, la gestione dell'acqua, la lotta contro la cementificazione (che peggiora il problema del caldo)... In moltissimi ambiti, c'è molto da fare.
Naturalmente, gli scienzati ci avvisiamo da cinquent'anni riguardo all'argomento, ma chi li ascolta? La tragedia è che 90% dell'ecologia oggi è proprio greenwashing o disprezzo sociale travestito da ecologia, come i progetti di proibizione dei veicoli diesel nei centri storici. Ho menzionato nel testo precedente le professioni dure, di gente piuttosto povera, che ora sta soffriendo il caldo. Sono quelle persone che conduscono i veicoli più inquinanti, perché sono po' cari: in un'epoca, l'acquisto di veicoli diesel per i più modesti era anche incoraggiato! Beh, pronto non potranno condurre nei centri perché i borghesi vogliono delocalizzare l'inquinamento! "Bifolchi, per favore, andate a inquinare altrove! Ma comunque continuate di venire in furgoni per rifornire le nostre trattorie e supermercati, sì? Questo è importante!"
Non so se piangere o se ridere!
July 2, 2025
The First Rhythm.
Primordial human in one of the nights, try to sleep his ear on the ground while laying in cave. But at the moment one get the silence, begins to hear a sound between his ear and th stone he laying on . He become afraid and move away his ear with a sudden rush and the sound vanishes. Later when he lay down on his side to the ground he begin to notice the sound again. A sound constantly repeating. A short speating with the same intervals. This human hears own hearthbeat. And mimicking start which is biggest proof of humans are coming from monkeys. Human comes to coclusion this sound is stemming from two object is hitting eachother whereas the human get a stone and hit it to ground with the aim of repating the sound in his ear , he heard. For a while he does it accordingly. The only musical element in here is repetition. Repetition is the rhythym. And the rhythym is the what he heard in his ear. Later this sound evolved into new slower or faster rhythyms. And humankind comes to modern drums from this repetiton of hitting sounds.Even create nowadays drum'n'bass style. This is the story of music. When i was interested şn music i was important archives in my brain. But its over. Now I only listen my heartbeat. My favourite and only listened the group of ' The Veins'.Excellent Orchestra. They are playin non-stop.Uncapricious. Whenever I want.
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
Lohnt sich das?
Letztens bin ich auf einen fasziniernden YouTube Kanal gestoßen, der „Lohnt sich das?“ heißt. Dieser Kanal produziert kurze, zehnminütige Videos über verschiedene Berufe. In jedem Video zeigt der Gast*in seinen/ihren durchschnittlichen Arbeitstag, teilt seinen Gehalt und seine Finanzlage, erzählt seine eigene Geschichte und und am Ende der Folge sagt, ob der Beruf sich lohnt. Allerdings sind alle Gäste*innen dort freiwillig, deswegen habe ich noch nie eine verneinende Antwort gehört. Es gibt fast zweihundert Videos in dieser Rubrik, deshalb kann man mühelos eine interresante Folge finden.
Ich finde deiesen Kanal einfach wunderschön fürs Vokabellernen, weil jeder Gast*in zu seinem/ihrem Beruf verbundende Wörter benutzt, z.B. Namen von Geräten, die nicht zu kompliziert sind, damit durchschnittliche Zuschauer*innen alles verstehen könnten.
July 2, 2025
『ペラジック・エコーズ』〜内なる旅〜（改訂版）
自分が完全に人間ではないと感じたことはありますか？
下記に、私たちの中で泳ぐ水生生物についての短い詩と会話です。
パールブルーに輝く空を見上げると
冷たく澄み切った青色の海へと溶けていくのを見つめる。
白く柔らかな雲が泡立った波の上を滑っていく。
打ち砕かれた白波が見える
波は永遠に静止しているかのようにさえ見える。
万物は動き、遠い昔の思い出と香りがよみがえる。
私の頭の中に魚の記憶が泳ぎ続けるかぎり
古代の波の記憶を覚えているだろう。
して私たちのえらが肺に変わり、ひれが脚に変わったとき。
玲亜：（首を横に振って）この男の頭の中には、何か素晴らしく奇妙な、ほとんど魚のようなものが泳いでいる。
ティン：確かに。私たちは皆、海の刻印を宿している。「人間」の部分はわずかだ。その下で、深海はまだざわめいている。
悟：地球の年齢を考えれば、人間の脳はごく最近のものだ。
私たちの中の太古の部分は、ただ新しい形に織り込まれるだけで、決して本当に沈黙することはないんだ。
ミン：（パセリの小枝をかじりながら）同感だ。私たちの中にはたくさんの古代の残滓が漂っている。
要約：遠洋意識と海洋の祖先についての考察。
長文要約：遠洋意識と水棲の祖先という概念を探求し、人間の進化と、海の詩のように今なお私たちの中に響く原初の意識のささやきを振り返る
キーワード：遠洋意識、海洋の祖先、人間の進化、海洋の詩、プライマル意識
July 2, 2025
July 2, 2025
Auf der Erde laufen
Am Mittwoch steige ich in Namba, ein Zentrum in Osaka, um. Zwischen ein Bahnhof und die anderer ist es eine gut Strecke. Obwohl ich unterirdisch laufen kann, laufe ich lieber auf der Erde. Ich lief heute auf der Erde, aber es war allerdings zu heiß. In dieser Jahreszeit soll mann nicht gegen Mittag draußen laufen.
July 2, 2025
Oggi
Ora ho avuto fame, allora ho fatto uno smoothie al avocado e platano, ho voluto provarlo. Ho usato solamente la metà di l’avocado. Ho aggiunto anche latte e un po’ zucchero. Non è stato molto buono ma neanche male. Ho fatto anche molte rumore per il frullato, ma credo che nessuno fosse sveglio. Ho anche registrato un audio in italiano mentre lo ho fatto. Aiuta per imparare.
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