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Dec. 2, 2024
Resumen de El hobbit: Capítulo 12
Capítulo 12: Información secreta.
En el capítulo 12, Bilbo y los enanos están ante el pasillo. Deciden que el «saqueador» debe ir primero. Bilbo se pone el anillo y se dirige por el túnel. Ve al dragón gigante, Smaug, tendido sobre un montón de tesoro. Bilbo roba una gran copa de oro mientras duerme y se escabulle con cuidado hacia los enanos.
Smaug se despierta y se da cuenta de que falta la copa. Se enfurece y busca al grupo, soplando fuego por toda la montaña, pero su escondite en la entrada secreta los salva. Al no poder encontrarlos, vuela al pie de la montaña, ve sus poneys y se los come. Más tarde, regresa a su guarida y se queda dormido. Finalmente, Bilbo vuelve a bajar por el túnel y encuentra a Smaug, que esta vez está despierto y esperándolo. Bilbo es invisible pero Smaug puede olerlo. Bilbo habla a Smaug en acertijos (que es la forma correcta de hablar con los dragones). Halaga a Smaug con cumplidos y lo engaña para que le muestre su vientre y Bilbo se fija en un punto débil en su pecho.
Justo antes del momento en que ataca, Bilbo huye por el túnel y Smaug, demasiado grande para caber, sopla fuego tras él. Bilbo apenas logra escapar y se quema el pelo. Bilbo les cuenta a los enanos lo que había pasado y el zorzal en la roca lo escucha. De repente, todos oyen el feroz rugido de Smaug y cierran la puerta justo antes de que caiga una avalancha de piedras. Bilbo y los demás están ahora atrapados en el túnel y la única salida es a través de la guarida de Smaug.
Dec. 1, 2024
Do you prefer end a relationship before february 14?
Who everyone know, valentine´s day is a romance day. Everyone associate Valentine´s day with red roses, pink hearts and candlelit dinners, the last you´re going to expect is a break up. But a poll stated that 45% of people prefer that.
What happen with the 65% remaining?. It could be they want to end on February 14?.
Well for that people, Pizza Hut take advantage of this situation and offer a pizza called "Hot Honey Goodbye pies" for people who want to break up with their partner. Actually, the way to buy this Pizza Pie it´s through the website GoodbyePies.com. This idea help to the "future ex" to receive a complimentary pizza to help them get over being dumped. Pizza Hut say " With the launch of Goodbye Pies, we are bringing that perfect blend of sweet and heat…to real life. We are delivering spicy news in the sweetest way for Valentine's Day".
Basically, the person enter to the website, buy the pizza, write the name of her ex partner on the pizza box and the delivery driver will deliver the bad news in the best way with a potentially plausible break-up excuse for you.
For me, this idea is absolutely amazing, its different and Pizza Hut knew how to avail the situation when no one did.
Although really, I wouldn´t do it because I prefer to talk with the other person and say the reasons why I want to end the relationship. But in the other hand I understand the people who cant express their feelings.
What do you think about this idea?
I need to improve my English, so every comment that you want to say me is perfect for me.
Dec. 1, 2024
Writing Practice: Lost Bag Inquiry Email
Dear manager,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm a customer who dined at your restaurant with my friends yesterday. We four were sitting near the window by the entrance and left around 7:00 PM. Unfortunately, when I got home, I couldn't find my bag anywhere. It contains important stuff like my driver's license, house keys and a wallet with credit card and cash inside. I assumed I possibly left it in your restaurant. It is a black leather handbag with a teddy bear keychain attached. If you have found it, could you please call me at 123456 or reply this email.
I would really appreciate your help.
Best regards,
Tina Chen
(Could you please help me refine it to make it natural and appropriate, expand the vocabulary range)
Dec. 1, 2024
The Man Who Stole the Sun
I have a tendency to get into rabbit holes that keep getting more and more obscure. My latest adventure involve underground Japanese movies. I think it all started with Ringu and Ju-On, these movies have a type of beauty that I can only compare to maybe The Exorcist or Rosemary's Baby. They totally blew me away and when I discovered it was common for Japanese movies to not have soundtracks, I was fully in. I found movies that changed my life, opening a whole new world of self-discovery and film appreciation.
Yesterday, I watched a film called The Man Who Stole the Sun. The movie is about a charismatic yet atypical chemistry teacher. You get the impression that he chooses to be a solitary man. Rather than spending time with people, he prefers to do things he is passionate about. He looks like a badass rock star and doesn't let anything get in his way, even ignoring social tacit agreements, at times.
Early in the film, he and his students are on a school trip, having a wonderful time, when the bus is hijacked by a delusional man who demands to see the emperor of Japan or he will kill everyone. They reach out for the police and after much negotiation, they say they will comply to his wishes but it was a trap. They off the guy, saving everyone who was in the bus. The charismatic teacher and the cop who were behind this "operation" are then decorated with medals and talked about on all the news outlets. However, the teacher has something else going on in his private life — he's making an atomic bomb, of course! And that's all I am going to say. c:
Thanks for reading, don't forget to like and subscribe. *Bro fist*
Dec. 1, 2024
朝活
僕は週末をダラダラ過ごすのが好きなんですけど、いつまでも怠けるわけにはいかないし、やることが沢山詰まってきたし、久しぶりに朝活をしてみました。
一日にこんなに物事を成し遂げられるなあと思ったくらい、僕の努力にびっくりしました（自慢話じゃないですよ。逆に普段ゴロゴロしている僕が恥ずかしいです。）。
日本語で何かを書いて投稿する時間さえ作りました。すごく嬉しいです。
毎日そういう風に小さなことをやれば、心が晴れて、もっと大事なことに集中する力や時間が出てきますね。
これだやっと安心して休めます。そして次の目標を見つけたら、新たな挑戦に覚悟を持って臨みます。
・・・
読んでくれてありがとうございます。
どう思いますか？
またね！
Dec. 1, 2024
LoL
Today, I reinstalled a very popular game on my laptop called League of Legends, just to lose some time and to remember the old days. I used to play it with my friends from high school, and I remember it was a game played by lots of toxic people. Since this game is highly competitive, has long matches and is also a 5x5 team game, the players are constantly stressed. That's why I stopped playing, it was not a psychologically healthy experience. Even my friends were getting mad at me sometimes. I'm glad I managed to step back from that addictive game, because most of people can't just leave it. They end up losing hours that could be used to more productive activities, like learning a new language haha. Nowadays I only play it occasionally and between long intervals throughout the year (the last time I played was probably about two years ago). If you mute all the players in every match as I do, you will surely enjoy the experience way more.
Dec. 1, 2024
Einen passenden Beruf finden
Hallo Leute,
ich bin in einem haben Jahr mit der Schule fertig und weiß noch überhaupt nicht, wie es weitergehen soll. Woher weiß ich , welcher Beruf für mich geeignet ist? Was soll ich machen: mich beraten lassen, einen Berufsfindungstest oder ein Praktikum machen? Könnt Ihr mir Tipps geben? Danke
(Vgl. Menschen, Deutsch als Fremdsprecher, Arbeitsbuch, Hueber, 2015, Lektion 9, Seite 84)
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Gratulation. Bald keine Schule mehr.
Ich würde dir raten, dich beraten zu lassen. Es kostet nichts und könnte dir helfen, eine Entscheidung zu machen. Und wenn nicht, dann ist es egal. Du wäre noch, wo du vorher warst.
Berufsfindungstests sind nutzlos. Die Antworten passen nie, also sind die Resultate falsch.
Und, wenn du auf einen Beruf Lust hast, solltest du absolut ein Praktikum machen. Da du die Arbeit probieren kannst und zu Ende wirst du wissen, ob du dabei gern arbeitest.
Viel Glück für die Zukunft.
Dec. 1, 2024
Dec. 1, 2024
動詞の活用 #2
やる → やります → やって。
五段。
① 野田さんはまたやると思いますか？
【Do・you・think・Noda-san・will・do・it・again?】。
② クラブで、ダンスをする？
もちろん歌もやりますよ！
【Do・you・dance・at・the・club?】。
【Of・course,・and・I・sing,・too!】。
③ 生きがいはどうやって見つける？
【How・do・I・find・my・"ikigai"?】。
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立つ → 立ちます → 立って。
五段。
① 野田さんは向こう、彼は背が高い男の人立つです。
【Noda-san・is・over・there;・he's・the・tall・man・standing・up】。
② 郵便局の行列で、今日は長いさ立ちました。
【I・stood・in・a・long・queue・at・the・post・office・today】。
③ 電車に乗り遅れただから、今はホームを立っています。
【I・missed・the・train・so・I'm・standing・on・the・platform】。
Dec. 1, 2024
Dec. 1, 2024
A Person or President
As Trump will be the next term of president in the US, but one of my friends doesn't like him. He said Trump was too arrogant; it could be acceptable to be a president, but not a person. It's so interesting for me to hear the idea. I didn't discuss this president with him anymore, because I am neither USA citizen nor Canadian. Trump is natured as a businessman, and he will manage the USA as a corporation, targeting profit, together with the loose cannon, callus figure, and richest man, Elon Musk, to make big changes in the USA.
Dec. 1, 2024
Just In One Year
Last year, I went to see my aunt.
While I was at it, I went to a hair salon just opened near the aunt's home.
A hairdresser who was in charge of me was very polite and thoughtful, and cut my hair nicely.
But the place is far from my place, so I hadn't visited the salon for a long time.
Yesterday I happened to have an opportunity to visit my aunt, so I went to the salon for the first time in a year.
Surprisingly, the hairdresser's attitude has been changed.
He seemed unmotivated and irritated.
I felt like I was treated poorly, and the finished look wasn't as nice as last year.
I don't know what happened to him, but I'm sad to see his attitude changed that much just in one year.
I reckon I won't go there again.
Dec. 1, 2024
Dec. 1, 2024
Day 23
First, you can take lessons and enlightenment through failure. Just being not given up in failure, flashback at why you failed and you can take the enlightenment. Understanding the reason of failure can help you to overcome the weaknesses and grow up. Moreover, you can also empathize with others through failure. People who almost experienced success may hardly understand those who have not succeed. Therefore, people who succeed a lot may easily criticize or ignore other people, but people who succeed with being failure in the past may sympathize with others and being humble.
Dec. 1, 2024
Violinetui
Ich will bald ein Violinetui kaufen, deshalb suche ich jeztz darüber nach. Die Etuis von Bam, eine französische Marke, sind sehr populär, aber in Japan sehr teur. Ich glaubte dann, dass ich eines kaufen können, wann ich in Europe reise. Ich had dann den Website von Bam gessehen, aber man keinen Preis zeigte.
Dec. 1, 2024
Causes of Global Warming
Lately , Global Warming increases because humans are unconscious. One of most significant reasons is that people usually use fossil fuels and that causes air pollition. In addition,the atmosphore is destroyed by air pollution. For instance, humans use diesel or gasoline cars instead of electricity. Also, they use individual cars instead of public transportation .In this way, , air pollution may increase more. Another reason is that people cause water pollution.For example, some factories release harmful wastes into the environment and they are usually water area such as lakes ,rivers, seas ,and so on.In breif, people harm themselves because this environment is their future, so they have to be careful doing everything about environment.
Dec. 1, 2024
Causes of screen addiction
The human spend much time on electronic advice.That has several causes of addiction.First of all,people do not happy in real life so they spend time on social media.For instance,boys have not car but they watch edit of car or play car games.Girls watch famoua person for seeing who rich life .Both of them watch instagram reels because it contains a lot of videos and all kind of topics.Furthermore,the human find to spend time something.Therefore,they contact screen.For example,they do not know how time pass so this is what they want or they play game because this continues very long time and it is fun.As the human have these reasons,they can be screen addiction.
Dec. 1, 2024
私の問題を解決するのを手伝ってください。
7. 良いプロフィール基盤を構築する。
採用担当者は、経験がある応募者を優先する傾向があります。新卒の場合でも、学位や証明書に加え、業界でのアルバイト経験があれば、たとえ6か月程度でも、全く実務経験のない新卒者と比べて、あなたのプロフィールは大きな強みとなります。
私たちの経験ですが、アルバイトを始めたことで自分の家族や学校の友人にはない価値観や世界を知ることができました。そこでは、主に社会のネガティブな面を学ぶことができました。この経験があったことで、社会人になって働きだした時に、強い精神力が身についていたことに気が付きました。労働はアルバイトであっても過酷なことがあります。社会人になる前に、どのような働き方であれば、自分が納得できるものかを知るために、私はアルバイトをやってみることをオススメします。
ありがとうございます。😭✨
Dec. 1, 2024
An Old House With a Massive Tree (104)
There's an old Japanese house in the north part of my town.
Nobody lives there, but it belongs to Mr. Hirayama, who lives next door.
The house is a typical Japanese house, along with there's a huge tree in the garden.
It is said to be around 1000 years old and designated as a natural treasure in my town.
In 2022, a movie called "Bosei" was filmed there.
I think it means "maternal instincts."
You can watch it on Netflix.
The main characters are relatively popular actresses named Erika Toda and Mei Nagano.
Dec. 1, 2024
Dec. 1, 2024
Плюсы и минусы жизни в маленьком городе
Я считаю, что эти плюсы и минусы меняются по особенным ситуациям разных стран в мире, поэтому, я только напишу о случае, который я знаю лучше всего, тоесть, французский.
Я сказал бы, что главный недостаток жизни в французских маленьких городах — нехватка профессиональных возможностей. Большинство предложений работы сосредочены в больших городах. Если вы занимаетесь свободной профессией, это конечно легче преодолеть эту проблему. Думаю, что недавное развитие телеработы немного изменило эту тенденцию, но в общем, молодые в поисках работы должны переезжать в парижский регион, Марсель, Лион или такие города.
В моем родном городе (где живут примерно 20 000 жителей) есть больница, но я не доверяюсь тех, которые работают там. Для высокого качества медицинской помощи, я предпочитаю больницы в больших городах.
Но жизнь в маленьких городах также имеет многие преимущества. Цены на недвижимость ниже, если вы не живёте в ширакных местах как на Лазерном Берегу. Сети общественного транспорта не так развыты, как в Париже например, но мне кажется, что это не недостаток в маленьких городах (по крайней мере, не для тех, у которых нет проблем с подвижмостью). В моем родном городе можно идти везде пешком. Там есть меньше шума, меньше стресса, больше зеленых зон. Люди — менее сумасшедшими, чем в метрополисах. Уровень преступность значительно ниже. Некоторые даже всё ещё знают старые концепты ХХ-го века, как вежливость! Какое чудо! Преимущества относятся к физическому и психическому здоровию, тоесть, к самыми важными критериями для хорошой жизни, потэму есть по моему мнению больше преимуществ, чем недостатки, в жизни в маленьких городах.
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