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-'to be' is generally used to talk about how someone behaves or acts. So you are influenced by things. To say 'get influenced' is not wrong, but it is more informal. -Information is not capitalized or pluralized. It's a more abstract verb a 'many' suggests something you can count, so 'a lot of' is better. -In the phrase 'in a short time,' there is always an article for 'short time.'

So if you don't control what you receive or you can't filter people who influence you in your daysily life, you will see a bad result in the future. So if you don't control what you receive or you can't filter people who influence you in your daily life, you will see a bad result in the future.

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-'how you are influenced' just makes the sentence a little clearer. 'What you receive' also suggests receive specific items. -'filter people' is fine, but 'filter out' clarifies that you need to get rid of certain people. -'you will see' just isn't generally used like that. The more impersonal 'there will be' sounds better to me

The first one is my big brother,h. He made me see the life with another vision andfrom a different perspective, feel the freedom of being different and showed me it's normal to have a different ideas. The first one is my big brother. He made me see life from a different perspective, feel the freedom of being different and showed me it's normal to have different ideas.

The first one is my big brother,h. He made me see the life with another visionperspective and feel the freedom of being different and. He showed me it's normal to have a different ideas. The first one is my big brother. He made me see life with another perspective and feel the freedom of being different. He showed me it's normal to have different ideas.

-Be careful about new subjects and verbs. They often need to be part of a new sentence. -When 'vision' is metaphorical, it's generally about a big plan for the future: "He had a vision of owning his own business.' Here, 'another perspective' clarifies that you're looking at things in different ways. You could also say 'with a new perspective' -'different' is the modifier of 'ideas' so no 'a' is needed.

Not to mention my parents because without them I willould be lost in how can Ito build a strong personality and know my principles. Not to mention my parents because without them I would be lost in how to build a strong personality and know my principles.

Not to mention my parents, because without them I willould be lost in terms of how I can I build a strong personality and know my principles. Not to mention my parents, because without them I would be lost in terms of how I can build a strong personality and know my principles.

-Some really great phrases in here used really well, especially 'not to mention' and 'I would be lost' -This is a hypothetical, so the subjunctive 'would' is needed. -Some kind of connection is needed between 'I would be lost' and 'how I can." This could be 'in terms of,' 'in regards to,' 'about.' -Verb + subject = question, so 'I can' is better

About thes for famous individuals famous, I will start bywith Hayao Miyazaki he made me able to see the art and se. He showed me the result when youof working hard and mix the love and thetaking love, inspiration and all the good things infrom what you love to do,h. He makde my life more colorful with his animations like Spirited Away, Ponyo,Hawl's the m and Howl's Moving Castle. As for famous individuals, I will start with Hayao Miyazaki. He showed me the result of working hard and taking love, inspiration and all the good things from what you love to do. He made my life more colorful with his animations like Spirited Away, Ponyo, and Howl's Moving Castle.

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-Adjective before noun (famous individuals) -To start with is used with nouns. To start by is verbs: She starts by making her coffee. -There's a couple of ways to say the second sentence. You can say 'He made me able to see the [something] of art.' This could be 'importance,' 'beauty,' etc. You can also just say 'He made me see the importance of art.' You can also change the verb: 'He made me understand art" or "He made me appreciate art." -I made this into a list, so you don't need to keep saying the verb if it stays the same in each item. -As abstract verbs, love and inspiration don't need articles here.

In conclusion, all wthat you can do now and all your decisions isare a mirror of what you go to live inwill befome in the future, so try to choose the good things and make the right decisions. In conclusion, all that you do now and all your decisions are a mirror of what you will befome in the future, so try to choose the good things and make the right decisions.

In conclusion all what you can do now and all your decisions isare a mirror of what you go to live indo in the future, so try to choose the good things and make the right decisions. In conclusion all you can do now and all your decisions are a mirror of what you do in the future, so try to choose the good things and make the right decisions.

-Subject is plural (all decisions), so 'are' instead of 'is.' -You can also say 'how you live in the future'