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Evacuation Drill at the Gym
Today was my gym day, and we went together with my husband. He's still learning new things about my country. I didn't know, but today was a National Evacuation Drill. When we arrived at the gym, the workers told us about the drill and explained what we needed to do. My husband was a bit confused because he didn't know that it's common to do this here, and that it's also mandatory.
When I was a teacher, it was like a short "break" for my students -- like a party, hahaha. But today, for my husband, it was kind of bad because we have a routine, and we need to eat at an exact hour. So, he was a bit stressed.
Because of the drill, the gym was more crowded than usual. We had to wait to use a few machines, share them during our routines, or look for unusual places to do some exercises because there wasn't enough space. It's a funny anecdote that I believe he's going to share with his family.
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
自己紹介
みんなさん、こんにちは。初めまして。
僕はジャニーと申します。アメリカから来ました。生まれはニューヨークですが、育ちは南カリフォルニアに住んでいます。デベロッパーと作家をしています。
日本語のが全然まったく流暢ではありません。だからこそ、日本語を超真面目に勉強します。それでも、僕はドラマと漫画が好きです。ドラマで好きなのは仲間由紀恵さん主演の「トリック」ですが、漫画で好きなのは空知英秋先生の「銀魂」です。
LangCorrectの他のユーザーから学べることを期待しています。僕が犯した間違いは、どんなものでも遠慮なくご指摘ください。
どうぞ、よろしくお願いします。
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
My brother
Hello !
I have one little brother. His name is Maël and he is thirteen. Our relationships is very strange. When we are only together, we are so cute towards each other. But when we are with our parents, he his so ennoying ! But I mean really ! He put all of his time to critisize me to jocke, but everytime it's tiresome ! It's because I'm so happy when he his not here ahahah. So, my relationships with him are, in the majority of the time, bad... no, very bad. But, sometimes, we find commun point, like a film that we liked or activity wich we want to do. In there time it's pleasant.
Goodbye !
Oct. 22, 2025
The Silmarillion
Actually, I read The Silmarillion by Tolkien.
I'm a fan of The Lord of the ring, and for my birthday, my boyfriend give me this book.
It's the french version, because i don't have the level for read it in English. And it's not easy in french, so, I don't imagine how it's hard in the original language.
It's very passionnate to discover the origin of the creation of the Tolkien's world. This man was a genius.
But I don't rememberer the half names of their characters. And It's just the begenning of the book !
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
My job
I love my job.
I'm lucky because I found the perfect job early, without study.
But it was not easy.
Oops, I forget to say what I'm going :
I'm a tattoo artist since 2019.
When I was younger, I wanted to have a job who mix Art, Therapy and Social.
But, in France, we don't have a lot of choices.
I thought about "Art-therapist", but I needed to become "Psychologist" and after "Art-therapist". And I had a little trauma with school, so, I don't want to have long study.
(Now, I'm little bit sad about this, because I love learn and I very wanted to discover more things with others passionnate people. I try again with study last year, in a animation's school, but the mentality gap between others students and me was so big. A lot of them was here just for fun. They used IA for create art, they had zero motivation and zero respect for teachers. So, I stopped courses and, Actualy, I learn alone.).
When I was 18 years old, I made my first tattoo on me. And it was a revelation. It was the perfect job. Tattoo is Art, obviously. But also therapy, because tattoo help people love there bodies, and sometimes, it help to keep important moment on us. It's a social job too, because it's a exchange between the professional and the customer.
It was a looooong way to become a tattoo artist, to found good "master" who want to help me.
But today, It's my job.
And I'm proud of me.
Oct. 22, 2025
Virtuelle Reise
Heutzutage mangelt es vielen Menschen an Zeit, um eine Reise unternehmen zu können. Daher haben Wissenschaftler eine neue Brille entwickelt, mit der man virtuell reisen kann. Während diese Brille bei einigen Menschen auf Interesse stößt, wird sie von anderen kritisch betrachtet. Zum einen führen Befürworter das Argument an, dass man dadurch Geld sparen kann. Wenn man physisch reist, muss man die Kosten für Fortbewegungsmittel und Unterkunft tragen, was bei einer virtuellen Reise nicht der Fall ist. Sie weisen außerdem darauf hin, dass eine solche Reise umweltschonend ist. Fortbewegungsmittel, wie z.B. Flüge oder Autos, stoßen Kohlendioxid und andere Schadstoffe in der Atmosphäre aus, was den Klimawandel fördert. Vorausgesetzt, man reist virtuell, verringert sich die Nutzung dieser Fortbewegungsmittel. Hinzu kommt, dass diese Reise für Menschen mit physischen Einschränkungen von Vorteil sein kann. Es bereitet einigen Menschen Schwierigkeiten, mit körperlichen Problemen zu reisen. Zum anderen hat eine solche Reise auch ihre Schattenseiten. Die begrenzten Sinneseindrücke werden als Gegenargument angeführt. Beispielsweise kann man die speziellen Gerichte des neuen Landes nicht riechen oder den Wind am Strand nicht spüren. Darüber hinaus wird auf die fehlende soziale Interaktion hingewiesen. Wenn man eine Reise unternimmt, lernt man Land und Leute sowie eine neue Kultur kennen. Man schließt neue Freundschaften, was bei einer virtuellen Reise nicht möglich ist.
Persönlich vertrete ich die Meinung, dass eine virtuelle Reise eine reale Reise nicht ersetzen kann. Man kann zwar den Stress des Alltags verdrängen, es ist jedoch nicht möglich, Erfahrungen zu sammeln und neue Dinge auszuprobieren. Eine solche Reise ist oberflächlich und bleibt wie eine reale Reise nicht in Erinnerung.
Oct. 22, 2025
Japon
Hola !
Me gustaria (no puedo poner el acento en la "i") a visitar el Japon (no puedo poner el acento en la "o"). Para yo, el Japon es un de los mas (no puedo poner el acento en la "a") guapo pais del mundo. La cultura es totalamente diferente de la cultura francésa y este pais es como inacesible. Quiero decir, ir al Japon, es un sueno (no puedo poner la ene en la "n") y est da aus mas ganas de visitarlo. Ademas, la comida parece deliciosa !
Adios !
Oct. 22, 2025
島で楽しんだ日
今日は体育があったから、また学園に近くの島に行きました。実物の島ではなくって、川の上にある土や砂の集団です。本物の島ではないけど、それでもみながその場所を「島」と呼んでいます。本当に美しい場所です。たくさん木があって、なんか森みたいです。その島といわれて場所の真ん中に大きなプールもあります。そのため、夏の時は多い人々がプールで泳いで楽しみます。
今日は体育のために友達と散歩して、それから自然で走って、とても楽しみました。今日アイダさんはいなくって、私とグルーシャさんとティーナさんだけでした。私たちは親友です。全部のグループ課題いつも一緒にします。仲良くして、素晴らしい協力があります。誰にも完璧ではないけど、彼女たちと一緒なら、きっと大丈夫です。
読んでくれてありがとう。：）
Oct. 22, 2025
My dream
Hello, My name is Zoé, and I have one dream.
It's my biggest dream, and maybe he'll never become reality.
But, I don't care.
I'm just going to try to realize it.
6 years ago, I've been in New-zealand for almost one month.
And it was the best period in my life.
I've met a lot of kind people, saw amazing landscapes and discovered a fantastic culture with Maori.
When I come back in France, It was like i forgot my soul in the Kiwi's country.
At this moment, my first goal is to go again, and try to live here for the rest of my life.
So, I will come back again next year for one year.
Maybe I'll refound my soul. And I found a solution to stay more time.
I know it's almost impossible. But if I don't try, i regret it.
Perhaps life will help me !
However, I think i'll pass an amazing year in this country.
Oct. 22, 2025
Min studier
Hej, det er første gang jeg skriver her, og jeg er lidt nervøs. Jeg hedder Bo, og jeg er femten år gammel. Min far er dansk, og jeg har talt dansk hele mit liv, så jeg kan tale det ret godt, men jeg er meget dårlig til at skrive og læse, det kan jeg slet ikke. Jeg har boet i Cambodja det meste af mit liv, men da jeg var ti, flygtede jeg til England for at få en bedre skole. Min skole er virkelig gammel, den er fem hundrede år gammel, og den er virkelig smuk. Men det er en hård skole at være på, alle eleverne skal have rigtig gode karakterer, jeg kan give forelæsninger, men det er bare SÅ MEGET arbejde. Jeg laver fysik, biologi, kemi, matematik, engelsk, latin, billedkunst, mad og historie. Jeg elsker fysik, biologi og latin, og matematik (selvom jeg er virkelig dårlig til matematik). Jeg kan godt lide at lave billedkunst uden for skolen, men i skolen gør jeg det ikke, bare fordi vi ikke kan vælge, hvad vi vil lave. Jeg synes, latin er rigtig interessant, lige nu lærer vi om Catullus, en digter fra Rom. Lige nu har vi alle en lille pause fra skolen, fordi vi har nogle store eksamener lige om hjørnet, og vi skal studere hårdt, og det er godt med en pause. Undskyld min dårlige grammatik, men jeg prøver at lære, fordi jeg gerne vil bo i Danmark og studere medicin, når jeg bliver voksen.
-hav en god dag :)
Oct. 22, 2025
Mon journée de détente
J’adore une journée de détente! D’habitude, j’ai une journée de détente samedi ou dimanche. D’abord, j’aime me réveiller en retard. Je reste dans mon lit, et je me lève quand je veux. Ensuite, je prépare mon petit déjeuner: du pain grillé avec du café. D’habitude, je lis mon livre pendant que je mange mon petit déjeuner. Ensuite, je ferai ce que je veux! Parfois, je sors, mais parfois je reste chez moi toute la journée. Si je sors, je vais au parc ou dans les magasins. Je regarde les vêtements, et je peux les acheter. Si je reste chez moi, je regarde la télé ou je lis mon livre. Je fais du tricot aussi. C’est très calme et détente!
Oct. 22, 2025
Dumas
Wenn ich ein Land oder eine Stadt besichtige, finde ich immer im Voraus irgendein Hörbuch, das ich mir unterwegs anhöre. Dadurch erstelle ich eine starke Verbindung mit dem Ort und kann später die ganze Reise erneut erleben, wenn ich mir dieses Hörbuch wieder anhöre. Diesmal wählte ich "Der Graf Monte Cristo" aus und bin schon mit dem Viertel fertig. Ich mag den Schreibstill und finde die Handlung fesselnd. Da ich es auf Englisch höre, eigne ich mir dabei etliche interessante Vokabeln an, was die Vergnügung vom Lesen noch verstärkt. Künftig habe ich vor, weitere Werke von Dumas zu lesen.
Oct. 22, 2025
Garip bir gün
Uyandıktan bir saat sonra annemin telefonunu yanlışlıkla cebime koydum (eve geri dönmek zorunda kaldım), neredeyse treni kaçırıyordum, yeni aldığım kahveyi döktüm, asansörde kaldım ve saçıma sakız yapışmıştı. Ama bugün Türkçe olarak ne hakkında yazacağımı hemen anladım. Genel olarak, muhtemelen her insanın hayatında böyle garip günler vardır. Ama umarım bu akşam macerasız geçer...
Oct. 22, 2025
Correspondence: A Japanese Epistolary Novella 1-2
One Exchange part2
Takeshi’s Letter: May 12, Showa 50 (1975)
To My Dearest You
Dear Kyoko,
Thank you for your letter. So, you’ve started a new life in a new town.
Meanwhile, I’ve been left behind, living the same old routine—but somehow, I’ve felt restless as spring arrived.
Receiving your letter made me feel like I can finally adjust to this new reality: one where you’re no longer next door.
The other day, I spoke with your mother.
She told me about your new life. It sounds like a comfortable town.
She kept saying it’s much more urban than ours—more people, more convenience—but also more worries about safety.
At the same time, she seemed proud that you’re working in a big city for a respectable company.
I felt so embarrassed that I ended up hiding the comic book I was holding behind my back.
Last week, I had another loud fight with my father.
He had supposedly given up on making me inherit Usagiya, but I guess he’s frustrated that I haven’t found a job or gone to college, and just stay in my room drawing manga when I’m not working part-time.
Of course, I’m the one to blame.
My parents must feel ashamed to have a son like me.
That’s why I made some rules for myself.
Even if I stay up all night drawing, I get up in the morning and eat meals on time. I pay rent and food expenses from my part-time wages, and I never wander outside during the day—neighbors and customers might see me.
Also, I never talk about manga in front of my parents. I know they don’t want to hear about it.
It’s my way of showing I’m not just freeloading.
And it helps me stay calm. If I lose control, I might give up on my dream of becoming a manga artist.
But then it happened. I took a comic book into the bathroom and forgot it there.
Before I realized, my father went in and found it.
He tore it to pieces and threw it away.
It was a rare book by the artist I admire most. You can’t find it anywhere in town now.
When I saw the shredded pages, I lost it. I stormed into the shop and yelled at him.
You can imagine the rest.
At least there were no customers at the time—that’s the only silver lining.
Reading this, I bet you’re frowning sadly.
I wanted to send you cheerful news, something to brighten your day in your new town.
But I’m afraid I don’t have anything uplifting to share right now.
So instead, I’ll draw your portrait here, as proof that I’m still at my desk every day, working hard.
What do you think? Have I improved?
Please be careful about locking your doors.
I’m not your mother, but I worry about the safety of your town too.
Sincerely,
Takeshi
Oct. 22, 2025
Mon journal de marathon.
La semaine dernière, j'ai reçu la nouvelle que je suis été selectioné dans un marathon.
L'année dernière, j'ai commencé à courir en octobre.
Cette année en favier, j'ai reussi à courir pendant 15 kilomètre, c'était ma plus long distance.
Après je suis selectionné de ce marathon complet, je me suis inscrit encore pour un autre marathon-demi que sera lieu en trois semaines.
Mais maitenant, je trouve que ce n'est pas un chose facile pour moi de le préparer.
Il y a de nombreux choses dont j'ai besoin considerer, le travail, le plan de courir, le plan de musculation, l'apprentisage de français.
Mon ami a me dit que je suis trop strésse par touts les choses dans ma vie, elle me propose de me reposer pendant moins de trois jours.
Mais je ne sais pas, je suis un peu perdu, car je ne sais pas comment ranger touts les choses bien.
Peut-être elle a raison.
Maintenant, j'éspére ne blésser pas pendant mon préparation de marathon.
Oct. 22, 2025
Ma série préférée
C'est « Seinfeld,» une comédie de situation.
À mon avis, c'est la meillure série de tous les temps.
Ce qui la rend la meilleure, c'est qu'elle ne parle de rien.
Parfois, les intrigues de certains épisodes se connectent, mais il n'y a pas de leçons de vie, d'apprentisage.
Comme l'a expliqué son créateur, Jerry Seinfeld, il voulait juste s'amuser et faire rire le public.
« Une série qui ne parle de rien ! »
Il a fait un bon travail parce que n'importe quel épisode je revois, je ris encore des histoires folles qui arrivent aux personnages de la série.
Malgré les années qui ont passé, elle tient toujours.
Je doute que vous ne l'ayez pas encore vue, mais juste au cas où, elle vaut la peine.
Comme elle est drôle !
Oct. 22, 2025
La correction
C'était le premier post que j'ai écrit ici.
Heureusement, quelqu'un l'a lu et m'a offert des corréctions.
Je l'ai relu afin de le corriger. J'espère l'avoir amélioré.
⟪ J'espère trouver quelqu'un qui pourra m'aider.
Je vais écrire quelques mots, et j'attendrai qu'une âme généreuse prenne le temps de les lire et les corriger.
Je ferai pareil, mais en espagnol ou en anglais.
Je vais écrire sur le foot, les nouvelles, un peu de tout. ⟫
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
Diario De Español Day 8
Me gusta mirando televisión. Mi programa favorito es Modern Family. Hay un actriz llamada Sofia Vergara quien hablar Español a veces en el programa. Ella es Colombiana pero a veces yo puedo comprender un poco Español cuando ella habla. Yo escribiendo mientras yo mirando un episodio. Ahora yo estoy disfrutando la época de cinco. Hay vientas épocas totalmente.
Oct. 22, 2025
Books to learn Spanish
I would recommend for beginners, is reading opinion articles in the newspaper written by writers and, of course, read jouth novel. I recommend you Laura Gallego. To intermediate readers, I recommend For example, Almudena Grandes, Rosa Montero, Sara Mesa, Elvira Lindo or Luna de Miguel. These writers have easy and beautiful novels that´s talks about life, lovers... And finally, to advanced readers I would recommed authors like Federico Garcia Lorca, Mercé Rododera, Cervantes and other authors from the 27 and 98 generation who have tha most beautiful novels from the literature of Spain.
Oct. 22, 2025
Mon animal préféré
La réponse facile est le chat. Facile parce que depuis qu'on est enfant, on peut trouver les chats partout même si on n'en a pas chez soi. Je les ai toujours adorés, et cela n'a jamais changé.
Mais je suis un amoureux des animaux, et je dirais que j'aime tous les mammifères similaires. Vous allez peut-être me détester pour avoir dit cela, mais avec le temps, je suis de moins en moins fan des chiens.
Un autre animal que j'adore c'est le castor. Ils sont très drôles et mignons. Je les trouve très uniques ; les architectes de la nature. J'adore particulièrement leur queue en forme de pagaie. C'est trop drôle de les voir aplatir quelque chose avec.
Mon cœur fond aussi quand je vois des lapins. Je suis sûre que j'en adopterai un jour. Je m'attends à ce qu'ils aient moins de personnalité que les chats, mais peut-être que je serai surprise.