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Das Abenteuer des Seemanns Teil 1
Gregory ist in Puerto Rico gestern angekommen. Warum? Weil, Gregory ein Seemanns ist. Er hat die sieben Meere gesegelt. Er segelt weil er bleibt in eins Ort nicht gern. Immer wenn er bleibt im eins Ort zu lange, er wird traurig. Gregory ist 24 Jahre alt – sehr jung für einen vollendeten Seemann. Er ist 1,89 m groß, mit kurzen braunen Haaren. Er ist sehr intelligent und lustig, aber ein bisschen angstlich.
Am morgen, er segelt nach Africa am die Schiff, die "Daybreaker." Die Kapitänin um die Daybreaker heißt Kapitänin Monique, aber er hat sie nicht getroffen. Er wird sie am Morgen treffen. Er schläft in einem Hotel. Es war ein sehr schlecht Hotel. Es war schimmelig und hat Ratten. Die Essen war auch schimmelig, so Gregor isst nicht Abendessen oder Frühstück. Er hat viel Hunge wann er geht nach den docks zu treffen Kaptianin Monique und sieht die Daybreaker...
Forgesetzt werden...
Aug. 27, 2025
The Bright Side of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
I used to think that playing online games was a pure waste of time. I believed there should be wiser ways of spending time, such as reading books or doing chores. However, after playing a couple of online games, my view completely changed.
First, playing online games can help you switch your mood. It's much better to immerse yourself in an online game rather than be haunted by negative thoughts. Online games don’t require any gadgets other than a smartphone or tablet. Unlike watching a movie or reading a book, you don’t have to make much effort to follow the story. Basically, they are free of charge and don’t cause any health problems unless you play excessively.
Online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise. Since I started playing an AR online game, taking a walk or riding a train has become a lot more fun. I’ve actually found myself becoming more active after I got into online games.
A life full of seriousness and tension is stressful. If online games can lighten your burden, I see no harm in playing them. I’ll keep enjoying online games wisely, without spending extra money.
Aug. 27, 2025
Sorghum Plant
Chinese sorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown. It is not a staple crop in my area, and its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.
Chinese sorghum is very tall. It is taller than people. It's usually planted at the beginning of July and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.
When I was a child, I heard a lot of scary stories related to the sorghum fields.
If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it grows to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road. You never know what will jump out from the sorghum fields. Beasts? Ghosts? Or bad guys?
However, Chinese sorghum is very useful. Its leaves can be used to feed livestock, and its stalks can be used to make mats. The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make beds and walls, and can be used to dry some agricultural products outside.
The sorghum panicles can be used to make brooms and a kind of cleaning tool used in the kitchen. The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets and other daily - use items. So it seems all parts of the sorghum are treasures.
However, people in my area rarely plant Chinese sorghum nowadays. I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghum.
I saw some farmers still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmers planted in the past. Instead, it's a kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the past. They plant the sorghum for alcohol factories to make liquor.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Tanjiro and Giyu From Demon Slayer (140)
I'm going to write about Tanjiro and Giyu from the anime Demon Slayer.
Tanjiro is the main character from the Demon Slayer.
His mother, sisters, and brothers are killed by man-eating demons.
Only one sister Nezuko is survived.
He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko on his back to see the doctor.
But then, Nezuko suddenly tries to bite him.
She is somehow transformed into a demon.
When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyu shows up and saves him.
This is how Tanjiro meets Giyu.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
8 Hours of Sleeping
This one is not negociable. The benefits of sleeping correctly can reproduced by any other mean. I often listen about guys who claim that can work perfectly and as usual with 4 or 5 hours of sleep. But the brain needs the correct amount and quality of rest to fully recover. There are a couple of habits related with improving this crucial area, I'll cover them in the next writings.
Good night!
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
About Yesterday
Yesterday ım learned ı didint take any unıversty. Its mean ı have to study one more year for Türkiye university exam. Actually its makes me really sad and nervous ı cant do anything yesterday from think all of thinks. I was thinked go to another abroad üniversty but probably i cant take visa f also euro and dollar is expensive one euro is more than 40 lira i am not rich at all axtually im not rich any i have no money. Also i am not sucsessful student at all im a normal student and that makes my chances of studying abroad even more impossble. This summer i was hopefully i was try to learned english , i was improve myself, i was learned other cultures . Not the traviling i was read and watch the videos. My all hopes are gone i dont want do anything. This is not the end of the world i know also i dont want to find excuse for the not working like unseccesful people but i dont do it on purpose. Im not sad only for me actually ım prepared for this result i was thinkig i have to study again but other students had to go to universities with lower scorest than their exam results. I will live same thinks and i scare of all thinks.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
尊敬する有名人
下の文法や表現を使って、「私は尊敬する有名人」という題で作文を書きなさい。（300〜400字）
- 名詞修飾
- 「（〜によると）〜そうだ」「らしい」
私が尊敬する有名人はルイスハミルトンというF1レーサーです。何回もF1で優勝しました。記者によると厳しくて健康にいい習慣を作るそうです。生活は忙しいらしいのに、優しい人らしいです。たとえば、厳しい国に行く時、LGBTQの権利について発言します。それに、インタビューをする時冷静な声を使います。実は、私の一番好きなレーサーはハミルトンじゃなくてピアストリですけど一番尊敬する人はハミルトンです。でも、ハミルトンは長年になったからすぐF1を辞めると思うから、ピアストリに支持するつもりです。多分F1の後、彼は良いことをし続けると思っています。今、女の子たちにレーサーになることを促しています。そのことを続けるそうです。
Aug. 26, 2025
Das Gehalt
Seit einigen Wochen wiederholt mein Freund einen bestimmten Satz, der wir jetzt lustig finden: "wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten, werden wir es kaufen".
Ich erkläre. Wir leben in Deutschland seit anderhalb Jahr, und seitdem haben wir hier mit unseren Sparnisse und Gelehien gewohnen, bis letzten Monat. Mein Freund hat am 15. August mit der Arbeit angefangen. Er hat, wie erwartet, nur hälfte des Gehalt bekommen, deswegen konnten wir nur die wichtigste wie die Miete und den Einkaufen bezahlen. Wir haben natürlich andere Bedürfnisse. Also, gestern habe ich gesagt: "meine Liebe, ich habe viel gelaufen und deswegen habe ich Schmerzen in der Ferße", worauf er antwortete: "Keine Sorge, wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten, werde ich dir eine Sportschuh kaufen". Wir haben diesen Ausdruck in vielen anderen Situationen, sowohl für Dinge, die dringend sind, als auch für Dinge, die nicht, dass wir jetzt denken, dass das Gehalt nicht genug wird. Vor kurzem habe ich nur gesagt: "wir brauchen" … und wir haben sofort gelacht. Wir wussten die Antwort: "wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten..."
Aug. 26, 2025
Votos de matrimonio
¡Hola! Por favor ayudame con mis votos matrimoniales - tengo un prometido catracho.
I remember you once told me, “I always wanted to find a girl like you.” And I joked back, “You always wanted to find an Asian gringa from Baltimore?” And you said, casually but earnestly, “No, I’ve always wanted to find someone I can be myself with.”
And that really touched me. It was such a sweet and genuine thing to say. And I realized that I felt the same. With you, I can be my true self. I know that, no matter what, you’ll accept me and appreciate me. Even when I’m driving you crazy, you love me. And I know this is true because it’s the same for me. Even when you’re driving me crazy, I love you. And you drive me crazy a lot.
Recuerdo, una vez, me lo dijiste, “Siempre yo quería encontrar una mujer como tú.” Y yo bromeé de vuelta, “Siempre querías encontrar una gringa Asiática de Baltimore?” Y tú, con facilidad y sinceridad, dijiste, “No, siempre quería encontrar a alguien con quien pudiera ser yo mismo.”
Y eso me conmovió tanto. Eso fue muy tierno, muy genuino. Y me di cuenta que sentí lo mismo. Contigo, puedo ser mi verdadera yo. Sé que, no importa qué, me aceptas y me aprecias. Incluso cuando te estoy volviendo loco, me amas. Lo sé esto porque siento lo mismo. Incluso cuando me estas volviendo loco, te amo. Y a veces tu me vuelves loco en puta.
There’s a short story I like, it’s called El Mundo. I’m going to read it to you now, first in the original Spanish, and then I’ll translate.
Hay un microcuento que me gusta que se llama El Mundo. Voy a leerlo ahora.
El mundo es un mar de fueguitos. Cada persona brilla con luz propia entre todas las demás. No hay dos fuegos iguales. Hay fuegos grandes y fuegos chicos y fuegos de todos los colores. Hay gente de fuego sereno, que ni se entera del viento, y gente de fuego loco, que llena el aire de chispas. Algunos fuegos, fuegos bobos, no alumbran ni queman; pero otros arden la vida con tantas ganas que no se puede mirarlos sin parpadear, y quien se acerca, se enciende.
Por supuesto tú tienes un fuego muy loco. Pero tu fuego alumbra mi vida y me guarda caliente, y ojalá mi fuego haga lo mismo para tí. Aunque ardamos, ardemos brillos juntos.
The world is an ocean of little fires. Each person shines with their own light among the others. No two fires are alike. There are big fires and little fires and fires of all colors. There are people with calm fires that don’t even notice the wind, and people with crazy fires, filling the air with sparks. Some fires, silly fires, don’t light or burn, while others burn with so much passion that you can’t look at them without blinking, and whoever comes close catches fire.
Obviously you have a crazy fire. But your fire lights up my life and keeps me warm, and I hope my fire does the same for you. Even if we burn, we'll burn bright together.
I love you. Te amo.
I can’t wait to spend my life with you. No puedo esperar pasar el resto de mi vida contigo. Siñá nagúrabahan nasügürüni sun nibágari buma.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Sesame Plant
Sesame is a popular crop in my hometown, but people don’t plant it on large farmlands as it is not a staple crop in my area.
People usually sow sesame at the beginning of June after harvesting wheat.
The sesame flower is white. We have an old saying about it: “Sesame flowers grow higher with each joint,” which means things are getting better and better.
Sesame leaves are edible. People pick them, boil them, dry them, and then eat them as vegetables in their daily lives.
Sesame stalks are a very good source of firewood. Farmers use dried sesame stalks for their earthen pots.
We use sesame to make edible oil for our meals. It’s very fragrant, even when we use only a few drops in our dishes.
People also use sesame as an ingredient when making flour-based foods. Foods with added sesame are very fragrant and delicious.
The only drawback of sesame is that its yield is not high. That’s why it’s not a staple crop in my area.
Aug. 26, 2025
Sesame Plant
Sesame is a popular crop in my hometown, but people don’t plant it on large farmlands as it is not a staple crop in my area.
People usually sow sesame at the beginning of June after harvesting wheat.
The sesame flower is white. We have an old saying about it: “Sesame flowers grow higher with each joint,” which means things are getting better and better.
Sesame leaves are edible. People pick them, boil them, dry them, and then eat them as vegetables in their daily lives.
Sesame stalks are a very good source of firewood. Farmers use dried sesame stalks for their earthen pots.
We use sesame to make edible oil for our meals. It’s very fragrant, even when we use only a few drops in our dishes.
People also use sesame as an ingredient when making flour-based foods. Foods with added sesame are very fragrant and delicious.
The only drawback of sesame is that its yield is not high. That’s why it’s not a staple crop in my area.
Aug. 26, 2025
Domingo
No domingo nós fomos para a casa de uma amiga para o aniversário dela. Na estrada meu amigos não consegui decidir ouvir que música, então nós não tínhamos qualquer música. Quando nós chegamos ela nos mostrou a casa e serviu algum vinho para nós.
Todos nós andamos na cidade e fomos ao shopping para jogarmos boliche. Era muito ocupado porque por causa do feriado.
Depois a gente foi para o jantar em um restaurante japonês. Eles tinham coquetéis muito sofisticados.
Nós voltamos para a casa de minha amiga e algumas pessoas jogaram jogos de tabuleiro mas nós precisamos voltar para casa. Foi um dia agradável mas eu estava muito cansada depois.
Aug. 26, 2025
Come scegliere i vincitori?
Ho partecipato tre colloqui in Italia.
Due colloqui sono per l'esame d'ammissione della scuola e uno colloquio è per la master class.
Ma due su tre colloqui sono stati strani, perché la giuria mi ha chiesto delle domande che non c'entrano niente sul colloquio.
Probabilmente la giuria ha già scelto i vincitori prima del colloquio, secondo me.
Allora che senso ha il colloquio in Italia?
Se avete capacità di superare il colloquio, vorrei sapere il vostro segreto.
Dovevo sorridere di più durante il colloquio? O dovevo truccarmi meglio?
Per fortuna, il mio curriculm vitae viene corretto dalla mia ex insegnante d'italiano.
Sarei molto grata se mi rispondeste.
Aug. 26, 2025
Mon voyage à Le Havre
Je dois dire, que c'est vraiment un échange scolaire. Il y a quelques années, quand je suis allée à Le Havre avec ma classe. C'était très excitant, parce que je ne connaissais personne. Malgré tout, c'était mon voyage préféré.
Tout d'abord, parce que c'était très amusant pendant le voyage dans le bus. Je me suis assis à l'avant avec six filles. Nous avons commencé à chanter avec la chanson 'my heart will go on'. Personne ne pouvait chanter et mon professeur, qui peux chanter excellent, devait pleurer de rire. Après notre concert magnifique, il venait à nous pour expliquer, comment nous devons chanter. Je ne vais jamais oublier ton leçon (et ses larmes).
Deuxièmement, nous avons promené à Étretat. La vue était très belle. La mer écrasait contre les rochers. Je ne verais jamais quelques chose comme ça. Après la promenade, moi et 6 autres éléves ont bu du chocola chaud dans un beau restaurant. L'interieur ressemble un peu du style Moyen âge.
Aug. 26, 2025
Lo que me gusta sobre el Alemán
Algo que es interesante para mí sobre el Alemán es que todo los sustantivos tienen que ir en mayúsculas. Yo ha notado que el Alemán es el único idioma que hace esto. A veces me confundo y pongo los sustantivos en mayúsculas cuando estoy escribiendo en inglés. No mucho pero si me ha pasado algunas veces(lol). También me gusta que el Alemán tiene a letra eszett (ß). La letra eszett se ve muy differente al los otros letras y se ve chido.
Aug. 26, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 28
But the jackal saw Anna while she was running away from the place, so it chased her. While Anna was running, she fell down after stepping on a trap. Alok also stopped and tried to free Anna from that trap, but it couldn’t.
Since Alok couldn’t free Anna, he ran away from that place to save itself from the jackal who sucked human blood.
After some time, the bloodthirsty jackal reached the place where Anna was trapped. Then the jackal said, “At last you are caught by me. Now I am going to kill you and take your blood to my master, so they can perform a ritual with it and become immortal. Do you think the person who killed me in the jungle will save you again? He will not save you from me this time.”
At that moment, a gunshot was heard. The jackal fell down with a scream. Anna, with a confused expression, said, “Alok! You saved me twice. Thank you.”
Aug. 26, 2025