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English beginner Ryanli
hello everyone: this is my first time using lang correct.I even don't know what I want from this wep.I just want to practice my writing.of course.if I can make more friends on this wep,I will talk to them everyday.I hope to get better.Although I am thirty four years old,I still want to study English well.I even want to earn money by English.But I know that is impossible for me right now. I will share my thoughts,daily life ,anything what I want to talk about.
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English beginner Ryanli
hHello everyone: t. This is my first time using lang correct.
Hello everyone. This is my first time using lang correct.
I even don't even know what I want from this wepbsite.
I don't even know what I want from this website.
"Don't" almost always comes before "even".
I just want to practice my writing.
oOf course.,
Of course,
Using a comma here so that this sentence connects to the next.
if I can make more friends on this wepsite,
if I can make more friends on this site,
I will talk to them everyday. I will talk to them everyday.
Might be more natural to use a contraction: "I'll talk to them everyday."
I hope to get better.
Although I am thirty four years old,
I still want to studylearn English well.
I still want to learn English well.
Might be more natural to say "learn" here instead of "study".
I even want'd like to earn money byusing English as well.
I'd like to earn money using English as well.
This might be a more natural phrasing. "I'd" is a contraction of "I would" -> "I would like to..."
But I know that is impossible for me right now.
But I know that is impossible for me right now.
"that is" can become "that's"
"But I know that's impossible for me right now."
I will share my thoughts, daily life , or anything whatelse I want to talk about.
I will share my thoughts, daily life, or anything else I want to talk about.
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English beginner Ryanli This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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hello everyone: this is my first time using lang correct.
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I even don't know what I want from this wep.
I "Don't" almost always comes before "even". |
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I just want to practice my writing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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of course.
Using a comma here so that this sentence connects to the next. |
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if I can make more friends on this wep,
if I can make more friends on this |
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I will talk to them everyday. I will talk to them everyday. I will talk to them everyday. Might be more natural to use a contraction: "I'll talk to them everyday." |
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I hope to get better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although I am thirty four years old, This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I still want to study English well.
I still want to Might be more natural to say "learn" here instead of "study". |
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I even want to earn money by English.
I This might be a more natural phrasing. "I'd" is a contraction of "I would" -> "I would like to..." |
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But I know that is impossible for me right now.
But I know that is impossible "that is" can become "that's" "But I know that's impossible for me right now." |
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I will share my thoughts,daily life ,anything what I want to talk about.
I will share my thoughts, daily life |
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