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Rent an apartment
If you want to rent an apartment, you should sign the tenancy agreement. Your landlady will inform you about the obligations you have to keep the apartment clean. Maybe you have to pay a security deposit in advance. Otherwise, you have to pay on time each month. On the other hand, you have the right to negotiate the price for rent. You may ask the landlady to give you a copy of the rental agreement with all property details.
Aug. 25, 2025
KORREKTUR ,BITTE
Liebe Eltern.
Das Schuljahr startet. Ich bitte Sie höflich rechtzeitig mir ein Bescheid zu geben, ob Ihr Kind das Mittagsessen für die nächste Woche bekommen wird. Bis Donnerstag jede Woche sollen Sie es bitte bekanntgeben, damit ich das Essen für eure Kinder bestellen kann. MFG
Aug. 25, 2025
Laziness is a real thing?
When I go to gym, I really like to listen a podcast. Today I had my English class, so I listed a NPR episode that says about Laziness. A psychologist was interviewed about her book called “Laziness doesn't exist”. This title caught my attention, because today I woke up and said to me that I was a lazied. So, in the episode, the psychologist says about how the pressure about be productive all days and all the time can bright us down to call us lazy.
She says that it's more easier to call us lazy that say this to our dogs or our family. I agreed that we can say more bad things about yourself than about other people, specialty about the people that we love. In the episode they talk about how our success is related with work and be “productive”, and when we don't succeed in the way that society (maybe) wants, we considered a failure.
The psychologist says that when we fell laziness, we should stop and asked yourself why I fell this way? Is because I am tired, and I need to rest? Or it's, possibly, because I am doing some hard task and I don't know how to do? Also, she says that not every time we can calm down the work, because we have a deadline or a boss, but we should look to this felling in a different way.
If this text has some lesson, maybe can be like we need to be more gentile with yourself and only thought or said this to us that we said to other persons.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
The country I want to visit
Some people ask me wich country I want to visit, and I always answer Japan, because I like so much the culture and the vibe of this country. Also I want to visit many countries of Europe, but Japan it´s the country I really want like to visit. And you, wich country do you want like to visit?
See you tomorrow.
Aug. 25, 2025
La gente invadente
Alcune persone amano il gossip, ma quello che non è vero.
Non si interessano la verità, lo sfondo e la storia.
Credono quello che vogliono.
Una volta che ho detto "non è vero, non sono così.".
Ma quel tizio mi ha dato un ridicolo.
Ero frustrata.
Volevo dirgli " Ma tu credi ancora la teoria tolemaica?".
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Seeing Blurryly.
My vision always been god but until a while it has been blurryly with the characteres of the computer.
I work with programming so I belive that fact of I spend all day looking for screens of computer, manipulating variables can lose my vision can be harmin my vision.
I Probably i need wear glasses.
Aug. 25, 2025
Papel y lápices
Una de mis aficiones favoritas es dibujar. Reciente compré sesenta y cinco hojas de papel y tres lápices de carboncillos. No necesito tres lápices, pero es más barato comprar un paquete de trés que uno solo. Le venderé uno a mi amiga, Susan. Además compartiré el papel con ella. Es bueno que podamos compartir y reducir costes. Susan y yo asistimos a les talleres de arte juntas.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 27
Then the scene shifted to the jungle.
Anna and Alok hid behind a tree and saw a very disturbing sight. They saw a person sucking blood from another person. When the person sucked all the blood, he turned into a black, terrifying creature—the very same jackal Anna had talked about.
Seeing this, Alok was shocked and whispered to Anna, “Oh my God! This is the jackal I killed in the jungle to save you.”
Hearing this, Anna and Alok were terrified. They started running from that place to save their lives from the jackal.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Prvi tekst.
Trudim se da učim srpski jezik, zato što živim ovde u Srbiji već jednu godinu i po. Želila bih da osećam opušteno svaki put kada treba da govorim sa ljudima, ali to je uvek teško za mene. Mogu da kažem da ponekad imam probleme čak kada i govorim svojim jezikom, ako treba da govorim sa nepoznatim čovekom.
Kada živela sam u svojoj zemlji uvek sam plašila da idem na zvanična mesta, zato što uvek nisam znala sigurno šta treba da radim tamo, šta treba da govorim. A sada postoji i jezička barijera.
Mislim da preselenje u drugu zemlju je uvek baš teško, tako i ja ne snalazim ovu situaciju lako i spokojno. Ali znam da mi treba vremje i sve će biti u redu u budućnosti.
Sviđa mi se grad gde živim i deo grada gde živim. Svakog dana, malo po malo, bolje se prilagođavam novom mestu.
Aug. 25, 2025
Utilisation de la caisse automatique
Hier je suis allée au supermarché. Il y a des cassises automatiques que j’utilise habituellement. Je vis au Canada et nous avons deux langues officielles, anglais et français. Loresque nous utilisons les cassises automatiques nous pouvons choisir des instructions en un des langues officielles. Récemment j’ai commencé à choisir français. Après avoir terminé mon achat, le message suivant a apparu sur l’écran, « Veuillez prendre votre reçu et vos sacs » .Quelques secondes plus tard, il y avait un autre message, « Merci d’avoir magasiné chez nous » .
Aug. 25, 2025
¿Como han afectado las tarjetas de crédito a tu vida?
Creo que las tarjetas de crédito con una de las más importante invención en el siglo pasado. Para mí, nunca siglo mi casa con dinero en efectivo. Siempre uso una tarjeta para pagar compras y creo que es más seguro esta manera. Antes tenía una tarjeta, siempre necesité dinero exactamente para que algo que voy a comprar y si no tuve, no pude comprarlo. Pero ahora, mi vida es más flexible y puedo pagar por algo más tarde, cuando tengo dinero.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
おすすめな映画：南極料理人
好きな映画の一つは「南極料理人」という日本のコメディ・ドラマです。その映画は2009年に公開されたんですけど、2011年フィリピンで行われた映画祭で見ました。
この映画は実話に基づいています。南極に派遣された海上保安庁の西村淳さんの話です。ドームふじ基地の８人の研究チームのために、西村さんが調理担当としてご飯を作っていました。そこはすごく厳しい状況だそうです。寒すぎて、外はずっと真っ白、可愛いペンギンでもいないらしいです。私は南極のことをあまり知らないので、そこの大変な状況にどうやって生きているのか、日常生活はどうなるのか、すごく面白かったです。食材はほとんど冷凍や缶詰なんですけど、西村さんがステーキとか、フォアグラと言うような高級料理から、B級グルメのラーメンまで、和食、中華料理、洋食も作りました。そのチームは家族と普通の日常から離れていて、寂しそうですけど、食べ物からパワーをもらって安定感を感じました。
日本の文化が好きな人や飲食店を開きたいクラスメートにこの温かい映画がおすすめです。ネトフリで見られています。ぜひ見てくださいね。
Aug. 25, 2025
Die Unfähigkeit, sich um die Infrastrukturen zu kümmern
Hier ist es genauso. Einige große Straßen werden oft renoviert (obwohl es nicht besonders nötig ist) aber auf anderen kleineren Straßen voller Schlaglöcher sieht man gar keine Bauarbeiten. Die Züge haben immer öfter Verspätungsprobleme, weil die mechanische Teile alt wie Mathusalem sind. Regelmäßig hört man Geschichten von Gebäuden, die einstürzen, weil sie einfach nicht instandgehalten waren. In den Vororten sind viele Wohnhäuser heruntergekommen. Viele Straßenrandsarbeiten, die damals ziemlich häufig waren, werden heute nicht mehr ausgeführt, besonders in den kleinen Gemeinden, da die Bürgermeister einfach kein Geld haben. Die Brücke über der Saône, wo mein Bruder lebt, ist schon ziemlich verrostet, und sie ist nicht besonders alt... Ich könnte viele andere ähnliche Beispiele aufzählen.
Man ist daran gewöhnt, moralische Kriterien zu benutzen, um zu bestimmen, was eine untergehende Zivilisation charakterisiert — teilweise wegen der Historiographe über das Römische Reich, meiner Meinung nach. Manchmal stimmt es: Die Vebreitung der Korruption (die man überall im Westen feststellen kann) hat z.B. dramatische Folgen auf eine Gesellschaft. Diese Kriterien sind aber sehr subjektiv und nicht besonders relevant. Andere sind viel konkreter und objektiver, wie die Unfähigkeit, sich um die Instandhaltung der Infrastrukturen zu kümmern. Solche Merkmale zeigen ganz deutlich einen Staat in Niedergang an.
Aug. 25, 2025
My Introduction
Good evening!
I’m a beginner of learning English.
Why did I start to study English although there are a lot of foreign language.
The reason why I selected English is to be a world-wide person of my work.
I work as a public officer of Japanese government who specialize in a national security.
When I was a university student, I was worried about changing our world rapidly.
I want to protect my country and people from the negative impact cause the change.
So, I thought I should earn foreign language skills to be committed them.
English is a public language in the world.
Therefore, as a first step to be a world-wide person, I started to learn English!
Aug. 25, 2025
Do I want to have kids in the future?
Monday, August 25th
This is a topic I found myself thinking about a lot lately.
When I was a child, I wanted to have kids when I grew up, but I figured out I thought that only because I was influenced by my family. A few years later I decided that I would never have kids for two main reasons: I was scared of being pregnant and giving birth, and I hated being around children.
When I started to figure out more about myself and my sexuality, the idea of becoming a mother totally dissappeared, because I thought that, as a queer person, I wasn't going to be able to have kids anyway (also because, in Italy, gay people don't have a lot of rights).
In the last few years, though, I found out about the different ways a queer couple can have kids (aside from through adoption). I found myself smiling looking at the happy couples on my screen, but I just thought it was because I was happy that they could realize their dream.
But when I talked about it to my friends, I felt this strange feeling in my chest, maybe sadness? Or hope? I started thinking about possible future scenarios about a hypothetical wife and, perhaps, a kid. I talked to a friend of mine about this earlier and it was always so confused and skeptical.
I have a little brother and a sister and, as the oldest daughter, I always had to take care of them. I would always go crazy, and that's the main reason why I'm scared and not totally sure about having kids. What if I'm a terrible mother? And what if I don't know how to handle them? I hope I'll figure this out.
Aug. 25, 2025
I'm sleeping horrible
Sleeping has been one of my favourite moments of the day for ages. However, I've been sleeping really bad since summer started.
At first, I thought that the boiling weather was the problem. Now that my air conditioner works well, I realised that the weather was not the problem.
It could sound strange but this website is the reason of my insomnia. You would think that I'm crazy haha.
Every time I go to my bedroom and try to sleep, I start thinking about new topics to talk about in my next posts. I also have a conversation with my subconscious in English unintentionally. I always try to forget about it and to stop thinking things in English, but it's impossible.
The fact of thinking something when you try to sleep, makes impossible to fall asleep
What is more frustraiting is that I'm not so good at speaking English that I could have a deep conversation with myself in this language. I don't understand anything.
I hope that the day I start again my rutine of going to the university and going to the bed earlier, this problem will be solved.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Charlotte, 2 ans après
J’ai déjà parlé de mon amie Charlotte qui a un cancer du sein. Il fait 2 ans qu’elle a reçu ce diagnostique et après le traitement, il semble qu’elle est maintenant en rémission. Croisons les doigts !
J’avais rencontré Charlotte pour la première fois à la salle de sport. Elle y était allée tous les jours. Tous les mercredis, nous avions fait des classes de Zumba ensemble. Maintenant, elle ne participe pas dans les classes à la salle de sport. J’imagine qu’elle se sentait faible après la chimiothérapie.
Cependant, ces jours-ci, elle prend l’autobus et elle se rend au centre communautaire. Là, chaque journée, il y a des activités et des divertissements. Elle profite de la compagnie et s’est fait beaucoup d’amis. Je suis certaine qu’elle s’amuse bien.