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Do you prefer alone or not alone for holiday?
I think be alone better. It feels free like birds. There aren’t different idea. You don’t have to follow plan because the best plan is yours.
Sometimes you can be bored, you need new friends to talk. Don’t worry, there are a lot of traveller all over the world. You can go and stay in Hostels. it is good option everytime.
I have been twenty countries. Unfortunatly, I haven’t improved my English so I haven’t friends. In two years, I want to go to Asia, this time know English. I hope I will make new friends and explore new places..
July 22, 2025
Regression
I still regret deciding to become a member of a class team for the sports festival because I couldn’t be of any use to my teammates until now. Also, there was a session to practice, but I only finished the discussion, so I spent money and time studying in vain. Today I was so tired, nevertheless, I studied a little.
July 22, 2025
Making Coffee
I love coffee so much that can drink up to 4 in a day. Not only drink I also really love to make it, we have a professinal coffee machine at home so I have mastered to make coffee. When I was a kid my family didnt allow me to drink coffee in order to provide my health, at least it was their opinion. But since I know cofffe I love it so their prevention was only valid for my childhood. My interest had grew up for making and right now I can surely say that I have the almost same knowledge as a Barista.
July 22, 2025
My first text on the Langcorrect
Hello everyone. I’m from Türkiye. I live in Istanbul. I will talk briefly about my city, Istanbul. Istanbul is the biggest city in the Türkiye. There are 16 millons people in here. Istanbul has a very rich history because it was the capital of three great empires. You can see many historical buildings for example Topkapı Palace , Blue Mosque, Hagia Sopiha etc.
There are many things to see and do. You can visit museums, markets like Grand Bazaar or enjoy boat tour on the Bosphorus.
Boat tour is importand because Istanbul located on two continents: Asia and Europa. If you take a boat tour, you will see many exciting places. Other special thing is Grand Bazaar. It is the oldest market in the world.
Finally, Istanbul is a city where the past and present live together…
July 22, 2025
Serving phrases at the cafe
I'm working in Komeda's Coffee in Japan.
Sometimes we have foreign customers there so I practice the phrases to serve them in English recently! Like....
"Hello! How many in your party?"
"Would you like an English menu? Here's the English menu."
"Hi, are you ready to order?"
"Thank you for waiting! Here's your latte!"
"How would you like to pay?"
When I serve the foreign customers, I always keep smiling and speaking fluently, but I feel like I forget every phrases that I practice so many times!!
July 22, 2025
Ein Spaziergang im Wald
Heute bin ich in den Wald gegangen. Dort vebrachte ich anderthalb Stunden wandernd, was mir wirklich Spaß machte. Vorher regnente es, daher war alles im Matsch. Da gab es keinerlei Geräusche außer den von den Vögeln und von den Bäumen. Es fühlte sich wirklich wie eine Meditation an: ich habe meine Ohrhörer ausgeschaltet und einfach die Ruhe genossen.
July 22, 2025
July 22, 2025
Summer
The rainy season has finished last week.It’s so hot and humid outside everyday.The most hardest part for me is where I go into or going out a building. Because my body cannot adapt temperature changes. It’s not only the hot, but also having air conditioning on puts a strain on the body. I feel that the temperature is getting hotter year by year. I’m worrying that we cannot walk outside on summer in near future.
July 22, 2025
Le confort intérieur
Je pense que ce sentiment de bien-être varie profondément d’une personne à l’autre. C’est précisément pour cette raison que la notion de « compatibilité » existe : nos bien-être peuvent entrer en résonance avec celui des autres. Tous mes amis sont, à leur manière, de véritables maîtres du confort intérieur. Ce bien-être est avant tout une question de sensibilité. Mais pour affiner cette sensibilité, deux choses sont essentielles : l’expérience vécue, et la conscience de cette expérience. Il est indispensable de garder une posture d’écoute constante envers soi-même, en se demandant : « Qu’est-ce qui, pour moi, est source de bien-être ? »
Lorsque ce sentiment se perd, l’être humain ressent un malaise. Et ce malaise, hélas, se propage facilement aux autres. Ainsi, chercher à préserver notre propre bien-être revient, en fin de compte, à prendre soin aussi de ceux qui nous entourent.
Apprendre à se détendre et à ressentir du confort, même dans des situations inconfortables, est un art qui peut se cultiver. Rester souriant en toute circonstance, accueillir le mécontentement d’autrui avec un sourire apaisant, cela demande une certaine discipline. Mais surtout, cela exige une détermination profonde : celle de se dire « Plus rien en ce monde ne pourra troubler ma paix intérieure. »
Et vous, en cet instant… baignez-vous dans cette atmosphère de bien-être ?
July 22, 2025
July 22, 2025
Une chaleur menaçant la vie 危険な暑さ
Hier, la chaleur était vraiment suffocante, au point de mettre la vie en danger. Je devais absolument aller quelque part à pied, mais c'était éprouvant.
Je me suis souvenu de mon séjour à Dubaï en 2009. Je marchais dehors, mais il faisait tellement chaud que j'étais complètement épuisé. J'ai continué à marcher en cherchant désespérément un endroit climatisé. Quand j'ai enfin trouvé un centre commercial et j'y suis entré, j'étais exténué. Cela m'est revenu en mémoire.
July 22, 2025
My Morning
I wake up early morning. On the clock was 8.00 a.m, and i went on breakfast.
Put is kettle on the storve, that he boil. When kettle was boiled over,
i poured tea in my cup, then cooked sandwithches with cheese.
Was really delicious. Later i sit for computer and a little playing in game,
her will be name cs 2. Then i went on kithchen, that eating tasty soup.
Right now want sit for my work place and starting watch learn video.
Then want rest and watch on twitch tournament or youtube.
July 22, 2025
Betreff: Hilfe mit dem Schrank im Keller
Lieber Max,
ich höre dass du nächste Woche einen neuen Schrank lieferst hast. Der alte Schrank ist sehr schwer, deshalb möchte ich dir helfen. Er ist noch im Keller? Ich habe am Freitagvormittag oder Sonntagvormittag Freizeit. Passt du dir das? Was willst du mit dem alte Schrank? Meine Oma möchte ihm auf ihre Kuche.
Liebe Grüße
Alex
July 22, 2025
Preferisci l'alba o il crepuscolo?
È una domanda difficile! L'alba può annunciare una bella giornata, ma il crepuscolo puó essere il segno di una notte splendida e rilassante... Entrambe illuminano il cielo con striscie infiammate, creando colori unici ed effemeri. Unico ed effemero: sono due begli aggettivi per definire la bellezza, no? In generale, preferisco la sera, ma devo ammettere che la matina è più tranquilla. Le città e paesi sono ancora immersi in un torpore morbido, la natura si risveglia piano piano e nelle metropoli, queste ore matinali sono un sollievo benvenutto prima dell'agitazione che caratterizza le città magiori il resto della giornata.
Magari dirò l'alba a causa di questa atmosfera impareggiabile!
July 22, 2025
Ma promenade dans le parc
Ce matin, je me suis promenée dans le parc qui se trouve à proximité. Le parc appelé « Centennial Park » est grand et très populaire. Notamment, le week-end, c’est bondé et c’est difficile de trouver un parking. Heureusement, je peux y aller à pieds et laisser ma voiture chez moi.
Je voudrais décrire ce que j’ai vu au parc. D’abord, j’ai vu des coureurs. Il y en avait beaucoup, les coureurs et les marcheurs. Parmi eux, j’ai aperçu certains équipes. C’était facile de les identifier car ils portaient tous le même t-shirt. Il paraît qu’ils s’entraînent pour une course. Je sais que le marathon de Sydney aura lieu en septembre.
Ensuite j’ai remarqué les cyclistes. Honnêtement, je les déteste. Ce jour, pendant ma promenade, j’ai quasiment été renversée par un cycliste. Visiblement, tous les cyclistes roulaient très vite et à mon avis, ils avait l’air agressifs et arrogant. Oui, j’admets que je suis partial. Dans le parc, la vitesse autorisée était 30 km mais j’étais sûre et certaine que les cyclistes roulaient au-dessus de la limite. Quelle arrogance !
July 22, 2025
Handy für meine Cousine
Hallo Ella,
ich schreibe sie, weil du ein neues Handy möchten kaufen. Ich habe veil Information für diese Frage wissen und habe ich dir paar Tipp geben. Ich möchte für dir telefoniert. Wann sie Zeit haben? Ich kann dir Samsung oder Motorola empfehlen. Diese Model sing sehr modern und nicht teuer. Ich habe mehrere Stüch benutzen.
Mit freundlich Grüßen
Alex
July 22, 2025
Le chocolat
Avez-vous remarqué que de nos jours, le chocolat est devenu vraiment cher ? En fait, ici en Australie, le prix de chocolat aux supermarchés a augmenté par 50 % pour cent. C’est hallucinant !
Récemment, j’ai lu un article avec curiosité. Il a parlé d’une pénurie internationale de cacao. Apparemment, les deux principaux fournisseurs de cacao sont la Côte d’Ivoire et le Ghana. L’article a expliqué que à cause des certaines catastrophes naturelles et en même temps les affaires internationales comme des guerres et des impôts, le prix de cacao a explosé.
L’article a évoqué une petite entreprise à Brisbane menée par un couple qui a fermé ses portes. Il y a 10 ans, le propriétaire avait développé une recette de chocolat chaud. Mes amis qui l’ont bu, m’ont confirmé que c’était extraordinairement délicieux et la recette est un secret. Le café était très fréquenté néanmoins, le propriétaire a décidé de prendre une petite pause jusqu’à le prix du cacao baisse à un prix plus raisonnable. À l’heure actuelle, son entreprise n’est pas rentable.
July 22, 2025
Translated Prologue of My Debut Novel
High above the sandy shore that separated the sparkling sea from the old, squat mountains, a seagull glided. It barely moved its wings, riding warm updrafts while peering intently at the landscape drifting by below.
Far beneath, a small town stretched along a winding road and was slowly waking up. It looked like a winding centipede, its narrow streets fanning out from the main highway like slender legs.
Though midday was still far off, the sun, having just risen above the horizon, was already warming the terracotta roofs and grey asphalt. The town was in no rush; yawning lazily, it greeted the new day in the shade of quiet cafés and on beach loungers. The gentle hiss of tires from cars rolling in did little to disturb the near-perfect silence.
The seagull had no intention of changing its course, but the sudden buzz of a scooter startled it into veering toward the sea. Over the calm waves, it had to beat its wings more often, but here the blue expanse felt familiar. Unlike the busy land, the water’s surface lay empty and still. The fishing boats had already returned to shore, and the sleek yachts and powerful motorboats were yet to weigh anchor. Only a small flock of windsurfers sped across the waves, calling out to each other with bright, carefree voices. Absorbed in their race, they never glanced up to notice the bird trailing them. Had they seen her, they might have accepted the challenge — but not this time. Ahead, a narrow cape jutted several hundred meters into the sea, forcing the dozen colorful sails to swerve sharply toward open water. The seagull flew straight on, slowing a little to rest her wings.
Midway along the cape, tucked beneath the shade of cypress trees, stood a small villa with a swimming pool. Under a wide umbrella, a young woman in a swimsuit sat tapping at a tiny laptop. After a few more keystrokes, she stood up, closed the lid, and strolled toward the water. She slipped in like a pike, swimming underwater for a long moment before surfacing at the far edge — but the seagull didn’t see her reappear. Leaving the cape behind, she coasted along the shore once more, passing hillsides dotted with olive groves, vineyards, and the occasional low house with broad windows. Here, silence and near-perfect calm reigned.
Soon, the sandy strip of beach curved into a horseshoe bay at the foot of a gentle hill. Perched on its slope clung a small Roman-style house, its white gazebo nestled in a cozy courtyard. From the gazebo, a stone staircase descended in two flights toward the sand. In the sea opposite the house, about a hundred meters from the shore, a solitary rock rose up. Swooping in a wide arc, the seagull descended and landed on its peak — her favorite spot. She often came here to doze in the warmth of the morning sun. Shifting her feet — one of which glinted with a metal band — she finally settled, folded her wings, and waited.
Soon enough, a man in a light white robe appeared at the top of the steps. He made his way down, tossed his robe onto a rattan lounger, and ran headlong into the water. With strong strokes he reached the rock within minutes, climbing up onto its slippery ledge. Over the past few days, the seagull had come to know the man’s morning routine well. Now he would take a short break to catch his breath, then dive off the wet ledge and begin his swim back. But today, he lingered. Leaning back against the damp stone, he gazed out to sea as if he too wanted to soak up the early sun — just like his feathered companion.
In the distance, colorful sails appeared beyond the tip of the cape. The windsurfers, having rounded the obstacle, gathered speed and raced on. The man paused on the rock, stretched luxuriously, and rotated his arms in wide circles, warming up for the swim back. The flock of sails drew nearer, soon skimming past the rock from the open sea. Then, without warning, one bright yellow triangular sail broke away from the group and veered sharply, aiming for the narrow passage between the rock and the shore. The seagull lifted herself slightly on her webbed feet, watching as the flat board with its sail cut closer. Clearly, someone had decided to slip through the narrow gap between the rock and the picturesque shore. Unlike the seagull, the man couldn’t see it. He drew in a deep breath, pushed off hard with his legs, and dove. Holding his breath, he glided smoothly beneath the waves — just as the lone windsurfer burst from behind the rock.
July 22, 2025
Un mensaje para mi amigo.
¡Hola Take! ¿Cómo estás?
Ahora yo estoy viviendo en la ciudad de Yokohama, Japón. Hace 5 meses, me mudé en esta ciudad. Mi piso nuevo es grande más que antes. Tiene 2 habitaciones, un dormitorio, un baño y un jardín para mi perrito. Ese piso para soltero, pero se puede vivir con algunas mascotas. Me encanta mucho que vivir con mi perro. Se llama Pochi.
¿Cuándo vas a venir a mi piso? Si quieres venir a aquí, me mandarás un mensaje por mi coreo electrónico. Voy a prestarte a mi piso durante visitar a aquí. Además, te enseñaré mi ciudad. Mi ciudad es un lugar muy famoso porque hay muchas comerciales grande, edificios históricos y un mal bonita. Tal ves, a ti te gusta el paisaje de Yokohama.
Si es posible, vas a venir a mi ciudad el próximo mes. Porque, en ese momento tengo tiempo libre como una vacación de verano.
¿Qué te parece?
Entonces, estoy deseando encontrarte. Hasta pronto.
July 22, 2025
My First Day
Hi, this day is first day to here. Can i do this, i don't know but i will try. today i came to office. i have three friends at the office. i had a breakfast. i ate two bisquits and i drink a cup of coffee but it was turkish coffee. because we drink turkish coffee at 10:30 a.m. every day at the office. i think, it is a nice drink. cafein is awake to people. i am wearing short today because it's very hot and sunny.
July 22, 2025
Writer's Block Again
Actually, I can write more of what I've learned of Ali's book.
But I get boring, so I was lying on my chair, closed my eyes.
I heard a really loud noise, I looked outside the window.
'Oh, there's a strong wind outside, I remember it's been raining for a couple of days. Should I write about that?'
'What do they called? A cyclone, gale, windstorm etc.?'
I realized that I don't know anything about the weather vocabulary. So I gave up.
How about another topics, war, transportation, money, and ... uhm ... love?
I don't know either xD
And i write this post in order to keep my writing streak.
(I get confused when to use past simple and past continuous. Could you explain please, if you'd like to?)
July 22, 2025
July 22, 2025
July 22, 2025
Me
Hello dear listeners
I‘m Jason, 20 years old and live in the Beautiful old town of Bern located in Switzerland.
My favorit activity in my free time is going to the Gym, because I work in a office Where i only sit. After the Shift i Need to move my joints.
When I dont work i Like to Travel the world.
I really Like to see someday Hawaii or make a Safari tour in Kenia
I wish you all a good day.
Kind regards
Jason
July 22, 2025
Vor und Nachteile vom Internet
Das Internet ist sehr wichtig in meinem Leben. Ich benutze jeden Tag. Es gibt viele Vorteile und einige Nachteile.
Ein Vorteil ist : Ich kann schnell Informationen finden. Ich kann mit meiner Familie und meinen Freunden sprechen. Ich höre Musik und schaue Videos. Ich kann auch online einkaufen. Das ist sehr praktisch.
Aber es gibt auch Nachteile : Viele Menschen verbringen zu viel Zeit im Internet. Das ist nicht gut für Gesundheit. Es gibt auch viele falsche Informationen. Und manchmal gibt es probleme mit dem Datenschutz.
Ich finde das Internet gut, aber man muss vorsichtg sein.