yesterday
Barbershop
I go to the barbershop once every three months.
The barber was super busy today, and I had to wait in line for ten minutes.
I come to the barbershop not only to have my hair cut, but also to trim my beard.
After going home, I took a shower and had a good sleep.
我每三個月去一次美髮店。
今天理髮師很忙，我排队等了十分鐘。
我来美髮店不僅是剪髮，也是為了修剪胡须。
回家之後，洗了澡，好好睡了一觉。
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Barbershop
I go to the barbershop once every three months.
The barber was super busy today, and I had to wait in line for ten minutes.
I comego to the barbershop not only to have my hair cut, but also to trim my beard.
I go to the barbershop not only to have my hair cut, but also to trim my beard.
Using "come" kind of implies you are still there. Using "go" sounds a bit more natural, and works better with your first sentence as well, where you also use "go".
After going home, I took a shower and had a good sleep.
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That sounds like a nice outing :) Great writing!
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I go to the barbershop once every three months. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The barber was super busy today, and I had to wait in line for ten minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I come to the barbershop not only to have my hair cut, but also to trim my beard.
I Using "come" kind of implies you are still there. Using "go" sounds a bit more natural, and works better with your first sentence as well, where you also use "go". |
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After going home, I took a shower and had a good sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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