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Today's Happy Diversity
Today I discovered about my physical strength.
I was in a hurry this morning. When I went up from the first floor to the second floor, I suddenly realized that I had run up the stairs without even noticing it.
This was an epoch-making for me.
Before, I often used the elevator because I used to huff and puff even when I simply walked up to the second floor.
However, after I added swimming to my daily routine—only once a week though—my stamina gradually improved. After a year, I found that I could climb the stairs quite naturally.
In addition, I started going to the gym four or five times a week two months ago. As a result, even when I rushed up to the second floor today, my heart didn’t start beating fast like it used to.
Exercise truly brings amazing benefits!
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Today's Happy Discovery
"Diversity" doesn't make sense in this context.
Today I discovered about my physical strength.
Today I discovered my physical strength.
You just discover something, you don't need to "discover about" it--which is confusing, as you would "find out about" something.
I was in a hurry this morning.
WhenAfter I went up from the first floor to the second floor, I suddenly realized that I had run up the stairs without even noticing it.
After I went from the first floor to the second floor, I suddenly realized that I had run up the stairs without even noticing.
"When" makes it seem like the action in question is still happening, "after" places it more firmly in the past. Going from one floor to a higher floor implies "up," you can leave it out. The "it" at the end of the second clause makes it seem like you didn't notice the first clause (moving from floor to floor) rather than the speed at which you did so.
This was an epoch-makingal for me.
This was epochal for me.
"Epochal" is the adjective here, it is more literary than one might want, "epic" would be the slangy, idiomatic way to say that.
Before, I often used the elevator because I used to huff and puff even when I simply walked up to the second floor.
However, after I added swimming to my daily routine—only once a week though—my stamina gradually improved.
After a year, I found that I could climb the stairs quite naturally.
In addition, I started going to the gym four or five times a week two months ago.
As a result, even when I rushed up to the second floor today, my heart didn’t start beating fast like it used to.
Exercise truly brings amazing benefits!
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Today's Happy Diversity
Today's Happy Discover "Diversity" doesn't make sense in this context. |
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Today I discovered about my physical strength.
Today I discovered You just discover something, you don't need to "discover about" it--which is confusing, as you would "find out about" something. |
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I was in a hurry this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I went up from the first floor to the second floor, I suddenly realized that I had run up the stairs without even noticing it.
"When" makes it seem like the action in question is still happening, "after" places it more firmly in the past. Going from one floor to a higher floor implies "up," you can leave it out. The "it" at the end of the second clause makes it seem like you didn't notice the first clause (moving from floor to floor) rather than the speed at which you did so. |
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This was an epoch-making for me.
This was "Epochal" is the adjective here, it is more literary than one might want, "epic" would be the slangy, idiomatic way to say that. |
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Before, I often used the elevator because I used to huff and puff even when I simply walked up to the second floor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, after I added swimming to my daily routine—only once a week though—my stamina gradually improved. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After a year, I found that I could climb the stairs quite naturally. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In addition, I started going to the gym four or five times a week two months ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As a result, even when I rushed up to the second floor today, my heart didn’t start beating fast like it used to. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Exercise truly brings amazing benefits! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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