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Comment réduire la pollution dans les grandes métropoles
(C'est un sujet que j'ai tiré de DELF B1)
La pollution est un grand problème en grands villes. Récemment, sur Twitter, l’hashtag « saccageparis » a été populaire pendant un certain temps, avec lequel les utilisateurs de Twitter ont posté des photos du bordel à Paris, comme celle avec des déchets traînaient par terre. Portant, ce n’est pas qu’un problème de Paris, mais également des autres grandes villes. Comment améliorer les situations pour que les habitants puissent y vivre d’une manière agréable ?
Tout d’abord, on doit réduire les déchets alimentaires. En France, à mon avis, les clients sont plus nombreux à laisser la nourriture sur les assiettes après les repas, ce qui m’a étonnée au début. Comme la France l’a déjà fait, on a besoin d’effectuer la loi qui demande aux restaurants de préparer le « doggybag », ce qui permettra aux clients d’apporter des restes.
Faire la publicité montrant les bons gestes à prendre sera aussi efficace. Il existe la pollution parce que plein de personnes jettent des déchets sans bien réfléchir sa conséquence. Faire passer les mauvais gestes à la télé peut sensibiliser les auditoires qui se comportent mal.
Bref, je pense qu’il doit y avoir plus de mesures ci-dessus pour améliorer la condition des grandes villes. Chacun d’entre nous doit appliquer les bons gestes, mais les villes peuvent établir des politiques pour nous inciter à mieux agir.
July 29, 2021
Irreale Sätze (Vergangenheit)
1. Wenn ich diese Bedingungen gewusst hätte, hätte ich nicht teilgenommen.
2. Wenn ich einen Badeanzug eingekauft hätte, hätte ich schwimmen können.
3. Hättest du mir es gesagt, hätte ich dir ein Taxi angerufen.
4. Wenn du eine Eins geleistet hättest, hättest du nach Spanien fliegen können.
5. Wenn er kein Hemd getragen hätte, hätte ihn nicht in den Club gehen dürfen.
July 29, 2021
Episodio de una telenovela acerca del cajero automático
Hoy he visto una telenovela sobre una familia de clase media cuya hija única fue víctima de una estafa de cajero automático. La chica entró la oficina de su padre y le pidió dinero para cubrir unos gastos academicos, pero el padre apenas le hizo caso porque estaba absorto en su llamada telefónica. Ella le insistió hasta que el padre cubrió el auricular con la mano y le tendió la tarjeta del banco para que ella retirara el dinero ella misma. Le advertió que solo sacara el dinero necesario y que luego volviera enseguida. Después de darle las indicaciones, continuó con su conversación y ella sin perder ni un momento dio la vuelta y salió de la oficina. Ella se puso soberbia porque tenía la tarjeta y se alardeó a su amiga quien se encontraba en la sala de estar. La chica preguntó a su amiga si había retirado dinero alguna de un cajero automático vez y cuando le contestó que no, se burló de ella. En fin, fue estafada en medio de la transacción y luego se arrepentió de estar tan altanera. El padre intentó apelar al banco que les devolviera el dinero perdido pero el banco respondió que hizo una revisión de las cámaras de seguridad y determinó que la chica no seguió las medidas de seguridad para protegerse de los estafadores. Por eso no les iba a devolver nada.
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July 29, 2021
Sentensens with 把 construction
晚上好亲爱的！ 看看我今天买了什么。我的车坏了，所以我把这辆闪亮的红色法拉利买了。 我把它停在房子旁边，过来看看！我没有把我们说的保时捷买，我们的邻居都已有几辆。你的厨具都是旧的, 我把这个非常现代的 CrockPot给你买了。你把这个牛肉和蔬菜放在Crockpot做很好吃的炖汤。爸爸，你去年夏天把太阳镜坏了。 现在阳光明媚，所以我把你上周看到的这些新眼镜给你买了。妹妹， 你也过来！我没有把你问我的牛仔裤买，可是我把这条非常漂亮的裙子为明天的聚会给你买了。儿子，你为什么问我蛋糕在哪里？ 我刚把它放在冰箱里。女儿，你把茶和杯子放在桌子上，我们一起喝茶。
July 29, 2021
2021 goal
I think it's too late to make a plan for this year.
Let me talk about how I spent my time in the past 7 months.
Start with the end of last year, I got a new offer in Taipei. My job is to maintain production yield, work with the operation team to resolve low yield issues, and ensure IC quality is good. Actually, the low yield cases rarely happen. so my life is really chill and I think this position is so perfect. And then, I got lots of free time after work off. I became addicted to game and I always spend 4 hours for it. when I lay on the bed, I always think that I would not keep this way tomorrow. But the next day, I still kept the same way. Day after day, I haven't learned any new skills at all. Here's what I want to improve list.
English
1. 100LS for listening and speaking
2. writing - to find a tutor to check my sentence
3. daily reading & listening
keep going and wish I can earn lots of money. haha
July 29, 2021
Korossol into the Ring 33
Warmth. That's what I feel the most. My eyes are closed but I know somehow that there's sunlight everywhere. I'm not hearing anyone. I don't think that I am alone though. Who cares? I feel good.
I know this song. Everyone knows it. I don't remember its title right now but everyone has sang it at least once.
I know who's playing. My father has guitars on his wall but rarely use them. Only when he's alone does he play. It's sad. He plays very well.
What does he play? I should know...
But I feel so good, I can't even open my eyes...
Come on, brain; it's the melody of summer, the melody of light and of indefinite love. It talks about peace and jealous gods; it's sad and beautiful. Everyone loves it.
I'm humming the song along with the guitar. Something about Heaven; something about people. A childhood 's song - and now Marley's "Song of Revolution" comes to me. No!
The guitar move away from me, its weak chords weeping. I'm crying too. "Stay!" I want to say. "Don't leave me!"
But it's too late. I wake up and remember that I haven't see my father in years. Never again will I hear him play the guitar.
But as I'm crying, I smile. "Imagine there's no countries, it isn't hard to do; Nothing to kill or die for, and no religion too."
It's still beautiful.
July 29, 2021
Did you like this grammar snack? What did you do yesterday?
Grammar snack is a good idea to learn English. when I read a question, I think about my answers before I read the answer of grammar snack. That makes me remember one thing longer.
Yesterday, I learnt some new words, listening, reading and writing of English on Youtube. I learn English myself. I want to learn how to do a news thing. I am exciting about the program of Cambridge. I begin from Starters. This program is for a child. Because I realize that a child can learn a new thing better than a adult. They learn with their hearts, in their happiness and relaxing.
July 29, 2021
Summertime Sadness
I just want to borrow the name from Lana Del Rey's song.
When I was a high school student, I suffered a lot study pressure. I thought I was so lonely that no one understanded me. And I didn't want to talked about it with my classmates because I thought they were stupid. I had learned a lot ancestral poems for exams, I thought the author would understand me more. So I started to learned more ancestral poems outside my textbook. I quoted them on my notebook and recited frequently.
I speak loud the poems in class, because I wanted to show off myself. I wanted to show my loneliness and knowledge, whereas I wanted to scorn my classmates.
Yep, when I look back, it seems quite ridiculous. As the ancestal poem stated: when you are young, you know nothing sad, but you think you are the saddest person in the world. So you try hard to transmit your sadness everywhere. When you become mature, you know what sadness really is, but you talk about the weather instead of sadness.
I have forgoten most of the poems, and I am busy doing something more important to me now. Furthermore, I care the weather a lot.
July 29, 2021
７月２９日の日記
こんばんは。
今日は日本語の勉強に５時間くらいを過ごしました。日本語を勉強するのに長い時間を過ごしたんですけれど、私の会話力をまだ改善できません。実はベトナムに住んでいますから、日本人と話すチャンスが少なくなります。大学で日本人の先生以外は殆ど話し相手がいません。今、シャドウイングの方法をするようにしています。毎日、少しずつ日本人のラジオを聴いて何度も真似することにします。
今日はインタネットで「Lang-8] というウェブサイトを探して本当に嬉しかったです。ここは嬉しいこと、悲しいこと、ど自分の考えを書く事ができます。実は私は消極的なタイプなので、何事に遭っても私を考えさせます。他の人に打ち明けるのは少ないです。これから、言いたいことを日記に書くようにします。日記を書くのは本当に面白いです。日本語を改善するだけではなく、自分の気持がよくなるし、ストレスも解消できます。^^.
July 29, 2021
Results for this week
Last two weeks I focus on exercises I am happy the results I got.
Also, my knowledge on how to exercises is getting better.
This week because working in night shift.
I don’t want to getting too tire.
So, I decided mainly stay in the library and read some books.
Same experience happened!
After the first day I just want to quit!
But somehow, I manage to keep continue this task.
At the end, I had a major breakthrough on a difficult subject.
I am so happy about that.
Start from tomorrow back to exercise cycle very looking forward.
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BUMP OF CHICKEN
BUMP OF CHICKEN is a Japanese rock band and very popular. I got to know this band about seven years ago, but the songs and lyrics are still impressing me. Among the songs, I like "才能人応援歌(Sainoujin Ouenka)" which means a cheering song for those who are worrying about their talent. I also like "Arue," and it's a love song for an anime character, Rei Ayanami. I didn't know it was for Ayanami but loved its melody.
July 29, 2021
800 Day Steak of Duolingo App
I got a 800 day steak of Duolingo App today.
The app helps to study foreign languages not only English, but also Chinese, Franch and so on.
You can also learn Valyrian language which is introduced atthe Game of Throne.
The target use of this app is from new beginners to B1 level users.
So it isn't so helpful to my current English.
But it makes a way how to make daily routines easily.
By the way, I can make many other learning routines like reading English books, writing English journals and speaking ten minutes in English.
Now I am learning Chinese with this app.
I hope I can travel to China without translating apps.
July 29, 2021
Procrastination (pt.2)
Now is the era of fragmented learning, and I always worry that I become a 民科 (Crank). The English word Crank seems to be not accurate enough. 民科 probably refers to the premise that one does not have a lot of familiarity with the existing terminology and conceptual system in a certain field, and does not have a lot of research on the existing academic results in a certain field, but launches an opinion based on imagination without actual information, and then possessed by the Devil. One of my followers forwarded an article about 民科, which I thought was not well written. Then I opened my browser to search for more, and I came across an article about the word "complex systems". Well, I didn't know what the word meant. Then I found out that it was a subject I had never heard of but seemed very interesting. Then the search engine pushed another article about "systems learning". Ray Dalio's Principle is recommended in the article.
It's a book but with a 30 minute introductory video. emm... If it only takes 15 minutes to watch at twice the speed, then why not check it out now...
A classic case of procrastination. So, I spent the whole morning reading the "relevant material". I was planning to finish writing the course exercises at this time. But I can't say it was completely useless, because "Principle" is helpful. It is mentioned two obstacles: self-awareness and blind spots in thinking. I feel that "two obstacles" have given me ideas to solve my procrastination.
July 29, 2021
길 안내
Are these natural ways to ask for directions?
A: 실례합니다. 여기서 은행까지 어떻게 가요?
B: 쭉 가시고 2번가에서(at the second street) 오른쪽으로 도세요. 그럼 우체국 앞에 있어요.
A: 감사합니다.
A: 실례합니다. 말씀 좀 묻겠습니다.
B: 네.
A: 이 근처에 우체국이 어디 있어요?
B: 저기 은행 있지요? 은행 뒤에 있어요.
A: 아…고맙습니다.
A: 실례하지만 극장이 어떻게 가요?
B: 쭉 가시고 우체국 건너편에 있어요.
A: 약국은요?
B: 약국은 극장 앞에 있어요.
A: 감사합니다.
A: 실례합니다. 말씀 좀 묻겠습니다.
B: 네.
A: 커피숍이 어디 있어요?
B: 쭉 가시고 신호등에서 왼쪽으로 도세요. 그리고 은행에 지나가시고 오른쪽으로 도세요.
July 29, 2021
July 29, 2021
If a child causes trouble at school or in public?
I think parents should be held responsible if their child causes trouble at school or in public because they are obligated to tech them various things such as what is wrong and what is right, manner, moral and having kindness etc. If their child caused trouble at school or public, someone would get hurt or mad so parents have to think with their child about that why that trouble happened and what was wrong and what should you do starting now. The point is to listen to their child carefully and think about that problem together. If they do so, their child would learn thinking about others and admit his (/her) mistakes and the way to solve problems. I hold parents responsible for their kids in order to not to bother others when they grow up.
July 29, 2021
Judo
I eat dinner around 6 PM every day. The Olympic judo semi-final and final match are being held at that time, so I watch them on TV over dinner. Today, Shori Hamada won the gold medal in the women's 78 kg class. After that, Wolf Aaron won the gold medal in the men's 100 kg class. His father is American, and his mother is Japanese.
I used to do judo when I was in high school. I noticed that some rules have changed at this Olympics.
July 29, 2021
Why job is important except for making money ?
People have jobs because they want to find the meaning to live. If they spend most of time in their house, they would think "what am I doing now, everyone would work or study about this time. I have to something or find my dream." People tend to compare with others. When you listen to someone's success and if you feel uncomfortable , which represents you aren't satisfied with yourself. But if you work, at least you contribute to society and help someone, and if you feel your job is boring, you can find another thing you really want to do. Therefore having job is important because they can find their dream and the meaning to live.
July 29, 2021
какая разница есть между турецким и русским языками?
какая разница есть между турецким и русским языками? Поскольку я изучал оба, я часто думаю об этом в последнее время. Какому языку легче научиться?
По-моему, турецкий легче из этих двух языков. У него несколько характеристик, от которых я придумал это мнение. Во-первый, у каждого слово в турецким есть больше значений. Как результат, вообще нужно запоминать меньше слов. В разговоре Турецкого языка, я заметил что в общем, я могу выразить больше с меньшими словами.
Во-второй, для носителя английского языка, на русском использоваться другой алфавит. Все становится труднее - читать, писать, слушать (потому что когда я слушаю, я часто также думаю о том, как пишутся слова). Я заметил что, я не мог запоминать слова на русском с той же самой скоростью.
Абстрактно говоря, я думаю что, трудность языка зависит от того, сколько можно использоваться от каждого правила грамматики. Эта идея немного трудно объяснить: я имею в виду, например, если я имею спрягать глагол "думать" на русском, это не значить что, я имею применять это правило с другими глаголами. На русском есть много виды глаголов, которые не спрягаться как обычно. Например, глаголы, в которых есть конец "-овать". "использовать" не становится "использоваю", становится вместо "использую". Но в чем отличается турецкий? Когда я имею спрягать одни глагол, можно применять это правило к почти всем глаголам. Это только одни пример, но мне кажется что, есть больше много примеров.
Можно сказать что, турецкий язык очень логический. У него нет много исключений.
July 29, 2021
初めての自己紹介
これは最初の投稿なので、簡単に自己紹介させていただきます。私はングイェ・アン・ゔと申します。ベトナムから来ました。ヴァンァン大学の４年生です。今まで日本語を勉強するのは４年間ぐらいですけど。日本語がまだ下手なので、とても大変です。もうすぐ卒業するので、就職ができるかどうか毎日心配しています。もし就職ができなかったら、親をがっかりさせて、本当に困ります。私の専攻は日本語ですから日本語だけ勉強して特に技能がありません。今はコロナウイルスの影響で学校が休みますし、毎日オンラインの系で勉強しています。実はオンラインの系で勉強するというのはあまり良くないじゃないかと僕は思っています。だから、私は主に独学です。私にとって独学は大事なんですよ。特にこの時期は。これから日本語の勉強を必死に頑張りたいと思います。どうぞよろしくお願いします^^ 。
July 29, 2021
Entry: 28/07/2021
Note regarding verbs: (polite/impolite)
朝：
ちょっと遅い(起こしました/起こした)。生化学教室に1000から1300まで(通いました/通った)。注意深く(聞きません/聞かない)。
グミベアを全部(食べました/食べた)。
ベーコンを除いて、何も(食べませんでした/食べなかった)。(G.I.さん、申し訳ない...)
午後：
昼ご飯はMさん共に(買いました/買った)。私が食べたワッフルは美味しかった。私が(飲んだ/飲みました)飲み物は甘(過ぎた/過ぎました)ので、眠い(成りました/成った)。
今日は本当に暑かった。日焼け(しませんでした/しました)。それは有難い。
夜：
晩ご飯前、研究の会合が(ありました/あった)。注意深く(聞きません/聞かない)。ケーキをもう(食べました/食べた)。
晩ご飯を1930に(食べました/食べた)。お母さんはスープ麺を(作りました/作った)。卵とスープは超美味いでした。
今、オリバーのstreamを(見ます/見る)。
追伸：
新しい眼鏡を(待ち焦がれません/待ち焦がれないので)
新しい語彙：
語彙 (ごい vocabulary)
起きる( おきる to wake)
通う (かよう to attend)
生化学 (せいかがくbiochemistry)
除いて (のぞいて except/other than/save)
共に (ともに with)
日焼け (ひやけ tan/sunburn)
研究 (けんきゅう research)
会合 (かいご meeting)
作る (つくる to make - also includes food, which I didn't realize)
追伸 (ついしん P.S.)
待ち焦がれません (まちこがれる to be impatient for/to wait eagerly for)