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一番簡単に学ぶ方法
あなたが新しいことを学んだことがありますか
「はい」の答えと思っているが、仕事が多いし、家族の世話しなど時間があまりない。その方法は日常生活をしたままで新しい知識が得られる。そいう方法は三つに分かれる：読解、聴解と試す
例えば英語を勉強したいけど仕事が終わって家に帰ったぐったりする。
読解：毎日会社で６０分に仕事をすれば５－１０分だけ英語の本を読む（１－２ページでも大丈夫です）。だから１日８時で仕事は６０－８０分まで本を読まれる（英語は５分だけガームをしながら勉強したり、世界のニュースを読んだり、緊張しなくて楽しいだ）
聴解：昼ごはんを食べてから、すぐ寝ずに短いラヂヲを聞きます。また周りに歩いていって英語の歌や小説を聞くのはとっともよいだ。健康ではなく英語を聞こえることが進歩になっている
試す：普通のよりはやきに起きて簡単な作文を書いたり英語で日記をつけたり英語をシャドウイングする
Oct. 24, 2021
27. Courriels ou lettres ?
Est-ce que les courriels remplacent totalement les lettres ?
Dans le monde numérique d’aujourd'hui, on reçoit dizaines de courriels chaque jour, mais depuis combien de temps que notre vraie boîte de lettre reste vide ? Tous les doisiers, comme la facture, la feuille de promotion, sont en forme de numérique.
Cette popularité de courriels est grâce à sa rapidité et l'économie de coût de papiers et timbres. De plus, la lettre peut être ouverte par d'autre personne non-désignée ou bien être perdue, par contre, ces problèmes peuvent être évités dans les courriels. Cependant, les lettres occupent toujours une position importante dans le monde numérique, pourquoi ?
Tout d'abord, l'écrit manuel de lettres ou cartes symbolise le temps que l'expéditeur passe pour le destinataire. Quand je reçois une lettre écrite à la main, je suis plus contente que recevoir un courriel de même contenu, parce que c'est comme que cette personne se retrouvait devant moi. C’est pareil avec les feuilles papiers qu'il choisis et parfois les timbres, tous sont les signes que cette personne conscare son temps pour le destinataire, ce qu’Il est irremplaçable par le courriel qui manque de chaleur.
En outre, pour la securité, il est mieux de choisir le lettre. Cela peut sembler contradictoire parce que le lettre peut ouvert par quelqu'un d'autre par malheur. Mais n'oublions pas que sur Internet, tout est surveillé par les gouvernements. Donc pour les dossiers très importants, il est conseillé de le faire par lettre.
Enfin, selon moi, la question de lettre ou courriel, dépend des destinataires et de la nature de contenu. Je serai heureuse de recevoir une lettre de mes amis mais pas une lettre de fracture qui est mieux fait par le courriel. En résume, les deux ne sont pas incompatibles et chaqu'un a son propre fonction !
Oct. 24, 2021
Sunday
I went to bed very early last night, as a result, I woke up early as well. I had breakfast, read some information of international students, washed sheets. The neighbor became noisy again. I strongly played the drums and felt relieved. After lunch, I rode my bike to Auntie De.
Though it was sunny, it was a little cold. It was so comfortable. The main road's construction was nearly finished, therefor, it was convinient a lot.
I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, I told them the incident about my mom. They blamed me that it was wrong to stop the neighbor. I told them that it was illegal of them to be too noisy, the police wouldn't deal with things like this, though. I still had the right to interfere, and at least I tried. I had knew what the workers like, then I would hnow how to get with them next.
At three p.m, they went to work separately. I was studying German under the tree, and took care of the little geese from time to time. What I needed to do was to keep them away from the chickens and dogs. It was quite relaxing. I went to the field at dusk. The rice was going to be havested. It was so gold under the sunshine.
After having dinner with Auntie Xian, I rode back to home and went to work.
I had a good time today.
Oct. 24, 2021
Oct. 24, 2021
Une histoire
Une histoire faite avec les mots que j'ai appris aujourd'hui
Aujourd'hui nous trouvons devant a une proteste qui s'agit du gâchis de plâtre, qui a causé un manque de ce matériel. La nouvelle est déjà répandue dans tout le pays, raison pour laquelle sont actuellement agglomérées 50 mille personnes. La dimension de l'agglomération est de trois pâtes de maisons. La situation est devenue tellement désespérée que la police a formé un barrage pour prevenir que les manifestants puissent dévaler la rue en courant de s'engouffrer dans le magasin pour amasser des réserves du matériel qui assiste dans la construction et l'entretien de maisons.
Il n'y a pas plus une ambiance de gaieté dans le pays. La nouvelle est déjà apparue sur toutes les couvertures des journaux, ce que fait tourbillonner les esprits des politiciens, tandis qu'ils trouvent une solution qui satisfera les deux parties.
répandre
tourbillonner
plâtre
s'engouffrer
barrage
pâté de maisons
dévaler
couverture
gâchis
gaieté
Oct. 24, 2021
2021.10.24
I am eager to improve my speaking skills in Korean and English. And The more I watch Eric Nam's interview videos, the more I want it. His language ability is amazing. That is what I want to take a leaf out of his book. So I decided to watch Ted and write summary and my thoughts at least 1 in a week. That must be worth to do it. And maybe I have to read Jordan Peterson's writing skill essay. I don't know what it exactly is called. And I have to take a test, TOEFL to improve my English skills and to apply universities abroad for graduated school. I am not sure what I am going to do but I am considering a lot of selections.
-take a leaf out of one's book 누구를 본받다
Oct. 24, 2021
Note-taking Apps.
My favorite feature of my smart phone is note-taking apps.
As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.
WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.
There are some advantages rather than analog notes.
On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.
And I can search contents quickly and easily.
I will keep using the note-taking apps.
Oct. 24, 2021
HSK6模拟考试 - 写作
祝英台和梁山伯的爱情故事
古代时有个姑娘叫祝英台，不仅很聪明而且很漂亮。她很喜欢写字，于是在她十五六岁时决定了去外地学馆继续学习。当时的统领不允许女生学习，因此她打算假扮成男生。虽然她父亲警告了她这么做很不方便，她还是在第二天启发了。
在她的路途中她见到了一个男生叫梁山伯，也要去同样一所学馆。他们两个一见如故，关系很融洽。
他们到了学馆之后就去拜师，师父让他们两个做在同样的桌子。在这段时间内，祝英台和梁山伯成了最好的朋友。
一晃三年过了，祝英台得知了她父亲病了，准备回家了。回家之前，她告诉了梁山伯她有个双胞胎妹妹可以和梁山伯结婚。梁山伯答应了。
几个月后梁山伯去了祝英台家。他见到了祝英台妹妹时就意识到她是祝英台自己。在那时，他们两个意识到对彼此的感情。于是，梁山伯派人去祝英台家求婚，不幸运的是她父亲拒绝了。梁山伯因此病倒了，临终时要求人把他的尸体埋在马家通往祝家的路边。
祝英台之后被逼迫去见他的新郎，路途中遇到了梁山伯的坟墓。突然有场风刮得很大，坟墓中开了一条缝，祝英台喊着梁山伯的名字进去了。
之后，天气平静下来了，从坟墓中两只蝴蝶出现了，据传是梁山伯和祝英台两人永远陪伴彼此的体现。
Oct. 24, 2021
Oct. 24, 2021
JLPT N4 / N5 Practice
１．私は一週間に四回イタリア語を教えます。
２．彼は一週間に三日テニスをします。
３．あなたは一週間にどのぐらい日本語の授業がありますか。
４．
A：一ヶ月にどのぐらい掃除をしますか。
B: 火曜日ごとにします。
５．あなたは仕事で一年間に何回ぐらい日本に行きますか。
６．
A：今日病院に行かなくちゃ。
B：それなら、また明日。
７．明日暑いなら、一緒に散歩をしませんか。
８．父はイタリア語と英語だけ話します。
９．昨日寿司だけ作りました。
１０．ここに寿司はおいしくないし、高い、ラーメンのほうがいいです。
１１．あのアパートはとても静かだし、安いので、買いたい。
１２．大学で先生だったり学生だったりに会います。
１３．あの寿司屋は寿司がおいしかったり不味かったりです。
１４．明日晴れだそうだ。一緒にどこかへ行きませんか。
１５．あのフィルムは詰まらなそうですが、見たくない。
１６．
A：天気がどうですか。
B：雨が降りそうです。
１７．私は政治が嫌いです。それは詰まらなそうです。
１８．掃除をしてから、散歩をしました。
１９．あなたは映画を見てから、何をしますか。
２０．映画を見てから、友達とレストランで食べなくちゃ。
２１．明日は日曜日だし、何もしなくてもいい。
Oct. 24, 2021
Una storia
Una storia fatta con queste 13 parole che ho imparato oggi:
Dopo l'avanscoperta, l'uomo manesco entrò nel bar, il luogo che ritempra lo spirito di qualcuno, ma anche la ragione per cui esiste il bubbone dell'alcolismo. Scaraventò un sedile a terra e domandò a un anziano perché l'aveva fissato l'altro giorno. L'anziano si difendeva con accanimento, ma l'uomo non accettò la sua spiegazione. Gli diede un ceffone, poi prese un bicchiere d'acqua e lo frantumò sulla testa dell'uomo. Questa scena trafisse il cuore del proprietario, poiché l'aggressore stava distruggendo la sua creazione: il bar. Alla fine, il delinquente uscì dal bar con incedere traballante, dando al poveraccio il compito di rimuovere con cura tutti i detriti.
Signore e signori, questo è l'uomo che idolatrate: Connor McGregor.
Riepiloghiamo: Non possiamo tollerare più gli atti violenti delle stelle. Nella fattispecie, l'ubriachezza può essere un fattore mitigante, ma comunque se una persona ha il potere di influenzare, deve utilizzarlo in modo positivo.
ceffone
scaraventare
saladamente
accanimento
ritemprare
detrito
bubbone
riepilogare
nella fattispecie
manesco
avanscoperta
trafiggere
incedere
Oct. 24, 2021
Oct. 24, 2021
October 24th, 2021
I went to a shrine called Izumo Daijingu in Kameoka, Kyoto. This place is known as a spiritual place. I felt calm and peaceful. Kenko Yoshida wrote an essay called Tsurezuregusa about 800 years ago. He wrote about this shrine in this essay.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211024/w800/index-e.html
Oct. 24, 2021
Oct. 24, 2021
Rise of the Guardians
Hi
Yesterday I watched a movie, call "Rise of the Guardians". I don't know why, after I watched it, I felt a lot of moods were in my heart. It's a very simple, super happy, and super warm movie, but I found a lot of things in this movie. It's about Jack Frost, the tooth fairy, sandman, and Santa fighting with pitch black, a man who wants to take away all innocence and happiness from the children in this world. It's a simple story, but I felt like pitch black is like those troubles, those difficulties in our life. Those things are trying to take away our hope, our happiness in life. Guardians are the innocence from the deep of our hearts, every day we have fights with those difficulties, and every time, we won. It's impossible that troubles can defeat us, cuz the happiness from our hearts is undefeatable. Probably sometimes, we will feel hopeless or sad when the pitch black is super strong or super big, but please believe yourself, one day you will overcome it.
The thing that makes our life get better, is the innocence that we are hiding behind.
Oct. 24, 2021
Oct. 24, 2021
공부 방법
저는 가정 가능한 시간 언어와 보내려고 노력해요. 매일 아침에 저는 한 시간 동안 단어 카드로 연습해요. 보통 연습하는 후에 저는 출근해야 돼요. 저는 네트워크 권리자서 때때로 일을 느려요. 만약 일을 느리면 저는 오디오를 들고 문법 교과서로 공부해요. 저의 동료 재미있는다고 생각하는데 저는 신경 안 써요. 퇴근하고 두 시간 후에 Italki 수업 있기 때문에 저는 일기장 안에 일상상활 대해 쓰면서 자주 안 사용한 문법 포함해요. 가끔 저는 일부러 안 자연 문장을 만들어요. 마지막으로, 저는 한국 드라마 보고 lingq에서 읽어요. 저의 공보 방법 아마 제일 효일적 아는 것 같지만 저의 한국어 능력 전전히 나아졌어요.
Oct. 24, 2021
Los avances científicos y tecnológicos y las curas naturales
En este mundo donde los avances científicos y tecnológicos son frequentes, las curas naturales se han vueltos menos importantes. Ya que el tratamiento médico puede ser más eficaz y fidedigno, muchas personas prefieren ir al médico en vez de contar con remedios naturales. A pesar de esto, los remedios naturales no cuestan muchos y pueden ser muy efectivos en algunos casos. Por ejemplo, en diferentes partes del mundo hay varios remedios caseros para aliviar un dolor de garganta o un dolor de estómago. Muchas veces, estos remedios resuelven el problema y como resultado no es preciso ir al doctor.
En el caso de enfermedades graves como el cáncer, una cura natural no puede ser tan fiable como el tratamiento médico. Por ende, ir al doctor procura que podamos recibir tratamiento por un experto que sabe tratar las enfermedades más graves. Sin embargo, ya que las curas naturales forman parte de la cultura de una sociedad, siempre van a tener alguna importancia en el mundo moderno.
Oct. 24, 2021
Snapping at someone you're correcting
Well it happened today. Usually, when someone wrote a text I dislike, I just ignore it, and in worse case, I stop correcting the author all together, but without making a fuss about it. I was probably in a bad mood today, because I snapped at him or her. I am not saying I regret it, because I don't, but I don't usually do this.
It was a text about tip culture in the US. Basically that person said tips give too much power to the waiters, encouraging a toxic culture where customers are forced to pay extra if they don't want to get dark looks, and this culture could even discourages people to migrate in the US. He or she was aware that waiters didn't get decent wages without tips, but insisted that it just spoils them.
So I thoroughly corrected the text anyway, without any annotation like I usually do. But here is what I replied as a comment.
"In Europe, customers pay for waiter's wages too, only it's already included in the bill. So it's a mandatory tip. Making someone work without salary is considered borderline slavery and illegal in many countries.
I'd be surprised if tips granted more power to the waiters than the customers, who can use it as a threat to bully the staff. As if getting dark looks for being cheap would be more stressful than having no money to pay the rent, when they actually worked for it.
And the only thing that shocks me in tip culture is that it's actually legal not to pay for a service. But if you don't, the very least you deserve is social judgement indeed.
I just noticed that you received over 1000 corrections, and made 0. So I guess reciprocity isn't your thing. Makes sense. That was the last time I waited on your table."
Yes, I think it was the fact that this person gave absolutely no correction so far that pushed me over the edge. It's not unprecedented for me though. I ranted once at someone who copied and paste a long and complicated text about Marie-Antoinette from google translate (I checked from the original text the so called author also carelessly included) saying to stop wasting my time. Post was deleted a few hours later.
Do you think I overreacted? When someone writes something that annoys you, how do you deal with it? Do you ignore it? Do you correct it anyway? Do you challenge the author? Please let me know even if you snap at me too.
Oct. 24, 2021
Dua Lipa
To be sincere I don't follow what's happening on the show business lately and if you ask me what are my favorite singers I can give you a list, according to my knowledge of what I define as "music" and not only "noise".
I never read any biography of any singer or even an actor, or actress. It's something that just doesn't call up my attention.
But lately I found this singer called Dua Lipa and after listen to her famous song "Physical" I started to be curious to know more about her.
She is very young and have great songs that makes us move our bones when we are perhaps sad and feeling blue.
Right now I am listening to this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TUVcZfQe-Kw
As a young person of the show business, she has a nice body and learns well how to do the chorographies for the videos. But that is just what people want to see, isn't it?
I hate some stupid people who opens up their mouth to say nonsenses but she seems to be different. I must say thai I totally agree with her statement : "Success, to me is just doing things that I'm really proud of". In this sense I can say that she is not mediocre and I like people like that.
She is not on my playlist yet for some reason, but I will make one with 4 or 5 songs that I like. Without doubt I can say that I like this singer of the new generation!!!!
Oct. 24, 2021
I introduce myself
Hello everyone!
I'm a Brazilian young "lady" and I found this site few days ago.
This is my first day and text on this site, so I hope it can help me with my language learning.
My name is "A" and I live in São Paulo.
I studied English when I was still a teen and now I need to remember all over again so that I can pass my level test next year.
By the time I have studied English, there wasn't any divisions of which level a person should achieve to be considered fluent.
I think I remember a lot of things, although I should reopen my books and have the courage to put my ass on a chair and study it a little more. I just love languages and I speak Spanish, Italian and a bit of French too. Within 2 years I wish to learn Turkish as well. I am a translator student and I would like to manager as many languages as possible.
To be sincere I have neglected my studies of this language for decades, but now I want to improve my Knowledge again. I love to listen to music, read books and geography. Films are my hobby and I am found about horses, dolphins and birds. I have a turtle at home.
Next year I wish to apply for a English test to see how it works and know my level. That's why I think this site will help me with my goal.
Thanks for your attention. Have a nice day!!!
PS: I would like to put some music on my texts since I am crazy fan of the 80's songs but today I will leave this one...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qod03PVTLqk
I like both singers and the song is very nice! The video is also astonishing. =)
Oct. 24, 2021
Tenses
-Why is the Lego train disassembled?
- Little Pete 1)had been playing with it when I accidentally stepped on one of the cars. I 2) tried to get his older brother to put it together . Instead, he 3) has disintegrated it completely.
Are the tenses correctly used at points 1-3?
Is it possible to use:
-"was playing with it" in point 1)? and
- "disintegrated " instead of "has disintegrated " in point 3) in British English?
In the following sentences are both alternatives possible? Could you tell me what the difference between them is?
1. I realised / have realised she has a good taste in clothes.
2. I found out / I have found out about his criminal record.
Oct. 24, 2021
“双减”家庭教育系统工程
我刚才看完了这个有关的报告：https://lx.huanqiu.com/article/45FA6pXIPGT
我想通过这个文章联系正式的风格，请您修改口语的说法。另外，这个文章是要交给老师的，写在「括号」的词都需要使用。老师也让我们用“头也没抬/觉也没睡”等的「也没」，不过我认为在风格的文章用其不很合适，不用就不管我
在教育方面上，家长一直要平衡孩子的教育负担与他们的身体和精神健康。一方面，不仅要鼓励子女用功学习，而且要为他们提供家庭教育。另一方面，学生的压力往往并非少，总是关注学业成功对他们有不好的影响。为了调整这个平衡，中央最近拟订了一个草案减轻学生的义务教育负担、介绍几个家庭教育规律与期望。不过，只有政府的赞同不足够，而且需要习惯被裹挟的家长热心配合实现这样社会变化。担忧的是，有的家长恐怕实行政府的“双减”政策便会鼓励学生变成“学渣”。因此，说服家长「咬着牙」放弃对孩子有坏处的教育理念确实为一件难事。如果孩子的家庭教育不当，父母期望过度大，能迫使孩子「吃苦」、「舍不得」花时间培养好学习与生活习惯。家长的教养与家庭教育方式对孩子的成长有很大的影响，但是这个事实由很多父母一点都不考虑。教育部希望家长会配合遵循“双减”政策的规律树人生产健康孩子。
这项计划的目的很合理，学生压力很大、成功需求相当多，家长需要引导子女，做良好的模式。在某人看来，这样规律侵犯家长在家庭教育方面的自由，不过，即使美国并没有这样明确的家庭教育规定，但是我国「反正」也有传统的家庭教育模式观念。中国在有的方面上还是一个很传统的国家，因此把家庭教育规律通过政策落实却不很突然。
Oct. 23, 2021
Quando dobbiamo per forza aiutare i nostri simili?
Molti diranno che non "dobbiamo" fare mai nulla per forza.
Altri tanti diranno che "sempre che ci dice il cuore di farlo".
La questione non è semplice da rispondere.... ma secondo me, ci sono tre domande in cui dobbiamo concentrarci per cercare di arrivare alla risposta giusta per ogni uno di noi...
Io POSSO aiutare?
Io VOGLIO aiutare?
Io SO COME aiutare?
Se posso e non voglio, è un mio diritto senza dubbio anche se direi che in questo caso la persona è negligente.
Se voglio e non posso o non so come, la situazione si presenta difficile, dato che abbiamo un limite umano.
Se so come aiutare e non voglio e non posso, questa è una libera scelta, ma anche direi che sarebbe anche una situazione un po' sconvolgente per la società.
C'è l'altro lato della situazione....
La persona aiuta e ci chiede (e a volte anche verifica) se l'altra ha utilizzato l'aiuto per quel suo scopo. Per esempio, qui in Brasile, per ogni passo che uno dà, incontra per strada 3 o 4 persone che chiede elemosina. Sappiamo tutti che molti vogliono soldi per consumere delle droghe anche se dicono che un suo figlio ha fame. Chi dà denaro a questa gente da per il piacere di dare, ma non si chiedono quale sarà la destinazione del denaro.
Una cosa è giusta: quello che gli altri faranno con il tuo aiuto è un problema che riguarda a loro, ma quello che fai tu è un problema fra te e Dio.
E voi? Cosa ne pensate di questa situazione?
PS: Vi lascio la domanda enigmatica.... Che fine ha fatto questo cantore? Mi ricordo che l'ascoltava molti anni fa.... Mistero!!!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVRwn8BLJXo
Oct. 23, 2021
Anger Is Motivation
I muted my mother last night. I was so released when I finally did that.
In the morning, the neighbor's house was under consturtion, it was so noisy. Regardless, I had have an appointment with my students today, and it was very unconivient for them to change the lesson in another time. I asked the workers to delay their work till afternoon, however, they refused. I asked my father for the owner's phone number then. He showed up and talked to the workers, but failed. The contractor told him that he had no right to interfere the constuction because of the deals, but they would try to be quieter.
It was very ridiculous, there was only one wall between us, and what they did were pounding, sawing etc. how could they be quieter? It was bullshit.
They kept working and becoming louded and louder. I was so annoying that I asked them again to finish their work in half an hour, because I would finish mine thirty minutes later, what I asked was only half an hour' peace. A woman refused at first, but I blamed them for their selfishness loudly. We argued for a minute, they finally stopped most of the work, it was still noisy though.
What more ridiculous was, my mom sent me a message to blame me for being too fussy, it was very hard for me to live in the society.
I was very shocked. Why blamed me like that? I was the victim, and she never knew how badly the situation was, how could she just easily blamed me like that? What kind of mother she was? So I decided not to go to the house which she was living in with my brother's family.
At dusk, my dad called me where I had been to. I told him I was in town because I didn't want to quarral with someone. After that, I muted my mom.
The authority power couldn't protect me, and my mother never tried to protect me either. What she always did is to blame me like what I suffering was all my fault. If I were cautious enough, I would never have been hurt. And I never like the tone she talked to me. She never tried to talk with me but just blame. I hate the situation like this, so I studied hard last night before I went to bed.
Anger is motivation.