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Oct. 28, 2021
Pratique des COD/COI 2
Ce magasin a plus de bonbons que celui-là. --> Ce magasin en a plus que celui-là.
Il me dit de le rencontrer au restaurant. --> Il me dit de l'y rencontrer.
Je me suis fait une tasse de café. --> Je me suis en fait une tasse.
Elle ne va pas expliquer le problème à ses parents. --> Elle ne va pas le leur expliquer.
Il a fait bon usage de cet argent. --> Il en a fait bon usage.
Je pense que tu devrais aller au collège. --> Je pense que tu devrais y aller.
Puis-je t'offrir une autre bière ? --> Puis-je t'en offrir une autre ?
Il y a trop de glaçage sur le gâteau. --> Il y en a trop sur le gâteau.
Il y avaient plusieurs étudiants qui ont échoué le test. --> Il y en avaient plusieurs qui l'ont échoué.
J'ai acheté quatre sacs de bonbons. --> J'en ai acheté quatre.
Je crois que tu as bu assez de café. --> Je crois que tu en as bu assez.
Je leurs ai donné quelques livres. --> Je leurs en ai donné quelques-unes.
J'ai réussi à comprendre certains concepts. --> J'en ai réussi à comprendre certains.
Il lui a compté tous ses secrets. --> Il les lui a tous conté.
Oct. 28, 2021
A visit from a friend
Hi Sam.
I hope that you remember about our meeting tomorrow in the afternoon. Unfortunately we can't meeting on that time because my friend called and asked me for help to solve a problem. For this reason we should reschedule. Let's go see in the evening at 7 p.m.
You said that you have a new movie with Emily Blunt. I will buy cheeps and Pepsi and I am sure we would have a good time.
If you forgot the way to my house I remind you. You need to get on a bus number 5 than you drive 4 stop buses and get off at the fiveth. You can see a yellow house, In front of the stop bust. Call me and I go out to meet you.
Bye.
See you .
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Der Vortrag
Ich war heute sehr nervös und wollte fast vor lautem Angst kotzen, habe aber das nicht gemacht. Stattdessen bin ich stolz, da ich heute einen Vortrag auf Deutsch gehalten habe. War ich schlecht oder war meine Präsentation in Ordnung? Das kann ich selber nicht beurteilen, weshalb würde ich nichts über meine eigene Leistung schreiben. Wichtig ist aber, dass ich es geschafft habe und dass es nicht so schwer war.
Oct. 28, 2021
La situation du covid en France
Ma tentative de rédaction d'un rapport fictif sur la situation du covid en France
"Une honte pour (sur?) notre pays," a dit le président Emmanuel Macron.
Les soignants sont au bout du rouleau à cause de l'augmentation soudaine de cas de covid-19 qui ont avoisiné les 30 000 pendant la fin de semaine, dans le sillage du relâchement de restrictions autorisé par Macron. Le suivi est pratiquement impossible de réaliser, quand les hôpitaux publiques ont excédé leur capacité, et aucune infirmière peut contrôler la salut de chaque patient. Il ne faut pas dire que la qualité de la prise en charge est détériorée, et que les patientes sont remuants.
En toile de fond, on aperçoit des tombereaux en cours de disposer les vêtements contaminés, tandis qu’il y a des officiers de police anti-émeutes armés de lacrymogènes tournicotant et patrouillant les dalles du bâtiment, formant une présence menaçante pour empêcher la congestion.
Les experts médicaux préconisent le public de ne pas visiter les centres médicaux, sauf si ont besoin de traitement médical urgent.
Oct. 28, 2021
A Smile Please.
Yesterday, my girlfriend and me were watching the news in TV, when they began to talking about a parade of models. The most interessant was to see the face of all models. The look of all faces was seria, hard and angry. For some reason, the models never laugh, it is as if seem they do not like the clothing they wear. It is a bit quirky. I think that for possible customer is more attractive to see a models smiling when her wear a fashion clothing in a parade.
Oct. 28, 2021
Education
When I was a primiry school student, the tuition was over 300 yuan each semester. My father is a teacher, his salary was similar with my tuition. When I was in grade 3, my brother was in grade 1. At the beginning of the semester, the teacher in charge would ask me in public for my tuition. I was very embarrased but I could't say anything. I dislike the teacher for her behaviour, because she could ask me privately. Furthermore, she knew my father and knew that he wouldn't be bilking. I could't understand why the teacher did that, since she also had a kid.
I studied in town, I seldom heard that somebody drop out because of poverty.
When I went to middle school, which is the only one in town, I experienced my classmate drop out because of poverty. I was the monitor, and my father happened to be the teacher. In the second semeter, there were five students in my class had dropped out. My father told me to call them by phone, but when we sat in the office, he gave up and said it wouldn't work because he had experienced this so many times. I wanted to try, but I thought that maybe my father was right, and even though I called, what can I do? There were some students dropped out every semester, one of the main reasons was they didn't like studying. There were so many factories in the province, and it wasn't very strict to work in the factories. So most of them would go to work after quitting.
The difference came out in grade 9, the year between middle school and senior high school. If you wanted to college, you had to graduate from high school. And the tuition of high school was over 1000 yuan while the mobile phone just started to be used in the small city.
I still can clearly remember that I got two admission letters of my girl classmates after the senior high school entrance examination. They were accepted by the No. 4 high school, whose students were able to accepted by the colleges rather than university. In China, most colleges have 6 semesters while the universities have 8-10 semesters. The two girls never showed up, so I called one of them because I had her number. Her father answered the phone and told me that she had went to a factory. He could't afford the expense of the high school because his son was going to get married. In most traditional families, sons were the most important, because the parents think that they can rely on their sons then they become old. In the same time, daughters were regarded as water because they would get married and moved out in the end. There is a saying goes: when you splashe the water out, you can't never get them back. Yep, the welfare was
so poor that people had to rely on themselves. Ironically, some boys were spoiled too much that they became so rude and behaved badly, and their parents could't rely on them but had to support them in turn.
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29. La magique de rester jeune
On dit souvent que l'age de 20 ans est le plus beau moment de la vie, grâce à la jeunesse qui porte. Donc beaucoup de femmes recourirent à la « médecine » anti-âge, comme l'extrait de fleurs, d'or, ou bien l'injection de botox, ou même à la chirurgie esthétique. ça se semble vraiment séduissant, mais en se refléchant bien, est-ce que ça vaut de la chandelle ? Selon moi, la response est non.
Tout d'abord, je doute de son efficacité. Si ces médecines anti-ages étaient si efficaces, on ne voyait plus les personnes qui semblaient vielles dans les rues. Depuis l'ancienne génération, l'humaine a déjà conscaré énormement de temps pour trouver des formules magiques pour rester jeune mais dès maintenant, personne ne peut le faire. Pourquoi ? Parce que la vieillesse est un processus naturel, on peut donc simplement le ralentir mais pas le renverser.
De plus, il porte des risques sanitaires. On peut parler d'abord les risques de l'automédications, comme la toxification. Et puis, comme toutes les chirurgies, il include les risques d'avoir les effets sécondaires graves, ou bien l'échec. Il y a un accident locaux où une patiente est morte à cause de l'infection après faire fait injecté de botox (une sorte de poison néurologie pour réduire la contraction musculée) qui avait été contaminé par les bactéries. Bien sûr, pas toutes les chirurgies se sont finis comme ça, mais les clients peuvent aussi subir des effets négatifs plus fréquents, comme l'allégie, le malaise en général, ou bien le reprise après quelque temps. Par conséquent, il faut équilibrer les risques cachées et les bienfaits potentials de traitements anti-âges.
En outre, les médecines anti-âges et chirurgies esthétiques coûtent chers. En ce sens, ceux ne sont réservés qu'aux riches, mais pas à la portée de tout le monde.
D'après moi, la meilleure façon de « rester » jeune physiquement, c'est de rester jeune mentalement. Quand on garde un bon esprit de vivre le present, on va se sentir mieux et notre cerveau va produire plus de chemique pour luttre contre l'oxidant, un élément important pour viellier ! Bien sûr, il nous faut aussi de faire de l'exercise, de manger sainement et d'avoir assez de repos. Et ça, c'est la formule magique de jeunesse !
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Oct. 28, 2021
Paul, tu veux aller au cinéma ?
Bonjour Paul ! Aujourd'hui, je vais aller au cinéma pour voir le nouveau film <<Dune>>. Tu veux aller au cinéma avec moi ? C'est amusant. Nous pouvons manger de popcorn et boire un grand verre de soda. Aprés le film, nous pouvons aller au restaurant pour manger le dîner. Tu aimes de poisson ou non ? À bientôt !
Oct. 28, 2021
My name is better
When everyone talking about the number one Korean drama.
Some people think this one should be the number one Korean drama.
I watched both.
My choice will be this one too.
Only because the female protagonist looks so cool.
Otherwise, both dramas are just ok! (Sorry)
Because there just too many good dramas.
I haven’t watch Korean drama for long time.
Hopefully, I will watch more Korean drama because of these 2 excellent dramas.
Maybe I will start learning Korean?
Oct. 28, 2021
some bad feelings
I tend to escape from my feelings at most of time in my life, which is a very terrible habit.
Two week ago, I lost my job. The company fired the whole department in my city. I, joined with another approximately 400 people lost job.
At the same time, I was applying to a university in Canada. The admission decision had been delayed and I haven't received the result.
I tried to repress my fear and anxiety to the uncertainty, and pretended that I was totally fine and everything was okay.
As a result, I began procrastinating. I took days to update my resume and another some day to apply jobs.
The interview I attended yesterday was not good. The interviewer thought I was not good at all and my level was not good enough compared to my work experience. I was hurt by his behavior although I knew that some of his points was right. I am not that good at the job. I am scared to have more interviews.
Oct. 28, 2021
My Famorite Composer
My favorite music is the original sound track of movies.
When listening to the music, I can remind the scene of the movie as well as remember feelings at the moment.
My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone who is the greatest composer in the movie world.
You might listen to his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on.
When tuning into a ratio, I listened to his songs on every program.
And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.
Now he passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.
Oct. 28, 2021
O agricultor
O agricultor estava labutando no campo como sempre, usando sua enxada para recolher o trigo que abundava na terra fértil. De repente, uma nuvem se formou em cima dele. Parecia outro caso da intempérie; no fim de contas, era a estação das monções.
O homem apertou os olhos. Não, pareciam mais mosquitos. Nada de se preocupar, então, pois já havia acumulado uma quantidade suficiente de pomada para aguentar a invasão dos pernilongos. Não, não podia ser. A verdura da nuvem não dava para acreditar que fossem eles. Não estava chapado; era um flagelo de gafanhotos!
No meio do entrevero, o homem se pelou e usou suas vestimentas para afugentar os insectos. Foi em vão; as malditas pragas o encurralaram. A situação ficava pior do que empoçar os pés na lama; ao menos em tal cenário não haveria milhões de criaturas obstruindo sua visão. Diabos, preferia estar aleijado. Por que não escolheu um trabalho mais simples, como um dos manobristas?
Como se Deus houvesse falado a ele, retorquiu, gaguejando: "O que fiz para merecer isto?"
As palavras que aprendi hoje:
pernilongo
encurralar
chapado
pelar-se
entrevero
empoçar
Oct. 28, 2021
workaholic
Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.
Sloth : couldn't you go to the movies this evening , could you ?
Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ? because I'm too buzy, I've to work overtime.
S : you're kidding me, aren't you ? You never take time to relax, don't you ? You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?
M : you cannot understand. I have good working conditions, my boss is a nice fellow and when he says « meet your deadlines ! » I know it's fair, isn't it ?
S : never mind, forget, but I think you spend a lot of time at work, you never take time off work, don't you ?
M : yes, you're right, aren't you ? But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, make your own business, would you ?
S : beware, nonetheless, you should care of yourself, shouldn't you? I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , would you ?
M : maybe, you're right, aren't you ? I'm gonna think about it and try to find time to relax, maybe in 2022, thanks for the advice my dear friend !
S: anyway, you should stop taking work home, shouldn't you ?
M: of course, I will, in 2023.
S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovely nice morning nap.
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October 28th, 2021
There is a professional baseball team called "Nihon Ham". Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year. He is a hot-blooded man. I remembered his play about 22 years ago. A pitcher tried to give him an intentional walk, but he got a walk-off hit.
Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJhnEZmDU1g
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Der Strand!
Gestern Abend sind wir an den Strand gefahren! Es hat uns sehr viel Spaß gemacht, vor allem, weil das Wetter Kälte als sonst war. Es ist schon Ende Oktober und doch ist es noch heiß. Ich bin sehr gestresst mit meiner Schule und Arbeit, daher war diese "Reise" notwendig B) Ich möchte wieder dorthin gehen und kann es nicht erwarten, den Strand noch einmal zu sehen!
Oct. 28, 2021
self introduction
Ich bin Alegrasz. Ich habe einen Bruder, eine Schwester, einen Vater und eine Mutter. Ich komme aus Kalifornien. Meine Hobbys sind Klavierspielen und zeichnen. Ich lerne Japanisch und Deutsch. Ich studiere wirtschaftswissenschaften an Universität. Ich denke auch darüber nach, nach Deutschland zu ziehen.
Oct. 28, 2021
La sala operativa
Nella sala operativa:
L'ispettore stava sgranocchiando pop corn, vedendo lo scontro che stava accadendo fra il capo e il suo subordinato.
"Paraculo! Non hai diritto a bestemmiarmi così. Se non fosse per me, staresti ancora vivendo una vita grama. Smussa le tue parole (abbassa il tono)! Vedi cosa hai fatto. Hai affastellato un sacco di informazione senza arrivare al punto. Come possiamo fare una retata così? Ti ho ordinato di fare un'analisi, e hai fatto invece questa merda. Che casino! Non ho capito un tubo. Eravamo una squadra blasonata, finché al tuo arrivo."
Il subordinato, un uomo ugualmente grezzo, scandì i suoi dintorni, e poi rispose: "Vaffanculo! La mia intenzione era quella di ragguagliarvi sulla posizione del fuggitivo, ma prima di scodellare tutto in giro, dovete sapere che il sospetto è un uomo furtivo, lanciandosi da una tana all'altra; perciò ho scritto un resoconto così disorganizzato."
L'ispettore prese due falcate verso la porta, e disse: "Sono sul punto di assentarmi. Volevo che ci radunassimo per poter tamponare questa situazione che abbiamo a mano, ma l'unica cosa che avete fatto è indispettirmi e prendermi per sfinimento. Possiamo tornare agli affari?"
Le parole che ho imparato oggi:
Prendere per sfinimento
Sgranocchiare
Scodellare
Blasonato
Smussare
Paraculo
Ragguagliare
Tamponare
Falcata
Vita grama
Indispettire
Retata