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Homework 4

Hello! I hope you have a nice day :)
Today I'm repeating this homework because the first was.. weird and confusing.

I'm aiming for the American English dialect.

After you had seen the map, answer the questions. Use adverbs of time: first, after, then, etc.


Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?

First go straight ahead two blocks on Queen's avenue. After that, turn to the right and pass the football pitch. Then you will see my house.

Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money. Explain him how he can go, from your house to the bank.

First walk one block to the west. After that walk 1 blocks straight ahead to the south. Then pass the cinema and the post office, you will see the bank nex to the post office.

After he gets the money, wants to visit the museum. Explain him, which is the way from the bank to the museum.

First walk 1 block to the east on Oxford Street . After that walk 1 block on Queen's Avenue. Then turn to the left and you will see the school. Finally pass 2 buildings and you will find the museum.

In the afternoon, you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant. Explain him, which is the way from the museum to the restaurant.

First walk 1 block on Pince's Road. After that walk 2 blocks on Queen's Avenue. Then turn to the left and walk 1 block, you will see the restaurant, is in front of the camping site.

At night, he is going to meet his friends in the pub. Explain him, how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.

First 1 blok to the east. After that you will se the Football Pitch. Cross the football Pitch, turn to the left and walk 1 block. You will see the pub in front of the bank.

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Homework 4

Hello!

I'm aiming for the American English dialect.

Use adverbs of time: first, after, then, etc.

Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?

Then you will see my house.

First walk one block to the west.

At night, he is going to meet his friends in the pub.

You will see the pub in front of the bank.

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After that, turn to the right and then walk until you pass the football pitch.

Use "and" to connect actions that happen at the same time.
Use "and then" if you cannot do the second action at the same time as the first action.
I cannot turn right and pass the football pitch at the same time, so you should use "and then" to describe the order of events.

Alternatively, split this into two sentences: "After that, turn right. Then walk until you pass the football pitch."

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First, go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's aAvenue.

From this, it isn't clear which direction I should walk (north or south?). If you include "towards", you can tell your reader more information about direction.

Eg. "Go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's Avenue, towards King's Way."

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I hope you haveare having a nice day :)

"I hope you have a nice day" is better to say when you are ending a conversation. It can be part of a goodbye.
"I hope you are having a nice day" is better to use when starting a conversation. It can be part of a greeting.

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Then turn to the lefright and you will see the school.

Would it be on the left if he was walking south? I might be wrong, but I think it would be on his right.

I'm aiming for the American English dialect.

Use adverbs of time: first, after, then, etc.

Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?

Then you will see my house.

Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money.

First walk one block to the west.

After that walk 1 block on Queen's Avenue.

You will see the pub in front of the bank.

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After that, turn to the right and passwalk until you reach the end of the football pitch.

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After you hadve seen the map, answer the questions.

This is a very nuanced correction:
Changing ‘had’ to ‘have’ implies a future action that will be taking place, “after x has happened, do y”.

It is true that I have seen ‘had’ used in this context before, but it is extremely rare and it has become more of a colloquial kind of mistake rather than correct grammar, so I would recommend you to not use it in this context !

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Homework 4


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Hello!


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I hope you have a nice day :)


I hope you haveare having a nice day :) I hope you are having a nice day :)

"I hope you have a nice day" is better to say when you are ending a conversation. It can be part of a goodbye. "I hope you are having a nice day" is better to use when starting a conversation. It can be part of a greeting.

Today I'm repeating this homework because the first was.. weird and confusing.


Today I'm repeaattempting this week’s homework again because the first was..one, people found it to be weird and confusing. Today I'm attempting this week’s homework again because the first one, people found it to be weird and confusing.

Today I'm repeaattempting this homework because themy first was.. weird and confusing.attempt confused some people. Today I'm reattempting this homework because my first attempt confused some people.

I'm aiming for the American English dialect.


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After you had seen the map, answer the questions.


After you hadve seen the map, answer the questions. After you have seen the map, answer the questions.

This is a very nuanced correction: Changing ‘had’ to ‘have’ implies a future action that will be taking place, “after x has happened, do y”. It is true that I have seen ‘had’ used in this context before, but it is extremely rare and it has become more of a colloquial kind of mistake rather than correct grammar, so I would recommend you to not use it in this context !

After you hadve seen the map, answer the questions. After you have seen the map, answer the questions.

Use adverbs of time: first, after, then, etc.


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Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?


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First go straight ahead two blocks on Queen's avenue.


First go straight ahead until you’ve gotten two blocks inton Queen's avenue. First go straight ahead until you’ve gotten two blocks into Queen's avenue.

We will always say ‘until’ to imply a change in direction or action: “Keep looking at me until I tell you to stop” “Keep going right until you reach the pond, and then…”

First, go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's aAvenue. First, go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's Avenue.

From this, it isn't clear which direction I should walk (north or south?). If you include "towards", you can tell your reader more information about direction. Eg. "Go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's Avenue, towards King's Way."

After that, turn to the right and pass the football pitch.


After that, turn to the right and passwalk until you reach the end of the football pitch. After that, turn right and walk until you reach the end of the football pitch.

After that, turn to the right and then walk until you pass the football pitch. After that, turn right and then walk until you pass the football pitch.

Use "and" to connect actions that happen at the same time. Use "and then" if you cannot do the second action at the same time as the first action. I cannot turn right and pass the football pitch at the same time, so you should use "and then" to describe the order of events. Alternatively, split this into two sentences: "After that, turn right. Then walk until you pass the football pitch."

Then you will see my house.


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Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money.


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Explain him how he can go, from your house to the bank.


Explain to him how he can go, from your house to the bank. Explain to him how he can go, from your house to the bank.

Explain to him how he can go,et from your house to the bank. Explain to him how he can get from your house to the bank.

First walk one block to the west.


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After that walk 1 blocks straight ahead to the south.


After that walk 1 blocks straight ahead to the due south. After that walk 1 block due south.

After that walk 1one blocks straight ahead to the due south. After that walk one block due south.

Write out numbers if they are less than ten (10).

Then pass the cinema and the post office, you will see the bank nex to the post office.


Then make your way passt the cinema and the post office, you will then see the bank next to the post office. Then make your way past the cinema and the post office, you will then see the bank next to the post office.

Then walk passt the cinema and the post office, y. You will see the bank next to the post office. Then walk past the cinema and the post office. You will see the bank next to the post office.

After he gets the money, wants to visit the museum.


After he gets the money, he decides that he wants to visit the museum. After he gets the money, he decides that he wants to visit the museum.

After he gets the money, he wants to visit the museum. After he gets the money, he wants to visit the museum.

Explain him, which is the way from the bank to the museum.


Explain to him, which is the way from the bank to the museum. Explain to him, which is the way from the bank to the museum.

Explain to him, which is the wayway to go from the bank to the museum. Explain to him which way to go from the bank to the museum.

First walk 1 block to the east on Oxford Street .


First walk 1 block to the east on Oxford Street . First walk 1 block east on Oxford Street.

First walk 1one block to the east along Oxford Street . First walk one block to the east along Oxford Street .

After that walk 1 block on Queen's Avenue.


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After that walk 1one block south along Queen's Avenue. After that walk one block south along Queen's Avenue.

Then turn to the left and you will see the school.


Then turn to the left and you will see the school. Then turn left and you will see the school.

Then turn to the lefright and you will see the school. Then turn to the right and you will see the school.

Would it be on the left if he was walking south? I might be wrong, but I think it would be on his right.

Finally pass 2 buildings and you will find the museum.


Finally pass 2 buildings and you will then find the museum. Finally pass 2 buildings and you will then find the museum.

Finally pass 2, walk past two buildings and you will then find the museum. Finally, walk past two buildings and you will then find the museum.

In the afternoon, you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant.


In the afternoon, you and heboth are going out to eat at a restaurant. In the afternoon, you both are going out to eat at a restaurant.

Explain him, which is the way from the museum to the restaurant.


Explain to him, which is the way from the museum to the restaurant. Explain to him, which is the way from the museum to the restaurant.

Explain to him, which way is the wayrestaurant from the museum to the restaurant. Explain to him which way is the restaurant from the museum.

First walk 1 block on Pince's Road.


First walk 1one block along Prince's Road. First walk one block along Prince's Road.

After that walk 2 blocks on Queen's Avenue.


After that walk 2two blocks north along Queen's Avenue. After that walk two blocks north along Queen's Avenue.

Then turn to the left and walk 1 block, you will see the restaurant, is in front of the camping site.


Then turn to the left and walk 1 block, you will then see the restaurant, it is in front of/it is opposite to the camping site. Then turn left and walk 1 block, you will then see the restaurant, it is in front of/it is opposite to the camping site.

Then turn to the left and walk 1one block, y. You will see the restaurant, which is in front of the camping site. Then turn to the left and walk one block. You will see the restaurant, which is in front of the camping site.

At night, he is going to meet his friends in the pub.


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Explain him, how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.


Explain to him, how he can go from the restaurant to the pub. Explain to him, how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.

Explain to him, how he can goet from the restaurant to the pub. Explain to him how he can get from the restaurant to the pub.

First 1 blok to the east.


First walk 1 block to the east. First walk 1 block to the east.

First 1walk one block to the east. First walk one block to the east.

After that you will se the Football Pitch.


After that you will see the Football Pitch. After that you will see the Football Pitch.

After that you will see the Ffootball Ppitch. After that you will see the football pitch.

Cross the football Pitch, turn to the left and walk 1 block.


Cross the football Pitch, turn to the left and walk 1a block. Cross the football Pitch, turn left and walk a block.

Cross the football Ppitch, then turn to the left and walk 1one block. Cross the football pitch, then turn to the left and walk one block.

You will see the pub in front of the bank.


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