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An email

Hello. I hope this email finds you well.

Attached is an example of a computer program I implemented for a small case study. It is a MILP facility location model in Python, using Gurobi and Google Maps. To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm a bit embarrassed for delaying my response.

All the best!

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Hello.

I hope this email finds you well.

All the best!

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Nov. 30, 2022

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Hello.

I hope this email finds you well.

Attached is an example of a computer program I implemented for a small case study.

All the best!

DavidGB's avatar
DavidGB

Nov. 30, 2022

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Hello.

I hope this email finds you well.

Attached is an example of a computer program I implemented for a small case study.

All the best!

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DavidGB

Nov. 30, 2022

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An email


An eEmail An Email

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

An eEmail An Email

An eEmail An Email

Hello.


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I hope this email finds you well.


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Attached is an example of a computer program I implemented for a small case study.


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Attached is an example of a computer program that I implemented forin a small case study. Attached is an example of a computer program that I implemented in a small case study.

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It is a MILP facility location model in Python, using Gurobi and Google Maps.


It is an MILP facility location model in Python, using Gurobi and Google Maps. It is an MILP facility location model in Python, using Gurobi and Google Maps.

"MILP" starts with a vowel sound, "em," so we use the article, "an," instead of "a."

It is a MILP facility location model in Python, using both Gurobi and Google Maps. It is a MILP facility location model in Python, using both Gurobi and Google Maps.

Cohesiveness, formal tone

To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm a bit embarrassed for delaying my response.


To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm a bit embarrassed for my delaying myed response. To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm a bit embarrassed for my delayed response.

To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm a bit embarrassed for delaying my responsto be responding this late. To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm a bit embarrassed to be responding this late.

To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I'm’m feeling a bit embarrassed for delaying myabout my delayed response. To be honest, I was thinking of sending you something more impressive, but I’m feeling a bit embarrassed about my delayed response.

All the best!


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