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Oct. 8, 2025
Nowadays
Long time no see you. My life is normally going. I am looking job but nowadays companies economy is very bad. Sometimes this is situation I feel very upset. I am going to English course and improving my job skills. I have to there is someone I miss but this story has no end. Doesnt matter life is going life. I believe to destiny. Who's yours finds you.I hope to your life is going to good. See you soon again. Take care of :)
Oct. 8, 2025
Benim en sevdiğim şarkıcı
Ben Türk müziğini çok seviyorum. Ve Rus müziğinden bile daha fazla (vatandaşlarım beni affetsin). Feride Hilal Akın, Duman, Dedublüman, Zeynep Bastık ve değerleri gibi şarkıcı ve grupları severim. Ama en çok sevdiğim Cem Adriandır. Eşsiz sesi ve romantik şarkıları kalbime ve ruhuma nüfuz ediyor. Haziran ayında bir arkadaşımla İstanbul’da Cem’in konsertesindeydim. Perfomansı bizim üzerimizde büyük bir etki bıraktı. Bazı şarkılar beni ağlattı. Eylül Cem Moskova’ya geliyordu ve biz onun konserine tekrar gittik. Birinci sırada oturduk ve onun inanılmaz sesinin tadını çıkardık. Ben her gün her yerde (arabamda, evimde, işimde) onun şarkılarını dinliyorum. Bence, Cem Adrian en iyi Türkiye’nin sesi.
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 8, 2025
How i spend my free time?
i'm a third- year university student and this year is definitely the most difficult one🥲 that doesnt mean I have no free time but when i find it, i walking while listening music. To be honest i LIVE with my headphone on! Recently I've been listening linkin park but i also love jazz. And i read books- especially AGATHA CRISTIE❤️. She KNOWS how to write! In high school, i mostly read the classics like Dostoyevsky, Zweig. And you know what? Zweig is STILL my fave author. I love his writing style. I've always been curious about reading, especially about science. So sometimes i read articles outside my field. I usually spend my free time reading- it just makes me calm. I also wanna learn the play violin but i have no time right now:(
Oct. 8, 2025
Fremdsprache für kinder
Das Thema ist sehr interessant . Deshalb möchte ich meine persönlich Meinung dazu äußern. Fremdsprache ist sehr wichtig für die arbeitchance und die lebenstill . Fremdsprache ist öffen Tür von aus Welt . Einerseits Es ist Brücker zwischen kultur und Ausländer. Wenn kinder Sprache sprechen können, können sien nicht nur in Ausländer studieren , sondern auch viele Menschen kennenlernen. Außerdem machen kinder intelligent , wenn sie Sprache lernen . Anderesteis kinder können die Muttersprache sprechen und beherrschen. war Fremdsprache sind besser für die Zukunft zu lernen , aber sie brauchen spielen und freiheit . Für mich mußen Kinder Fremdsprache lernen, weil es wichtig für die Zukunft später ist und für die lebenstill.
Oct. 8, 2025
Benim hakkımda. Bölüm 2
Ayrıca ben seyahat etmeyi de seviyorum. İstanbul benim en sevdiğim bir şehir. Her yıl tatilimde İstanbul'a geliyorum. Son birkaç yıl arkadaşımla oraya uçuyorum. Biz İstanbul'da çok geziniyoruz, alışveriş yapıyoruz, çok lezzetli yemek yiyoruz ve arkadaşlarımızla buluşuyoruz. Bana göre İstanbul dünyanın en güzel bir şehir. Bu şehirde yaşamayı hayal ediyorum. Burada çok nazik insanlar var, ve sihirli atmosfer var. Sokak müzisyenleri, kediler, martılar, kahvenin ve sokak kokusu beni daha mutlu ediyor.
Oct. 8, 2025
Sollten Städte autofrei werden, um die Umwelt zu schützen?
Mit zunehmender Sorge um die Steigerung der CO2-Konzentration in der Luft und ihre schwerwiegenden Konsequenzen, stellt sich die Frage, ob eine autofreie Stadt die Bekämpfung des Klimawandels fördern würde. Befürworter dieser Idee weisen darauf hin, dass eine autofreie Stadt zu Umweltschutz beitragen kann. Es ist seit langem eindeutig, dass ein wesentlicher Teil der Treibhausgasemissionen aus Schadstoffen besteht, die durch die Verbrennung von Brennstoffen für Autos freigesetzt werden. Ein weiterer Vorteil besteht darin, dass dadurch die Anzahl der Verkehrsunfälle sinken wird. Jedes Jahr verlieren viele Menschen wegen eines Unfalls ihr Leben, der vor allem von Autos verursacht wurde. Hinzu kommt, dass dadurch alternative Fortbewegungsmittel wie Fahrräder gefördert werden, welche die Stadt attraktiver machen und mehr Touristen anziehen. Jedoch hat diese Maßnahme auch ihre Schattenseiten. Gegner weisen zum Beispiel darauf hin, dass viele Dienstleistungen auf Autos angewiesen sind. Als Beispiel lassen sich Lieferdienste, Handwerksbetriebe und Einzelhandel anführen. Benachteiligt sind außerdem Menschen, die in einer Stadt mit Infrastrukturproblemen leben, nicht alle Städte haben nämlich ein gut ausgebautes öffenliches Verkehrsnetz als Alternative.
Insgesamt lässt sich feststellen, dass eine autofreie Stadt unser Leben sowohl positiv als auch negativ prägen würde. Hinsichtlich dieses Themas bin ich geteilter Meinung. Einerseits könnte eine solche Maßnahme zum Umweltschutz und zur Reduktion der Verkehrsunfälle beitragen, andererseits sind viele Menschen auf Autos angewiesen, um ihre Berufe auszuüben.
Oct. 8, 2025
영어 1주차 복습
Hello, my name is XXX.
It's nice to meet you.
I'm work a XXX.
It was a pleasure meeting you. / It's good to see you. / have a good day
- "What do you do?"로 상대방에게 무엇을 하냐고 물어볼 수 있다.
- "I haven't seen you in a long time."상대방을 정말 오랜만에 볼 때 말을 걸며 시작하는 문장으로 사용할 수 있다.
- "How about you?" 상대방의 기분이나 상태를 물어볼 수 있다.
Oct. 8, 2025
Independent
Today, I read a book physicology of money.
One of the last chapter told us about what is the target of the writer about money.
Target of the writer is to get more money in his life is to be independent.
What mean by independent is he has enough money to fulfil what he need for his life.
The writer also say to achieve his goal he need to control his want to upgrade his standard life when he get more income.
His expend is remain when his income is rising.
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 8, 2025
Il tempo libero e il benessere personale
Di solito, non mi godo il tempo libero come dovrei. Però di tanto in tanto, mi fermo, metto da parte le preoccupazioni e leggo un buon libro per rilassarmi.
A volte siamo troppo impegnati per prenderci cura di noi stessi e dimentichiamo che non possiamo occuparci delle cose, se la nostra mente non è chiara.
Se le giornate fossero più lunghe, le passeremmo lavorando o facendo cose insignifianti. È ora di fermarci un po' per riposarci: le faccende possono aspettare.
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 8, 2025
My National Day Holiday
The national holiday this year lasts from October first to October eighth, which coincides with the Mid-Autumn Festival, which is on October sixth this year.
New China was established on October first, 1949, so it has become the Chinese people's national holiday. Chinese people celebrate it every year.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival based on the Chinese lunar calendar, which is always on the fifteenth of the lunar August, usually in late solar September or at the beginning of solar October. But this year is special because this year's lunar calendar has an intercalary sixth month, so the Mid-Autumn Festival was postponed to solar October.
These two holidays are both our mandatory holidays. If they don't coincide, we have days off for both of them. If they coincide, we only have an eight-day off.
The holidays (National Day and the Mid-Autumn Festival) this year were not very nice because it rained at least for six days and the other two days were cloudy.
During the holidays, young people like to travel with their children, but old people are not very into traveling during the holidays–they can't stand travel fatigue.
I did "travel" this holiday. I rode my tricycle with my wife and wandered around my city for several days. My "trip" had no cost, no traffic jam, no tiredness and no anxiety of trying to reach a specific destination on time because I could go home to have meals and take naps at any time we wanted.
Oct. 8, 2025
無関心と良知の対話（下）
ドミトリー:（苦々しく笑い、首を振りながら）この詩はあまりにも意気地なしだ！
なぜ作者は枕に顔をうずめて溜息をつくだけなんだ？
問題を語るなら、なぜ行動しない？行動のない詩は、ただの「感情の観光」に過ぎない。
行進しろ。戦え。叫べ。何か建設的なことをしろ――居心地の良い洞穴で泣き言を言うな。
フリーダ:（低い、ほとんど悲しげなハミングで、視線は部屋のはるか遠くの一点にさまよっている）
でも、それが真実なのではないかしら？
ほとんどの人間は哀れで、弱々しく、無力なの。
勇敢な英雄の神話なんて所詮ただの神話。
旗を掲げる十字軍が一人現れるごとに、千人は静かな家に退き、スクロールし、感覚を麻痺させ、ぬるいお茶の儀式で自分を慰める。
（悲しげに間を置いて）たぶん最も正直なのは、私たち自身が共犯者だと認めること。
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 8, 2025
¿Qué puedes aprender de otras religiones?
A lo largo de mi vida, he tenido experiencias con la religión y la espiritualidad de alguna manera. Recuerdo cuando iba a primaria, había un día en que nos mostraron la iglesia del pueblo local. Recuerdo todas las conversaciones de mis familiares sobre las fantasmas, “el más allá” y la filosofía. De alguna manera, he experimentado el contraste entre el mundo esotérico de mi vida familiar y las religiones del mundo exterior.
Y de todas esas experiencias, he aprendido que a pesar de nuestras diferencias deberíamos aceptar, respetar y aprender de los demás.
Después de todo, estamos pidiendo auxilio divino de la misma deidad ¿o no? Quizás hable un idioma diferente, tenga una apariencia diferente o siga formas de culto diferentes, pero siempre lo buscamos en tiempos de caos. Creo que lo que nos impide hacer eso ha sido esa idea restrictiva de que si algo es distinto a lo que creemos, es un ataque personal.
Al fin del día, todos estamos tratando de hacer el mundo un lugar mejor. Todos estamos tratando de poner empeño a conseguir un futuro brillante para las generaciones que vienen en nuestras propias formas.
¡Gracias por leer mi publicación!
Oct. 8, 2025
Siblings
Bonjour! J'ai deux frères. Un frère a 13 ans et un frère a 10 ans. Souvent, nous visiter à Disney World et Disneyland, et mange beaucoup de glace. J'adore regarder les films avec mes frères, comme les films de Marvel et Disney. Parfois nous sommes le lire à la parc ou boulangerie. Merci, au revoir!
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 8, 2025
Oct. 7, 2025
Oct. 7, 2025
Mount Everest
Recently, we heard about a group of hikers who were trapped by a storm while they were trying to reach Everest´s summit and were later guided to safety by Tibet´s guides. This story makes us think about the difficult situation that this world wonder face with all the tourism that received annually and that is turning in a huge problem for the mountain ecosystem, despite the fact that the community that lives around the climb depends economically of the money that bring the visits that are willing to pay a massive amount of money to became in one of the hikers that reach the top of the world.
Oct. 7, 2025