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Si cambiarebbe tutto?
L´IA e i robot sono temi atualli come non sono stati mai. Ma secondo me, non si può dire se sono veramente nemici o se portano anche delle cose buone. È chiaro che tutto quello porta dei rischi, ma penso che non è chiaro se sono nemici o no... Scopo di questo testo è analizzare i vantaggi e le sfide dei robot e dell´IA. I robot ci aiuta in tante cose, e dobbiamo dire chiaramente che semplifica anche le nostre vite quotidiane, ma dall´altro lato dovremmo vedere anche i rischi che portano con loro. Se tutto fanno i robot, noi non abbiamo più dei lavori, e sappiamo tutti che cosa significherebbe... E po il prossimo problema sarebbe l´educazione, noi diciamo ai bambini che devono imparare cose che non servono mai più nella vita. Purché tutte quelle cose che normalmente uno fa nella vita quotidiana a casa o anche nel lavoro in ufficio o anche nella cantiere, non esisterebbero più. Noi umani siamo poi solo qua per diciamo controllare tutto. E se noi dovremmo controllare i robot vuol dire che dovremmo anche imparare come possiamo controllare tutta quella tecnica nuova... Il sistema d´educazione si deve cambiare e noi con lui. Possiamo dire se ognuno faccia la sua cosa porta funzionare. Ma si serverebbe veramente un cambiamento della vita nostra, per garantire la nostra vita futura e il nostro posto lavoro. Questo sarebbe un punto importante, ma ancora più difficile è la problematica sociale. Se tutto fanno in robot, noi non ci incontriamo più con altri e la conseguenza sarà una quota delle amatati psicologici che non diminuisce. Avremmo più problemi con depressione e ansia saziale e cosi via. Quindi vale la pena confrontarsi adesso di questi problemi. Solo se ogni uni faccia qualcosa possiamo risolvere questa situazione difficile.
Aug. 4, 2025
やっぱり長い飛行機に乗るのは苦手になっていますよね。
最近飛行機に乗る事はどんどん興味がかくなって行く。なんでって言うと、初めて乗った時の感じと全然違います。この最近の７年の間には何回に乗ったのもう数えない。30くらいかな。もちろん、もっと乗った人があると思いますが、自分の国のパッスポットはこんなに強くないから30回乗ったのちょっと多いかなと思います。
ただ飛行機乗るの時々必要だと思いますが、そしていいところもある、だってアジアからアフリカに行く時とか飛行機乗るのは1番便利じゃないかなと思ってますがすごく時間かかりますね。だからやっぱり長い飛行機で旅するの何、私が苦手だとわかります。もちろんその長い旅で何も考えなく何回も寝て起きて繰り返しできるから、それは仕事から休むチャンスだと思うけど、私にとってはそれは大事な時間が無駄にしてるみたいです。
何も出来ないので本当やっだと考える。でも地元に行く時はそりしかないかなと思って、どうやってもっとその長い旅(飛行機で18時間とか)で時間が楽に立つにできるのか？いいアドバイスあればぜひシェアをできると嬉しいです。
Aug. 4, 2025
Le miroir
Au début de la cérémonie du thé, on tient une louche appelée « kagami hishaku » bien centrée devant soi, comme un miroir dirigé vers le cœur. Ce geste symbolise l’acte d’éclairer son propre esprit, de l’observer en toute sincérité. C’est à la fois une façon de s’assurer que l’on est intérieurement en paix, et un engagement silencieux à verser l’eau chaude dans le bol de thé avec une pleine conscience et une intention pure.
On devient véritablement soi-même au moment où l’on en prend conscience. Même temps, même lieu, mais selon l’état d’esprit, un monde entièrement différent peut s’ouvrir devant nous. Nous devenons simplement la personne que notre cœur imagine. Je crois que notre vie n’est rien d’autre que le reflet de notre propre esprit : un miroir. Si nous choisissons d’éclairer le monde avec un cœur rempli d’amour, de paix, d’humour et de joie, alors le monde, en retour, nous dévoilera cette version de lui-même.
Et vous, que voyez-vous dans votre miroir ？
Aug. 4, 2025
How I live in the HOT asf days?
To wrap up in the previous post of weather in Hanoi, Vietnam, which is for me is one of the hardest, suffocated placed to live in Vietnam.
At day, I always feel dizzy, tired, my head is always warm, feel like I'm about to get sick.
At night, the temperature is drop to around 84 °F, but the humid raises to 80-90%, which means sometimes I feel like it's even worse than at midday.
My night always fucked up if I don't use AC.
One of the reasons I always tired and spend hours in bed without being able to sleep.
I can only turn on the AC in the most hottest days, since I'm broken.
Otherwise, almost all days, I always feel like I'm done. I don't have any energy to do my work.
Every 25 minutes, my shorts always get wet, I gotta stand up for 5 minutes to wipe my butt, yes I'm not joking.
Every 1-3 hours, I gotta take a quick shower to get rid of sweat and heat on my body, which makes me feel cooler.
My phone get hot like boil in just 2 minutes of charging, even if I remove the phone case.
(hot asf, I almost feel burned my hand when I touch it)
What do I do? I put a fan toward that, put it onto my two bottle, make it like a bridge.
It's still so hot, but I don't really know what to do. And then I charge and remove the charger every around 10 minutes.
I only open the window and the curtain at night. Even though, it's nothing I can do.
I get jealous when seeing the weather of other cities in the world. It's lower than 50 to 70 °F.
Even though I do lie in bed for hours from suffering, I'm still proud of getting back to learn and work, even I feel tired.
I hope one day I can make a lot of money that I can go many place that feel better.
That's it, hope y'll going well too.
Aug. 4, 2025
La musique
J'aime beaucoup genres de musique différent. Le genre je préfère est le rap ou la musique de le 80s-2000s. J'aime beaucoup d'artist différents mais pour moi j'aime spécifique musique des spécifique lieux. Pour example je préférée la musique des les 80s dans la voiture.
Aug. 4, 2025
My English level !
few months ago, my level at English was B1 with 44 marks until I test it again recently and it was B1 with 49 marks!!
For me, it is a good progress, maybe it took me three months to raise it but I'm proud of me.
The real challenge now is to improve my reading and writing skills
So, i took a lot of steps contain using longcorrect as a tool to improve my writing skills.
Hope i wrote correctly and if not, I will wait your notes ^_^
Thanks, in advance
Aug. 4, 2025
The Extremely Hot Weather in Hanoi
It's been months, I lie in bed, feel like boiling, sometimes the weather is so suck, if turn on a fan towards me, it feels a lot hotter.
We invented something called Celsius and Fahrenheit (°C / °F) by Anders Celsius and Daniel Gabriel Fahrenheit in the 18th.
Nowadays, by measured in shade, 2m above the ground, using a sensor, we can know what the temperature is.
The thing is, it does not include maybe other factors like humid, wind speed etc.
I noticed that just by remembered foreigner in here often say a lot of how difference they feel when in other countries and after coming to Vietnam.
Let's bring it here:
First, humid
The higher of the humid, the sweat would harder to escape, which leads to feel heavier, sticky, and hotter
The lower, it would come out easier, you feel drier but can dehydrated fast.
Second, wind speed
More wind, more sweat evaporate.
No wind, you're going to suffocating of heat.
I just list these two cuz those are the most impacted onto how we feel actually.
For the past few months in Hanoi, the weather tend to always be around 29-38 °C, which is 84-100 °F.
If we also calculate these factors, average humid in here is 75–85%, 53-55% in the afternoon, up to 90% at night.
This is when the cloud day, if it's rain, it's even more humidity (a LOTTT).
And even Hanoi’s driest season (winter) would feel humid for someone from Europe, North America, or the Middle East.
Wind speed is 8-10mph during the midday, at night it's 6mph or less, very slow by global standards.
You feel a tiny wind, but definitely not enough to cool sweat on skin. On humid time, it feels like no wind at all.
It might seems difficult to image that.
In short, Hanoi is like an 24-hour sauna, with heat never be low because of humid, and the air is wrapping me like a blanket.
Not for months, nearly every months with extremely suffocating by hot weather, cold asf in the winter (not the type of cold in Western)
So, I would tell how I feel to you to get it, if you'd like to.
I'll upload it right away after posting this entry.
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Story of Ratnag part-6
The scene moves to the palace of Haripur, where a messenger from Ratnag goes to meet King Bipswan and give him a message from the queen of Ratnag.
Messenger:
"My lord, I am a messenger of Ratnag. Our queen gave me a message.
The prince, Akram, likes your daughter and wants to marry her."
King Bipswan:
"Oh! What a good news!"
Then King Bipswan called a soldier and sent him to call Princess Naeena, to ask her about the marriage proposal. The soldier went to the princess's room and said,
"Princess, my lord is calling you."
The princess, who was in the room, answered,
"I will come soon. You may go."
Then Princess Naeena went to the king and asked,
"Father, why have you called me? What is the reason?"
King Bipswan:
"I have good news for you. Do you know King Akram?"
Naeena:
"Yes, the King of Ratnag. I met him today in the jungle."
Bipswan:
"He likes you and wants to marry you. What is your opinion?"
Naeena:
"Father, I also like him. Today, he saved my life from eagles in the jungle."
Bipswan:
"Then you agree to this proposal?"
Naeena:
"Yes, father."
Bipswan:
"OK, then. Messenger, send this information to your queen — that we agree to this proposal."
Then the messenger went back to Ratnag and told the queen,
"The king of Bipswan agrees to this proposal."
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Die Mietpreisbindung
Die Mietkrise steht heutzutage in Deutschland im Raum. Daher gewinnen die Ideen der Mietregulierung zwischen den Wähler an Fahrt. Heute möchte ich meine Meinung zu diesem Thema mitteilen, bzw. warum es ein Irrtum ist.
Glücklicherweise kann man sich der Geschichte zuwenden und die Fälle untersuchen, in denen diese Politik schon angewendet wurde, und zu welchen Konsequenzen sie geführt hat. Zum Beispiel während und unmittelbar nach dem Zweiten Weltkrieg entschied sich die US-Regierung, die Höchstpreise für die Miete festzusetzen. Die Nachfrage an Unterbringung steigerte deutlich, weil wegen der güngstigen Preisen vermehrt Menschen sie leisten konnten.
Schlussendlich hat sich die Qualität der Unterbringung verschlechtert, weil sie jedenfalls gemietet wird.
Seinerseits hat das Angebot reduziert, denn für den Vermieter ist es unrentabel geworden.Es ist so weit gekommen, dass manche Inhaber haben ihre Eigentum sogar liegenlassen, denn sie würden im umgekehrten Fall ins Minus gehen.
Außerdem ist Korruption erblüht. Am wichtigsten wurden neue Gebäude nicht gebaut, weil es auch unrentabel geworden ist.
Die ursprüngliche Idee bestand darin, die Zahl von Obdachlosen zu reduzieren. Allerdings ist wegen der steigernden Nachfrage und des reduzierenden Angebots das Umgekehrte passiert.
Aug. 4, 2025
My injury experience
My right thumb was injured by the knif when I peeled potatoes. The blood flowed to other fingers and I felt it was warm. I put my right hand in the pool in order for blood to flow away with water.And I was stupide that I let the wound came into contact with water. After that, I used a table towel to wrap my hand under the wood to prevent blood from flowing to the ground. Walked out of the kitchen, I changed the table towel, used cleaning paper to prevent blood. Gradually, I felt dizzy . I was scared by the situation, and I sat down the soft to send a message to my boyfriend and told him I was injured. At the same time, I started sweating, felt dizzier, had blurred vision, and my togue was numb. I realized I could faint at any time, so I send message to my boyfriend urging him came back soon. I just lay on the table waiting for my boyfriend came back.About ten miniutes later, he arrived home and asked how I felt was,I told him all my feelings ,he gave me a candy to eat,and wiped my sweat with a wet towel, I gradually felt better, I thought I might have low blood sugar because I lost so much blood.This is the worst injury I've had in years.
After I ate a candy and felt better, I put my head on the table and half raised my right hand, my boyfriend started to dealt with my wood,and I really appreciated him. I couldn't imagine how I should deal with this situation without him. I haven't had any experiences. When he dealt with my wood , I couldn't even be afraid of seeing my exposed wood. All I could feel was the pain from the wood. Anyway, this was an unhappy experience.
Aug. 4, 2025
Lunedì 4 agosto
Mi vengono in mente solo pensieri di paura, appena svegliata. Però solo le cose che ti fanno paura sono quelle che meritano attenzione.
Per fortuna non sono affatto di fretta, quindi ho avuto del tempo per svegliarmi lentamente.
Ci sono dei test durante il training al lavoro e temo di non passarne un altro. Anzi, non esiste il concetto di passare oppure no, conta solo ottenere un certo punteggio.
Non posso sapere cosa succederà in futuro, quindi devo sentirmi a mio agio, fare del mio meglio e aspettare di vedere come andranno le cose.
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Zurück von dem Museum
Jetzt bin ich zu Hause, es ist aber sehr spät und ich habe gestern Nacht wenig geschlafen. Deshalb bin ich müde und ich brauche sofort Schlaf. Ich werde morgen den Tag erzählen. Ich hatte eine schöne Zeit. Ich war in einem Museum in Mexiko-Stadt, es heißt: "Museo Nacional de Antropología". Bis morgen!
Aug. 4, 2025
وظيفتي
في العام الأكاديمي، اعمل في مطعم متخصص في المأكولات التاكس ماكس، التي مزيحة من المأكولات المكسيكية والأمريكية. هدا نوع الطعام شعبية جدا في أمريكا ونحن مشغولون دائما عندما الطلاب دارسا.
من الناحية الاخرى، في الصيف ليس هناك ناس كثيرون في المدينة، فاغلب منهم يجيون في الفصول الأكاديمية فقط، ولدلك ليس عندنا مستهلكين كثيرين ولا نكسب اكثر اموال بسببه. ويصبح الوظيفة ممل جدا لإنّه ليس هناك عمل لنا
مع انني احب هذه الوظيفة واعتقد أنها احسن حدا من وظيفتي الماضي. غالية زملائي عندهم عمر حوال عمري، وادردش معهم كثيرا عن دراستنا وحياتنا ولماذا نريد الفعل بعد التخرج. بالإضافة اليه، انتهز الفرصة لأتعرف على ناس كثيرين في وظيفتة وأساعد لهم إستكشاف المدينة.
احيانا تمليني وظيفتة، ولكنها تعطيني فرص ممتازة ونكسب اموال من الممكن أن أستخدمها لبلوغ احلامي!
Aug. 4, 2025
Fun Facts About Germany
Did you know that Germans are crazy about sausages?
Over 1,500 different types of sausages, it's no wonder they have sausages for every occasion, and each region has its own specialties.
The Oktoberfest held annually in Munich is the largest beer festival in the world and attracts millions of visitors come to enjoy beer and food.
The Germans take recycling seriously and they have an impressive recycling system.
Citizens sort their waste into different color bins for paper, glass, plastic, and more.
They are the champions in recycling.
Football is a big deal in German.
The national team has won the FIFA World Cup four times.
Germans are passionate about their football.
German is the second most widely spoken language in Europe.
It is not only spoken in Germany but also in Austria, Switzerland, Luxembourg and Liechtenstein.
Germany is home to superhighways, a highway system with no speed limit on some sections.
It is a paradise for car enthusiasts, who they can legally zoom down the road.
German-made cars, such as Mercedes-Benz, BMW and Volkswagen, are synonymous with quality and precision.
The phrase "Made in Germany" is a stamp of excellence.
I just covered a small part of the many fascinating facts about Germany.
From sausages to beer, from highways to cars.
Germany has something for everyone.
Aug. 4, 2025
My Day
I studied French for two hours in the morning.
I can sing the alphabet in French.
I took an hour nap in the middle of the day.
I translated a Chinese article into English this afternoon.
I watched some videos on YouTube in the evening.
I insist on using Duolingo, although its language practice is not very useful.
Aug. 4, 2025
Quartet Ch. 1 Writing: 私が尊敬する有名人
私が尊敬する有名人は研究者ジェニファードドナです。山中伸弥教授のようなジェニファー教授はノーベル賞を取った研究者だ。ジェニファー教授はクリスパーを見つけたので、２０２０年にノーベル賞を取った。ジェニファー教授の生命にはたくさん大切なことを研究した、また、彼女はたくさん人に尊敬させた。彼女の研究はとてもよかったし、彼女は多くの女の子に研究するようにならせた事物をしましたし。
ノーベル賞を取ったの前に、子供の時、ジェニファー教授はMichiganに生まれた、後で、彼女の父はHawaiiで先生の仕事を見つけたから、ジェニファー教授は家族とHawaiiで住んでいるにならされたよ。Hawaiiではとても寂しかったので、たくさん本を読みました。彼女のバイオグラフィーによるとDouble HelixというWatsonの本を読むがきっかけで世界について興味があるんになったそうだ。彼女は「高校の時、私のカウンセラーが私に大学で化学を勉強しないがいいですよと言われた」と言ったそうだ。このことは女子学生によく起こるらしい。ともかく、大学で化学を勉強しました。
大学の後、彼女は大学院生の時、RNAについて研究し始めた。面白かったし、多くDNAを勉強した人がいるんだし。RNAと言えば、今、私もRNAの化学について研究しても、私はスーパーコンピュータを使いますよ。だから、ジェニファー教授の研究は面白いと思います。RNAを研究している間に、ジェニファー教授は素晴らしいことをみつけたよ。彼女はDNAを変えるためにRNAが使われることをみつけたよ。これは大切なことだったので、ノーベル賞を取った。山中伸弥の研究のように、ジェニファードドナ教授の研究は患者の苦難を助けられます。
ジェニファー教授はまたいい人だと思いますよ。多くの女性学生に動かさせています。彼女の研究も学生に動かさせています、私も。でも、彼女の話と彼女の世界について考えたこともいいと思います。彼女の研究は世界を変えられますよ。
Aug. 4, 2025
私の日本旅行
ことしのなつ、日本に旅行を行きました。一人旅に行きました。神戸と挙党と大阪と成田に行きました。私は日本人とかちゅごくご人とかメキシコ人とかフランス人の友達をつくりました。たくさん日本語を話す練習しました。奈良にシカを見ました。このしかは かわいて、とてもおもしろかったしかを見てですよ。
日本の食べ物はとてもおいしいですよ. 初めてお好み焼きと焼き鳥を食べました。おいしいかったです。まっちゃが好きな蚤のですから、宇治に行きました。宇治でまっちゃのはくぶつかんに行って、そして店でたくさん抹茶を買いました。この日は厚かったですから、宇治のお寺を行きませんでした。
楽しかったです。明日、日本にも行きたいですよ。
Aug. 4, 2025
Consistency
The people who has crazy numbers in their streaks marks usually have in common a great quality in their writings.
I would like to become fluent English and be a great writer in the future but it's being pretty painful now at the beginning of the journey. I don't even know yet how to manage feedback effectively.
I write a lot on paper (crazy a lot) in English, but doing it in public is another history.
Besides, here is a great community. Actually the best I been in my life (8 years since I have access to Internet).
Commitment is required here to be successful as it is with all good things in life. I'm really glad to be here, hope I can do my best to contribute with this good cause.
Aug. 3, 2025
El final de Macario
Después de varios días, he terminado la película Macario. ¡Qué peli! Creo que mi parte favorita es el tema musical. "De nada sirve el dinero//también el rico se muere, también el rico se muere"...se canta con tanto felicidad. Felicidad no es adecuado para describir el humor de la canción, ni siquiera sé describirlo en inglés. Sin embargo, hay aún más diferencias entre el final de la peli y lo del libro. Por ejemplo, a menos que simplemente no recuerde, la escena del tribunal y la prueba no occurre en el libro en absoluto.
Aug. 3, 2025
今勉強している言語とそのきっかけ
現在、日本語、韓国語、ベトナム語、スペイン語などを勉強しています。最初に自分で勉強して始めた外国語は日本語です。もちろん、アニメやドラマや他の日本語のコンテンツが影響を与えましたが、小5の時以来、日本語の勉強を続けるのが大好きで、日本語と英語を両方使いこなせる翻訳になると思うようになりました。ベトナム語の場合は、自分の家族はベトナム人かベトナム系の人達なので、親戚をもっと理解するために勉強しようとしています。韓国語を２０１７年、Kポップや韓流ドラマにハマってから勉強して始めまして、そのメディアも分かるために勉強を続こうとしてます。あと、元々高校から卒業するには2年間、スペイン語のような外国語を学ばなければいけませんでしたが、自分の近所でもスペイン語を話す人口が高いので、そのような人達とコミュニケーションを取るよう勉強しています。もし宜しければ、デュオリンゴで@Musical81903をお探し下さい！