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Les portables
Là où j'habite, les portables sont interdits depuis deux ans. Dans ce texte, je vais parler à propos de les differences que j'ai remarquée en tant que une éléve moi-même. Le premier chose que j'ai vu est l'attention d'éléves. Le plupart d`éléves sont mieux en tout des sujets après l'interdite de portables Enfin, j'ai remarquée que l'interdite de portables a amelioré les capacité de comminiquer d'éléves.
Une autre chose que je veux mentionner est pour quelque raison, les tablettes sont permis dans la classe. Je ne sais pas comment c'est different mais c'est ça.
Oct. 6, 2025
Ser tía hoy en día
Hoy fui al parque con mis sobrinos y disfruté mucho. Me encanta ser tía, es una bendición en mi vida y me siento muy privilegiada de ser parte de sus vidas.
Cuando pienso en el futuro, me da miedo. El mundo sigue girando mientras genocidas están pasando sobre la tierra. El cambio climático es algo que va a cambiar todo a lo largo de nuestras vidas y me siento indefenso contra todo.
Trato de ser positiva y al menos puedo tener una influencia positiva en sus vidas y luchar por ser un buen ejemplo en todos aspectos en mi vida para que ellos crecien a ser buenas personas.
Oct. 6, 2025
将棋
私の趣味の一つはチェスです。幼児の時に、父はルールを教えました。時々兄か父とチェスをしましたが、それ以外、ルールを知りましたのに、あまりしませんでした。でも、十二歳になりました時にもっと興味を持つようになりました。例えば、よくオンラインをして、上達をしました。楽しかったです！チェスが好きだから、そして日本語を勉強していますから、最近将棋をしてみました。おもしろいゲームだと思います。まずは、ルールを習いました。後で、YouTubeでいくつかのプロの試合の動画を見ました。すごかったです。プロは頭がいいと思います。それから、私はオンラインゲームをしました。でも、絶対にプロではありません。一試合も勝ちませんでした！苦手です。複雑なゲームだと思います。でも、とても楽しかったです。いい経験でした。
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Los conejos de mi hija
Últimamente, a mi hija le encantan mucho los conejos. No sé porque; no hay muchos conejos en nuestro barrio. Tenemos muchas ardillas que le gustó mirar, pero a ella ya no le importan. Hay un conejo en su libro favorito, La noche del buhito, a lo que le gusta apuntar. Sin embargo, el libro es sobre el buhito, claro. El conejo está solo al fondo. Por otro lado, tiene 21 meses y ¡las pequeñas no tiene que tener una buena razón para sus ideas! Así que compré un vestido con un diseño conejo para ella y hoy mi madre compró también un conejo de peluche. (Ya tiene un conejo de peluche pero no hay daño, ¡puede tener dos!)
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Мой день 06.10.25
Я только спала 6 часов и поэтому я чуть-чуть устала. Каждый день я учу русский и играю с моими двумя котами. Их зовут Мио и Юм-Юм. Имени из шведцкой книги "Мио, мой Мио", которая была написана Астрида Линдгрена. Она - моя любимая писательница сказок. Я люблю коты, потому что они независимые, но всегда близкие.
Oct. 6, 2025
استيقظتُ ولم يكن هناك أحد في المدينة...
أسكن في المدينة الاندور في البلاد الهندية. إنها مدينة مزدحمة و ضجة. واحد اليوم من الأيام، استيقظت في الساعة السبعة في صباح فذهبت إلى المشي. حين ما مشيت، كنت سعيد. سمعت الصوت من طائر و الهواء. لكن ذلك كانت نهاية السعادة. تصلت أختي، ما هي كانت موجودة. ففهمت، هناك لا أيي سيارات، لا أيي الناس، لا أيي الضجة، لا أيي أحد في "المدينة، إنه أنا فقط. فبكيت إلى الله، "أنا وحدي! ما سأفعل!؟
Oct. 6, 2025
Quelle fin de semaine sportive horrible !
Toutes mes équipes préférées ont perdu leurs matches, et de plus, elles ont joué tellement mal.
Je suis déçu. Mais ce qui m'a mis en colère, c'est l'équipe que je supporte depuis mon enfance.
Ne seulement l'équipe a perdu, mais les joueurs ont joué terriblement.
Je ne veux rien savoir de football pour la semaine.
Oct. 6, 2025
Monday, October 6th
Sometimes, I feel the world moves too fast and other times it moves too slow. I think that depends on the people I hang out with.
Even if we are in a globalized world, I strongly belive that at the end, what mainly affects our life it's just the people we have around.
Today I was able to do pretty much everything I wanted to do, even if I didn't have much energy, now I just want to end my day doing stretching, having dinner and practicing a bit of English.
Oct. 6, 2025
My sister
I have a great sister, she has 26 years old. Now we are very close because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it's like my second mom. When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous. For example when we had gift in general we were jealous about the present of the other. But she always was nice with me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends.
Growing up we share a lot of thing and we laugh a lot together, we have also a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny!
I think now it's my favorite person in the earth and I could do anything for her
Oct. 6, 2025
Kate
Kate put down the phone and laughed.
I love Nori, she is my best friend for about fifteen years. She is funny and a good person. We always go out to the zoo because she likes elephants she says elephants are smarter than humans, well I believe that's not true because they're just animals right?
We fought this morning because I told her that I like a girl from my job and this girl and I are leaving, Nori doesn’t like that and I don't know what I can doso that doesn’t think bad things about me because She likes me so much.
Oct. 6, 2025
My last week
Hello, my name is Marjo. Actually, I’m being in United Kingdom for an Erasmus. I have a challenge : improvement in English. So, I will speak to my activities in the last weeks. Monday, I walked with my friend and then we had an information session. Wednesday, I gone in Liverpool. It was very fun but the organisation wasn’t good. And Friday, there was a free film in the cinema. In the weekend, the weather wasn’t good. I gone with my friends in the activities organized by the University. It was really fine. It were a really nice weeks and weekend!
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
What are the advantages of keeping good secrets ?
Keeping secrets is often seen like bad and people thinks they have to keep the secret until their grave. But, surveys were made and they told that keeping good secrets can be good for our health. The whole point of keeping secrets is when you share it with the others. For example, when you're anouncing a pregnancy to your partner, it's a really pleasant feeling. But in some cultures, sharing the pregnancy too early is seen like bad because they are afraid of the devil eye. But, of course, keeping bad secrets is really bad because you will can feel guilt or shame to not say it to your friend for example. Thanks for reading !
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Une de mes pensées
J'ai 20 ans près de 21 ans , dès que j'étais petite, j'ai toujours l'envie de réfléchir au tout moment, une des plus grandes pensées qui m'a fait toujours nerveuse c'est l'idée que je n'aurai fait rien dans ma vie, chaque fois où je fait une chose, un achèvement ou même un succès, la première pensée que pénétre mon cerveau c'est : "tu as rien fais, c'est absurde" , alors que je souffre de négativité, j'essaie souvent de me rappeler que la vie c'est pas juste des achèvement, c'est aussi vivre l'instant.
Oct. 6, 2025
Comfort
I'm not sure I got the question right, but I will answer this as I understood.
I can't boast a perfectly healthy back, so I do some exercises every morning. I like spinal stretching, especially the lower back and the area between the shoulder blades. I can't imagine the day starting without this ritual.
I also drink a glass of water on an empty stomach, because at that moment, I feel my body waking up.
I enjoy going to the sauna. I used to go there every week when I was a child, but now, as I live in a flat, not in a house, I like to take a hot shower.
I love getting a massage even more than going to the sauna. It gives me goosebumps when someone is massaging my head or shoulders. I came up with a lifehack for those who have insomnia as I do sometimes. So, the idea is self-massage. At least, you can massage your head, palms, and feet, then you should try to relax each part of your body one by one. It works.
Recently I have bought new clothes to wear to work. It's warm and comfortable, so it helps me to feel better at work and stay focused longer.
All of this is not about feeling alive in adrenaline meaning. To be honest, when I'm in danger, my body doesn't feel alive, on the contrary, it's too stiff to feel anything but fear. So, my point is comfort.
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
ma sœur aînée
je suis née la soeur du milieu , de moment que je me suis ouvri mes yeux , j'ai toujours considérée ma soeur comme mon soleil , elle est ma personne préférée , quand je faisait des betises , elle était toujours là pour moi , elle a 25 ans, elle est brunette, belle mais assez dramatique
Oct. 6, 2025
Oct. 6, 2025
Have you ever climbed Mount Fuji?
I've not climbed Mount Fuji before, but I really would like to challenge that in order to view the rising sun from the summit. People often say Mount Fuji in winter is terrible condition, so I will avoid winter season. However, I have anxiety of my stamina because I usually don't exercise.