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Who I am? Where I am in my life?
Hello! My name is Aila.
I would like to know English very well , but I don’t have enough money for English teacher.
So I decided to learn English yourself.
At this time isn’t easy for me, because I lost myself. Knowing English will help me get into a masters program. I want to learn a new profession, maybe it helps me define who I am ? I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society.
Oct. 1, 2025
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Oct. 1, 2025
Journal Entry
Je suis stressé. Je veux peindre les jeans de senior avec mes amies ce soir, mais mes parents sont inquiets, j'ai besoin d’une pause. Je suis un petit peu fatigué mais je suis pas mal. Nous sommes très occupés et n’avons pas un autre temps pour cela. La répétition musicale était très amusante hier soir. Mes copains sont très talentueux pour chanter, danser, et faire du théâtre. Dans la chanson, “Pandemonium”, ils sont sauvages. J’adore chanter avec eux. Demain, j’ai un course de cross-country. Je suis un petit peu douloureuse mais je vais essayer de faire de mon mieux. J'ai faim pour un snack. J’ai mangé un pickle hier, c’était délicieux.
Oct. 1, 2025
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Oct. 1, 2025
Mars Dream
Humans have been dreaming of exploring outer space for a long time. In the 1960s, one American astronaut successfully reached the moon and walked a few steps. That was an amazing technical improvement and symbolizes a historic milestone in history. Besides the Moon, Mars, however, has come to us recently. Elon Musk, the richest and one of the most talented guys on this planet, has expressed many times in different scenarios, willing to send regular travelers to Mars. As a fan of space, I am looking forward to it. I believe I am unable to afford the travel fees, but I will feel excited if someone rich can fly to Mars as a tourist. I firmly believe I will witness the memorable moment before I pass away.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Tagespläne
Fast jeder von uns hat eine Art Mustertag: ein Vorbild, das einen absolut perfekten Tag darstellt. Früher versuchte ich, einen solchen Tag ausführlich zu planen und dieser Vorgabe täglich zu folgen. Doch habe ich über die Zeit hinweg herausgefunden, dass es eher eine unerreichbare Utopie ist: Nahezu immer gibt es etwas, was aus unabhängigen von einem Gründen die Tagespläne sehr verändern kann. Deswegen stellte ich fest, wie ich meinen Tag verbringen sollte, um damit zufrieden zu sein. Für mich gibt es zwei feste Kriterien: physische und geistige Ermüdung. Wenn ich zumindest eines davon erreicht habe, war man Tag nicht vergeblich. Als Vergütung schlafe ich sehr schnell ein.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
many languages
I'm learning many languages since many years. First of all, I speak french because I'm french and i also speak spanish very well because I live at the border with Spain so I'm use to hear spanish. Also, I learn spanish since 10 years and for me it's very easy, I had the chance to make an Erasmus in Spain so I turned almost bilingual. I'm also learning english since I'm a child, but for me it's very difficult and I don't know why. When I was a child I didn't like english so I never made an affort to speak this languages. But now I really like to travel all around the world so I make an effort to get better.
I've started to learn italian since 3 years because I think it's a really nice language so I'd like to speak it with natives.
I love to learn languages because it's important when you go somewhere to speak with people and get understanted.
I hope it's not so bad :/
Oct. 1, 2025
My Fifth Day
Love is not about control.
You don’t need to be afraid that your partner can cheat on you or fall in love with someone else, and start thinking about how to prevent it and try to control your partner.
Love is the place where two people can be themselves with each other.
You must value this time.
Everything changes: our feelings, views, thoughts, and the people around us.
The most important thing you need to know is that every person in your life is a teacher.
They can give you a lesson, and you never know what lesson life will give you, but you can be open to studying.
Oct. 1, 2025
为啥我们过中秋节？
传说很久以前，天帝让英雄后羿与他的妻子，嫦娥，到人间为杀他儿子们救百姓人以后。他发现他们变成普通人，会变老，会死去。他们怎么永远在一起呢？后羿找来找去终于找到神仙西王母。西王母给后羿送一颗仙药，吃掉了就飞上回天上做天神。后羿回家完，马上跟嫦娥说道：“快把这颗药吃了，吃了你就不会死”。嫦娥回答：“太棒了，那咱们一起吃吧“。可是后羿只笑着说： “哈哈，这颗仙药只能被一个人吃，俩人吃没有用”。嫦娥哭着叫：“如果你死了，我怎么生活呢”。所以他们打算等够足药，在一起吞下。但是后羿的学生逄蒙听过他们的说话，想偷偷药成他的，希望自己变成神仙。逄蒙偷之间，嫦娥看到他，不想让后羿的作动没有用，就决定吞仙药下了。她的身体浮到月亮上，不可以和后羿团一起。
后来，最光亮的月亮的时候，亲人团一起不仅祝后羿和嫦娥再合一起也感谢在一起的时间。
Oct. 1, 2025
The past for sure
If I had a time machine I would like to go to the past to see the condition of life. I would like to see the world before the invention of cars to see the stars and the sky by night. But i would like to be transparent because the Middle Age or the Modern Era is not very cool for the women because you can be burn and people can accuse you to be a witch. Also, the hygiene wasn't great at that time, but i would like to see what it look like without plastic, phones, TV, supermarket, etc.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Traveling
Traveling often described as the best of teacher. But let’s be honest, it can also be the most chaotic one. Airports test your patience, hotel rooms sometimes look like photography and maps work badly. These poor storys become the funniest memory later. Meeting local people, trying different foods and losting streets teach us. Even lesson can’t teach these.
Oct. 1, 2025
Je suis neuveu
J'aime francis, et je écoute pour une ans. Mais mon ecrite est inifficiant. Si, j,ai recherché pour un aplication de aide avec mon ecrite. je vouldrai plus bein que je été. Je ecrite sans un dictionrie du aide avec mon grammire et vocabularie . Je suis neuveu ici, mais je vouldri cette aide moi. Mercy
Oct. 1, 2025
Différent ways to live 100 years
Indeed, every body wants to live the most they can. And they are different acrivities like exercise, diet and keeping active. Moreover, there are a lot of advance in moderne science and now, it's more common to become a centenarian. One of the most important thing is the relationship you have with other peoples. But, if you aren't sociable you can also have only 1 or 2 friends or just have pets and it's work too. One size doesn't fit all. But, some people wants radical treatments. So, a doctor is involving different treatments. The first is called the Fontaine of Youth: it makes the old peoples younger. And the second is the Peter Pan treatment, in reference with the movie. It's a treatment you can take every year or every few month and it makes you get older more slowly.
Thanks for reading !
Oct. 1, 2025
Schwiizerdütsch
Deutsch soll die Amtssprache dieses Teils der Schweiz sein, aber die eigentliche Amtssprache ist Schwiizerdütsch. Schwiizerdütsch ist ein Dialekt des Deutsch, aber klingt ganz anders. Auch nach Jahren die ich hier lebe, habe ich immer noch Probleme es zu verstehen. Die Schriftsprache ist Hochdeutsch, aber die gesprochene Sprache ist definitiv Schwiizerdütsch. Einige kleine Unterschiede, wie zum Beispiel „Poulet” statt „Hähnchen” zu sagen, sind nervig, aber ich kann damit leben. Einige Unterschiede sind jedoch wirklich schwer zu verstehen. Mein Favorit ist „es Mödeli Anke”, was „ein Stück Butter” bedeutet. Warum?!
Oct. 1, 2025
Our planet
Our planet is what we have all home and it is full of beauty and life. It has mountains, rivers, forests and oceans. These give us food, water and fresh air. Many animals and plants live here and all of them are important for nature. However, pollution and climate change are serious problems today. We must save nature and use natural resources carrefully to our childrens can enjoy the Earth.
Oct. 1, 2025
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