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Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Karl I. von England
Der zweite König des Stuart Haus von England Karl I. war der Enkel von Maria Stuart und der Sohn, der nicht früh starb, von Jakov I. Sobald er den Thron bestieg, widersetzte er sich dem Parlament. Er wünschte eine Erhöhung seiner Einkünfte, aber das Parlament wünschte keine weiteres königlichen Privilegen.
Aug. 26, 2025
Call With Friends
Today as usual, I was writing my notes here in LangCorrect but this time I was using my phone. For some kind of mistake I losed all my progress just when intended to upload my writing. What an agry!
I was just about to trown my phone out of the window when it suddently ringed. I wasn't expecting any call. It was my friends. The first thing I did when I joined is to thanks them for being so opportune and I explained my experience. Our meeting lasted about 2 hours, they are funny and improved drastically my mod. I'm writing this late at evening, with the energy I have left. Right now, I feel very tired.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
What Career is Relatively Fair?
Many times, I look back on my life and ask myself "what career do I really want to pursue?"
When I was in school, I studied very hard and I often got high scores in my class, even in the whole school. So I think learning is fair. As long as you study hard, you will get good academic grades.
I like playing table tennis. It's also a very fair sport. If you practice hard, you can make great progress and you can defeat many other players.
I had the experience of running a small business. I found that if you work hard and you are capable, you can make money all the time. So it's also a fair career.
I have been working for the government for years and I don't think it's a fair career. In China, people can't become rich as government employees if they don't engage in corruption, so the only thing that shows their progress is to get promoted frequently.
However, if people don't have a relationship with their higher - ups who can lift them, they won't be promoted no matter how capable they are or how hard they work.
Therefore, in order to get promoted, many people have been trying very hard to get to know the top leaders of their administrative region, fawning on them and currying favor with them to get promoted. Anyway, that works very well.
So if people don't want to get closer to the leaders, they won't be promoted throughout their entire life.
The former top leader of my city once said, "How can I promote you before I know you?" Yes, in some ways, it's true. He has sentenced to death due to his corruption.
Aug. 26, 2025
アウトプットはムズイ
皆さん、こんにちは。初めまして。今日は、ちょっとつまらないけど、私の日本語能力について話したいと思います。
私は日本に住んでいるなのに、アウトプットの機会が少ないから、ほとんど大学の日本語能力レベルでずっと残っていた。
文法と文の正しい順番を心配すぎて、私の考えを日本語で伝えるのは本当に自身ないです！
テストなら。。。まあまあできる。勉強時間余裕あれば、合格できる。
だがしかし、同僚さんたちとの日常会話は「今日は、暑いよね？」と「お疲れ様です！」ぐらいのレベルを越えない。（今でも、助詞は全然当てない心配です！ｗｗ）皆さんの喋っていることを一般に分かるけど、言葉がちゃんと出ないから、一緒に話せない。悔しいです。
けど！諦めません！アウトプットはテストみたいに、勉強・練習しないと、上手にならない。だから、もっと練習したいです。これから、よろしくお願いします。
Aug. 26, 2025
Un Viaje Típical al Supermercado
Me gusta cocinar, y voy al supermercado dos veces al mes. Usualmente, intento comer mas frutas, verduras, y proteínas para mantener un alimentacion saludable. Sin embargo, carne, huevos, frutas, y verduras son caros. Prefiero ir al Costco para comprar carne y otras proteínas porque puedo comprar a granel. Además, me encanta Aldi por productos porque se descuentan mucho. Los domingos son las días que cocino, y preparo la comida para la semana porque usualmente no tengo tiempo libre durante la semana para cocinar.
Aug. 26, 2025
Learn new words by making sentences
*New word that I learned:court,cover,case,ecosystem,tabloid,lawsuit,stock market,construction,premiere,paid off.
*If I used those words incorrected,can you explain how to use it by give me an example?
1. Bob was ready to appear in court to clarify the situation with a lawyer that his mom covered for him.
2. At the end of a court, he losed and he had to cover the cost of damage.
3. We need to conserve the ecosystem or we will face the worst case in the future.
4. A tabloid deleted all its posts because it fear of facing a lawsuit.
5. A company used money they earned from the stock market to build a bigger construction.
6. Due to an amount of money, effort and passion of a director and actor team, it finally paid off with being the most succesful premiere ever.
Aug. 26, 2025
Finding the Perfect Hand Cream お気に入りのハンドクリームを見つけたい
Now that it's summer, I don't use much hand cream, but in winter I apply it almost every day, not only on my hands but also on my shins and heels.
I used to use a hand cream called Yuuskin. It’s a yellowish cream with a strong smell, like something from Grandma’s medicine cabinet. I eventually stopped using it because I felt its scent might bother people if I applied it at a café.
After that, I switched to Nivea. Nivea has a soft texture and a mild scent, and I found it very pleasant to use.
I’ve been a loyal fan of Nivea for years, but recently I’ve become curious about other creams. A friend gave me L’Occitane’s cherry blossom–scented hand cream, and I loved the fragrance so much that I enjoyed using it every day. I’m tempted to keep using L’Occitane, but it feels a little too luxurious to buy for myself as an everyday item. Since hand cream is something I go through quickly, I’d like to find another favorite that’s as affordable and reliable as Nivea.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Movie speech to correct
In 1994 in France, Amin wishes to live of the scripts that he writes in Paris. At summer, he comes back to the south of France, where he lived when he was young with his parents, that run a tunisian restaurant in Sète. Amin sees his family and old friends again, like his flirty cousin Tony or his bestfriend Ophelie; he shares his time between his family’s restaurant, the local pubs and the beach, where nice tourists come to sunbathe. While Tony has success with gals, Amin is pretty shy. He finds an occupation of taking photos of the Mediterranean coast, that the light hypnotizes him, and he searches for inspiration for his futures movies.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Appris la français
Je veux essayer pratique ma français. J’ai étudié cette langue depuis le 4eme année, mais je ne jamais arrive pour parle bien. C’est d’accord quelque fois, comme si je veux a poser un question, je pense que quand je parle, un personne francophone a comprend, mais c’est une petit difficile. Cette message est ma première temp j’ai écris en français depuis je suis dix. Pas des aides. Donne moi un pointé, 1 - 10.
Aug. 25, 2025
Aug. 25, 2025
Viel lernen heute
Ich bin heute Stolz auf mich, weil ich heute sehr viel Deutsch gelernt habe. Es ist nicht so, dass ich nur dasitze und Grammatik gelernt habe. Ich habe zum Beispiel eine Stunde etwas auf Deutsch zugehört und der nächsten Stunde etwas auf Deutch vorgelesen, aber vor allem, habe ich viel gescrieben. In meine Oline-Deutschkurs wurde von mir gebeten, 200 Wörter über Veganismus und Fleischkonsum zu schreiben. Ich musste auch über Gesundheit reden. Ich bin geitigt erschöpft.
Aug. 25, 2025
Rent an apartment
If you want to rent an apartment, you should sign the tenancy agreement. Your landlady will inform you about the obligations you have to keep the apartment clean. Maybe you have to pay a security deposit in advance. Otherwise, you have to pay on time each month. On the other hand, you have the right to negotiate the price for rent. You may ask the landlady to give you a copy of the rental agreement with all property details.
Aug. 25, 2025
KORREKTUR ,BITTE
Liebe Eltern.
Das Schuljahr startet. Ich bitte Sie höflich rechtzeitig mir ein Bescheid zu geben, ob Ihr Kind das Mittagsessen für die nächste Woche bekommen wird. Bis Donnerstag jede Woche sollen Sie es bitte bekanntgeben, damit ich das Essen für eure Kinder bestellen kann. MFG
Aug. 25, 2025
Laziness is a real thing?
When I go to gym, I really like to listen a podcast. Today I had my English class, so I listed a NPR episode that says about Laziness. A psychologist was interviewed about her book called “Laziness doesn't exist”. This title caught my attention, because today I woke up and said to me that I was a lazied. So, in the episode, the psychologist says about how the pressure about be productive all days and all the time can bright us down to call us lazy.
She says that it's more easier to call us lazy that say this to our dogs or our family. I agreed that we can say more bad things about yourself than about other people, specialty about the people that we love. In the episode they talk about how our success is related with work and be “productive”, and when we don't succeed in the way that society (maybe) wants, we considered a failure.
The psychologist says that when we fell laziness, we should stop and asked yourself why I fell this way? Is because I am tired, and I need to rest? Or it's, possibly, because I am doing some hard task and I don't know how to do? Also, she says that not every time we can calm down the work, because we have a deadline or a boss, but we should look to this felling in a different way.
If this text has some lesson, maybe can be like we need to be more gentile with yourself and only thought or said this to us that we said to other persons.