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practice english writing skills
hello
this is my first text i'm writing so i'm a little nervous.
let me introduce myself
my name is sarvenaz and i'm 27
at the moment i'm preparing myself for ielts exam and for me this is very challenging
learning new things always make me stressed
anyway, i'm currently planning to write in this website almost everyday to improve my english skill
and i'm willing to get any feedbacks and helps from all you guys.
from tomorrow i'm going to write essays more academic with advance grammars and academic vocabularies.
Aug. 27, 2025
Cotton Plant
Cotton used to be a common crop planted in my hometown. At that time, living conditions in the countryside were very poor. Farmers didn’t have money to buy clothes, so they planted cotton to make their own clothing.
Cotton in my area is sown at the end of April or the beginning of May and harvested from early September to early November.
Cotton stalks are stronger and more solid than those of any other crops and are considered the best firewood for farmers.
Wild hares like to stay in cotton fields. Every year, before the cotton stalks are pulled out of the fields, villagers use a net to block one side of the fields to catch the wild hares, which always excites children.
Mothers in the villages are very talented. They know how to turn cotton into pieces of cloth. They use old, primitive machines to spin cotton into threads and weave it into cloth.
However, it’s now very rare to see cotton fields in my area because farmers are not as poor as they were decades ago. They have money to buy clothes and no longer need to make their own clothing from cotton.
Aug. 27, 2025
Permettez-moi de me présenter.
Bonjour, je m’appelle Kaname.
Je suis japonaise et je suis étudiante.
Je veux être une professeure. J’aime les enfants et Je veux voir les sourire.
J’aime la musique beaucoup, par exemple J-POP et HIP-HOP. Mon préféré est HANA et SKI-HY, Da-iCE. Mais, je n’aime pas musique classique, parce que ce n’est pas amusante.
J'aime aussi les distributeurs de jeux.
En particulier, j’aime un distributeur nommé Radda.
Enchantée !
Aug. 27, 2025
Wheat Plant
Wheat is a common crop planted in my hometown. Its yield was very low, only about 100 to 150 kilograms per mu (667 square meters), when I was a child.
My hometown doesn’t grow rice, so wheat is the most delicious staple food in my area. However, it yielded too little, so we couldn’t eat it until Chinese New Year or when relatives visited us.
Wheat is sown in mid-October and harvested at the end of May or the beginning of June. During its growth period, it doesn’t require much care.
Harvesting wheat was a major event in my hometown. About half a month earlier, people started building threshing grounds and preparing professional tools. The wheat harvest season would last 15 to 30 days.
Nowadays, thanks to advanced planting technology and modern agricultural machinery, wheat yield is very high, usually over 500 kilograms per mu. As a result, people can eat foods made from wheat flour every day.
Wheat flour is commonly used in our daily meals, including steamed buns, dumplings, noodles, cakes, and bread, all of which are delicious.
Wheat has become the crop grown on the largest scale in my area, which is also considered a wheat production base.
Aug. 27, 2025
Hope Begins Where Hope Begins
That's the title of a theology book that I read two years ago. I can't understand the full content of this book, but I'm really impressed with this title.
Have you ever wondered: "What is your hope? Or where do you put your hope ?"
Few people hoped when they had things they wanted. But the things outside of us that we haven't just make us hope to achieve. We can call the name of hope in our own way. I just hope that everyone always has something to hope for because that is what motivates us to strive every day.
Aug. 27, 2025
Brave New World
Vor kurzem habe ich zum zweiten Mal den Roman „Schöne neue Welt“ durchgelesen. Er ist einer der bekanntesten Vertreter des Genres Dystopie zusammen mit 1984. Im Gegensatz zu George Orwell stellt Aldous Huxley, der Urheber dieses Buches, die Zukunft der Menschkeit nicht unterdrückt von einer totalitärischen Regierung dar, sondern aus freien Stücken ihre Freiheit gegen Komfort getauscht . In seiner Zukunft sind alle Menschen glücklich und komplett intolerant zum Diskomfort: es gibt keinerlei Einsamkeit, jeder hat seine eigene Tätigkeit je nach der zugewiesenen Kaste und wenn etwas schief geht, verwendet man Soma, eine Art von (angeblich) leichten Drogen. Es gibt auch keine Familie als Institution, stattdessen „jeder gehört zu jemandem“ und Kinder sind künstlich erzeugt und schließlich je nach der Kaste indoktriniert. Huxley glaubt, dass Bücher nicht verboten sein werden, sondern komplett nicht nachgefragt.
Ich denke, dass es meine Lieblingsdistopie ist, weil es gleichzeitig eine Utopie ist. Meiner Meinung nach ist sie viel realistischer und ganz näher zur unseren Zeit als 1984, obwohl sie sogar früher, vor fast hundert Jahren, geschrieben war.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
un problème sur ce site-web
Un problème que j'ai remarqué quand je corrige l'anglais des autres : Des autres commentateurs faites la surcorrection.
Je vois trop le phenomène où des gens corrigent quelque chose qui n'est même pas incorrecte. Soit le corrigeur ne comprend pas un autre dialecte (l'anglais américain vs. l'anglais anglais, par exemple) ; soit ... je ne sais pas, peut-être que le commentateur pense qu'il doit trouver QUELQUE CHOSE à corriger dans chaque phrase ? Ils ne peuvent pas imaginer des autres façons à exprimer la même idée ?
C'est surtout un problème pour des débutants d'une langue. Principalement, quand on est débutant, il n'est pas nécessaire de rendre chaque phrase 100% naturelle, comme un celle d'un locuteur natif. Pour des étudiants d'un niveau développé, oui, certainement, ces commentaires sont utiles. Mais pour quelqu'un d'un niveau débutant, trop de conseils sont plus déroutants qu'utiles. Il faut mieux de ne corriger que la grammaire de base pour que l'ecriteur puisse vraiment comprendre ses fautes.
Pour moi en français je ne suis plus débutante donc je serais ravie de recevoir des corrections plus détailées, mais je plains des débutants d'anglais qui reçoivent des conseils déroutants.
Aug. 27, 2025
Quand je suis stressée...
Quand je suis stressée par le travail ou ma vie générale, je commence à chercher des nouveaux cours auxquels je peux m'inscrire. Je ne suis plus étudiante, mais il y a beaucoup de cours pour adultes dans mes environs. Récemment je me suis inscrite à un cours de langue des signes (ce qui va commencer en mi-septembre).
Je suis également tentée par un cours de chinois et un cours de menuiserie. Mais le problème c'est que je suis déjà très occupée ! Le mardi j'assiste à un rendez-vous pour pratiquer mon français. Le jeudi j'ai une leçon de japonais en ligne. Le mardi matin, le vendredi matin, le samedi matin, le dimanche soir, j'ai des leçons du patinage à glace. Dans deux semaines mes lundis soirs auront le cours de langue des signes.
En plus de ça, moi et ma mère (avec qui j'habite) avons un chien jeune qui nécessite beaucoup d'attention. Et bien sûr le travail, lundi à vendredi.
J'ai trop de choses à faire. Ce n'est pas juste que je dois travailler ! Il reste tant de trucs intéressants à faire, à apprendre, à lire, à voir !
Aug. 27, 2025
『二つのスパイシーな会話』
(1)
場面： コーヒーハウス。そこは本屋とアートギャラリーも兼ねている。四人の友人が語り合っている。
ロン：（いたずらっぽく、考え深そうな表情で）ねえ、ちょっと思ったんだけど……僕たちって玉ねぎみたいじゃない？
レックス：（足を止め、純粋に興味を引かれた様子で）へえ、面白い視点だね。どういう意味？
人間はみんな多面的だって言うけどさ、確かに、そこから一歩踏み込んでる。
リス：（ゆっくりとうなずき、自分の哲学的な枠組みに結びつけながら）何が表層で、何が核心かっていう区別は、しばしば不明な。
もしかすると、存在そのものが、ヴィスワヴァ・シンボルスカが言うところの「完璧さの馬鹿らしさ」なのかもしれない。まるで一枚一枚の層が、それぞれ完結した存在の鞘であるかのように。
リンダ：（乾いた笑い声が唇から漏れる）不満の皮を剥ぐよりましじゃない？
少なくとも「完璧な愚かさ」なら、何が出てくるかは分かってるわ。
(2)
リンダ： （頭蓋骨の絵を見つめ、唇にかすかな笑みを浮かべて）このイメージ、瞑想にぴったりね。
レックス： （首を振り、ぞんざいに否定して）いや、ただの気を散らすものだよ。
本当の瞑想にふさわしいイメージなんて一つもない。
瞑想っていうのは、思考やイメージをすべて超えていくプロセスなんだ。
真の静けさの中には、映像も音も存在しない。
ロン： それって、ただの眠りみたいに聞こえるけど。何が違うの？
レックス： （ロンの方に向き直り、声を低く強めて）瞑想してみればわかる。
眠るために座るんじゃない、目覚めるために座るんだ。
すべての雑音や映像が消えたときに、残されているものを観察するんだよ。
Aug. 27, 2025
Un mensaje.
Hola Juana, ¿Cómo estás?
Sí, he encontrado un nuevo piso de mi abuela. Lo es un poco grande más que antes, tiene una cocina grande y todas las habitaciones son muy luminosas. El piso antiguo era muy oscuro porque no tenía la ventana. Los ojos de mi abuela son malos ahora, es que lo ha cambiado. ¿Te recuerdas? Cuando eramos pequeño, hemos jugando en una habitación de muy oscura. Luego tú lloró, porque tenías mucho miedo.
Entonces, ahora esta viviendo en la zona sur cerca de "GranCine", el precio del piso es 450 dólares por un mes. Además, delante del piso hay estación de buses, nos podemos ir a toda la ciudad. ¿Qué te parece?
Si hay más pregunta, me mandarás un mensaje por favor.
Hasta luego, un abrazo.
YUte
Aug. 27, 2025
Die könige Namen
Johann von England, dessen Spitzname "Ohneland" ist, gilt als der schlechteste König von England. Da hat keiner König danach das gleichen Name, deshalb heißt er einfach „Johann“.
Der derzeitige König von England heißt Karl, der gleich ist Karl I., der der einzige hingerichtet König auf englischer Geschichte ist. Ich wusste nicht, warum der aktuelle Karl den finsteren Namen heißt. Ich habe aber das vielleicht verstanden, wenn ich über den unglücklichen König nachgeschlagen habe.
Aug. 27, 2025
Warum Homeoffice gut ist
Meiner Meinung nach ist Homeoffice exzellent, deshalb kann man es nach den eigenen Wünschen gestalten. Zum Beispiel konnte ich als Projektmanager bei Wells Fargo mein Homeoffice in der Nähe meines Bettes einrichten, zumal ich um 8:30 Uhr aufwachte. Besonders praktisch war, dass es einfacher war, mein Homeoffice im Schlafzimmer einzurichten, als im Wohnzimmer oder in der Küche.
Aug. 27, 2025
Daily Life: Part 12
Wow! Recently, I have been working on my study schedule. Ends up, I got a list that helps me learn English. I hope it can serve me. OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text. I decided to respond to this topic. You can point out my fault. Here we go!
I agree with Andrew's idea, since we all know, Today, we have a variety of applications as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we are totally transparent. Everything on the app shared the same thing as the news. Therefore, what we know everything is equal. seconds, we use home appliances from other countries, since we use other countries' stuff, we are familiar with those products. It would help us count the differences. Also, there is someone who is stereotypical, like Claire mentioned, but that's a little precent in the whole world. In conclusion, I believe differences are becoming fewer.
😊 I know this isn't for me, but I believe I will be a better man because of all of your helping!
Aug. 27, 2025
Das Abenteuer des Seemanns Teil 1
Gregory ist in Puerto Rico gestern angekommen. Warum? Weil, Gregory ein Seemanns ist. Er hat die sieben Meere gesegelt. Er segelt weil er bleibt in eins Ort nicht gern. Immer wenn er bleibt im eins Ort zu lange, er wird traurig. Gregory ist 24 Jahre alt – sehr jung für einen vollendeten Seemann. Er ist 1,89 m groß, mit kurzen braunen Haaren. Er ist sehr intelligent und lustig, aber ein bisschen angstlich.
Am morgen, er segelt nach Africa am die Schiff, die "Daybreaker." Die Kapitänin um die Daybreaker heißt Kapitänin Monique, aber er hat sie nicht getroffen. Er wird sie am Morgen treffen. Er schläft in einem Hotel. Es war ein sehr schlecht Hotel. Es war schimmelig und hat Ratten. Die Essen war auch schimmelig, so Gregor isst nicht Abendessen oder Frühstück. Er hat viel Hunge wann er geht nach den docks zu treffen Kaptianin Monique und sieht die Daybreaker...
Forgesetzt werden...
Aug. 27, 2025
The Bright Side of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
I used to think that playing online games was a pure waste of time. I believed there should be wiser ways of spending time, such as reading books or doing chores. However, after playing a couple of online games, my view completely changed.
First, playing online games can help you switch your mood. It's much better to immerse yourself in an online game rather than be haunted by negative thoughts. Online games don’t require any gadgets other than a smartphone or tablet. Unlike watching a movie or reading a book, you don’t have to make much effort to follow the story. Basically, they are free of charge and don’t cause any health problems unless you play excessively.
Online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise. Since I started playing an AR online game, taking a walk or riding a train has become a lot more fun. I’ve actually found myself becoming more active after I got into online games.
A life full of seriousness and tension is stressful. If online games can lighten your burden, I see no harm in playing them. I’ll keep enjoying online games wisely, without spending extra money.
Aug. 27, 2025
Sorghum Plant
Chinese sorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown. It is not a staple crop in my area, and its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.
Chinese sorghum is very tall. It is taller than people. It's usually planted at the beginning of July and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.
When I was a child, I heard a lot of scary stories related to the sorghum fields.
If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it grows to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road. You never know what will jump out from the sorghum fields. Beasts? Ghosts? Or bad guys?
However, Chinese sorghum is very useful. Its leaves can be used to feed livestock, and its stalks can be used to make mats. The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make beds and walls, and can be used to dry some agricultural products outside.
The sorghum panicles can be used to make brooms and a kind of cleaning tool used in the kitchen. The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets and other daily - use items. So it seems all parts of the sorghum are treasures.
However, people in my area rarely plant Chinese sorghum nowadays. I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghum.
I saw some farmers still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmers planted in the past. Instead, it's a kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the past. They plant the sorghum for alcohol factories to make liquor.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Tanjiro and Giyu From Demon Slayer
I'm going to write about Tanjiro and Giyu from the anime Demon Slayer.
Tanjiro is the main character from the Demon Slayer.
His mother, sisters, and brothers are killed by man-eating demons.
Only one sister Nezuko is survived.
He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko on his back to see the doctor.
But then, Nezuko suddenly tries to bite him.
She is somehow transformed into a demon.
When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyu shows up and saves him.
This is how Tanjiro meets Giyu.
Aug. 27, 2025
8 Hours of Sleeping
This one is not negociable. The benefits of sleeping correctly can reproduced by any other mean. I often listen about guys who claim that can work perfectly and as usual with 4 or 5 hours of sleep. But the brain needs the correct amount and quality of rest to fully recover. There are a couple of habits related with improving this crucial area, I'll cover them in the next writings.
Good night!
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
About Yesterday
Yesterday ım learned ı didint take any unıversty. Its mean ı have to study one more year for Türkiye university exam. Actually its makes me really sad and nervous ı cant do anything yesterday from think all of thinks. I was thinked go to another abroad üniversty but probably i cant take visa f also euro and dollar is expensive one euro is more than 40 lira i am not rich at all axtually im not rich any i have no money. Also i am not sucsessful student at all im a normal student and that makes my chances of studying abroad even more impossble. This summer i was hopefully i was try to learned english , i was improve myself, i was learned other cultures . Not the traviling i was read and watch the videos. My all hopes are gone i dont want do anything. This is not the end of the world i know also i dont want to find excuse for the not working like unseccesful people but i dont do it on purpose. Im not sad only for me actually ım prepared for this result i was thinkig i have to study again but other students had to go to universities with lower scorest than their exam results. I will live same thinks and i scare of all thinks.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025