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Oggi
Sto in la casa di mio zio, vediamo tutti un film. Io, mio fratello, miei cugini, mio zio e la mamma dei miei cugini. Il film è di fantascienza, per me questi film sono un po’ noiosi. Sempre siamo indecisi quando scegliamo un film. Mio zio e fratello vogliano sempre commedia e fantascienza. Mia nonna in questo momento ha una riunione con i suoi amici, perché ieri era suo compleanno. Domani arriva mia mamma e sorella in casa di mia nonna.
Aug. 9, 2025
El chavo del ocho
De verdad, cuando empecé a ver esta serie no me gustaba. Me parecía raro que unos adultos actuaban como niños, y me confundía el tipo de humor que se suele ver en series como Tom y Jerry pero en la actuación vivo. Además, me costaba entender lo que decían los personajes, sobre todo Don Ramón y Kiko.
De repente un día me dio por volver a ver la serie y ahora me gusta. Es muy entretenido. Y entiendo casi todo lo que dicen; todavía me cuesta entender a Kiko a veces.
Mi personaje favorito es Don Ramon. Me encanta cuando Doña Florinda lo malentiende, le da una palmada por la cabeza, y dice "Vámonos Quico, ¡no te juntes con esta chusma!"
Aug. 9, 2025
Do you think technology improves our lives? Why or why not?
My goal is to write 150 - 200 word essay.
I think technology improves our lives because there are many positive benefits from it. Technology helps us improve our education access thereby improving your life. Advanced technology makes international education possible, no matter where you live. There are many courses, available online and you can attend the class by having only computer and online at home. Online education helps us reduce financial burden by addressing visa challenges if you have to study abroad, saving transportation costs required to go back and forth from home to school, reducing costs for physical books and learning materials, and more. Moreover, technology such as communication platforms like zoom helps you expand your personal and professional network through joining seminars, workshops, and webinars. Needless to mention that the platform like LangCorrect helps you improve your language skills required for advancing your education and career. Therefore, I believe technology improves our lives in many ways.
However, I appreciate that there may be some challenges like lack of access to internet and technology devices in some part of the world that limit certain groups from benefiting the power of technology in advancing their lives.
Aug. 9, 2025
Aug. 9, 2025
Peuvent les jeux vidéo m'apprendre le français?
Je joue le jeu Witcher 3 en français depuis ces derniers jours. Pour la plupart, je comprends bien ce qui se passe. Peut-être c’est le cas parce que j’en ai joué plusieurs fois, mais la dernière fois ce que j’en ai joué il y a 3, peut-être 4 années. Je me souviens seulement quelque du jeu, et moins de la dialogue. Cependant, je mentirais si je disais ce que je comprends tout. Il y a beaucoup des phrases, surtout les idiomes, ce que je ne vraiment comprends rien. J’ai dû rechercher le phrase « cul sec! » par exemple, car j’ai eu aucune idée ça voulu dire. Puis je comprends presque rien lorsque les personnages parlent si vite, ou lorsque il y a plusieurs des mots que je ne connais pas dans un phrase. Même si c'est difficile pour moi, je m'amuse encore, et j'espère que les jeux vidéo m'aideraient pour l’apprentissage.
Aug. 9, 2025
Mi viaje a Nueva York
Hace dos años estuve en Nueva York. Hay muchas cosas que ver y hacer allí. Caminé por Central Park. Crucé el puente de Brooklyn. Tomé el ferry a Staten Island, ya que la Estatua de la Libertad es visible desde el barco. También, visité el Memorial de 11 septiembre. Desafortunadamente, 2,971 personas murieron en el ataque terrorista del 11 de septiembre de 2001. Mi actividad favorita fue ver actuar las Rockettes en el Radio City Music Hall. Era mi segunda vez en Nueva York y espero que no sea la última.
Aug. 9, 2025
Aug. 9, 2025
Aug. 9, 2025
Interesing business model
Recently, I am doing researchs on Reddit and Google Play try to get some insights for a startup business.
Here's an interesting project which was verified on the USA market .
This guy copied some Amazon shop's item lists and pasted on his eBay shop list, and the price on eBay is a little bit higher than Amazon.
Once clients ordered on eBay, he is gonna make an order on Amazon inmediatly.
He mentioned that each month he get $3000 to $5000 and only work for it 2-3 hours per day.
That is an extremely simple dropshipping arbitrage business, but why don't Americans compare the prices across different platforms when buying products?
Aug. 9, 2025
Trying It Whenever I Can
Making friends happens when is part of something else, not a goal itself. Every human has a couple of funny/enjoyable activities and likewise those activities also have humans who love to do them. In the right context, with the right conditions, social skills just "florish". It's even unavoidable since we humans are hard-wired to be sociable.
Of course, those "right conditions" depends in a lot of factors (demographics). Sometimes, things are not going to work as expected and the reasons are not always clear. Failure is part of the proccess and its difficult to deal with.
But connecting with other people is extremely rewarding so it worths the pain.
Some of the things I say when someone ask me for specific steps: "Find a way to gather your coraje, create sources of confidence (e.g. caring for your appearance, doing something even more challenging) and get out there."
Aug. 9, 2025
Aug. 8, 2025
Aug. 8, 2025
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Aug. 8, 2025
Introducing myself and my family
Hi, everybody
My name is Maili, I'm 22 years old and I'm here for improve my writing skills.
I'm studying to be a translator and interpreter, I am unemployed now, but I hope to find a work soon. I live in Lima, Peru with my parents and my two younger brothers. I have four pets, there're called Lassie, Thor, Princesa and Kir. I'm an introverted person, I don't hang out with my friends because people make me feel uncomfortable. I love reading romantic book, because I like to feel many emotions and to live many lifes. I love listening to music too, my favourite singer could be Taylor Swift.
Aug. 8, 2025
What happens after death?
I used to think that our souls would go to the sky and would be protected by God forever. However, I've changed my mind, I have no idea what happens after death and I'm really afraid of that. Is it like feeling asleep forever? Do you stop feeling anything? I don't know, it's something that we will never discover until we die, it's really sad.
I admire Christians because they are really optimists about this, some of them even look fordward to live the day they meet Jesus personally.
Aug. 8, 2025
My worries right now
I've been having nightmares for two weeks and now I think that I've the reason why this is happening.
I didn't know how stressed I was until this. In one month, I'm starting my last university curse, people think, as me in the past, that the last curse is the easiest one however, it isn't because I have to find a job to validate some subjects and I should get my TFG finished.
Finding a job is for me a new experience, I'm really afraid of being rejected of any company or not being able to find it, it's really stressful, to be honest.
Finally, doing a TFG is really hard as far as some older friends than me have already told me.
I'm fucked up haha. This is my way to feel more relax by expressing my feelings.
Aug. 8, 2025
Gerade
Gerade habe ich Vokabular auf Deutsch durchgesehen. Um 18 Uhr meine Oma hat ein Treffen mit Freunden, wegen ihres Geburtstags, (ihr Geburtstag war gestern). Mein Bruder und ich haben schon alles vorbereitet. Wir werden zu dem Haus von meinem Onkel gehen, während sie feiert. Es ist 16 Uhr, ich habe noch viele Zeit, ich werde Deutsch lernen und meinen Laptop aufladen, so dass ich kann es mitnehmen.
Aug. 8, 2025
Aug. 8, 2025
Tradução 25: A Planeta Nova
Cientistas encontraram fortes evidências da existência de um planeta gigante gasoso no sistema estelar mais próximo do nosso. A quatro anos-luz e meio de distância, o planeta sem vida seria um vizinho próximo da Terra em termos astronômicos e poderia ter luas que sustentam vida. Os sinais foram encontrados no sistema estelar Alpha Centauri pelo poderoso Telescópio Espacial James Webb.
Aug. 8, 2025
Einer meiner Lieblingsfilme
Es gibt mindestens drei Filme, den ich mehrmals aktuell angeschaut habe: der Teufel trägt Prada, Zoomania und Stolz und Vorurteil. Wenn ich jetzt darüber nachdenken, gibt es noch anderen Filme, wie der Herr der Ringe und Star Wars, den ich schon oft gesehen habe. Trotzdem will ich heute über den Film: der Teufel trägt Prada. Da ich kürzlich gelesen habe, dass eine zweite Teil mit der gleichen Schauspielerinnen wird gefilmt: Anne Hathaway, Emily Blunt und Meryl Streep.
Ich erinnere mich nicht, wann ich den Film zum ersten Mal gesehen habe, noch wie oft. Ich finde er sehr vergnüglich und echt gut, deswegen ist mir nicht langweillig. Mein lieblingsszene des Filmes ist, wenn Miranda Priestley (gespielt bei Meryl Streep) zum erste Mal aufkommen, und wie alle sich vorbereiten, um sie zu empfangen. Eine andere Szene, die ich genieße, ist, wenn Andy (gespielt bei Anne Hathaway) beim Laufen auf New York´s Straßen aufkommen, mit verschiedene Kleidungen und Looks.
Seit ich Deutsch lernen, schaue ich er jedes Mal auf Deutsch. Vielleicht werde ich dieser zweite Teil auf Deutsch anschauen. Ich bin sehr aufgeregt! Ich hoffe, er ist so gut wie der erste.
Aug. 8, 2025
Hoy, veo un video sobre el filosofo Socrate
Ayer, veo un video sobre Descartes y hoy sobre Socrate : en este escrito voy a recapitular lo que aprendido de este video (Es un video del youtuber "filosofia en minutos")
-Encontramos dos problemas con el : Socrate no deja escritos y no me acuerdo del segundo jaja
-En lugar de escribir, socrate preferio hablar a la gente en la calle...
Pero este manera de hacer lo conduce delante la justicia
Y aqui, sus discipulos toman notas de su discurso, a pesar de todo, los juicios votaron para su muerto ( con un planta llamado el "cigue")
Es todo para hoy !
Aug. 8, 2025
Aug. 8, 2025
The weather in my city
I live in the very north of France, in a little town located not far away from the sea, so you can imagine that the weather isn't really sunny or calm.
My skin is extremely pale such as a vampire, since I never see the sun.
Honnestly, I can't say that I hate the weather here beacause I kind of feel the vibe of the rain hitting against my window.
Of course sometimes I miss the sun, we all need it to be alive and to get vitamines and energy.
To conclude, I love my hometown's weather, even if I would appreciate if the rain could stop for a while.
Aug. 8, 2025
Meine Hobbys
Hallo Leute!! Ich bin Daria und hier schreibe ich verschiedene Texte über mein Leben. Das heutige Thema ist Hobbys. Viel Spaß beim Lesen!
Meine Hobbys sind Klavier und Geige spielen, Freiwilligenarbeit, Lesen und Fotografie.
Ich spiele seit 8 Jahren Klavier und seit 4 Jahren Geige.
Ich habe eine Musikschule abgeschlossen, und es war eine tolle Erfahrung.
Ich bin eine Freiwillige und gebe kostenlos Englischunterricht für Ukrainer.
Ich lese viele Bücher, weil ich Philosophie studiere. Mein Lieblingsgenre ist Fantasy.
Ich fotografiere auch gern. Normalerweise Natur, Menschen, oder einfach kleine Momente.
Danke!