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Sept. 21, 2025
Dar un paseo o correr
Dicen que caminar es muy saludable y si no se tiene un trabajo activo, se debería caminar mucho. Yo disfruto paseos, pero prefiero correr a caminar. Cuando corro, paso menos tiempo, entreno mi sistema cardiovascular, y me siento muy bien después.
Uno puede correr afuera: en el parque, en la acera, en el estadio, etc., o adentro, por ejemplo en el gimnasio. Uno puede empezar con distancias cortos y periodos cortos y mejorar a partir de eso.
Yo prefiero correr, pero paseos son genial cuando estoy cansado o quiero caminar con alguna otra persona y ponerse al día. Estar al aire libre es saludable, no importa la razón.
Sept. 21, 2025
L'amour des couleurs, du maillot, du club.
Le troisième club que j'appuie est aussi un symbole de la ville qui l'a vu naître.
Il a tout gagné au foot. Mais le lien avec ses fans va au-delà du football. Dans leur stade, les fans du Liverpool FC, en grande majorité de la classe ouvrière, peuvent exprimer leur mécontentement.
Anfield Road est un symbole de la ville, et l'ambiance quand les Reds jouent est incroyable. On ressent la puissance des fans et l'influence qu'ils exercent sur leurs joueurs pour qu'ils se surpassent, et sur les visiteurs qui ont l'impression d'être en enfer.
La chanson « You'll Never Walk Alone » est l'hymne du club et est chantée avant le début des matchs. Le message est celui de l'unité entre tous les partisans, au-delà d'un simple match de football.
Sept. 21, 2025
Handwerkskunst in meiner Region
Die französische Hauptstadt der Porzellankunst ist Limoges aber in meiner Region gibt es etwas Ähnliches: die traditionellen Steingutfabriken in Nevers. Sie existieren seit fünf Jahrhunderten und haben italienische Herkünfte. Googeln Sie einfach „faïence Nevers“ und sie werden, was sich daraus ergeben hat. Ich liebe lackierte Porzellan- oder Steingutwerke. Der etwa veraltete Reiz von diesen Objekten liegt mir am Herzen. Die blauen Nuanzen sind einfach faszinierend und sehen sehr raffiniert aus. Man braucht viel Talent, um solche detallierte Verzierungen zu malen.
Im Vergleich mit anderen französischen Regionen gibt es vielleicht nicht so viele Handwerkskunst in meiner. Es stimmt, dass Burgund seit ureweigen Zeiten vor allem eine landwirtschaftliche Region ist, besonders mit dem Weinbau, der in sich selbst eine Kunst ist! Dazu haben sich Firmen in den XVIII. und XIX. Jahrunderten entwickelt: Bergwerke in Südburgund, Firmen wie Kodak oder Seb... Handwerkskunst ist ein wenig seltener. Ich kann doch ein paar andere Beispiele aufzählen, wie die traditionellen handgemachten Regeschirme in Neyrat oder die Holzschuhmacher im Morvan.
Die Franche-Comté, d.h. in der Graftschaft Burgund, die jetzt zur selben Verwaltungsregion wie uns gehört, gibt es auch schöne Traditionen. Die Uhrenfabriken von Besançon und die Holzspielzeuge vom Jura sind bei uns ziemlich bekannt.
Sept. 21, 2025
My favourite song
Today, I'm going to talk about my favourite song: Sunflower. Sunflower is written and sing by Post Malone and Swae Lee. The song was made in 2018, when the movie "Spider-Man into the Spider-Verse" was release. I think it's my favourite movie with Spider-Man across the Spider-Verse because the universe is amazing and the drawing are just incredible. So, when I listen Sunflower, it makes me happy because I think about my favourite movies. Also, the vibe of the song is nice and I love Swae Lee's voice at the start of the music. I want to learn playing Sunflower by guitar but it's a bit difficult so I need time but I will be very proud of myself when I will finish. Thanks for your correction !
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Rabdom story 3 : Queen of the Swamps
- Ragnar Stormbreaker -
Our group went throw the Swamps. The wood road was long and wide. Around us was water, mud and trees. Everything was dark and misterious. It was almoust dark when we heard wierd noises. We stoped... Gebrin want to say something but I shuted him down and listen. Then something behind us snapped. We truned around and saw humen whit mask. Then he threw a thing that explode. It was too fast. In one moment there was onli one persone but then there were lots of strange people with guns and explosives. Than started big fight.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Der Ausflug
Gestern habe ich einen Ausflug mit meinem Mann nach Regensburg gemacht. Wir haben die Kirche und die Brücke besucht. Danach sind wir nach den Einkaufszentrum gefahren. Mein Mann hat neue Schuhe gebraucht. Er hat viele Schuhe probiert. Die Verkäuferin war sehr nett und sehr nützlich. Endlich, hat er zwei paar Schuhe gefunden. Sie haben er sehr gut gafallen . Die Preise sind günstig. Es war ein spaß Ausflug.
Sept. 21, 2025
How to learn English?
Hi, I wanna improve my English but I don't know what I have to do for this.
you know, I know all the tenses but sometimes I forget how to speak English.
do you have any advice guys?
and it there anyone here to help me?
someone I can practice with her and tell me how to make my English better.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Sleepover with my friends
Saturday at 19 pm my friend and I met in front of my others friends house. Than we went into it and gave our presents to our friends mum because it was her birthday. Our friends mum was really happy about our presents. Then my friends and me went to my friends room and made the bed's. A few minutes later, our Pizza comes and we ate it. After we finished eating we went back to my friends room and did put on our Pajamas. Then we played Mario Cart. When we didn’t feel like it anymore we played truth or dare, but after one or two round, we still didn’t feel like it anymore too. Then we Chatted and ate cake and watermelon after an how it was boring and we played Mario Cart again We ate Chips and Jelly babies. At 12 pm we brushed our teeth and felled a steep. The next morning I wake up at half past seven in the morning. I played Hayday on my phone till the others waked up too. When everyone was awake, we talked about our Chemie teacher. (But not good). Then we did pull on some other clothes and went to a bakery. We walked 15 Minutes to the bakery and back. When we was back at the house from my friends, I made some fruits for the breakfast. While I made some fruits the others set the table outside. When my friends, me and my friends mums were outside, it started rain. Then we have cleared the table and set the table inside again.
After breakfast we played Mario Cart again, till
my friend and I had to pack our bags and went home.
I really liked this sleepover!
Sept. 21, 2025
Strange Taste Habits
I watched Wednesday series. The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food. And I have a topic about food habits in my reserve. And… have a mood to write today.
By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too). There’s typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance! Mahmushka! Mahmushka! Hey! Hey!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.
If you have a mood to watch,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I
and you may try this one, too
https://youtu.be/SzkjmtvWZtM?si=k90t_CaaF85JXj2A
Well, let’s return to our foods. We won’t be talking about Surströmming, Igunaq/ kopalgyn, some Asian extremal exotic etc. For an appetizer starting with Stuhden/Hohlohdetc/Aspic and buckwheat porridge. The Western people never eat them, don’t they? I heard that if you haven’t eaten buckwheat porridge from childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense boullon just cold. For people drinking with meals ice tea or ice cola… Try студень with ice brandy. Also ther’s Khash in Armenian cousin. This dish has the same ingredients and cocked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.
Next some personal. I’m a food outcast. I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (exept tongue). I have low hemoglobin now – such a pity I never try blood sausage. I don’t like milk. I hate boiled onion. Life is so hard… (a joke, don’t take to heart). I knew a guy who didn’t eat cucumbers. I heard about a man who didn’t eat tomato if it was cut. Children usually hat milk skin. Oh! I almost forgot – pickled watermelon.
What about you?
(I hope you’re not starving)
Sept. 21, 2025
Beitrag
Heute habe ich weder Lust noch Konzentration, etwas Langes zu schreiben, weswegen ich mich für einen kurzen Text bzw. eine Frage entschieden habe. In der Prüfung, die ich ablegen muss, gibt es einen Teil, in dem ich einen Beitrag verfassen und darin über ein bestimmtes Thema argumentieren muss. In einem Beitrag sollte eine neutrale Sprache verwendet werden. Das heißt, man sollte nichts Offizielles schreiben aber auch keine Umgangssprache verwenden. Meine Frage ist also, ob ihr jemals einen Beitrag geschrieben habt und euere Meinung über etwas geäußert habt. Außerdem möchte ich wissen, wie man nach eurer Meinung einen Beitrag schreibt.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
ニュースの記事の翻訳 九月二十一日 一年米の量について
国（くに）は、来年六月までの一年間に必要（ひつよう）米（こめ）の量（りょう）を計算（けいさん）しました。
人が食べるための米の量は697万ｔから711万ｔになりそうだと言っています。一番多（おお）い場合（ばあい）でも、前の年と同（おな）じぐらいにらると考え（かんがえ）ています。
国は今まで必要（ひつよう）な米が毎年１０万ｔずつ少（すく）なくなると考え（かんがえ）ていました。
しかし、二年続（つづ）けて、国の計算（けいさん）より多くの米必要（ひつよう）になりました。このため、米の値段（ねだん）が上（あ）がったと言われています。
今年は、旅行にくる外国人が食べる量なども考え（かんがえ）て計算（けいさん）しました。国によると、今年とれる米は、７２８万ｔから７４５万ｔになりそうです。
国は、必要（ひつよう）な量より多くの米がとれそうだといっています。
Sept. 21, 2025
Food
Fun fact, I have porridge for breakfast every day. I've got used to it since my boyfriend and I started to live together. Before this I had a tea and some sweet things like cookies for breakfast. We have been eating cereal in the morning for approximately one year. Then we switched to buckwheat porridge. We add some fruits and toppings to the dish so we've not got tired of it. Sometimes we cook something else, for example, an omelette or pancakes. But we cook the porridge more often.
There's one more thing I usually eat, it's chocolate. I think it's a bad day if I don't get any chocolate.
Sept. 21, 2025
Elektro- und Oberleitungsbusse
Ich fahre mit dem Bus nur dann, wenn ich irgendeine Strecke überwinden muss, wo Fahrräder nicht erlaubt sind, zum Beispiel auf einer Autobahn ohne den Gehweg. Um mein Fahrrad nicht fallen zu lassen, muss ich ihn halten und folglich stehen.
In Moskau waren vor einigen Jahren alle Busse durch Elektrobusse ersetzt, die sehr angenehm sind: Dort gibt es viel Platz und sogar Ladegeräte.
2020 hat die Stadtregierung endlich auf alle Oberleitungsbusse verzichten, da sie hässlich aussehen und zu viel Geld erfordern. Seitdem habe ich keinen einzigen Trolleybus gesehen.
Sept. 21, 2025
Do you use Audible?
This year earlier, I started using Audible. At first, listening to audiobooks was too hard for me, so I took a gap. This month, I picked it up again. But it seems that I can't try a simple of an audiobook before I buy it. That's odd, I remember I used to do so. Did Amazon just change the policy?
Sept. 21, 2025
My trip to Switzerland: Day 4, morning
On the last day of our trip, My wife and I took a ropeway to the viewpoint of Harder Kulm. The weather was the best during the trip. The line of tourists waiting for ropeway was much shorter than that we saw on the first day of the trip. We could take a ride within only 10 minutes after waiting in the line. The gondola was full of people, but it didn't feel very uncomfortable as all of the passengers looked very energetic and pleasant. From the destination of the ropeway there was a narrow but a tad long pathway to the view point. Along this way there were a couple of wooden dolls playing the Swiss traditional wind instrument (I forgot the name.) The view from the pathway was already stunning, but the scenery from the view point was far more beautiful. The lakes that engulfed Interlaken were reflecting the sunlight and the water looked shining green. Over the lakes was some of the giant famous mountains, such as the Eiger. Everything looked like shining. We couldn't help without asking another tourist to take our photos with the scenery. After being back to Interlaken, we picked up our luggage in the hotel and headed to a supermarket next to the main station. We grabbed sandwiches and water to prepare for our 6 hours train ride, and took a train to Heidelberg.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Production 1
I arrived a week ago in Lyon, and it was a difficult week to discover a new city. First, I have travelled 7 hours with only one break to eat, and endured an hour of traffic jam to come late to the inventory of my new apartment.
Just after my quick inventory, I met my new flatmates, and one say immediately " do they say you about cockroaches, bedbugs, and water leaks ?", a nightmare !
I didn't dinner after all this adventures, and stayed almost all the time in my bedroom for three days.
In fact Lyon is not so dramatical, with a lot of courage and a little bit of beautiful weather, i have visited Lyon to find a better neighbourhood to live since today.
I came here to study, I just begin a new cursus so in summary thats like a totally new departure, like I start from 0 without nobody to reassure me.
Sept. 21, 2025
The 1+1 Dilemma
On the morning of one day in summer when I was hanging out with other children in my village, my father told me that it was time for me to start school, although the elementary school in my village had started a new semester a few weeks earlier. At that moment, I was wearing shorts and a Breton shirt.
On the afternoon of that day, I went to school with a few other older children in my village. The elementary school was right behind my village and was only separated by a small moat. That was how I started my school life.
Since I didn't start school at the beginning of that semester, I had no idea what to do when doing my seatwork. I remember one piece of seatwork was a math problem, 1 + 1 = . I didn't know how to do it, so I had to see how my deskmates did theirs. The deskmate on my left wrote 1. Then I wrote 1 on my exercise book. But when I saw what my deskmate on the right wrote, it was 0. I had to erase the answer I just wrote down and write 0 instead.
I remember I changed the answer between 1 and 0 several times so that the paper in the answer area even wore out. However, I can't remember what the exact answer was when I finally handed my seatwork in.
That is a very interesting memory that happened in my elementary school, and I can't forget it even now.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Who do you want to turn into someone famous for one day?
I wouldn't want to turn into anyone famous even for just one day, because after all I will turn back myself. The power or a lot of money can't be anything for just one day, and I'm going to feel vain. Rather than that, I want to improve myself as soon as possible.