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Mi cabello
Mi cabello es extraño, es marrón y es naturalmente rizado, pero creo que es dañado. O es demasiado largo y mis rizos no pueden formar. Mi cabello parece como es liso, pero el respaldo de mi cabello es muy rizado, es extraño. Quiero que mis rizos volver, pero no sé qué puedo hacer. Mi mamá fue a una escuela de cabello, ¿tal vez sabría qué hacer? Voy a preguntarle mañana cuando le veo. Espero mucho que pueda arreglar mi cabello, extraño mis rizos muchos.
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
「塵も積もれば山となる」
それは何度に小さく細やかな仕事にとりかえして取り組んで、時間が経つに従って、最後に自分に驚く結果をとるという意味の諺です。つまり、小さなことでも積み重なれば、大きなものになります。例えば、1日に20個の単語を暗記したら、1年で7300個の単語を覚えることができます。
この諺ような精神があるのこそ、いろいろな成功を収めました。高校2年生の時、県の運動会で5000㍍の項目で第4位の成績を達成しました。しかし、成績が知った時、「その子は天才だなあ」というように褒めた後の誰にも知らないことは体育生でなく普通の高校生の私として，普段時充分な練習を取るだけではなく，優れた成績を維持しました。もしその精神と「も一本！！」の決心はないと、こんなにな出色の成績を取らないではなかったと思っています
大学を通じるにも、社会人になるにも、 「塵も積もれば山となる」の精神が身につけています
ですから、将来、大学を通じるにも、社会人になるにも、 「塵も積もれば山となる」の精神が身につけています
Oct. 22, 2025
Fragmento de la próxima publicación:
«Lo más agridulce de un “tangihanga” es que toda la familia se une una vez más. Aunque el ambiente se siente sombrío, me emociona ver a mis familiares, sobre todo si ha llevado mucho tiempo sin verlos. En las épocas antiguas (pre-colonización), mucha gen de diferentes tribus del país recorrían largas distancias a llegar al funeral para ofrecer sus regalos y ayudar la familia en duelo (preparar el enterramiento, el banquete, etc.).»
*Como que he estado muy ocupada, solo pude escribir unas frases… espero encontrar el tiempo para terminarla.*
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
Oct. 22, 2025
La Bouche
La bouche est une partie du corps. C'est aussi une partie du visage. Cette raison que je crois la bouche compose la personnalité des personnes.
Je parle et mange avec ma bouche, alors j'aime ça parmi autres raisons. Avant je mangeais en le matin, je me brosse les dents. Ainsi, les dents en ma bouche sont hereusse chaque des jours. Je me brosse les dents trois fois : chaque des matins, des midis et des nuits. Je suis heureusse aussi, et je pouvais sourire avec mes dents blanche et ma bouche très heuresse.
Enfin, quand je mangerais bon nourriture--ma bouche parlerai et dit moi: « Bon travaille, ma chère ! Tes bonnes nourritures et ta purification dans mes sujets, tu as sécurisé mon royaume et mes couronnes. »
Oct. 21, 2025
The Amazonian Creature
Many years ago, deep in the Amazon rainforest, there was a mysterious creature. The indigenous people called it the "Piraguara" because it was a large fish that resembled a piranha. They said it was seven feet long and could tear a man in two with a single bite. One day, a brave fisherman tried to catch it, but his attempt was in vain the creature ate him. Everyone was scared because they needed to fish. So they decided to joint forces and set a trap that looked like a man, when the fish bit it, all everyone threw their spears.
That's how they did it, and they had food for two weeks.
The end.
Oct. 21, 2025
Un año para aprender noruego en Noruega
Si ganara un año para estudiar cualquier tema, me gustaría estudiar noruego en Noruega, porque ya lo estoy aprendiendo y me encantaría viajar por el país para explorar su gastronomía y leer más libros en noruego.
Para mejorar, estudiaría las bases del idioma y practicaría escribir en los tiempos pasado, futuro y condicional. Además, intentaría hablar mucho con los nativos, aunque cambien al inglés conmigo, para ganar más confianza y fluidez.
Estoy segura de que, después de un año, hablaría con más seguridad y haría amigos noruegos, lo que me permitiría conocer mejor la cultura del país y aplicarlo en mi vida cotidiana.
Oct. 21, 2025
Der gestrige Hubschrauber
Gestern habe ich ein unbekanntes, seltenes Geräusch gehört, das von außenhalb des Hauses kam. Ich wollte wissen, voher das Geräusch kam und deswegen habe ich das Fenster aufgemacht. Es war ein Hubschrauber. Merkwürdigerweise ist der Hubschrauber sich den ganzen Tag an das gleiche Areal geflogen.
In der Nahe gibt einen riesigen Wald. Ich habe gedacht, dass vielleicht jemand verloren gegangen ist.
Ich habe ein bisschen recherchiert und ich habe herausgefunden, dass tatsächlich ein Mann vermisst war. Gestern Morgen ist der Mann verschwunden. Ich weiß nicht, ob der Hubschrauber aus diesem Grund hier war. Ich hoffe nun, dass der Mann gefunden wurde.
Oct. 21, 2025
斗米恩，升米仇 - Recipient's Malice
Back then, when I was in junior high school, there was a girl. I forgot her name, so here I use ''Betty'' to refer to her. I was the top student in my class. And because of that, the homeroom teacher wanted me to help students who have difficulty in study. I was okay with that. Anyway, I like answering people's questions.
In a class, students are usually divided into different study groups. And Betty happened to be one of my group members. Betty showed her curiosity in study and asked me questions humbly, thus I always helped answering and teaching her my specific technique without reservation. I thought we were friends, but then one day I realized that we were not.
In fact, I don't really care people trying to be my friends or not. Even if they just want to be nothing more than a classmate to me, I'm still willing to help them. But Betty's situation was different. It's really hard to explain when your guts telling you something is wrong. I felt I was deceived and being used. She's not sincere. She pretended to be my friends so that I would keep helping her. All her enthusiasm and compliments were fake. Maybe that can explain why our conversations were only confined to studies, and why she never asked me out not even just having lunch together. She treated me like a stranger outside the classroom.
It is hard to keep giving when someone only takes, and more difficult when their motives aren't pure. So I stopped helping her the moment I realize all that. I put on my cold face, took back all my kindness, and refused to answer any of her questions. Then she stopped asking.
One day, I was talking with some classmates who I'm close to during lunch, about hanging out to visit the Sacred Heart Cathedral in Guangzhou as well as for academical purposes. I finished my lunch so I left first. When I was leaving, I saw Betty joined their table. Later, one of those girls told me that after I left, Betty said something like how difficult I am and they will have less fun if they take me with them, and that she wanted to kick me out and join their visit. I thanked her reminder and smiled resignedly. I didn't even feel angry, not at all, because I already saw who she really was. It's only another proof that she's the kind of person who would talk bad behind someone's back, gang up to bully or isolate someone only because someone doesn't help her.
Later, in the final exam of a semester, she ranked the first in class. I ranked the second. She beat me for the first time, but little did she know, it was also her last time. The homeroom teacher used all the beautiful words to praise that how hard-working she was, while in the meantime, throwing shade at me that how selfish and ungenerous I was, and that my chickens come home to roost. Yeah, kicking someone when they're down is humanity. I could imagine how she went to tell the teacher that I refuse to help in an injured tones.
The homeroom teacher never asked me why I didn't help her and she wouldn't notice that I helped anyone but her. In fact, who would care what the truth is, people just believe what they want to believe.
Putting everything else aside, it was never my duty to help. Just as an old saying goes, ''帮你是情分，不帮是本分'', which means helping you is a favor and refusing is my right. Yet both of them took my kindness as granted. In other words, it is ''斗米恩，升米仇'', which means a bowl of rice brings gratitude, a sack of rice brings resentment. If you give someone a little help, he will be grateful; if you keep giving him a lot, he will hate you once you stop. Or maybe it's called recipient's malice.
Anyway, I don't really care their malice, like a lion won't care mosquitoes' bite, though, I have to admit, it's a little annoying. Truth is, I don't even really care about the throne of first place. Why would an ever-victorious general weep for losing one fight? She's no match for me, and I never regarded her as my opponent. Yet still I enjoy that someone who's jealous of me or hates me has to live beneath my shine.
Oct. 21, 2025
Мой день 21.10.25
Сегодняшний день был очень обычно. Я ездила в университет, занималась, обедала в столовой и пела в хоре. Мне нравится столовую этого университета, потому что еди всегда очень хорошие и большие и каждый день изменяется выбор. Каждый день есть разные вегетарианские и веганские варианты и всё вкусно. Для студентов еди там особенно недорогие. Если есть солнце, можно сидеть снаружки на красивом кампусе.
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
Gatos negros
Tenía un gato negro, pero él se murió hace siete años. A él lo extraño mucho. Yo aún tengo a dos gatas y ambas gatas tienen diecisiete años. Me encantan los gatos pero no puedo adoptar ningún gato más porque dentro de unos años, probablemente voy a mudara con un amigo quien es severamente alérgico a los gatos.
En los estados unidos, los gatos negros no están seguros en esta época del año. Unas personas los dañan porque esas personas son supersticiosas o crueles. Desprecio a las personas que dañan los animales por cualquier razón excepto la sobrevivencia. Ojalá adoptase a otro gato negro, pero ni modo.
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
🪄 The Thing I Forgot at the Supermarket
Today, I went to the supermarket in a hurry because I wanted to buy something before it started to rain.
- Do you have a list? - My husband asked me.
- Yes, I only need bread, milk, and rice - I answered.
At the checkout, the cashier told me:
- Do you want a bag?
- No, thank you, I bought one from home - I answered her proudly.
But when I arrived at the car, I noticed I had forgotten the most important thing: the soap!
I had to go back again.
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
This is my first text without chatgpt
Hello Everyone,
Today is my first day on langcorrect, I would like to enhance my writing skills and my vocabulary as well, also i would like to have some friends with the same goal as me which is to be able to write without using AI tools. I would be happy if you share some tips and advice with me to do good in this. Thanks in advance for your welcoming.
Oct. 21, 2025
Bilingual Bible
I was baptized in my childhood when I was about seven years old.
I was taught that God created the world, because I was born into a Christian family.
I was taught that the theory of evolution was wrong.
Every weekend, my parents attended church activities.
When I was a child, I was well-acquainted with biblical stories featuring Abraham, Noah's Ark, Moses, Samson and Delilah.
When I was a child, I read a comic version of the Bible, but now I use a bilingual Bible.
Oct. 21, 2025
Der Jahrhundertdiebstahl
Am Sonntag haben 4 Diebe ins Louvre-Museum eingebrochen. Mit einer Hubarbeitsbühne haben sie den ersten Schoss erreicht, sind durch die Fenster eingegangen und unschätzbare Schmutzstücke gestohlen, unter denen das Diadem der Kaiserin Eugénie und die Smaragdhalskette der Kaiserin Marie-Louise. Die Krone der Kaiserin Eugénie ist in der Flucht der Diebe zu Boden gefallen. Sie ist beschädigt aber zumindest ist sie immer da.
Das ist einfach tragisch, wenn diese Schmuckstücke ein Teil unserer Geschichte und sogar der Geschichte anderer Länder (Marie-Louise war österreichisch) waren. Da die gestohlene Objekte in der ganzen Welt berühmt waren, ist es leider sehr wahrscheinlich, dass sie zerstückelt und Stück für Stück verkauft werden...
Der Diebstahl dauerte „nur“ acht Minuten aber wirft zahlreiche Fragen auf: Wie kann man eine Hubarabeitsbühne in der entgegengesetzter Verkehrsrichtung ohne Sicherheitskegel mitten im Stadtzentrum geparkt, ohne von einer Polizeizentrale bemerkt zu werden? Warum wurde der Fensteralarm nicht ausgelöst? Was machten die Wachmänner? Warum haben die Diebe die Schaufenster, die angeblich aus Panzerglas bestand, mit einem einfachen Winkelschleifer schneiden können?
Ein in Januar im Kulturministerium herausgegebener Bericht zeigte „eine Vermehrung von Sicherheitslücken im Louvre“ an. Die Museumleiterin, die behauptete, es sei ihr an Geld gefehlt, um die Sicherheit zu verstärken, hatte doch 500 000€ um eine neue Küche für die Führungsmannschaft ausgegeben!
Über die aktuelle Sicherheitschefin des Museums findet man nur dithyrambische Artikel, weil sie die erste Frau in dieser Stellung ist. Kaum ein Wort über ihre tatsächliche Kompetenzen: Dass sie eine Frau ist schien wahrscheinlich wichtiger, was nicht besonders beruhigend war...
Die politischen Reaktionen bisher sind pathetisch. Natürlich übernimmt niemand seine Verwantwortung, niemand hätte irgendwelchen Fehler gemacht. Alles ist normal — außer ein paar fehlender Schmuckstücke! Upps?
Dieses Ereignis betont große Probleme von unserem Land zu dieser Zeit: Unverschämte Inkompetenz, Verachtung für das Gemeingut, Leute, die eine Führungsposition haben, weil sie einer politischen Ideologie entsprechen oder weil sie die richtigen Freunde haben... Korruption ist immer das schnellste Gift für ein Land, und zahlreiche Beispiele uns es hier beweisen.
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
Oct. 21, 2025
Drove to Yamanashi
I left home before 9 a.m. and drove along the winding mountain roads, taking short breaks along the way, and got back home by 6:30 p.m.
The deeper I went into the mountains beyond Okutama, the more beautiful the autumn colors became, though it’s not yet the peak of the season.
After crossing the mountain pass, the lower land finally came into view, and peach orchards gradually came into sight.
Of course, the peach season is already over, but I thought this area must look beautiful in spring, covered in shades of pink.
※Yamanashi is famous for its peach.