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The Lunar Eclipse
There was a lunar eclipse last night, and I heard that it was very spectacular. Regretfully, I missed it. I was busy with a meeting and totally had no idea know about it at that time. This morning, I found it on the network. Photos regarding the lunar eclipses filled my smartphone.
In retrospect, yesterday was the Lantern Festival and I didn't even eat sweet rice dumplings. It was a little pity, lol.
March 4, 2026
March 4, 2026
Japón Vaccaciones
Hoy, nosotros reservamos dos billetes para a Japón. Yo estoy muy animada porque yo nunca he estado a Japón y me gusta comida japonesa! Me gusta Udon, Warabi Mochi, Sushi, y Tempura. En Singapur, hay comida japonesa pero yo quiero probarlas en Japón. Yo voy a alquilar un coche para conducir de Yamanaka a Tokyo porque mi amiga dijo las vistas son buenas. Pero no conduzco mucho en Singapur, así que no lo se si yo voy a conducir un coche en Japón.
March 4, 2026
週一回のプール
今年から週一回プールに行くようにと新年早々に決めたけど、
２月は月曜日が休みだったり（プールは職場から近いので）、ざんぎょうだったりして、結局一回もいっていなかった。
一昨日はようやく行けて、しかも友達も来てくれてよかったです。
七時過ぎに泳ぎ始め、からっぽだったが急に若者が何人が入ったら混んできた。
最初自分と友人二人だけのコースは、５人にもなった。
一人は大学生か、20代前半の若い男だ。結構勢いよくて個人メドレーで泳いでいた。
いつも時間を見てから出発したから、水泳部経験者かもしれない。
特に彼の平泳ぎは激しくて早く、水しぶきも高く上げててすごかった。
残りの二人も若く、多分中高生でスタミナが半パンなく泳いでいて、30代の俺たちは面目ない（笑）
隣のコースに一人の生徒か、中学生の男子がコーチみたいな人物に20分ほど厳しく叱られていた。
体育の世界って厳しいなとでも思った。
ちなみに自分も水泳部経験者だけど、サークルの感じで楽しんでいたので、そういう汗と青春の思い出は特になかった。
来週混まないように。
それでは。
March 4, 2026
March 4, 2026
Oraciones 12.
Llegué tarde por culpa del puente levadizo.
Se averió por falta de mantenimiento.
Se le perdió la llave a causa del alboroto.
Ganará la competencia gracias a su astucia.
Eso te pasa por pendejo.
No logró terminar el proyecto a tiempo de tan vago que es.
De tan difícil que era, no logramos terminar la obra.
March 4, 2026
March 4, 2026
Old Songs, New Feelings
One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play" I went to her house the other day.
That title is "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo".
It's quite an old song.
It seems It came up in her recommended when she was watching YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.
This song gave me a unique feeling and I've never heard another song like it.
It feels sorrowful this song and it feel the feeling of moving fast as well.
I was able to practice alone with the original song because the chords were easy and in the original key.
The tempo was very fast when sang a guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song.
Please try listening to it if you like.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2eOR2proWaY
March 4, 2026
March 4, 2026
3.3.2026
요즘에 오만과 편견을 반복해서 봐요. 예전부터 키이라 나이틀리가 출연한 영화를 좋아했어요. 특기 다아시가 안개에서 나와 엘리자베스에게 사랑한다고 고백하는 그 장면이 좋았어요. 그 영화를 잘 만들었다고 생각해요. 그런데 작년에 1995년에 나온 오만과 편견 미니 시리즈를 처음 봤는데 그때부터 계속 보게 됐어요.
평소에 뭘 보거나 들을 때 제일 처음 경험한 것을 더 선호하는 편이에요. 예를 들어서 래스컬 플래츠의 life is highway를 원곡보다 더 좋아해요. 처음 들은 버전이 그 버전이라서 더 익숙해서 좋아요.
하지만 이번에는 영화보다 미니 시리즈를 더 선호해요. 미니시리즈 여배우의 연기가 더 좋았고 1995년의 다아시가 더 잘 생긴 것 같아요. 엘리자베스에게 고백하면서 엘리자베스의 가족을 까는 장면에서 연기 너무 잘해서 볼때마다 “어이가 없네‘라고 생각이 들 수 밖에 없어요. 현실에서는 그런 고백을 받고 싶지 않아요.
영화에서는 다아시가 엘리자베스를 무시하는데도 낭만적인 느낌 아직 나요. 그래서 미니 시리즈를 더 나은 것같아요.
그리고 1995년판에서 다아시가 자신의 성격을 변화하려고 노력하는 게 잘보여요. 그래서 마지막 장면에서 다아시가 엘리자베스에게 다시 고백했을 때 엘리자베스가 왜 받아들었는지 이해할 수 있어요.
물론 드라마니까 재밌게 봤고 청혼을 받아들인 것이 잘했다고 생각해요, 하지만 현실에서 나였다면 아무리 부자여도 다아시 같은 사람을 피하는 게 맞다고 생각해요. 다아시 가족인 래디 캐서린도 완전 악마였고, 그리고 다아시의 친구 여동생들도 최악이었고 사랑하는 여자의 가족을 쉽게 무시하는 다아시도 문제인 것 같아요. 빨간 깃발!
March 3, 2026
Hola
Quiero aprender Español porque en mi profesión como un electricista (actualmente un aprendiz) trabajo junto con muchas personas que lo hablan. También mi novio sus abuelos vinieron de México y comunicarse es difícil en Inglés. En escuela secundaria aprendía un poco pero no recuerdo mucho. Al menos Español es similar con Inglés, a diferencia de Japonés que también estudio.
March 3, 2026
子供の時の好きなビデオゲーム
日本で制作されたので、もしかしたらバカな質問だけど、日本に「逆転裁判」というビデオゲームのシリーズは人気ですか？子供の時から私の好きなゲームです。主人公は弁護士で、殺人の事件を解きます。
ゲームをしない人によると、多分「逆転裁判」のことを知っていません。でもゲームのファンの中で、成歩堂 龍一の「異議あり！」ポーズはiconicです。(iconic=「有名」と似ているけど意味は同じじゃないです。) そしてたくさん人は最初のゲームの一番面白いシーンを知っている。たとえば、龍一がオウムを問いただす時や、「「ほとんどクリスマス」だったら実はクリスマスじゃない！」と言った時です。
一番好きなゲームの冊は三番目です。もっとも面白くてドラマッチクな事件があるのです。でも、四番目は悪い点があっても、心のどこかで大好きです。
March 3, 2026
March 3, 2026
March 3, 2026
Sunset's tragedy.
«I would like to hear an explanation» – said Princess Celestia to her prized pupil, Sunset Shimmer. Sunset was young, confident, and had tend to overestimate her abilities. She was the best student in Canterlot school; her talents mesmerized teachers and classmates; she was a way beyond everyone on school. However, there was a problem – she couldn’t make friends. After a short talk with her mentor, she said this: «How can I make some friends if I can’t talk to them about something, or even approached them, I don’t have a plan, or a tip to do that! » I wouldn’t jump to conclusions if I was you. Friendship can’t be determined by plan, or a couple of tips, it’s an experience, you need to try, to feel it, to feel others and their emotions. – replied Celestia. «But I can’t, if they ask something or behave unexpectedly? I must know how to reply in such situations! » Then, Sunset left to the library, wondering about Celestia’s words. Celestia followed her with her eyes, a note of sorrow was in her gaze; she thought about what if she really overdid it with studying her, she needed to make her own decisions and stop looking for answers to every question in books, maybe she finally understands it, or she needs me for her to understand. Sunset walked to the library; library as always was crowded with ponies – someone sit on the table with a huge big, it seemed that she was riveted with a story like story was a glue; flickering light was lit pages on her book. She caught herself she wondered about something for 5 minutes. Still, Sunset couldn’t outrun her own thoughts. She picked a book from bookshelf and smelled the soft cover of book, then she came to the table which was in the edge of the room. Then, an amazing thought suddenly hit her head – what if Celestia was wrong, and answer for her question really laid in books in this library? A big smile appeared on her face after that thought. Sorry for lenght :)
March 3, 2026
March 3, 2026
봄
미국에서 3월부터 봄이 오고 있어요. 날씨가 따뜻해져서 얇은 옷을 입을 수 있어요. 낮의 시간이 점점 길어져서 일광절약시간제가 이번 주 토요일에 시작할 거예요. 오전 12시까지 지금보다 한 시간 앞당겨질 거예요. 일반적으로 사람들은 야외 활동을 많이 하지만 꽃가루 때문에 저는 실내 활동만 할 수 있어요. 매년 봄마다 저는 걱정해졌어요. 왜냐하면 제 증상은 보통 콧물과 재채기가 있고, 가끔 심하면 종일 졸리게 돼요. 그리고 곤충이 갑자기 매우 많아서 벼룩이 있을까 봐 매번 강아지를 데리고 산책한 후에 강아지의 피부를 꼭 확인해요.
하지만 제 생일이 4월에 있어서 저는 꼭 열심히 계획해요. 예전에는 생일잔치 동안 케아팝 춤을 추고 만든 플래카드를 가지고 MLB 야구 경기에 갔어요. 또, 미국에서는 5월에 아시아계 미국인의 달이에요. 그래서 저는 대만 음식을 준비하고 대만 문화를 나눴어요. 그리고 다른 아시아 나라들의 축제가 많아서 특별한 경험이 재미있었어요. 올해에도 이것을 다시 경험할 것 같아요.
March 3, 2026
Sunset's short story
Sunset was upset. She tried to calm herself down, but it didn’t end well. She wondered, if there’s somepony who struggled as much as she right now. Hooves touched the grass under her, and no matter how she tried – she couldn’t stop thinking about it, about Celestia’s task; she noticed how sunlight filtered through branches and leaves, wrapping her in warmth. Such a beautiful thing, and Sunset noticed an irony about her and the sun rays – Sunset’s mane symbolized her tendency to made fast decisions and sometimes be mad at someone; the sun emit warmth, just like Sunset, but in other way. She wandered through the park, but still, she couldn’t do it, she couldn’t find a courage to make a friend. How it’s possible to be failed in such easy task? Maybe she should give it another shot.
March 3, 2026
Le vent
Qu'est-ce que vous pensez du vent? Avant de devenir une marin, en général je ne pense pas du vent...seulement quand il y a un ouragan ou une tornade. Mais maintenent, je pense du vent chaque jour. S'il n'y a pas de vent, on ne peux pas bouger notre voilier. S'il y a trop de vent, ce n'est pas prudent de bouger notre voilier. Quand on est en un mouillage, s'il y a trop peut de vent, il fait très chaud, parce que on est généralmente dans les climes tropicals, et on n'utilise pas notre climatisation. S'il y a trop de vent, on s'inquiéte que notre voilier ou un autre bateau glisse et choquer avec des autres bateaux. J'etude le meteo chaque matin et notre jour est dictée pour ce qui je vois.
March 3, 2026
March 3, 2026
Demander aux directions
« Bonjour ! Excusez-moi, où se trouve la boulangerie, s'il vous plaît ? »
« Bonjour ! La boulangerie, c'est près d'ici. Allez tout droit, tournez à gauche, tournez a droite et puis allez tour droit encore une fois. C'est à côté de l'église. »
« Merci ! Et où est la piscine, s'il vous plaît ? C'est près d'ici aussi ? »
« Non. La piscine est très loin d'ici, à environ trente minutes à pied. »
« D'accord, merci beaucoup ! Au revoir. »
March 3, 2026
March 3, 2026
Viajes al extranjero.
No he viajado pero un pocissimo. Si pudiera ir en cualquier sitio, sería muy difícil elegir dónde. ¡Son muchas cosas ver!
Quiero ver escocia. Me encanta le los castillos y el campo y el acento de escocia.
Además, quiero ver nuevo zelanda, es muy, muy hermosa. Especialmente me gustaría ver la playa donde donde rodaron una de las primeras escenas de la película El príncipe Caspian.
Admiro la cultura de Japón, y me gustaría visitar ese país.
March 3, 2026
March 3, 2026
Les langues que je parle
Je viens de l'Angleterre alors je parle anglais comme langue maternelle.
À l'école primaire, comme presque tous les enfants en Angleterre, j'ai commencé d'apprendre le français. À ce moment-là, c'était seulement les phrases simples comme les saluations et les mots pour les fruit que nous apprenaient. J'ai continué d'apprendre le français pendant l'école secondaire et maintenant je peut comprendre beaucoup de français, mais mon niveau d'expression orale et d'expression écrite est plus base. C'est pourquoi je viens d'utiliser ce site.
Pendant l'université je suivais un cours de chinois. C'est une langue tellement differente de l'anglais et le français. Par exemple, il n'y existe pas les tenses comme dans la plupart des langues européennes.
Il y a plusieurs langues que je voudrais apprendre comme l'islandais, le gallois et le japonais par exemple, mais la prochaine langue que je vais apprendre est l'espanol.