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Mi Propósito
Mi propósito (o pasión) es para glorificar a Dios, que me ha salvado gracias a su hijo, como se dice en La Biblia:
Romans 3:10
'Como se escribe no hay justo, nadie'
Romans 6:23
'Porque el salario del pecado es la muerte, pero el don de Dios es la vida eterna por medio de Jesucristo nuestro Señor'
John 3:16
'Porque Dios amó tanto al mundo que dio a su hijo unigénito, para que todo aquel que cree en él no perezca sino que tenga vida eterna'
Dec. 11, 2025
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Prüfung
In zwei Tagen muss ich meine Telc C1 Prüfung ablegen, weshalb ich heute mit meiner Familie nach der Türkei gekommen bin. Ich bin zwar nervös, ich glaube jedoch, dass ein bisschen Stress einem zugutekommt. Denn alle Sinne sind verschärft und man kann sich besser konzentrieren. Ohnehin ich hoffe, dass ich die gewünschte Leistung erbringe und die Prüfung bestehen kann.
Dec. 11, 2025
Une petite histoire sur Julian
C'était la nuit avant que le Noël et Julian était tellement hâte pour le matin. Il pensait du grand dîner ils mangeraient et tous les cadeaux qu'il recevrait.
Il aimait le Noël plus que les autres fêtes comme l'Halloween ou la Pâques, parce que les décorations et le sentiment de joie autour de Noël était unique.
Il a fermé les yeux et s'endormit en rêvant du lendemain matin.
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Quel bon service ! -- Partie finale
Juste quand je mettais la main dans la poche de mon pantalon pour la sortir, je me suis souvenu que je ne portais plus mon portefeuille.
J'avais décidé de ne plus le porter, et n'utiliser que mon portable.
De plus, je n'avais aucune photo de mes documents comme la réceptionniste m'avait demandé.
Je portais ma carte d'accès au travail. Elle l'a vue et lue, elle en était satisfaite !
Elle m'a dit de m'asseoir et attendre qu'une des techniciennes appelle mon prénom. Et que cela pouvait tarder environ quarante-six minutes.
Je n'ai pas attendu plus de quinze.
Dec. 11, 2025
Dec. 11, 2025
Un ensayo .La tema es La música y nuestro estado emocional
La música es un aspecto muy importante en nuestra vida. Está presente en todas las celebraciones y en los distintos momentos que pasamos durante nuestro desarrollo como personas.
Creo que la música influye profundamente en nuestra esencia y nos muestra que todo se puede sentir mejor si tenemos una melodía adecuada.
La música tiene la capacidad de relajarnos y puede provocar emociones como alegría o tristeza. Obtenemos la oportunidad de recordar momentos importantes cuando nos conectamos con las canciones que escuchamos diariamente.
Además, en momentos duros, ella puede asistir de una manera especial; por ejemplo, con un ritmo energético nos puede ayudar a sentirnos más animadas y más motivadas para conseguir todo lo que deseamos.
En conclusión, la música es una herramienta poderosa que nos ayuda a acercarnos a otros seres vivos. Su influencia en nuestro estado emocional es algo imprescindible si queremos estar en equilibrio con nosotros mismos.
Dec. 11, 2025
Ötegezegenler
Bilim adamları birçok ötegezegen zaten buldu. Ötegezegenlerin özellikleri Dünyamız'ınkine benzerdir ve onlarda hayat olabilir. Diğer gezegenlerdeki hayat bir gün bulunacak mı? Bu zamanlarımızın büyük sorudur! Uzay insanlığın eski bir hayalıdır. Bilimkurgu filmleride, yeni bir gezegen kolonileştiren insanları görebiliyoruz. Ama ışık yılı uzaklıktaki gezegenlere gezmek enerji deli bir miktarını gerektirdi. Her şeyden önce ışığın süratından daha hızlı gezmemizi sağlayan bir teknolojiye ihtiyacımız olurdu... Bilimkurgu filmlerini çok seviyorum fekat gerçeğe hiç dönüşmeyeceğini düşünüyorum. Yıldızlardaki gerçek dışı rüyaları takip etmeye çalışmak yerine, Dünyamız'ın şimdiki sorunlarını çözmek için kaynakları kullanmak iyi olurdu.
Dec. 11, 2025
Do you like looking at the moon？
I love looking at the moon. I think noting in particular while I look, but that peaceful time in the moonlight make my mind calm. Then, I can go to sleep well. By the way, does NASA's project which the human being stands on the moon progress? I want to see that one day.
Dec. 11, 2025
I want to be young and beautiful forever
I was a child who hated herself, especially her looks. I hated my hair, my skin, my body, my smile, everything. I started to like my appearance last year, but it wasn't a health way to love myself. I just liked the way the people treating me when I was 'pretty', but I started to hate that. After all, being pretty is temporary. I need to love myself, not just the way I look. I will start therapy again in 2026, so I want to became more confident. I wish that everyone can love themselves.
Dec. 11, 2025
Dec. 11, 2025
Be real or be AI stuffed?
When to choose between to really know something well and just to show that you know it is not such an easy thing to decide.
We are living in an interesting time when with a magic touch of AI everything could look ( not to be , only look but that is enough) 10 times faster, smarter, better.
Every person could do that, it is enough just ti touch some buttons 2 or 3 times and "Voila!", you have a simple cheap solution in you hand.
But it is shining and so attractively bright. No doubt it works for all, for you as well as for another people. And those people could be your bosses, customers or clients.
So you should choose. And what a tough decision it is I have to say.
You never know what is better in the eyes of another person - be natural/rustic/old fashioned or be modern/unnatural/ bright and cheap.
I was challenged by this choice during the recent interview . Nobody told me the requirements or rules. Use or do not use whatever you want. They just observed.
It was an interesting exerience.
We are living in an interesting time as I have already mentioned.
Dec. 11, 2025
First impressions matter!
How do you feel then you hear "tell me about yourself" question?
Of course , of course, the question is wrong and the interviewer should better be more open and direct and actually ask “What specifically about you meets my needs ?”.
Does not matter , we all are seasoned professionals here and know this trick perfectly.
But how to answer?
The professor Rebecca Okamoto , a Communication consulter, shows us a very good example how to do it when presenting on TEDTalk.
Tell me about yourself, but don't talk about yourself. Tell me that you can do for me in only 20 words.
Then she shows 5 main topics like help, mission, strength and others to choose from .
And she bright! She sounds confident and nice! Exactly as everybody wants to sound when answers.
Suddenly I blink and and the magic clears away, something breaks.
It is all now about appearance only. Nothing real, only words.
That is why very often corporates end up with people knowing how to talk, not to how to do the job, they master the faire-savoir instead of the savoir-faire.
Lesson learned !
I also be heaving the 20 words speach in my pocket but just to open me the way to a real achievements.
Dec. 11, 2025
Renovation Day 8
It’s the last day.
The renovation left only one task, which is caulking. I got a message that the worker will arrive at my house around noon. I headed home to let he in during my lunchtime.
Today was heavy rain. I didn’t have an umbrella, but I wore the raincoat. I walked in the rain and, of course, I all wet.
I cleaned the countertops to make easy for caulking while I am waiting him. He arrived in 10 mins after I did. He picked some tools from tool back and started caulking. A white color one was put on edge sides and a clear one was put on around sink. After that, he repaired a wall with some pink muddy item(sticky liquid?)
That was the last step for our new kitchen! (Actually, a chipped door will be replaced later, but it is not important now.) I took a picture of our kitchen and shared the results with my colleagues. They congratulated me so much!
Dec. 11, 2025
Insomnia
I had insomnia last night, the feeling was really bad.
At first, I fell asleep as usual. Suddenly, my Pomerania puppy barked crazily and I was woke up. I realized that he slipped into my bedroom and was shut in the room. Maybe he had been sleeping quietly under my bed, so I didn't notice it at all. I opened the door and he ran out of my bedroom to drink water.
Then I couldn't fall asleep anymore, I kept thinking about this and that until nearly 3 AM.
This morning, I dragged myself to the office and felt really sleepy. I planned to check out earlier and take a good rest tonight.
Dec. 11, 2025
My Wednesday!
Today I woke up at 5.20 am. I worked all day and in this moment I work.
I left tomorrow at 9 a.m.
In the evening I practiced English on Discord.
I talked with people from USA, Brazil, Egypt and Ecuador!
I was nervous at first, but now I feel happy.
I want to speak more tomorrow and improve my English.
Thank you for reading me.
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Dec. 10, 2025
Papierbescher
Heute ist mir etwas komisch passiert.
Ein Kunde wollte einen Papierbescher, aber ich wusste nicht, was war das. Ich wusste natürlich das Wort Papier, aber nicht Papierbescher. Ich dachte am Anfang, dass er sich auf Brotpapier bezöge, aber nein, ich war total falsch. Deswegen hat er wiederholen: "Papierbescher!" Ich habe dann ihm eine Kuchenunterlage gezeigt, die aus Papiel besteht, aber ich war nochmal falsch. Der Mann war entweder genervt oder frustiert, trotzdem war er nicht unhöfflich, aus diesem Grund habe ich nie die Fassung verloren. Ich habe nur gelächelt. Am Ende hat er gesagt: "Papierbescher für Kaffee!". Nun, dieses Mal habe ich ihm ein Filterpapier gezeigt. Hahaha! Ich weiß nicht, ob er eigentlich genervt oder frustiert war, oder er auslachen wollte. Schließlich habe ich mein Handy benutzt, um das Wort zu übersetzen. "Vaso de Papel" war die Übersetzung. Ahhh!! Ich habe über mich gelacht! Endlich konnte ich der Mann geben, war er wollte. Ich habe heute etwas neues gelernt!
Dec. 10, 2025
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