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Randakun

April 29, 2026

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4月29日

神様、今日も感謝いたします。デンソンさんの心をあなたに導き、イエス様について教えて下さい。イエス様の御名に於いて御祈りいたします。アーメン。

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Lizz

April 29, 2026

寒暑の差

最近は天気が不安定です。昼は暑いのに、夜は風が強くて涼しいです。そのせいで鼻水が出ました。涼しいのはいいですが、寒暑の差が激しいと大変です。

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CoffeeBeans20

April 29, 2026

Tea, Coffee, Or Hot Chocolate- Which Is Your Favorite?

咖啡还是茶？

咖啡和茶是恨好。

前，我喜欢咖啡比很茶。我想茶是不好吃。

现在，我想茶比很咖啡。冰茶很好吃。

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bea

April 29, 2026

职业抱负

今天我意识到，虽然我很喜欢现在的工作，但它并不能让我感到满足。我一直梦想成为一名记者，在当今这个动荡的时代，这似乎是一个非常有趣的职业。我发现很多文章都过于肤浅，缺乏信息。人们应该去为另类媒体工作，因为那里才会涌现出新的事物，反映出我们这个时代的真实趋势。

职业抱负

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AlasseEstel

April 29, 2026

What time do you usually eat dinner? Who do you usually eat dinner with?

La cena.

Como mi cena en la tarde con mi familia, pero la hora exacta varía. A veces comemos a las cuatro, a veces comemos a las seis.

A menudo, leo las noticias con mi padre mientras comemos.

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vikingschism

April 29, 2026

ボイスメッセージ

この前、イギリス人が大体ボイスメッセージを嫌うとの記事を読んだ。考えてみれば本当だと気付いた。テキストのメッセージを受けたら早く読んで重要な点を確認できるんだけど、その一方音声のメッセージだったらヘッドフォンを持ってない限り、人前で聴くのが出来ない。他人にそのような迷惑をかけたくないのでいつも送らない。でも、若者の間で使用が上がっているらしくて、その使わい傾向が段々変わっているだろう。その日起こった出来事などを伝えたい時は、効率とかは関係ないからボイスメッセージがいいかもしれない。

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Apfel

April 29, 2026

(2) Essen bestellen

Der Kellner: „Guten Tag, haben Sie eine Reservierung?“

Hans: „Ja. Für Cari.“

Der Kellner: „Hier entlang, bitte.“

Hans: „Danke...Hallo Cari.“

Cari: „Hallo Hans! Wie geht’s?“

Hans: „Mir geht es gut. Und du?“

Cari: „Mir geht’s nicht so gut. Ich habe Hunger.“

Hans: „Und ich habe Durst! Has du schon bestellt?“

Cari: „Noch nicht. Was möchtest du bestellen?“

Hans: „Ich weiß es nicht. Vielleicht die Suppe?“

Cari: „Die Suppe klingt lecker.“

Der Kellner: „Was möchten ihr bestellt?“

Hans: „Ich hätte gern die Suppe.“

Cari: „Ich nehme die Suppe auch. Zweimal Suppen für uns, bitte.“

Der Kellner: „Ist dat alles?“

Hans: „Ja, danke.“

Später...

Cari: „Meine Schwester hat angefangen, bei einer Bank zu arbeiten. Worüber deine Familie?“

Hans: „Meine Familie ist gut. Mein Cousin zieht bald in eine neues Haus...“

Der Kellner: „Bitte schön.“

Cari: „Danke!“

Der Kellner: „Guten Appetit.“

Hans: „Es schmeckt gut.“

Cari: „Ja!“

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rennn

April 29, 2026

The Meaning of Success

Success is a tricky concept for me. It's not as easily defined as scientific facts and mathematical axioms. I didn't know it then but I used to think that success meant gathering accolades and becoming wealthy. Part of the reason why I thought that way was society. Society often tells us that the road to success is a linear path: study well, land a high-paying job, own a nice house, and build a great family.

It all changed once I had my first taste of failure. I didn't get the accolades I desperately sought. I ran myself to the ground all for nothing. Then, I started to question what it was all for. It turned out I was merely chasing the wisps of success totally at odds with who I really am. I mistook validation for happiness.

At this point in my life, I think success is about being present in the moment. It's appreciating the little things in life while seeking to grow, one step at a time. This definition of success may not apply to everyone but it's what suits me best.

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Ahrina

April 29, 2026

主人公の話

異世界のような話を読むと、主人公は知らない所へ行って、知らない人と話して、まるでその異世界は別に特別な世界ではない。でも、私は異世界で生まれたら、世界の知恵を調べながら、危ないことを全力で避けるのは良識だと思います。
それなのに、そんな本がいっぱいあるので、普通かな？その本を読む理由は素晴らしい旅を読むのは分かりますが、どちらかというと面白い事情になってしまいます。もし主人公はすばしっこい人なら、自信を持てすぎて、何があっても、「俺なら倒せる！」と言います。もし主人公は遅い人なら、練習するのより、厳しい団体に入って、難しい依頼していてしまいます。
その理由のせいで、時々私は共感とか理解とかができません～
皆さんはどう思いますか？

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RHT

April 29, 2026

Tell me about your city.

My city

My city is Shizuoka. Shizuoka is near Mt.Fuji and sea.
Famous products are green tea, seafood, ｍusical instruments and more.

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sombershika

April 29, 2026

How has your relationship with time changed as you've gotten older? Do you value it more or less?

時間の価値

時間の価値を味わったらいいだけど、最近時間をのたのた過ごしている感じがある。一方、二年前の私より今は趣味を深く楽しんでいる。以前、仕事が終わる後家に帰ってビデオゲームをやって、携帯でスクロールしていた習慣があった。現在ビデオゲームの上に編み物、販売、読書するのを大好きだ。そして私には暇な時間は大切だと思う。
さらに、将来での残り時間に関してよく考えている。それは悲しそうだけど、死ぬことではなく、それより「三十歳になるまで何をしたらいい？」のような質問だ。子供の頃から何とかスポーツをやったり仲間のグループにいたりことがしたいだ。しかし実際に、時々ヨガをするしかスポーツをやらなく、友達のメッセージに返信するのをよく忘れてしまう。フルタイムに働いている人は、「趣味をするし友達と喋るより、暇な時間で体や心を癒す方がいい」と思われるかもしれない。但し、幸いなことに残り時間がまだたくさんある。様々な活動が試したいだと思う。人生が一つしかないだから。

時間

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sugurunyan

April 29, 2026

British understatement

During the Korean War, a tragic misinterpretation of the word "sticky" led to a significant loss of life among British troops. In 1951, the 650 men of the British Gloucestershire Regiment found themselves heavily outnumbered, fighting against 10,000 Chinese soldiers at the Imjin River.
Despite facing overwhelming odds, when an allied American general asked, "How are the Gloucesters doing?", the British commanding officer simply replied, "A bit sticky, things are pretty sticky down there."
To the British, this was a classic understatement meaning, "We are in a completely dire situation." However, the American general took it to mean, "Things are a little tough, but it's not that bad." As a result, the Americans didn't send any reinforcements.
Although the Gloucesters fought valiantly, around 500 British soldiers were ultimately killed or taken prisoner. This tragedy occurred all because the British general used an understated expression—"sticky"—that the Americans completely misunderstood.

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PhoneDiesMidGoon

April 29, 2026

Don't really know what to say.

I was freaking frustrating today by a dog water at work shift.

I thought I might going to kill him.

I'm capping. I just felt like that, not really want to do that.

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zion

April 29, 2026

Although it was a day nothing happened, dishes were yummy! w

Today, it was a day nothing special. Only I did were watching YouTube and doing weight training. It was a very boring day, but diets were yummy! I ate a steamed bread for breakfast, a chicken set meal for lunch, and cheese rice gratin. I cooked all of them! I don't know why meals made by myself are delicious like that. Although today dairy entry is as short as yesterday one, I'll finish writing it because I am very sleepy...

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913emesalazar

April 29, 2026

Hello

Hi, I haven't had the time to write these past weeks, and honestly my mind forgot to begin. I think it's complicated to study the language as well as the law degree, to be a mom and work. Well, I might be wrong. My routine usually starts at 5:00 AM and ends 9:00 PM or 10: 00 PM. I usually rest on Sundays; the rest of the days I try to get everything done. Maybe it is not as complicated as I see it. Even so, thank you for your corrections, have a good day everyone.

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shirley

April 29, 2026

Diary

I’ll go back to home tomorrow!!!!!!! Two classes left!

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yuutarou1221

April 29, 2026

Today tired.

Today I feel very tired.
Therefore I decided to today is holiday.
I will sleep soon.

english

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Kyactus

April 29, 2026

Was haben Sie gestern gemacht?

Gestern

Gestern bin ich zum Theater gegangen. Es war nicht real Theater, es war eine Schauspiel von alte Frauen die in diese Stadt seit viele Jahre wohne.
Sie schilderten seine Erinnerungen, als unseren Stadt viele anderse war. Leute waren viel armer, aber es war eine großer Gemeinschaftsgefühl. Ich mag meine Zeit lieber.

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rennn

April 29, 2026

Write about a time where you challenged your pre-existing worldview. Why? Would you do this again?

On Reevaluating Worldviews

When I was younger, I used to be an ardent believer in capitalism. I believed that it was the system that brought the most prosperity to humanity. I was convinced that the invisible hand of the market fairly distributed wealth among all sectors of society. I thought that poverty was born out of generations of poor decisions and laziness. But then, cracks began to appear in my former mindset after I discovered that corporations account for most of the pollution on the planet. I was shocked that the prevailing supply chains and the life cycle of commodities led to so much waste and inhumane working conditions. This started a rabbit hole of research into the systemic inequalities inherent in the current system. I found out that the average employee's wages and labor aren't commensurate with the amount of profit they bring to their companies. My laissez-faire assumption that corporate profits will trickle down to the masses was shattered by the realities on the ground. It turned out that corporations are primarily profit-driven and will do whatever it takes to maximize said profit, even if it means exploiting their employees and consumers. For capitalism to work, it requires an underclass who have no choice but to be paid peanuts. Thus, it is in their best interests to pursue policies that ensure a steady supply of cheap and compliant workforce.

It was an eye-opening experience to say the least. I felt uncomfortable and disturbed throughout the whole process since it led to painful realizations. I had to confront the fact that I was sorely mistaken and naive in my earlier convictions. However, it was necessary. It made me realize that we have to confront and interrogate the contradictions that exist in our society. We have to be critical of not only the status quo, but also ourselves in order to grow. I do not regret this experience one bit and would gladly relive it.

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Carolus

April 29, 2026

Correction : Notre séjour à Munich.

Ma femme et moi, nous avons visité Munich récemment.
Notre hôtel était très près d'une station de métro
L'hôtel était près de la place centrale du vieux Munich.
Nous nous avons flâné dans la vieille ville.
Nous nous sommes promenés le long des boulevards de Munich.
Nous nous sommes tellement amusés que nous ne voulions pas rentrer.

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Monsieur_Elephant

April 29, 2026

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What is the hardest thing about learning your target language?

Türkçedeki en zor şey

Söylemezdim ki Türkçe çok zor (neticede dil çok muntazam) ama Türkçe dilin yapı mantığı anadilimin mantığından çok farklıydır (aslında bazen tam ters mantık var). Genel sözdizimi, ekler, ilişkili cümleler, fiiler, her şey farklı. Kelimelerin çoğu Farsçadan, Arapçadan ve elbette Türk köklerinden geldi.

O farklı sözdizimi yüzünden Türkçe bir cümle duyuğumda/okuduğumda, bunu anlamak için beyinimin zamanı ihtiyacı var. Cümledeki her elemanın görevi anlamak için bu elemanları aklımda bölmek zorundayım.

Sanırım Hint-Avrupa dillerini öğrenen Türklerin aynı sorunları var. Bu doğru, herhangi bir dilin öğrenmesinde bu sorunlar görülür fakat kimse diğer bir aileden bir dili öğrendiğinda, farkla çok açık olur. Belki bir gün Türkçe’yi nefes almak kadar doğal anlayacağım!

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lewisjay_18

April 29, 2026

日記ー5

今日、音楽について書きたいと思う。私は音楽が大好きだ。歌詞の意味が分からなってもまだ聞いて楽しんでるよ。話せない言語の音楽ではケイポップやジェイポップ、スペイン語の音楽を聞いてる。スペイン語の音楽には韓国語の音楽の「ケイポップ」みたいな短い呼び方があるかな?知らない…とにかく、私はフランス語と英語の音楽も聞いてる。小学生と中学生時代時々フランス語の曲をクラスで歌っていたので今でもたくさんの曲を知ってる。

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curious_owl

April 29, 2026

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Roxane (2019)

En Australie, on a deux diffuseurs publics : l’ABC, qui diffuse des nouvelles, des films et des séries australiens, et le SBS, qui diffuse des nouvelles, des films et des séries internationaux. On peut regarder ces programmes gratuitement à la télé ou en ligne. Alors, j’utilise parfois le SBS pour regarder des films en français, pour pratiquer ma compréhension orale. Aujourd’hui j’ai regardé le film « Roxane ». C’est une comédie française sortie en 2019. Il s'agit d'un producteur d'œufs qui doit sauver sa ferme en utilisant le réseau social. Au début du film, on rencontre Raymond, qui est un fermier à Corlay, en Bretagne. On voit que Raymond aime beaucoup la pièce « Cyrano de Bergerac ». Chaque matin, il lit un passage de la pièce à ses poules. Il a aussi une poule qui est son animal de compagnie, nommé Roxane. Elle est une poule blanche, tandis que toutes ses poules pondeuses sont brunes. Elle est donc vraiment reconnaissable parmi les autres poules ! Quand Raymond va à la réunion de la coopérative des producteurs d'œufs, il apprend qu’ils ne vont pas continuer à acheter ses œufs bio. Ils veulent des œufs produits en masse, des poules en cage. D’abord, Raymond est vraiment triste. Ensuite, il décide de sauver sa ferme par les vidéos sur YouTube. Il vise à « faire le buzz » (ses mots), en jouant des scènes de « Cyrano de Bergerac ». Il recrute sa voisine anglaise (pour moi, c'était une belle surprise pour être capable d’identifier son accent tout de suite : j'espère que cela signifie que ma compréhension s'améliore). Elle est professeur de théâtre, et elle lui enseigne tous les meilleurs écrivains français hormis Rostand, comme Molière et d’autres. C’est une histoire réconfortante et douce, et j’ai apprécié.

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jintor

April 29, 2026

自分にノート

今日は休暇後の初めての仕事日です。だから本当に忙しい。実は、今はまだ仕事に働きます。だから、今日の書くことは後で私を読みたいリンクだけです。

https://jtalkonline.com/a-simple-trick-to-improve-speaking-japanese-as-a-beginner/

仕事に戻ります。

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Tammy

April 29, 2026

The Essential Structure of Chinese: Mastering SVO

(In the previous previous post, I received a lot of help. So, I would like to write something useful to give back to this friendly community.)

Having corrected Chinese articles on LangCorrect for several years, I've noticed a very common and serious issue: even among learners who have been writing consistently, many sentences are often confusing or unclear.

The root of the problem is usually not a lack of vocabulary, but a misunderstanding of the core skeleton of Chinese grammar—the Subject-Verb-Object (SVO) structure.

So, what is SVO?

Chinese sentence structure is actually very logical. In the vast majority of cases, it follows a simple formula: Subject + Verb + Object.
Subject (主语): The main character of the sentence. It answers "Who?"
Verb (谓语): The action taken by the subject. It answers "Does what?"
Object (宾语): The receiver of the action. It answers "To what?"

Here is the simplest example:
我 (Subject) 吃 (Verb) 苹果 (Object).
(I eat apples.)

As you can see, the basic order is the same as in English. If you can identify these three elements correctly, your sentence is already 90% there!

Next time you write a Chinese sentence, try this "subtraction method": Ignore the time (yesterday, tomorrow) and place (at school, at home) for a moment.
First, write down the core skeleton: Who + Does + What -- just like English.
Then, insert the time and place (usually before the verb or at the very beginning of the sentence)-- not like English anymore!!!

For example, if you want to say, "Yesterday I ran happily in the park for a while," start with the skeleton: 我跑步 (I run). Then, build the rest of the sentence around it(我昨天在公园里愉快地跑了一会儿步).