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Ich schreibe ein E-mail an meinen Freund
Lieber Max,
es tut mir sehr leid, dass du zu meiner Feier nicht kommst, weil du sehr Krank war. Wie geht es dir jetzt?. Meine Feier war sehr toll. Viele Freunde haben gekommen und ich bekam viele Geschenken. Meine Lieblingsgeschenk war eine Gitarre, die Luisa mir gibt. Das ist ein besonderes Geschenk für mich, denn ich bin Musiker und ich brauche immer neue Instrumenten zu haben. Ich freue mich darüber, dass Luisa meine wirkliche Leidenschaft kennt.
Ich möchte dir einen Vorschlag machen. Möchtest du bei mir zum Konzert von Imagine Dragons gehen?. Sie spielen nächster Monat.
Zuerst könnten wir uns dieses Wochenende treffen. Hast du freie Zeit am Samstag?. Ich kann mich ab 14:00 Uhr treffen. Schreib mir, wenn du kannst.
Liebe Grüße
Bastián
April 18, 2022
roller skating
I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for physical and mental health. Especially, if you have a sedentary work, like me. For myself, I chose roller skating, it is a good hobby. Skating gives a necessary activity, also you can do various trick. It improve coordination and switch your brain from routine.
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April 18, 2022
Sollen die Eltern streng zu den Kindern sein?
Erfahrung:
Mein Vater ist ein strenger Mann. Deshalb habe ich immer das Gefühl, meine Freiheit verloren zu haben und bin extrem wütend. Aber später fand ich heraus, dass alles, was er tat, gut für mich war, und dafür war ich sehr dankbar.
Heimatland:
In Vietnam sind fast alle Eltern streng mit ihren Kindern. Weil sie alle wollen, dass ihre Kinder gute Menschen werden. Es gibt aber auch Menschen, die mit ihren Kindern sehr verwöhnt sind und ihnen oft wenig Aufmerksamkeit schenken.
Vor- und Nachteile:
Wenn Eltern streng mit ihren Kindern sind, wird das Kind wissen, wie es sich verhalten und mit Situationen klug umgehen muss. Nicht nur das, sie können auch ihre Lebenserfahrungen mit den Kindern teilen.
Negativ finde ich, dass Kinder auch sehr abhängig von ihren Eltern sein können. Manchmal können sie keine Entscheidungen über ihr Leben treffen. Auch vielen Kindern mangelt es an Selbstvertrauen. Das ist eine schlechte Sache.
Meinung:
Meiner Meinung nach sollten Eltern streng mit ihren Kindern sein. Aber das ist nicht immer gut. Vor allem müssen sie ihren Kindern zuhören und sie verstehen.
April 18, 2022
Sollen Kinder im Haushalt helfen?
Erfahrung:
Da meine Eltern sehr beschäftigt sind, mache ich jeden Tag Haushalt. Dank dessen weiß ich, wie man viele Dinge tut, wie Kochen, Geschirr spülen, usw. Ich fühle mich sehr glücklich, obwohl ich manchmal sehr müde bin.
Heimatland:
In Vietnam wird der Großteil der Hausarbeit von Frauen erledigt.Troztdem gibt es auch viele Familien, die Putzfrauen mieten, weil die Eltern sehr beschäftigt mit der Arbeit sind.
Vor- und Nachteile:
Ein Vorteil ist, dass sich Eltern nach einem anstrengenden Arbeitstag erholen können, wenn ihre Kinder ihnen im Haushalt helfen. Besonders lernen die Kinder mehr, selbstständig zu sein und anderen Leuten zu helfen. Nicht nur, dass sich die Mitglieder bei der Haushalt besser verstehen.
Neben den Vorteile gibt es natürlich auch Nachteile. Negativ finde ich, dass sich Kinder verletzen können, wenn sie nicht aufpassen. Wenn Eltern ihnen zu viel Haushalt geben, können sie möglicherweise ihre Hausaufgaben nicht machen oder haben keine Zeit, an anderen Aktivitäten teilzunehmen.
Meinung:
Meiner Meinung nach sollten Kinder ihren Eltern bei der Haushalt helfen. Darüber hinaus muss man zwischen Studium und Haushalt balancieren, damit dir keine Arbeit fehlt.
April 18, 2022
18 avril 2022 - enseigner et apprendre
Au delà des cours particuliers que je donne aux élèves, je répond souvent à des questions de l’étude dentisterie, et donc une de mes camardes a dit que je pourrais aussi être tutrice pour eux ou les juniors. Mais en fait, je pose aussi beaucoup de questions à mes professeurs et mes seniors.
Comme l’épreuve final s’approche, il y a un camarade que me pose des questions tous les jours. Ça me prend du temps à lui expliquer chaque question. Je pense que je fais de bénévolat mais en fait je « gagne » aussi parce que j’ai appris quelque chose quand même.
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April 18, 2022
Conversation 2 about Crayon Shin-chan the Movie
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?
I'd like to know common colloquial phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
A: Have you seen this?
B: I didn't.
A: I recommend this one too!
It may not be make a hit with foreigners as "Sengoku", but it is also a Classic of Japanese anime!
B: What's the story?
A: A story about a villain who tries to return Japan to the Showa era.
B: That sounds interesting. I'll watch it!
-10days later
A: Have you seen it?
B: I watched it!
It was good.
A: What is your score out of 10?
B: Hmmm, 7!
A: Low!
B: Is that so?
What about you?
A: 9
B: High!
Was it that good?
A: it's based on the motif of Japan in the Showa period, so it may be difficult for foreigners to understand many scenes of it.
B: But that was before you were born too, right?
A: I've seen a lot of stuff on TV and stuff.
B: I see.
Didn't Shin-chan grow up quite a bit?
A: The reason for his actions was Shinchan who doesn't change, he protected the future cause he'll wanna date with many women in the future.
B: But I could understand how the villain felt.
A: Me too!
I understand so much about wanting to go back to those days and stay the way I were.
But this work makes me think, like "That’s not any good." "Move forward.!"
B: Good point.
By the way, there really were places like that, weren't there?
A: Yes, there was, before I was born.
It said on tv the Osaka-Kansai Japan Expo will be held again in 2025.
B: Oh, good! I'd like to go there.
A: Let's go together!
April 18, 2022
William aggiusta il sistema educativo 😲😲 parte 1
Non sono un professore, però penso che ci siano delle cose nel sistema educativo che avrebbero dovuto essere cambiate o rimosse molto tempo fa, perché sono completamente inutili. Ovviamente, come avevo già detto, non sono un professore però sono un studente, quindi tutto ciò che sarò detto qui è detto del punto di vista d'un studente.
La prima cosa che mi viene in mente è la matematica. Guarda, la matematica deve finire, boh, dopo il quinto anno di scuola, più o meno. Tutta la merda che ci insegnano dopo le frazioni semplici non serve a nessuno!
D'accordo, mi correggo: non serve a me, perché io voglio fare musicista. Diciamo così: dopo un certo punto, la matematica deve diventare un materiale opzionale.
April 18, 2022
Today's journal
I went to the book store today. I started to study Chineses, so I wanted to buy a small vocabulary book.
I tried to make a bread today. I put the yeast in the flour, mixed and waited. But it didn't finish it's fermentation. I found the recipe on internet and it said I needed just a hour to ferment. But had to wait until night. I couldn't help decide to make it tomorrow. I thought my yeast was a little different. It was not a normal dry yeast. It was something different. It takes long time usually. I had to remember that but I couldn't. It's my fault. I wanted to make Turkey style bread. And using it, I planed to make the Gyros, the Greek sandwich. I had a plan. I prepared the pork , tomatoes and some green vegetables. I also had an yogurt for sauce. But today, in a shame, it's impossible. It's too late now. Tomorrow is the day.
My girl friend poured her flowerpot over. It was on the window frame and when she opened the window, it hit the pot and it fell. It didn't broke but the soil spilled out. I could settle it. I brushed the soil and scooped it up to the pot. Then I wiped the floor with a rag. I poured a cup of water over it because the plant seemed to lose its vitality.
There was chicken breasts in the refrigerator. It was not frozen. It was in the fridge not the freezer. I had been worrying it had gone bad. So I made the chicken curry with it. There was a potato in cabinet. I hid it because it has not to be exposed by sun. I found it and used it to cook.
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April 18, 2022
Putting ink
Because I use a fountain pen, I have to put ink in it regularly.
There are two types of function pens how to put ink.
Some fountain pens are the piston type that I don't need extra equipments.
Others are the cartridge type that I need for extra tools to refill the cartridge.
Sometimes the ink gets on my hands when I put in.
However, it is fun to change the color of the ink when writing, so I want to keep using a fountain pen.
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April 18, 2022
Essay: Energy for a tourist island (C1 CAE)
You have watched and listened to a video on Youtube about which form of renewable energy would be best for a tourist island. You have made the notes below:
Which form of renewable energy would be best for a tourist island?
- Wind turbines
- Solar Panels
- Nuclear power
Some opinions expressed in the discussion:
- “Nuclear power is a sustainable energy source that reduces carbon emissions.”
- “Wind turbines would destroy the landscape of the island. “
- “We couldn’t be 100% powered by solar panels.”
Write an essay discussing two of the renewable energy forms in your notes- You should explain which form of renewable energy would be best for a tourist island, giving reasons in support of your answer.
You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
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What could make it sound more natural ?
I recently watched an interesting Youtube video, in which several participants discussed an unusual environmental topic: the best energy source to keep a tourist island running. The debate was focused on two types of sources especially, these were wind and nuclear power.
Regarding nuclear power, to my way of thinking there is no point in using this type of energy. First of all, it is not renewable and therefore not sustainable, unlike it was expressed during the discussion; but more importantly, residual generated remained as radioactive for thousands of years, causing a deleterious damage in the ocean, which it is not a good advertisement for tourists.
Beyond that fact, a nuclear power station is excessive only for an island, even for one with the size of Australia.
Wind is a real renewable energy and a reliable one for an island, since there is often a vast ocean surrounding it, which is an almost endless surface to this purpose. In this sense, there is no need of and it will be impracticable using any square meter of landscape, as it was said in the debate. In short, is a clean, cheap and renewable source of energy, which fit perfectly in a tourist island, where oceanic wind currents will provide plenty of energy for the extra needed, for example, for leisure activities.
To conclude, wind turbines seem to be the best candidates to cover an island's energy supply, yet it is only for tourists, whereas a nuclear power plant have only disadvantages in this specific context.
April 18, 2022
Великобритания
Великобритания была колонизатором многих стран в прошлом. В тот период, британские старались влиять на захваченные страны через язык, обычаи и религию. Между моментами битв и принудительного образования, солдаты королевы, а также министры, решили украсть шедевры и произведения из деревень в качестве трофеев.
В настоящее время, британские музеи ещё сохраняет такие объекты, и когда приводятся выставки надписи рядом с экспонатами гордо информируют посетителям того, из каких стран взяли объекты. Итак, должна ли Великобритания возвращать художественные изделия странам происхождения?
Рассуждение того, что объекты под владением Великобритании из-за того, что у родин нет ресурсов, чтобы защищать свое своимущество-нет смысла. Большинство стран успели набирать обороты в технологической области, и у них уже есть приборы и сооружения, чтобы удержать воров и предотвратить разрушение объектов. Кроме того, перевозку имущества из одной страны в другой нужно что-то вроде разрешения. Если родине не даст добро, то никто не будет мочь его взять. Это фундамент нашего общества-уважение к другим.
April 18, 2022
Le pirat
Nous ne sommes pas là pour boire le thé. En ce moment tu es à cote de pirates, on fait ce qu'on veut. On n'a jamais dire que nous sommes les hommes honorables. Si tu traverses la mer tu te battes avec des pirates. On est libre il y a aucune de règles pour nous. Tu as tué un de mes hommes donc maintenant ç'est à toi. Est-ce que tu as vraiment tué sans être prêt à mourir toi-même. Si tu as peur de combat ne t'approche pas.
April 18, 2022
A Discussion
"People's thoughts can be divided into different levels"
I have to say that I can't agree more with this saying.
As people mentioned Fang Zhouzi earlier and led a heated discussion, I want to say something about him.
I don't know much about him to be honest, but I did watch one of his videos before. I didn't finish watching it because I think I quickly got an impression of him.
I don't think he is a capable person, and even that he is not as normal as others.
I know his educational background, and sounds like he is really awesome, but I don't think so.
Do people who have high diplomas are always better than those who don't? No, it's definitely not.
I have to admit that oftentimes I judge people by my intuition-based on their words and deeds, and I think this method works most of the time. At least for me.
It's true that Fang has a very good educational background, but why do I think he is not a capable person?
In the early 1980s, when students graduated from middle schools, their first choices were going to secondary specialized schools because if students were qualified to go to a secondary specialized school, that means they had already gained the opportunity to work in the government.
The passing rate of being a secondary specialized school student was only 3-5 percent. If you couldn't be in the top three places in your class, you probably would never pass the exams.
If you were qualified to be a secondary specialized school student and did not go to that school, you could go to a provincial key high school, but if you couldn't pass the university entrance examination, you still had to go back to your village to be a farmer for your entire life.
After taking a few years of the examination for entering secondary specialized schools and all failed, some students had to go to an ordinary high school, but some of them finally had the chance to pass the university entrance examination.
Ironic?
Do you think people who failed to go to secondary specialized schools before and finally had the chance to go to universities are more capable than people who passed the exams for going to secondary specialized schools?
Yeah, I know, those university students have higher diplomas than students from secondary specialized schools.
To the same person, having a long educational history is most likely more capable than having short.
People who are three out of 100 are always better than ten out of 100.
Educational background is like a journey. Although some people are not very good at it, they keep going forward to the end, while others are very talented, but they leave for some reason half of the way.
So people who have a nice educational background don't necessarily mean they are more capable than people who don't.
Talented people can understand things at only a glance, while not talented people need to understand things many times.
That is what talent is.
April 18, 2022
I have feelings for someone but I'm in a relationship.
This is a common situation that usually happens around us. We often feel a little bit heartbeat when we meet someone who is our type. We have a lot of times of heartbeats in our life, but we don’t need to get with those nice people together. Do you drop off flowers every time when you think they are pretty? Do you swim on seas every time when you think they are beautiful? Also, do you get with people together when you think they are nice?
We can’t give up our real treasure for pursuing something new. We can’t break up with our partners who truly love us because we find someone new. You will feel boring even if you get into a new relationship someday because every relationship is like that. Don’t follow the feelings, follow the heart. The truly love usually happens after passion and lust. Please cherish those people who accompany you no matter who they are.
The above is my honest words but I know it usually doesn’t work for a person who wants to get into the world of immoral and taboo. Please tell your partner the truth that you are starting to fall in love with the other person if you can’t stop thinking that you want to get into a new relationship. At least you should keep honest with your partner who has been hurt.
The above are my suggestions. I hope they can help you and your partner is doing well.
Thank you for reading.
April 18, 2022
Stoicism
I have read a book about stoicism and I'm really surprised. I studied philosophy in school but noone never told me about a philosophy of live. Well, I'm lying. I have read about budism but it's too exotic for me.
After reading the book I feel that those ideas can really change my live. I really believe that to be happy you need to think properly, and it's the first time that someone offer me the tools to do it.
Look about it, I recomend you!
April 18, 2022
日本の就職
私は日本に住みたいから、ひたすらに就職活動をしています。今年のうちに日本に引っ越したくて、実は３ヶ月以内に行けたらいいと思っています。コロナの時代には日本の国境はまったく閉まっていたけど、最近仕事のために国境が開き始めました。なので、やっと、たくさん会社に連絡して応募しています。
私はシニアソフトウェアエンジニアでも、今までアメリカでしか働いていなかったから、日本の仕事のことがまだ分かりません。たとえば、日本の会社とか、日本の人気のあるテックとか、日本のエンジニアの平均の給料とかまだ習っています。なので、そういうことをしっかりと研究しています。
幸い、今まで連絡した会社はほとんど私に返事をくれました。私にいくつかのオンラインのプログラミングの挑戦を送ってくれました。それらのテストに合格したら、会社は私に連絡して、オフィシャルの面接を始めるべきです。
ところで、ほとんどのテックの会社は英語はオフィシャルの言語でも、私はまだ日本語をペラペラになりたいです！日本語の能力は働くのが必要じゃなくても、日本に住んでいるために、社会人になるために、それから日常を楽しむために、日本語は肝心だと思います！
April 18, 2022
Un viaje a la finca
Ante ayer, tuve la oportunidad de ir a una finca y para mí fue una experiencia especial. Antes de contar la historia, te pongo en contexto. Nací en una ciudad enorme y crecí en las afueras de otra ciudad enorme. Por eso, me siento muy cómodo en cualquier ciudad. Navegar por un sistema de transporte en la hora pico en otro idioma? No hay problema. Andar con un sexto sentido para que no te roben? Manejable. Estacionarme en paralelo? La primera vez. El lugar donde me siento muy incomodo es en el campo. Pero después de pasar tiempo en una finca, todo empezó a cambiar...
April 18, 2022
Conversation about Crayon Shin-chan the Movie
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?🙇♂️
I'd like to know common colloquial phrases！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
A: Have you seen "Sengoku"?
B: I Watched it!
It was very good!
A: Oh, that's good!
Did you cry?
B: I didn't cry.
A: Seriously?
B: Did you cry?
A: I cried ten times.
B: That many?
A: I cried.
That time when you can't say what you want to say fits the theme of unfulfilled love so well, doesn't it? Even Shinnosuke couldn't tell the truth until the very end, and he kept his promise to Matabei by taking the action of "Kincho".
B: "Kincho" enhances quality of this movie.
A: Yeah, exactly!
Also, Matabee's end made me cry.
B: Oh, I almost cried there!
A: Yeah, I can relate! I was crying the scene, though. Haha
But some anime lovers have a bit of a problem with that scene.
B: Why?
A: Crayon Shin-chan is an anime about never-ending daily life, so Shinnosuke is not allowed to cry
B: Not allowed to cry?
A: Yes, crying means growing up, which is not allowed in anime where the age range is the same all the time!
If Shin-chan cries, people who see a different story will feel strange because he should have grown up by crying at that time.
B: I see.
A: Well, I don't really care.
B: Me too.
I don't really think that's a good idea.
A: I'm with you.
B: Also, the last scene where he looks up at the sky was very moving.
A: Fo sho.
It felt like they were connected, even though it was a different time.
The contrast between Ren looking up at the sky alone in a time when it was not allowed to fall in love because of her status, and everyone looking up at the sky together because they were born in a time when it was possible to fall in love with anyone and build a family was very well done.
B: True.
There is a live-action version of this movie, right?
A: Yeah! It's not good at all, though.
B: Really?
A: This movie is about an impossible love caused by a system that can never be praised, but it doesn't be dipicted it properly as a movie.
B: For example?
A: The theme of not being able to say "I love you" is important, but the main character in the live-action version just says, "Matabei likes the princess."
The title of the movie is ballad. No ballad. It's brat.
B: That's helpless...
A: It's the worst movie ever because there are so many other things that aren't good!
B. Also, I was just wondering what's a nanban-do?
A. Old armor, I guess.
April 18, 2022
Conversation about meals
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
b What did you have for breakfast?
a I didn't eat breakfast today.
b Same.
What about Lunch?
a soba and yogurt.
bWhat's soba?
a buckwheat noodles!
bOh, good! Easy on the stomach!
aI'm only kind to my stomach.
b Yeah, that's right.
What about dinner?
a Salmon grilled salted.
B: Salted?
A: Japanese style grilled salmon is salted salmon.
B: Oh, It's very Japanese.
A: Yeah.
What did you eat today?
B: I didn't eat breakfast too, had shrimp pasta with cream sauce for lunch, and steak, hashed beef rice and cabbage for dinner!
A: You had bid dinner!
B: Oh,yeah? Cause I was starving.
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