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il mio giorno perfetto
il mio giorno perfetto
mi sveglio a tardi e sederso in il mio letto per un po' di tempo poi vado a cucina e mangio colazione é guardo youtube con il mio cibo. Poi vado a la mia camera per fare l'art e parlare co i miei amici a online. Mi ricorderò a portare acqua a mia fiori così non hanno morire. Dopo faccio una doccia, posso leggere un libero in il mio letto e se voglio dormire, posso.
April 17, 2022
la mia scuola
a la mia scuola, devo ho uniforme
le insegnante é molto stresso a le uniforme perché si dicono é buono practica per il lavoro in futuro.
se le scarpe di tu é mal, devi andare a una camera in solo per il giorno e anche per una ora dopo la scuola
anche la mia scuola non ha capelli di colori divertente
April 17, 2022
oggi (16/4/22)
oggi, non sono farato molto perché alzato dal letto in tardi a 13:45
poi andato a parlare con la mia madre e mangiare colazione
poi sedato in mio letto per un po' ore é ho disegnato un foto a un uomo lui mangiato torte
dopo, sono andato a parlare con mio padre e lui portato a me una uova di cioccolato per lo Easter presto
tardi in la notte, sono parlato con mio ragazzo ma era triste perché i genitori di lui era discutato
April 17, 2022
April 16, 2022
April 16, 2022
Duftmarketing
Ich habe mir eine Sendung angeschaut, in der über Duftmarketing gesprochen wurde. Vorher wusste ich nicht, dass solche Marketing sogar existiert.
Es wurde behauptet, dass die Duft einen großen Einfluss zu den Käufern machen könnte. Der Geruchssinn ist direkt mit dem Gehirn verbunden und genauer gesagt mit dem ältesten Teil des Gehirns: das lymbisches System, aus denen Gefühle, Erinnerung und generelle Emotionen kontrolliert werden.
Als Beispiel kann man Folgendes nennen: wenn man unruhig vor einer wichtigen Situation ist, kann man Lavenden richen und dadurch sich ein bisschen mehr entspannter manchen. Dieser Mechanismus kann auch in Laden oder Geschäfte passieren, allerdings ohne man das bewusst wahrnimmt.
Die Verbraucherschützer nehmen auf dieser besonderen Situation Bezug, dann sie behaupten, dass die Käufer in der Lage sind zu wissen, ob etwas absichtlich, wegen unbekannten Mittel in der Luft, in ihren Körpern ausgelöst wird. Darüber hinaus spielt eine große Rolle, dass mehrere von diesen Luftmittel Allergien verursachen können.
Genau wie in dem öffentlichen Raum informiert wird, ob man durch Videokameras gefilmt wird, sollten die Geschäfte den Leuten außerdem diesbezüglich in Kenntnis setzen. Jedoch existiert gerade kein Gestetz dafür, dementsprechend verschaffen sich viele Geschäftsführen von dieser Situation Vorteil.
Darüber hinaus muss dieses Thema weltweit Anerkennung finden, da, je mehr Käufer Bescheid darüber wissen, desto höher sind die Chancen, um etwas gegen diese Gesetztlücken zu tun.
April 16, 2022
April 16, 2022
Моя работа часть третья
Я работаю в пиццерии но там тоже есть салаты и гамбургеры. В моей работе, там есть в основном три разных вещи что я могу делать. Либо я готов пиццы и поставлю его в духовке.
Либо я выну пиццы из духовки и разрежу их. Третий вещь что я могу делать, это готовить салаты и гамбургеры или делать другой вещи
April 16, 2022
Los tornadoes
La región del medioeste de los estados unidos está susceptible a diferentes tipos de desastres naturales. Supongo que los residentes están dispuestos a enfrentarse con ellos, porque sino se hubieran mudado a otro sitio más seguro ya. Yo que ellos, no pudiera aguantar las inundaciones y tornadoes que ocurren allí. Ver las secuelas de un tornado en los reportes de la noticia me da mucha pena. Tras haber pasado el primer, ya hubiera abandonado esa región en pos de otra más segura. Aparte de los daños a las estructuras públicas, las más desgarradores son las imagenes de casas que quedan al intemperie o que se han desplomado. En las zonas más agrícolas las casas cuentan con refugios bajo la tierra para que las familias se protejan de un tornado. Además hay sirenas que suenan para altertarles que uno está por venir.
April 16, 2022
16 avril 2022 - matcha
J’aime bien le matcha au lait, qui est un type de thé vert japonais en poudre. Chaque fois que je vais au cafe, je commande soit un cafe soit un matcha au lait. S’il est bien fait : l’amertume de thé vert mélange parfaitement avec la sucré du lait au crème, c’est délicieux. Il est aussi bon pour la santé parce qu’il contient beaucoup d’antioxydants. En fait, il est plus cher que feuilles de thé parce qu’il a besoin plus de soin dans les fermes.
April 16, 2022
Learning English
The more I study English, the more I learn about things I don't know.
I'm surprised that even the words I already know can be used in a different sense.
Today, I learned about collocations and I was surprised about the another world.
I'm worried that there's still a lot to learn, but on the other hand, it's fun.
April 16, 2022
About documentary
If there's something wrong or unnatural, could you correct these English sentences? I'd like to know common colloquial phrases！ 🙇♂️
As a side note,A and B stand for people❗️
B: What's it about?
A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.
B: What's The Undateables about?
A: "The Undateables" is a reality show about a person with disabilities who seeks out a relationship with a dating service and follows the love.
April 16, 2022
без смартфонов
Могут ли люди выживать без смартфонов? Это был вопрос, на котором хотела найти ответ одна журналиста. Итак, она распланировала путешествие вокруг Америки без использования смартфонов.
Самая главная проблема в течение приключения была навигация. Она использовала традиционную карту, относительно с этого. Карты, в отличие от спутниковых приложений в смартфоне, не способствует процессу планирования. Например, искусственный интеллект, который расположен в таких приложениях, рассчитывает расстояние от пункта начала до пункта окончания, наоборот, карты требуют, что пользователь рассчитает его руками. В результате, журналиста не смогла пользоваться доверием расчёта без ошибок.
Кроме карт, явились другие проблемы. Большинство путешествия приводилось в загородных частях и без социальных сетей, она не была в курс дела. В течение несколько месяцев, она не была сознательна того, что случилось её кругу родственников и друзей, и она была естественно беспокойна.
В конце концов, она решила покинуть идею завершить один полный круг вокруг США. Она заключила, что в настоящее время, независимость от технологических приборов-невозможна.
April 16, 2022
Lutter contre de l'abstention électoral
À propos d'élection français, on discute beaucoup sur le sujet de l’abstention. En France, comme dans d’autres pays européens, le taux d'abstention a augmenté au fil des années. Il paraît que, de plus en plus, les gens se sentent pessimistes sur les changements que peuvent apporter les élections. D’ailleurs, des études ont démontré que, plus on a un salaire peu élevé, plus on a tendance à s’abstenir. Je le trouve triste, parce que c’est précisément les individus précaires qui auraient le plus à gagner d’un fort engagement politique.
Néanmoins, je comprends pourquoi on a perdu confiance dans le système politique. Quant aux français, j’imagine que c’est embêtant d’avoir le même combat au second tour pour une deuxième fois, peut-être ils se sentirent obligés de voter contre le candidat de l'extrême droite plutôt que pour quelqu'un qui partage ses valeurs.
En revanche, je suis tombée sur un projet qui espère lutter contre l’augmentation du taux de l’abstention et redonner aux gens une volonté de participer à la chose politique. Sur la plateforme «Alter-votants », le français peuvent donner leur voix électorale à des étrangers qui, malgré le fait qu’ils ont travaillaient et habitaient en France pendant plusieurs années, n’ont pas le droit de participer à l'élection présidentielle. C’est tout à fait légal, parce que la personne qui vote officiellement ne change pas. Le plateforme est plutôt un espace pour tisser des liens entre des gens qui ne veulent pas voter et des gens qui ne peuvent pas. Ce genre de projet rappelle que le droit de vote est un privilège, lequel n’appartient pas à tout le monde.
April 16, 2022
April 16, 2022
Chinese Word
Chinese word 桑梓
桑refers to mulberry trees and 梓 refers to catalpa trees. These are their original meanings in Chinese.
Chinese people often link the two characters together to stand for their home town.
It's said that in ancient China, rural life was very poor, no modern civilization, no modern science and technology. People had to rely on natural materials to survive.
The leaves of the mulberry trees can grow silkworm, the fruits of the trees can be eaten and be used to make wine, the log and the branches of the trees can make living utensils, and the bark of the trees can make paper. Moreover, all this stuff from mulberries can be Chinese traditional medicine.
The tender leaf of the catalpa trees is a kind of food. The bark of the trees is Chinese medicine, and the trees are good materials for making furniture, instruments, fuel wood, and it grows very fast.
Because these two trees have a closed relationship with people's daily lives, Ancient Chinese people liked planting the trees around their houses, and young people paid more respect to the trees that their parents or ancestors planted.
As a result of the above reasons, mulberry and catalpa trees have become the symbols of hometown over time, and 桑梓 has become synonymous with hometown.
April 16, 2022
April 16, 2022
April 16, 2022
La mode
Moi, je ne suis pas un personne de la mode. Frenchment je m'en fiche quoi j'habille tant que ça me plait. En outre je ne fais pas de shopping pour nouveaux vêtements en general ma mère les achète. Cependant j'adore une fille qui peut s'habiller bien c'est un signe pour moi que elle prend soin d'elle. Bien sûr ce n'est pas obligatoire. Enfin je veux dire que la mode ne devait pas être très important mais on peut aussi dire c'est un style d'art.
April 16, 2022
Proposal: the new young professional orientation centre(C1)
The city council that you work for has received funding to start a new careers service for young people. Read the notes below and write a proposal giving your suggestions as to what the service could offer and how it could be run.
Notes:
- Opening hours: 11:30 am to 8:00 pm or even later when students can visit the office.
- Provide information on higher education and part-time / temporary work opportunities.
- Maintain a job notice board that companies can advertise on.
Write your proposal. You should use your own words as far as possible.
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(What could make it sound more natural? )
Proposal about the new young professional orientation centre.
Introduction.
Currently, there is a serious problem of unemployment in young people ranged between 20 and 30 years, which is worst considering the high number of dropouts in the first years at colleges in our city. With the aim of giving a solution to our young people in this proposal has been done several suggestions about how this new centre of orientation must work.
Basic work schedule and suggestions.
During the morning, from 11:30 to 14 pm our career coaches must be focused on office work, which means keep abreast of new job offers and prospective changes on university degrees. Although our staff will attend everyone at this time provided it has been made a previous appointment.
In the afternoon there will be advise sessions for both students interested in going to the local university and young people looking for a short term job, which is especially suitable for students to save some money. It is true that there are students attending afternoon lectures, but there are so few that could arrange some special sessions during the morning just for them.
With regards to jobs, I would suggest creating orientation courses linked to the main positions that can be found in this city, this is catering, private administration, gardening and masonry, most of which also suit students schedules, since they are not usually permanent jobs.
Staying at current.
A job website will be created for a better communication between employers and employees, where they can sign up and show either details about your company and positions you offer, or your work experience by a curricula.
Conclusion
All in all, this new centre will be an excellent opportunity for young people, especially for those who deserve a professional or academic change but they do not have the proper information.
April 16, 2022
How should I talk to my partner.....
How should I talk to my partner about me not feeling comfortable in my relationship because I’m completely out of my comfort zone? Details in notes.
Seriously， I feel very worried after watching your story with your boyfriend. There is a golden rule for relationships:” You should leave if you feel you are not yourself when you are in your relationship. “ We are independent all the time whatever happens because we feel comfortable and happy when we are real and free. From your story， I believe you have lost yourself when you are with your boyfriend together， and you are unhappy and stressed.
Dear, we can’t spend 80% of the time of our lives with others except ourselves because this is not a balanced mode of our lifestyle. We will feel resistant and uncomfortable when we spend so much time with others no matter who they are. Human beings are certain ones who love solitude but can’t without social. Furthermore, we need to find the most suitable model and lifestyle for being people who can enjoy life. Just leave the people who make you feel uncontrolled and uncomfortable all the time. On the other hand, you should leave your boyfriend and say “bye-bye”.
Here are three suggestions for you:
1. leave the man as soon as possible. You should be yourself rather than a girl who sacrifices herself for the man all the time. You will feel comfortable and peaceful even if you will feel so sad and emotional after you broke up with the man.
2. Adjust your lifestyle and match it with your goals. From your story, I can tell you are a nice girl with full goals. You should exercise more if you enjoy working out in the gym. You should study more knowledge and spend more time in the school if you want to focus on your education. Maybe you will get a chance to get into a Top university. At least you will broaden your view and think of things with more perspectives.
3. Spending more time with your parents because they are getting older accompany with you are getting mature. Don’t ignore those people you really should cherish and care about.
The above are my suggestions. I hope you are doing well and it can help you.
Thank you for reading and have a nice day!
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April 16, 2022
Por qué estoy aprendiendo español?
Estoy aprendiendo español por que yo querio visitar todas los partes de Latinoamérica. Yo empezó a estudiar cuando vistaba Baja California con un amigo, teniamos un viaje muy disfrutable y los Mexicanos son muy amable. Mi solo arrepentimiento fue que yo supe nada de español para hablarlos. Asi que, yo pensaba que la proxima vez yo voy a hablar al menos a poco.
He tenido dos años de estudiar y pienso que puedo hablar lo suficientemente bien para mi viaje, pero la ultima pregunta es "a donde?".
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