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Венеция
Гигантские корабли в Венеции давно были проблемами. Корабли вводили в сотни туристов (hundreds of people at a time?) в Венецию, и как вы можете воображать, этот наплыв людей вызвал конфликты между туристами и жителями.
Во-первых, туристы обращались с Венецией, как с площадкой. Они думали, что из-за того, что заплатили за путешествие, у них была абсолютная свобода, чтобы делать, что хотели, без отношения к окружающей среду. Например, после того, как они купили мороженое, вместо того, чтобы выбросить пластическую обёртку в мусорный ящик, они просто бросили её в пол, и ожидались, чтобы мусорщик очистил её. Такая деятельность может являться незначительной, но если бы группа туристов это делали, то у местности бы был случай контаминации. Именно случилось это.
Во-вторых, у жителей было впечатление о том, что туристы были богатыми. Итак, они начали повышать стоимость товаров и обслуживания, чтобы прибыли получившие были более высокие. Такое увеличение значило, что другим жителям невозможно продолжать обитать в городе. Вопреки протестам, они не удались достигнуть прорыв, поскольку государство истолковало отпор враждебным поведением с иностранцами, которые могли содействовать экономично городу.
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
Because of the global economy many goods including what we u
In past 20 years, as the rapid development of global economy. Many goods that we use on daily basis were produced by other countries, and transported for a long distance to all over the world. Did the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin with, the global economy tighten the relationship and encourage more business activities between countries, so many companies will set their factories in country who have cheaper workforce and lower tariff , to reduce the cost. When the product's cost has decreased, the company can sell the product at an lower price to attract more customers. On another hand, we can buy things at an cheaper price, so we can less our living cost. either company and customers get benefits.
Meanwhile. There are many companies moved their production line to other countries. It means a safety and faster logistics is crucial. However, it usually facing problems like, the bad weather will affect the sea and air freight, caused extend the transport time.........
April 19, 2022
Мой путь изучения языка, первая часть
В Норвегии мы начали изучать английский язык во втором классе. Поэтому молодые люди в Норвегии говорят английский язык. После мы начали изучать другой язык, который мы выбрали сам. Я выбрал испанский язык, потому что я всегда думал что испанский интересный и мой отец мог говорить испанский.
April 19, 2022
How do I to not feel jealous of someone else relationship?
How do I to not feel jealous of someone else relationship? Im happy with being alone but when I see my friends in relationships or having guy best friends I start to wonder why dont guys like me, I have guy friends but they dont like me.
You won’t feel jealous if you really feel suitable for being alone. The truth is that you can’t stand being this because you want to enter into a relationship. You may find a partner who loves you, do not worry about that. Everyone has the people who they love each other no matter who they are because that’s how human beings work. I encourage you to try to have a heart set on loving someone, though you referred no guy who loves you.
Here are three suggestions to help you find that one belongs to you:
1. Have a nice mindset in which you are a nice girl and deserved to be loved. “You are deserved.” is not an empty sentence, but also a right sentence that can help you be more attractive. We can achieve something based on this certain belief. Try to set a nice mindset before you start entering into a relationship.
2. Be a person who always improves herself. You should be nice if you want to get with a nice person. You may think “will he like this kind of person like me if I am him？” If the answer is yes， you won’t worry about anybody loving you because you are the person who loves yourself. You will broaden your horizon through self-improvement and won’t spend energy on nonessential.
3. Treat others nice and gentle. You will be very popular if you keep doing this. Improving the 1% attitude you express to others every day, you will gradually have your social network. People will often replicate to you what you do to them. Enjoy the process in which you are being nice, gentle, and popular as long as you follow the rule.
The above are my suggestions. I hope they can help you and you are doing well.
Thank you for reading. Have a lovely day!
April 19, 2022
보조 식폼 살 만해요?
저는 14 살부터 운동하는 걸 시작했어요, 그리고 17 살 때 저의 레슬링 팀을 위해 운동 루틴 만들고 맞은 양식을 시연했어요. 그래서 예전에 저의 급우가 저에게 단백질 가루 먹고 헬스하면 근력을 쉽게 키울 수 있냐고 물어봤어요. "아니요 똑같은 단백질 양을 먹으면 단백질 가루 먹는 사람과 결과 다름없어요, 비결 아니예요."라고 대답해요. 그래도 단백질 먹는 걸 더 맛있고 편리하는 것 같아요, 레슬링 살이 빨리 빠졌을 때 몇 시간 초미료 없는 닭고기와 밥 한 번 더 참을 수 없었기 대문에 닭고기 대신에 재 가장 좋아하는 브렌드 Quest Protein 식품 먹었어요. 결론에 단백질 가루 근력 성장에 영향 없어요.
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
The beginning
Hello everyone!!!Today is my first day joining this warm and supportive community.I looked through online how to improve my writing and finally I found this site.I love this fantastic idea of correcting letters and helping each other to thrive.Hope I can meet many friends here who will help me to boost my confidence in English writing.I am excited and can’t wait to get an honest feedback for my very first journal:)Have a good one everyone!!!
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
La propriété intellectuelle
Quel type de personne pourrait avoir besoin de lois de la protection intellectuelle? En premier, il est les artistes: les auteurs, les peintres, les créateurs, etc. Dans la société, il est très difficile de fournir le soutien aux artistes. Les lois qui protègent la propriété intellectuelle peuvent créer un revenu pour les artistes par les permettre de distribuer son propre propriété intellectuelle. L'assistance dans cette façon est la première étape pour encourager créativité et l'innovation dans l'art. Source #2 montre les genres different de propriété intellectuelle artistique et industrielle et que les artistes seulement ont le soutien pour soi-mêmes, en comparaison à une industrie entière. Les lois qui protègent et appuient les artistes sont essentiel pour facilitent la grandi de l'art.
April 19, 2022
April 19, 2022
April 18, 2022
April 18, 2022
日本語勉強の習慣について
日本語を学ぶために、私は真面目に日程で勉強している。日ごとに少しずつ新しい文法や単語など習い、上達が実感している。しかし、現在の日常が楽なおかげか、現状の習慣は可能なのではないかと思う。現在の日課は長い時間勉強していて、日ごとの忙しさによってよく調整できない。それで、もし生活が忙しくなったら、今の習慣は続けにくくなるだろう。この問題が最近疑問に思っている。確かに暇な期間は随分次々と日本語の課題を進められるけど、用事が少しでさえ出てきて忙しくなったら、日本語によく集中できない。このせいで、今後は都合に合わせる柔軟なスケジュールを採用しようと思っている。15分でも3時間でも日ごとに様々な長さの勉強で日本語を身につける予定です。ある日は復習などに集中し、ほかの日は読む練習をする。
April 18, 2022
У меня скоро есть эксамен
Через два дня буду сдавать экзамен в русском языке, это устный экзамен. Даже я думаю что он сложный, я не уверен что он проходит так, как я надеялся. Одна из причин в том, что я не знаю уровень, который я что я должен иметь. Потому что я не ходил на курсы в русском языке. И другая причина в том, что я не знаю основные вещи как подсчет чисел.
April 18, 2022
Ich schreibe ein E-mail an meinen Freund
Lieber Max,
es tut mir sehr leid, dass du zu meiner Feier nicht kommst, weil du sehr Krank war. Wie geht es dir jetzt?. Meine Feier war sehr toll. Viele Freunde haben gekommen und ich bekam viele Geschenken. Meine Lieblingsgeschenk war eine Gitarre, die Luisa mir gibt. Das ist ein besonderes Geschenk für mich, denn ich bin Musiker und ich brauche immer neue Instrumenten zu haben. Ich freue mich darüber, dass Luisa meine wirkliche Leidenschaft kennt.
Ich möchte dir einen Vorschlag machen. Möchtest du bei mir zum Konzert von Imagine Dragons gehen?. Sie spielen nächster Monat.
Zuerst könnten wir uns dieses Wochenende treffen. Hast du freie Zeit am Samstag?. Ich kann mich ab 14:00 Uhr treffen. Schreib mir, wenn du kannst.
Liebe Grüße
Bastián
April 18, 2022
roller skating
I don't like sport, but I think that regular activity is necessary for physical and mental health. Especially, if you have a sedentary work, like me. For myself, I chose roller skating, it is a good hobby. Skating gives a necessary activity, also you can do various trick. It improve coordination and switch your brain from routine.
April 18, 2022
April 18, 2022
Sollen die Eltern streng zu den Kindern sein?
Erfahrung:
Mein Vater ist ein strenger Mann. Deshalb habe ich immer das Gefühl, meine Freiheit verloren zu haben und bin extrem wütend. Aber später fand ich heraus, dass alles, was er tat, gut für mich war, und dafür war ich sehr dankbar.
Heimatland:
In Vietnam sind fast alle Eltern streng mit ihren Kindern. Weil sie alle wollen, dass ihre Kinder gute Menschen werden. Es gibt aber auch Menschen, die mit ihren Kindern sehr verwöhnt sind und ihnen oft wenig Aufmerksamkeit schenken.
Vor- und Nachteile:
Wenn Eltern streng mit ihren Kindern sind, wird das Kind wissen, wie es sich verhalten und mit Situationen klug umgehen muss. Nicht nur das, sie können auch ihre Lebenserfahrungen mit den Kindern teilen.
Negativ finde ich, dass Kinder auch sehr abhängig von ihren Eltern sein können. Manchmal können sie keine Entscheidungen über ihr Leben treffen. Auch vielen Kindern mangelt es an Selbstvertrauen. Das ist eine schlechte Sache.
Meinung:
Meiner Meinung nach sollten Eltern streng mit ihren Kindern sein. Aber das ist nicht immer gut. Vor allem müssen sie ihren Kindern zuhören und sie verstehen.
April 18, 2022
Sollen Kinder im Haushalt helfen?
Erfahrung:
Da meine Eltern sehr beschäftigt sind, mache ich jeden Tag Haushalt. Dank dessen weiß ich, wie man viele Dinge tut, wie Kochen, Geschirr spülen, usw. Ich fühle mich sehr glücklich, obwohl ich manchmal sehr müde bin.
Heimatland:
In Vietnam wird der Großteil der Hausarbeit von Frauen erledigt.Troztdem gibt es auch viele Familien, die Putzfrauen mieten, weil die Eltern sehr beschäftigt mit der Arbeit sind.
Vor- und Nachteile:
Ein Vorteil ist, dass sich Eltern nach einem anstrengenden Arbeitstag erholen können, wenn ihre Kinder ihnen im Haushalt helfen. Besonders lernen die Kinder mehr, selbstständig zu sein und anderen Leuten zu helfen. Nicht nur, dass sich die Mitglieder bei der Haushalt besser verstehen.
Neben den Vorteile gibt es natürlich auch Nachteile. Negativ finde ich, dass sich Kinder verletzen können, wenn sie nicht aufpassen. Wenn Eltern ihnen zu viel Haushalt geben, können sie möglicherweise ihre Hausaufgaben nicht machen oder haben keine Zeit, an anderen Aktivitäten teilzunehmen.
Meinung:
Meiner Meinung nach sollten Kinder ihren Eltern bei der Haushalt helfen. Darüber hinaus muss man zwischen Studium und Haushalt balancieren, damit dir keine Arbeit fehlt.
April 18, 2022
18 avril 2022 - enseigner et apprendre
Au delà des cours particuliers que je donne aux élèves, je répond souvent à des questions de l’étude dentisterie, et donc une de mes camardes a dit que je pourrais aussi être tutrice pour eux ou les juniors. Mais en fait, je pose aussi beaucoup de questions à mes professeurs et mes seniors.
Comme l’épreuve final s’approche, il y a un camarade que me pose des questions tous les jours. Ça me prend du temps à lui expliquer chaque question. Je pense que je fais de bénévolat mais en fait je « gagne » aussi parce que j’ai appris quelque chose quand même.
April 18, 2022
April 18, 2022
Conversation 2 about Crayon Shin-chan the Movie
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?
I'd like to know common colloquial phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
A: Have you seen this?
B: I didn't.
A: I recommend this one too!
It may not be make a hit with foreigners as "Sengoku", but it is also a Classic of Japanese anime!
B: What's the story?
A: A story about a villain who tries to return Japan to the Showa era.
B: That sounds interesting. I'll watch it!
-10days later
A: Have you seen it?
B: I watched it!
It was good.
A: What is your score out of 10?
B: Hmmm, 7!
A: Low!
B: Is that so?
What about you?
A: 9
B: High!
Was it that good?
A: it's based on the motif of Japan in the Showa period, so it may be difficult for foreigners to understand many scenes of it.
B: But that was before you were born too, right?
A: I've seen a lot of stuff on TV and stuff.
B: I see.
Didn't Shin-chan grow up quite a bit?
A: The reason for his actions was Shinchan who doesn't change, he protected the future cause he'll wanna date with many women in the future.
B: But I could understand how the villain felt.
A: Me too!
I understand so much about wanting to go back to those days and stay the way I were.
But this work makes me think, like "That’s not any good." "Move forward.!"
B: Good point.
By the way, there really were places like that, weren't there?
A: Yes, there was, before I was born.
It said on tv the Osaka-Kansai Japan Expo will be held again in 2025.
B: Oh, good! I'd like to go there.
A: Let's go together!
April 18, 2022
William aggiusta il sistema educativo 😲😲 parte 1
Non sono un professore, però penso che ci siano delle cose nel sistema educativo che avrebbero dovuto essere cambiate o rimosse molto tempo fa, perché sono completamente inutili. Ovviamente, come avevo già detto, non sono un professore però sono un studente, quindi tutto ciò che sarò detto qui è detto del punto di vista d'un studente.
La prima cosa che mi viene in mente è la matematica. Guarda, la matematica deve finire, boh, dopo il quinto anno di scuola, più o meno. Tutta la merda che ci insegnano dopo le frazioni semplici non serve a nessuno!
D'accordo, mi correggo: non serve a me, perché io voglio fare musicista. Diciamo così: dopo un certo punto, la matematica deve diventare un materiale opzionale.
April 18, 2022
Today's journal
I went to the book store today. I started to study Chineses, so I wanted to buy a small vocabulary book.
I tried to make a bread today. I put the yeast in the flour, mixed and waited. But it didn't finish it's fermentation. I found the recipe on internet and it said I needed just a hour to ferment. But had to wait until night. I couldn't help decide to make it tomorrow. I thought my yeast was a little different. It was not a normal dry yeast. It was something different. It takes long time usually. I had to remember that but I couldn't. It's my fault. I wanted to make Turkey style bread. And using it, I planed to make the Gyros, the Greek sandwich. I had a plan. I prepared the pork , tomatoes and some green vegetables. I also had an yogurt for sauce. But today, in a shame, it's impossible. It's too late now. Tomorrow is the day.
My girl friend poured her flowerpot over. It was on the window frame and when she opened the window, it hit the pot and it fell. It didn't broke but the soil spilled out. I could settle it. I brushed the soil and scooped it up to the pot. Then I wiped the floor with a rag. I poured a cup of water over it because the plant seemed to lose its vitality.
There was chicken breasts in the refrigerator. It was not frozen. It was in the fridge not the freezer. I had been worrying it had gone bad. So I made the chicken curry with it. There was a potato in cabinet. I hid it because it has not to be exposed by sun. I found it and used it to cook.
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