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April 17, 2022
Le covid et moi
Heureusement, je n'ai pas été infecté jusqu'à présent. Pendant le 2020 et la majeure partie de 2021, je suis resté chez moi, en télétravail. J'ai pu continuer et finaliser mes études à distance et seulement quand j'ai eu les deux doses du vaccin, je suis retourné au bureau. En attendant, j'ai pu passer des temps avec ma famille, pratiquer mon français et éviter de utiliser le transport publique. J'ai eu de la chance, vraiment. Mes sœurs ont étés infectées au début de l'année mais elles ont déjà été vaccinées, donc leur malaise ont été léger, seulement quelque jours au lit avec des lignes de fièvre, mais rien de plus grave que cela.
April 17, 2022
Le trajet
Hier, mes parents et moi sommes allés dans un village pour la journée où nous visitons presque chaque année. La dernière fois que nous avons y visité en octobre 2020. C'était un peu différent mais je me suis senti nostalgique. Nous avons marché pendant deux heures et puis nous avons déjeuné à l'hôtel que nous aimons beaucoup. Les plats étaient délicieux et je n'avais pas faim du reste de la journée. Malheuresement, c'est un trajet deux heures en voiture donc nous avons dû voyager pendent quatre heures. Mais, surtout c'était une bonne journée.
April 17, 2022
Sentences I want to be corrected 3
1)Our current office does not have a meeting room.
significantly
2) I lied my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep.
3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´ or ´´some people prefer traveling by plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´.
4- people feel the need to travel because lately there is a great influence of the media.
5 -I would like to travel to norway to see the northern lights
6- Improved transportation is what has contributed most to the increase in international travel.
7- you might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it at an early time of the day.
8- I can be in france in hour thanks to high speed train
9- One of the most efficient tools to travel are airplanes.
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gcse practise 90 words
Scrivi una lettera al tuo amico italiano (Marco). Menziona:
• le vacanze preferite
• le attività che fai di solito in vacanza
• un viaggio che è andato male
• una vacanza ideale.
Scrivi circa 90 parole in italiano. Rispondi a tutti gli aspetti della domanda
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Ciao Marco!
La mia vacanza preferita è in posti lontani non piace Inghilterra perché adoro il tempo caldo ma Inghilterra è un po' freddo per me.
Di solito, in vacanza, la mia attività è andare a la spiaggia perché mi piace gelato è nuotare al mare. Anche di solito restiamo in l'albergo con un ristorante così possiamo mangiare colazione non lontano le camere.
L'anno scorsa, sono andato un viaggio con la mia famiglia ma che è andato male perché siamo arrivati in tardi per aereo così abbiamo dovuto comprare un aereo nuovo!
La mia vacanza ideale è andare a Francia con i miei amici perché noi posare alla Eiffel Tower e mangiamo il cibo di francia!
April 17, 2022
17 avril 2022 - enseigner
Je donne des cours privés à des étudiants du lycée il y a presque 4 ans, parce que c’est une bonne moyen de gagner un peu d’argent supplémentaire. Mais au début, je l’ai fait pour la simple raison de m’occuper. C’est un travail exigeant et difficile parce que j’ai mal à expliquer le concept d’une manière simple à mes étudiants. Cependant, je pense que c’est même plus facile de leur expliquer les concepts ou les questions après on a changé notre plateforme (de face-à-face à en ligne). C’est drôle mais je crois que la raison principale, c’est qu’on peut voir le même page dans l’écran partagé et donc tout est plus clair. De plus, les étudiants sont aussi moins nerveux quand ils ne savent pas répondre à mes questions.
April 17, 2022
Alice Through the Looking Glass
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
It is the sequel film Alice in Wonderland.
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time."
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Time"
I like these jokes.
April 17, 2022
April 17, 2022
Aprendo español otra vez
Hoy quiero empezar a aprender español otra vez. Yo sé que necesito el idioma en mi vida, pero tengo que desarrollar mis capacidades de la lenguaje. Hace mucho tiempo que la he utilizado, y la mayoría de mi energía para idiomas extranjeros es utilizado para aleman. Porque siempre estudio aleman, me siento un poco confuso cuando intento a pensar en español. Tengo la tendencia a formar mis frases en la forma que sería en aleman, o confuso las palabras individuales con los de aleman. Por eso quiero al mínimo intentar a formar ideas y frases otra vez en español, antes de que sea en situaciones más importantes, como con el trabajo.
April 17, 2022
I top 3 app sul mio smartphone
Ci sono alcuni app che uso molto spesso. Il primo, e quello che penso di usare spessissimo, è il youtube. Lo uso un sacco di tempo perché mi piace guardare i video differenti, e anche perché ci si può trovare molti video sui tutti i soggetti che mi interessano. Per esempio, mi piace guardare dei video sull'apprendimento delle lingue, cartoni animati indipendenti ed altre cose. Youtube è fantastico perché si può usarlo anche per ascoltare la musica. Questo è qualcosa che io faccio sempre. Ho anche creato alcuni playlist con la mia musica preferita.
Il secondo app che uso è HiNative. Lo adoro perché mi aiuta molto con le lingue, specialmente quando non riesco a capire un nuovo concetto, o qualcosa di simile.
L'ultimo app è Discord, che uso principalmente per chiacchierare con la mia amica.
April 17, 2022
Covid-19
My son has covid-19. It sounds dangerous but everything is going well. The problem is always my mind: thinking too much, imagining all the bad situations that can come.
I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs. When illnes comes everyone run but it’s late. But what can we do? If we work too much we have not time for us. Maybe we need to prioritaze time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.
April 17, 2022
Una lettera d'un tizio al suo amico
Caro Peppe,
Sono molto orgoglioso da annunciare che cominciando da oggi cambierò completamente la mia vita. Dopo un sacco di ricerca, ho trovato il metodo perfetto per migliorare la mia salute.
Prima di tutto, mi sono iscritto in palestra. Pianifico andarci ogni mese. Credo che una volta al mese sarà basta per diventare muscoloso come John Cena.
Ovviamente, anche una dieta corretta è molto importante per mantenere un sano stile di vita. Quindi ho comprato qualche polverino magico al mercato nero. Il venditore era molto carino e mi ha detto che quello polverino è molto buono per la salute. Non vedo l'ora di aggiungerlo alle tutte mie dolci.
Per finire, ho finalmente cominciato a dormire di più - quattro ore invece di tre!
Ho appena cominciato però già mi sento più forte e sano.
Ci vediamo presto ai giochi olimpici!
Paolo
April 17, 2022
Нью-Йорк
В середине души Нью-Йорка существует раскол. Насилие с применением огнестрельного оружия растит беспокойно в Америке. В прошлое, большинство случаев ограничился загородными частями штатов или местностями, которые управлялся уголовными организациями. Тем не менее, кажется, что в настоящее время стрельбы приближаются к метрополии. На прошлой неделе, бездомной атаковал метро во время часа пик.
Меня запутал факт того, что он уже совершил многие преступления перед инцидентом, но полиция решила не отслеживать его. Разумеется, что следствие этой халатности, у человека была абсолютная свобода, чтобы поразить общественную транспортную систему в сердце Нью-Йорка.
Самонадеянность мэра не должна влияет на его ежедневные обязанности. На данный момент, он отказывается от введения большего числа дивизий полиции, так и усиления режима дозоров.
В результате повторных инцидентов, многие граждане боятся поехать поездом. Ответственность придумать кампанию, чтобы внушить мужество и уверенность в жителей (жителях?) попадает на городское управление.
April 17, 2022
About a Crayon Shin-chan
If there's anything wrong or unnatural, would you correct these English sentences? I'd like to know common colloquial phrases！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
w of that.
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons. Maybe. Anyway, it's a Japanese national anime about crazy family!
But it's really fun, so give it a watch!
I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.
B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Then you might like it!
But a lot of people overseas hate them lol.
The main character often moon someone, and I think this cartoon was banned in the US and Indonesia because of that!
B: Really? LOL.
A: On top of that, some people even call it a "naughty little boy."
But Japanese people love Crayon Shinchan.
The anime is mostly a gag, but the movie is seriously moving.
I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep message. The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of this.
B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before.
A : Oh, really!?
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: It is such a work that you cannot talk about Japanese animated films without seeing it.
B: That much?
A: Maybe, I think I said too much.Haha
But that's how much I love it!
You should watch it because it's definitely one of the great Japanese anime films! Like it or not.
But I think you should watch "Sengoku" first.
I think this is the one that everyone will like.
I have never heard of anyone in Japan who dislikes this film. I haven't heard of thoughts that anyone from overseas saying, though.Haha
B: Ok! "Sengoku"!
I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to know the family structure and characteristics beforehand.
If I were to explain it to you, it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.
B: I see.
Thanks! I'll take a look!
A: Yeah, check it out!
April 17, 2022
Report: new shopping centre (C1 CAE)
2. You work as an environmentalist for the local council. A large shopping centre has recently been built in your area.
You have been asked to visit the shopping centre and to write a report saying what effect the shopping centre might have on the local environment and the community.
Your report should state both the positive and the negative aspects of the shopping centre.
Finally, you should make some suggestions as to how the more negative aspects could be improved.
Write your report.
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What could make it sound more natural ?
Report on the effects of the new shopping centre in Utrera.
Introduction
In the last two years the tourism data in Utrera has experienced a huge decrease as a consequence of the improvement of several facilities and leisure areas in the city of Seville. Therefore, with the aim of recovery our previous position for tourists, it has been recently built a new shopping centre, which far from being suitable for most of citizens, it has been a topic especially controversial.
Social and environmental effects
According to the environmental impact assessment, which was written before the works started, the area selected is far enough from our streets and homes, as well as any natural park or reserve, as to have any direct negative impact. However, there is a long list of indirect effects both in people's health and nature. Of them all the main problem stressed by neighbours was the noise linked to the unexpected huge success of the new mall. This is a small city and people were used to a quieter way of life.
As regards environment, the main problem is the same, since noise affects the behaviour and growth of a lots of different species, especially birds, from the national park located 20 km away from Utrera, in the north of Seville.
Between the positive aspects, it can be highlighted the extraordinary success of this project. There have been never so many tourists here before, which has allowed the opening of several new shops and restaurants, which in turn means more jobs.
Suggestions
There was not a mandatory issue to build noise barriers along the highway that connect with the mall, since noise's law is pretty soft in this city. Nevertheless, this works must be done in order to avoid future European sanctions in environmental issues.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the new shopping centre will be an overall positive project for citizens in Utrera and nature surrounding the city provided that a noise barrier is built.
April 17, 2022
What do I do?
What do I do when the guy says he wants to take things slow and get to know me better when I say I'm getting attached to him, but he is also acting close with the love words and the attraction?
Love is complex. We should talk about this from different perspectives depending on the situations. Here are two hypothesis from my own understanding:
1. The boy is a good boy. He doesn’t want to get into a relationship fast because he knows the faster you love someone, the more misunderstanding you get from someone. He may start thinking if you guys are matched or not.
2. The boy is a bad boy. He is hanging you and has no feelings for you. You are prey and he enjoys the liking you expressed. He also is chatting and flirting with other girls.
Ok, the priority problem is clear. You should figure out what type the boy is. I would like to give you two suggestions for the two situations separately:
1. Stay with him and discuss with him about you believe you guys are matched. You may prove your true heart and love to him by your actions in which you show your gentleness and understanding. After that, just wait for the result or announcement from him.
2. Leave him as soon as possible, every girl should have alert and protect themselves well. Bad boys often won’t be the good boy because they have opened the door to pleasure and taboo. You can’t make him change no matter what you do. This is a piece of honest advice from a man who has seen these things a lot.
The above are my suggestions. I hope they can help you and you are doing well.
Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!
April 17, 2022
Nina Hagen
Nina Hagen ist eine meiner Liebliengssängerinen. Sie kommt aus Ostberlin und ist im Jahr 1955 geboren. Ihre Musik und ihr Stil sind sehr ursprüngliche und sprechen zu mir. Ich mag ihre Lieder „Du hast den Farbflim vergessen" und „Wenn ich ein Junge wär". In das erste Lied spricht Nina über Drogenmissbrauch. Da sie eine Punk-Künstlerin war, kannte sie viele andere Künstler, die Drogen missbrauchten. Ich auch kenne Leute, die Drogen missbrauchen. Und es ist sehr traurig—du fühlst machtlos. Auf der anderen Seite ist "Wenn ich ein Junge wär" ein Lied das viel Spaß macht. Nina singt über was sie würde machen, wenn sie ein Junge wär. Sie wurde ins Disko gehen, und jeden Tag in lange Hosen gehen. Es gab ein Konzert von ihrem wo sie dieses Lied spielte. In diesem Konzert begann sie zu sagen „sei stolz darauf, schwul zu sein". Also sehe ich dieses Lied wie ein schwul Hymne. Manchmal machte sie "drag". Heutzutage ist Dragkultur sehr bekannt. Aber man spricht nicht so oft über Dragkings. In das Video für ihre Lied „Smack Jack", macht Nina Hagen Drag. Etwas, das ich auch an ihr liebe, ist, dass sie über Tierrechte sprechen. Sie hat ein Lied namens „Don't kill the animals", und spricht über, wie Tiere missbraucht werden. Ich finde auch sehr interessant, dass Nina Hagen Angela Merkels Liebgliengssängerin auch ist! Als Angela Merkel ihren Posten verließ, spielte die Blaskapelle tatsächlich ein Lied von Nina Hagen! Das Lied war „Du hast den Farbfilm vergessen".
April 17, 2022
Practicing Genitiv
Lass mir eine kleine Geschichte erzählen. Es gehört dem Krimi genre. Du hast gewarnt gewesen.
Ein Paar lebt in eine kleines Dorf. Der Mann arbeitet in der Firma seines Schwiegervaters. Eines schönes Tages, war der Schwiegervater tot gefunden.
Alle verdächtigen des Mannes. Nach der Tod des Schwiegervaters, wird er den Firma erben. Alle anklagen ihm. Nach eine Untersuchung der Polizei, war er schuldig gefunden.
April 17, 2022
Lance
Recenmment, j'ai revu un de mes series préférés qui s'appelle Sym-Bionic-Titan. Malheureusement elle a interrompu juste avec vingt episodes. Quoi qu'il en soit maintenant je veux parler d'un caractère dans cette serie. Il s'appelle Lance et je je crois il est mon caractère préféré. Quand il était encore un enfant avec 12 ans il a perdu son père dans une accident. Son père était un scientifique très connue. Le roi un vieux amie de lui a se occuper de Lance, il a l'inscrire dans le meilleur école du pays. Là lance devais endurer harcèlement moral d'autres éléleves mais il avait heureusement un copain. Quand même il a réussit à finir de meilleur élève de sa classe. Cependant il n'y avait pas longtemps quand sa vie changer encore. Il y a encore plus de ranconter mais je crois ça suffit.
April 17, 2022
"Der Große Gatsby"
Gestern habe ich "Der Große Gatsby" zu Ende gelesen. Obwohl ich es für die Schule lesen musste, habe ich es wahrlich genießt. Im Buch geht es um einen jungen Mann, der nach New York umzieht und sich mit seinem neuen Nachbar, ein Millionär namens Gatsby, anfreundet. Am Anfang war Nick (der Hauptcharakter und Erzähler der Geschichte) ein bisschen unsicher über Gatsby. Das war weitgehend, weil er nicht sicher war, ob Gatsby ihn anlog. Als die Geschichte fortschreitet, lernen Leser, dass er nicht über seiner Vergangenheit lügen hatte. Nichtsdestotrotz ist es klar, dass nicht alle seines Gelds von komplett legalen Quellen kommt. Nick lernt von Gatsby, dass Gatsby seine verheiratete Cousine liebt. Er stimmt dazu, Gatsby zu helfen. Also ruft Nick seine Cousine Daisy an und vereinbart ein Treffen zwischen den beiden. Daisy gesteht, dass sie Gatsby auch mag, und es scheint, als ob alle glücklich werden. Aber sie kann sich nicht dazu bringen, ihren Mann Tom (meiner Meinung nach ein abscheulicher und minderwertiger Mann) zu verlassen. Wann Daisy eine Frau versehentlich ermordet, findet Tom einen Weg, der Mann der Ermordeten glauben zu machen, dass Gatsby es getan hat. Dieser Mann schießt und ermordet Gatsby. Nick ist der Einzige, der wirklich traurig über was passiert ist, scheint. Er werdet desillusioniert mit den Personen die er früher gekennt hatte, und kümmert sich um Gatsbys Beerdigung.
April 17, 2022
사이코이지만 괜잖아
한국어 학습자와 한국 사람들이 대부분 드라마의 줄거리 얼마나 진부하는지 알고 있겠어요? 1. 그 캐릭터들 처음에 서로에게 빤하게 좋아하는데 , 왠지 싫어하는 척해요. (저는 이런 줄거리 있는 드라마 보면서 뭐하냐고 물어보고 그냥 사귀고 이 드라마 끝자고 제안하고 있어요. ㅋㅋ)2. 함께 갈등 나서고 그 갈등 대문에 서로에게 사랑하는 걸 시작해요. 3. 영원히 행복하게 살아요.
왜 사이코이지만 괜잖아 다른냐고요?
왜냐하면 각 캐릭터 특별한 성격 갖고 있고 저음에 빤하게 사랑하지 않아요. 처음 몇 회 동안 문강태은 고문영을 원수저럼 대우했어요. 그리고 드라마 내내 캐릭터 배경의 것들이 나타나곤 했어요. 예를 들어서 이 드라마 시작할 때 아마 왜 상태 왜 나비에 무서운다고 생각했죠? 간호사는 고문영의 엄마일 줄은 몰랐겠죠, 저는 환자인 줄 알았어요.
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