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Kinyas and Kayra Part III
I ate less, drink more. Still drinking. I didn't choose any alcohol over others. I liked alcohol, it suits me. I tasted every kind of drug. I hate addiction. The reason is if it hinders me to go away.I never addicted to neither a man nor a drug. I used eroin, fall in love just because prove it to myself. I abondened both of them without looking behind. I spit to past and chew the future. I spent today sleeping. My name is Houidini. I turned world into toy. There is nowhere left i havent stepped. If left I pass them on handstand. I draw pictures to walls, to my body. One day I roared such, the wine glass in front of me cracked. My name is Hitler. I left my seeds to many women because of the create my own army... Now I am crying. For all of us. Because anyhing worked.
July 7, 2025
L’étiquette
Pour me protéger des émotions des autres, je fais toujours en sorte d’avoir l’air légère, de sourire. Les gens n’attaquent pas ce genre de personne, vous savez. Je pense que, pour ceux qui m’entourent, je suis cette femme « joyeuse et positive ». Mais… je crois que la personne qu’ils voient et celle que je crois être sont deux personnes complètement différentes.
Dans la vie de tous les jours, je suis gentille. Je ne cherche pas les conflits. Mais dans ma tête, ça tourne sans arrêt. Et puis, les petits soucis, je les règle moi-même. Je n’aime pas non plus montrer mes plaintes ou mes faiblesses aux autres. Donc au fond… je n’ai presque jamais besoin de montrer ce que je ressens.
Je ne mens pas. Je n’ai pas envie de me faire passer pour quelqu’un d’autre non plus. Mais l’excès de modestie, ce n’est pas très sain non plus, je crois. Rester naturel… Ce n’est même pas quelque chose qu’on peut décider de faire, en fait.
Et pourtant, j’ai toujours cette sensation, quelque part en moi, que je ne suis pas tout à fait celle que les autres croient que je suis.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Легенда о Вортигерне (3/3)
После того как он пообещал, мальчик продолжил: «Красный дракон — это ты, а белый — это Утер Пендрагон. Да, на самом деле борьба этих зверей символизирует твою борьбу, эту битву, которой ты так сильно боишься. Также как белый дракон сжег красного, Пендрагон тебя убьет огнем. Он готовится. Даже могу тебе сказать, что он прийдёт через трех дня.»
Тогда страх охватил Вортигерна тоже...
Как было предсказанно, три дня спустя начала кровопролитная битва между войской Утера Пендрагона и той Вортигерна. И как было предсказанно, Вортигерн погибнул в пожаре своего крепости, после долгого
Утер Пендрагон стал королем Британии. Мудрый мальчик был Мерлином, волшебник, который научит многому Артура, сына Утера.
Согласен другой интерпретации, победа красного дракона над белым означает победу британцев над саксонами (потому что Вортигерн был их созюзником). Поэтому до сих пор возможно видеть красного дракона на флаге Уэльса.
По Historia regum Britanniae («История королей Британии»), саксонские союзники восстали против Вортигерна и победили его. Его пощадили, но взамен они потребовали власти над всеми завоеванными британскими землями. Так Вортигерн окончил свою жизнь одним, жальким и без королевства. Сегодняшние историки сходятся в мнении, что большая часть информации о Вортигерна вероятно причудливая, литерарная выдумка Гальфрида Монмутскего (автора Historia regum Britanniae). Даже сомневают в том, что Вортигерн действительно существовал.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Der herrliche Sicherheitsgehurt
Der Sicherheitsgehurt ist der Autosicherheit unentbehrlich. Meiste Menschen, die jährlich sterben, haben sich nicht angeschnallt. Wenn man sich nicht an schnallt, sagt man grundsätzlich, er ist zufrieden zu sterben. Einige Leute sagen, dass wenn man sich an schnallt, damit sagt man dass er dem Fahrer nicht vertraut, aber sie spinnen. Autosicherheit braucht auch andere Fahrer sicher zu sein. Bis ein Fahrer so gut sein kann, dass die andere Fahrer egal sind, das Argument spinnt. Ich hab' auch gehört, dass die Zeit es nehmt, um sich anzuschnallen, ist zu lang. Das ist zum Lachen, weil es nehmt wirklich weniger als fünf sekünde.
Danke fürs Lesen.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Eine Anfrage der Existenz von Ochsenschwanzsuppe
Essen Deutschen wirklich Ochsenschwanzsuppe? In meinem Wörterbuch gibt's dieses Wort. Das wäre unwahrscheinlich es sei denn Ochsenschwanzsuppe wird wirklich in Deutschland gegessen. Ich meine, wir in Amerika essen sie nicht! Ich nehme an, ich weiß nicht sicher ob sie im Vereinigten Königreich oder Australian gegessen wird, aber das scheint mir unwahrscheinlich. Soweit für Ochsenschwanzsuppe, das Konzept klingt so ekelhaft! Theoretisch wäre diese Idee effizient, weil kein Teil des Tieres wäre verschwendet, aber sie klingt noch brutto.
Korrigieren Sie mich, aber auch Antworten Sie meine Frage, bitte!
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Writing email, English Cambridge exam for level C1
THE EMAIL THAT I HAVE TO ANSWER: "I don’t know if you remember me, but we met at
Manjit’s party a few weeks ago. I’ve just got an
interview with the company where you work.
Could you give me some advice about how to
prepare for it? What kind of questions do you think
they might ask and what kind of research should I do
beforehand? What should I wear to the interview?
Maybe we could meet for lunch on the day?
My shout!
Thanks in advance for your help.
Sarah "
MY TEXT:
Hi Sarah of course I remember you, you were so sweetie to me that day.
I'm so happy to hear about your interview, let me help you with some advice.
First of all as you can understand the company is about "computer stuff" in fact
I suggest to you to learn how to use well a computer, like how to use Office, Adobe, Canva and more; this software are essential to work in the company. They will probably see how you are good to use this program. Than they will ask about you daily life, like your hobbies, your interests and more. For example the will ask you if you like cook or if you like read (personal question so is easy to answer). Moreover they will ask if you have any experience in this type of job, I suggest to you to say all the information you have to try to look "expert". Talking about your "outfit" I suggest to wear formal clothes, stay minimal and don't use many colour. The interviewers are really good people and they want to create a relax atmosphere, so don't worry about them they are sweet like you. I hope this tips will be helpful for you and obviously let me know about it.
I can't wait to see you again.
Bye bye.
Danilo.
IF YOU CAN PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF THE WRITING IS GOOD FOR A C1 EXAM, THANK YOUUU ♥♥♥♥
July 7, 2025
La mia motivazione nello studio
Non credo nella motivazione di per sé. Sebbene la motivazione sia ciò che ti aiuta a iniziare qualcosa di nuovo, è la disciplina che ti porta avanti.
Nonostante come mi senta e qualunque cosa io debba fare, studio almeno tre volte alla settimana. Il progresso si costruisce con la costanza. Malgrado tutto ciò che succeda nella vita, è importante avere il tempo per i propri obiettivi.
Se un giorno fosse durato più di 24 ore, forse avrei studiato di più. Tuttavia, cerco sempre di dedicare il poco tempo che ho per raggiungere i miei obiettivi.
Se potessi, studierei di più, però non è facile farlo quando ho un lavoro e delle faccende da sbrigare.
Uso il tempo libero in modo intelligente, persino quando mi sono appena svegliata. La mia motivazione è scomparsa da molto tempo, però mi sono rimasti la disciplina, l’abitudine e il pensiero che tutto ciò che faccio nel presente per studiare verrà ripagato in futuro.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Ein Okonomiyaki zubereiten
Heute werde ich zu Abendesse Okonomiyaki zubereiten. Ich habe gestern schon die Zutat gekauft. Das Okonomiyaki gilt ein Gericht von Osaka, allerdings kann man das vielleicht irgendwo essen.
Ich bin nicht gut, Okonomiyaki zu machen. Wenn ich das zubereite, habe ich jedesmal an meiner Okonomiyaki keine Genüge. Ich will aber auch heute versuchen.
July 7, 2025
Ein schöner Tag
Obwohl ich mit Fiber angegriffen war, war gestern ein schöner Tag. Ich habe einen Film angesehen, den ich jahrelang aufgeschoben habe. Außerdem kaufte ich eine saftige Wassermelone, die extrem lecker war. Am Abend ging ich anderthalb Stunden in einen Wald spazieren, der in der Nähe von meinem Haus sich befindet. Ich trug keinen Kopfhörer, es gab nur ich und Vögel. Dort habe ich es entschieden, meine Zeit fürs Deutschlernen zu verringern. Seit fast vier Monaten lernte ich drei Stunden Deutsch täglich. Obwohl es mir wirklich Spaß gemacht hat, habe ich seit ein paar Wochen bemerkt, dass ich diese Zeit weniger genieße. Deswegen bin ich zum Schluss gekommen, dass ich ab heute nur zwei Stunden dem widme, Deutsch zu lernen. Erste Stunde werde ich damit verbringen, irgendwelche Videos anzusehen und neue Wörter zu lernen. Im Laufe der zweiten Stunde werde ich einen Aufsatz schreiben, meine Fehler analysieren und, natürlich, sprechen.
July 7, 2025
Kinyas and Kayra Part II
I see myself as an immortal. It has been years that I disconnected from time and space. I had fallen in love with a girl. I had to took 6 hour road to see her. One morning, I miss the train. I gave up on love. Only I know what is giving up on oneself. My name is Kaygusuz Abdal. I gave up on God. I gave up on death. Because If I die and the gatekeepers of reward and punishment system are waiting me there, I have to being in big fights. I don't want to die because I am afraid I kill God too. And noone can endure this kind of death except me... I wrote the Well Metaphor in counterpart of Platon's Cave Metaphor: I explained Humans falling after they born climbing the opprtunities passing quickly and with holding onto other people and only do this because they want to reach height of when they were born. Also, I explained the ones putting their hands to their mouth and dedicated to not climb. And I asked, Does the god above or below. I used to play pocker. Now I am playing to god is in below, at the ground of well. My life is on the table with some red game chip.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
How I study English every day
First of all, I open Anki app
Learn all the flashcards that due to today by the system (I mean I should be learn today)
Honestly, I don't learn all of this, only the flashcards that are words, phrases, sentences I added.
Some that I didn't clean or adjust yet, because I didn't apply the right methods that works for me.
I want to focus on add more useful relevants information that I need most right now.
I gotta adjust it later on.
Secondly, I create at least 10 flashcards.
Some that I take some grammar book (recently it's preposition, which I make wrong a lot)
Vocabulary I want to start on and improve: emotion, business, interview, thought, psychology etc.
Corrections I get on LangCorrect, from people make corrections for me, thanks y'll.
Which is for me is one of the best way to learn, through mistaken.
The last one, I try to write something to post on LangCorrect.
Some day, I don't really want to write anything.
I feel dizzy, so one day I just ask ChatGPT to suggest some ideas to write.
It works, but sometimes I still don't want to write anything.
Optional, I watch some English series, without subtible, to improve my listening skills.
Or practice reading some English books, if I have time to.
That's how I learn English, if you have any other ways to learn a language, you can leave a comment below, I'd love to hear your opinions.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Script editing
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Team Japan’s ultimate defensive duo, Watanabe and Endo, face off against one of the fastest pairs in the world—India’s Shetty and Rankireddy.
The moment unfolds in the second game, deep into deuce.
Tension is sky-high—every shot could decide the match.
Watanabe and Endo cannot let the shuttle drop.
Suddenly, a lightning-fast smash tears through the air.
Rankireddy, the Guinness World Record holder for the fastest smash, unleashes a missile clocked at 565 km/h—faster than a bullet train.
The sheer speed transcends pro-level play.
They manage to return it with a high drive—
But standing in wait is the towering 187cm Shetty.
Yet even that is no match for Watanabe’s unbelievable defensive touch.
Ordinarily, you’d expect a textbook backhand return.
But in this moment, Watanabe twists his entire body 90 degrees, softens the shuttle’s momentum, and creates just enough space for a controlled shot.
Back and forth, neither side giving an inch—
Both pairs desperate to avoid giving away a clean smash.
Shetty insists on attacking from above, refusing to lift.
Endo counters with a delicate cross-court return, relying on nothing but wrist finesse.
Then another soft drive—met with an aggressive overhead touch from Endo.
Trying to bait Shetty, they push the rally to the back with a straight return.
Endo goes for a high lob—hoping for a counter opportunity—
But Shetty cuts it off at the net.
Still, Watanabe twists his body once more to dig the shuttle out.
The crowd is electrified.
And here’s the moment that turns everything—
Watanabe notices both Shetty and Rankireddy are stacked on the right side.
He leaps and fires a cross smash—
But Shetty somehow bends both knees and scrambles to meet it.
Half of the Japanese court is now wide open.
Watanabe, off-balance from the smash, is momentarily out of play.
It looks over.
The crowd gasps.
But then—this man moves.
Endo, falling to the ground, gets just enough contact to keep the rally alive.
And Watanabe, having drifted out of position, throws himself back into the rally—
Scooping it up from the brink.
And just like that, Japan steals the point.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
unforgettable day in my life
It was in 1999, and I was eight years old. My mother went with my uncle suddenly to my father's business place, and then I got to know that my dad had faced a tragic accident the previous night, and he was admitted to the hospital for surgery. He was a businessman who did his business in another town, not in my hometown. He used to come on weekends to see us. But his death changed my life unexpected way.
I can remember that I couldn't accept my father's death. for the funeral, my favorite cousins were also coming, which made me happy. Then I just wanted to spend my time with them, and then I could forget that pain for a moment, yes! it worked until my aunt forcefully took me to fulfill the daughter's duty for my father's death. That was the very first time I learned to skip the pain and remember something that makes you happy.
However, as an orphan living with disabled siblings who were affected with mentally disabled was challenging. additionally, I misunderstood some of my family members loved me. No! they just sympathized me. Thus, my father's funeral was a major loss in my life.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
A Question I Have Today
I came across a question while reading an email this morning. I'm holding onto this question until now to ask you, my online English teachers.
Thanks in advance.
The question is from this sentence: 'Complaining, blaming, pointing fingers—none of it will get you anywhere worth going.'
Why does this sentence use 'it', not 'them'?
I mean, there are three of them referred to, right？
July 7, 2025
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