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July 18, 2025
English class.
Today I went to the extra class of English, with the more "advanced" people. The problem here is that in the activities we did I had a lot of mistakes. On the first activity I had 4 wrong answers, and the activity was kind of easy. Also in the second one I had half the answers wrong, although this activity was harder. Anyways, now I need to keep studying and trying to reach my goals related to English.
My biggest problem is the vocabulary and writing, because most of the time I don't find the correct word or I don't write it well, so if you could let me know any advice, I will be very grateful.
July 18, 2025
July 18, 2025
July 18, 2025
July 18, 2025
July 18, 2025
Sollten soziale Medien in der Schule thematisiert werden?
Meiner Meinung nach sollten soziale Medien in der Schule thematisiert werden. Viele junge Menschen verbringen täglich mehrere Stunden auf Plattformen wie TikTok, Instagram und Snapchat. Ein Schulfach zur digitalen Medienkompetenz wäre hilfreich, weil es viele Herausforderungen im Umgang mit sozialen Medien gibt.
Zum Beispiel besteht die Gefahr von Cybermobbing, besonders bei marginalisierten Gruppen wie LGBTQ-Menschen und Menschen mit Behinderung. Es ist leider häufig so, dass marginalisierte Menschen mit vielen Stereotypen konfrontiert werden. Zum Beispiel sind schwule Männer nicht automatisch extravagant oder modisch. Ein häufiges Stereotyp über bisexuelle Menschen ist, dass sie immer unentschlossen seien. Ich bin bisexuell und liebe sowohl Männer als auch Frauen. Viele bisexuelle Menschen haben eine Vorliebe – manche für Männer, andere für Frauen oder nicht-binäre Personen.
Ein großes Problem ist außerdem, dass viele Menschen nicht zwischen echten und falschen Informationen unterscheiden können. Zum Beispiel veröffentlichen viele Instagram-Influencer kurze Videos über Nachrichten. Es ist schwierig, diese Informationen zu überprüfen – besonders im Zeitalter von Deepfakes. Es gibt bisher keinen zuverlässigen Algorithmus, der Deepfakes sicher erkennen kann.
Außerdem verbreiten soziale Medien häufig falsche Informationen. Es gibt zum Beispiel YouTuber, die an die flache Erde glauben oder die Impfungen leugnen.
July 18, 2025
Mi día
Hoy mi hermana estuvo enferma y no podía cuidar a mi hija. Mi mamá tenía una cita con el doctor así no fui a trabajar en la mañana. Llevé mi hija al parque. Ella tenía muy divertida en las diapositivas. Estaba nerviosa cuándo ella estaba en las escaleradas. A las una y media, fui a trabajar porque mi mamá estaba libre. Estaba tan aburrida en trabajar pero ¡Yo viví! En la casa estoy cocinando la cena. Es noche de pizza. (Quiero conocer como se dice "pepperoni" en español. Necesito Google jaja.)
July 18, 2025
Oggi
L'orecchio mi fa ancora male, sto già prendendo medicina. Stanotte non sono riuscita a dormire molto bene, quindi ho fatto adesso un pisolino. Mi sono oggi anche esercitata con la chitarra, sto imparando “kiss me”, ma sempre inizio a imparare una canzone e mi sono dopo frustrata, quindi non finito di impararla bene. Mio fratello oggi ha fatto ciabatte con mia zia. L’ho fatto bene, sta buono.
July 17, 2025
Heute
Mein Ohr schmerzt seit drei Tage, damit konnte ich am Nacht nicht gut schlafen. Mein Onkel ist Doktor, er hat also mir schon Medizin gegeben. Ich bin müde und habe keine Lust etwas zu tun. Meine Tante hat mir Schminke gegeben, es ist neue, sie werde es verkaufen. Ich weiß nicht was noch werde ich heute tun, ich will aber schlafen.
July 17, 2025
décrivez votre routine quotidienne
Je me léve a seize heures du matin. Puis je me change dans mes vêtements pour le journée de travail. Je me brosser mes dents et lave mon visage. Apres, je cusine le petit-déjuener. J'adore les œufs pour petit-dejuener avec un cafe.
Á sept moins dix heures, je prends le bus de personelle a la mon travaille. Je commence travailler á sept heures et je fini á cinq heures et demie. Dans mon bureau, nous travaillon quatre jours par semaine pour dix heures. Es parfait pour moi, parce-que je peux voyage dans le week-end.
Aprés le travail je fais allé á la salle de sport ou je promene prêt de rivière. Il faut faire de l'exercice. Quand je rentre, je mangé dîner, prendre une douche et je me détendre avant couché a dix heures.
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
Traveling
I don't have many goals in my life but one thing I want to do in the future is traveling. I say future because right now I am too young to travel on my own and I don't have money. I am so curious about new cultures. I am not even attracted to the sights of a country. I'd rather walk through local streets and see the people their. I want to see their style, I want to see the way they life. I wanna sit on a bench and do nothing but gazing around. I am not an extroverted guy but I'd like to talk to a local or a stranger and listen to their experiences. Of course all this is easier said than done. You have to be courageous to do this. Everywhere I go I wanna buy something and bring it back home with me. I will definitely take part in an Erasmus project and study for 6 months or a year abroad.
July 17, 2025
Little Review of the Clash of Civilizations
For the context, I'd like to mention that this year I've successfully passed all exams and from the autumn I'll be studying international relations in Czech Republic. I'm Ukrainian, and I wouldn't say that international relations have been attracting me all my life, but I think the invasion and other unexpected happenings have changed my view on the foreign policy.
So year before I started to read as much as possible literature, articles and news about what's happening in the globalized world, behind and in front of Ukraine. I've read some significant books, which authors I regard as one of the best political analysts and writers (I mean Kissinger and Brzezinski, Idk. if his polish surname is written correctly). But also a year before I found a really difficult book to read by Huntinghton, based on his own theory of international relations, ''Clash of Civilizations''. I won't take up your time by explaining the detailed aspects he included in his theory, but I will try to summorize his work in a few words.
The main subject he maintained consists in remaking of the world order, after the collapse of USSR, when the bipolarized world ceased to exist. The America was left alone in a world with no enemies, China was far long from its nowadays dominant position, Russia was left weakened and ashamed, but cured and abolished from the "red illness". After this constant world order, there came out the new one, based not on ideologies, but nations as the major influence in foreign affairs. Huntington says that the nations and cultures will play main role in the modern world, but at the same time he consciously omits all unions, all organizations, that are based not on the nationality, but on state's own reasons and ambitions. This made this book weird for me, but the worst part of the book was exactly about Russo-Ukrainian relations. I understand, that the book came out in 1994, in the period, when no one could even think about possibility of war between "slavic brothers", but still, the quatation like
"I don't believe in Russo-Ukrainian conflict because they are both partrs of the Orthodox civilizations" still remains weird for me, even despite the year the book was firstly published.
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
Good afternoon
Hi everybody
This is my fourty day using Chapgpt to practice my English, I feel that it's a great tool but some of his answers are predictive. Also sometimes he throw up texts in other languages, but by and large it work out.
I'm gratefull about all of the people that take a moment to correct my texts, generally I make sure to answer their corrections with a short phrase.
I hope one day become in an expert english speaker and perhaps write my book in English too. I don't know, all is possible.
July 17, 2025
Hard day before exciting weekend.
Hi. Today was a hard day. Again. There was a lot of issues at work, but I anyway was able to attend two hiring interview. Now I'm waiting for employers' decisions. At evening me and my wife went to the big grocery store for buying groceries and beverages for the weekend, because tomorrow we're going to the nature for three days. It's so exciting, because there will be a huge group of people we don't know. We know only one couple, who invited us. We are introverts and it's hard for us to meet new people. But it's comforting that those people have a same hobby with us. This hobby is music open air festivals. We go to the festivals every year, but there was a break during the covid pandemic. We hope, that we find a common language with these people.
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
La mia città preferita è Roma
Sono andata a Roma una settimana fa. Era cosi bella. Ho visitato Collesseo, Fontana di Trevi, Piazza di Spagna e Pantheon. Ho mangiato il pizza margherita, il tiramisu e il gelato. Erano deliziosi :) Ho bevuto un Aperol Spritz a Piazza di Navona. Ho incontrato una ragazza e un ragazzo. Abbiamo chiacchierato. Erano molto cordiali. Voglia andare a Roma di nuovo. Ma questa volta voglio restare più a lungo.
July 17, 2025
Writting about IA
I recently watched a Ted Talk about IA, it is impressive how algorithms operate on such an enormous scale. I had not realized how IA had permeated our daily life activities, maybe because I’m not really into technology, I was not aware of its implications.
For an average stay-home mom, it is almost impossible to understand how IA operates, but I am into social media and I came to understand that the algorithms that facebook and IG create, involves me in such a delicate way that I am part of something bigger than a like.
Through the years I have been using social media to connect with old colleagues and entertain myself, without any shame, I can tell that I spend barely two hours a day checking what is new in the digital space. I read, I post, I give likes and spend time checking what interests me. What I did not know is that I was giving digital power to huge companies to analyze and categorize me in order to give this data. So even though I am not a digital person, I give important information to digital companies on a daily basis.
As an ordinary person, I truly believe that IA is taking over us in ways that we do not fully understand, for instance some people use it to help them navigate daily activities and make their life more easy, however, what people do not realize is how through an innocent search we are feeding massive algorithms that we not longer understand how operates. It is scary if you ask me, the world as we know it may not be the same after IA gets out of hand.
July 17, 2025
July 17, 2025
Fortschritt im Deutschlernen
Ich habe seit einiger Zeit Deutsch gelernt, aber ich denke, dass ich nicht so viel Fortschritte wie ich sollte gemacht habe. Diese Seite hat mir definitiv beim Schreiben geholfen und ich bin schon gut im Lesen, obwohl ich meinen Wortschatz noch erweitern muss. Ich übe mein Hören mit Liedern aber nicht mehr so oft. Ich finde Mediengestalter hilfreicher, aber ich kann keine gute Videos finden. Sie sind mir entweder zu undeutlich oder zu langsam. Mein Sprechen ist schlecht, weil ich auf Deutsch fast nie spreche. In ein paar Monaten werde ich einen Sprechpartner haben, also werde mein Sprechen sich hoffentlich verbessern. Ich denke manchmal auf Deutsch in der Zwischenzeit, um meine Sätze besser fließen zu lassen.