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Criticise
Countries with almost 400 Million population gathered to discuss how they can tackle with Israel (10 million population) but no conlusion came out. This is ridicilous. It cannot be explain that USA backs Israel. The goverments should not use the excuse of USA supporting Israel in every area. This did not happen overnight. When Isreal invested in tech, engieering and science, Arab nations did not do anything. Now, goverments cannot take any action other than condemning it. Most of them make use of Palestine for domestic community.
Sept. 17, 2025
How can I say that in colloquial expression?
I like anime, so I’m looking forward to watching the latest episode of Milky Subway.
It’ll be uploaded at this Thursday on YouTube, Netflix or something. I’m so sad that it is the final episode. Also I wonder what will happen the next story. I worried it can finish properly cause it has about three minutes but it has a lot of foreshadowings.
Sept. 17, 2025
Sept. 17, 2025
Sept. 17, 2025
Sept. 17, 2025
Richard Löwenherz 3
Richard erfahrte das Komplott von Philipp und Johann und eilte nach England zurück. In Österreich wurd Richard von Leopold V. gefangen genommen und dem Kaiser des Heiligen Römischen Reiches Heinrich XVI. angetraut, der enormes Lösengeld verlangt. Eleonore kratzete Geld zusammen, um das Lösengeld zu bezahlen.
Sept. 17, 2025
White Chocolate: My Guilty Pleasure ホワイトチョコレートは脂肪と砂糖の塊？
Among all types of chocolate, I prefer white chocolate the most. I am especially fond of its sweet, milky flavor and its gentle ivory color. It pairs excellently with black coffee. However, just before beginning this essay, I discovered that white chocolate is higher in calories because it is primarily made from cocoa butter. In addition, it lacks the polyphenols that are abundant in dark chocolate, which makes it less beneficial nutritionally.
Although snacks are meant to be enjoyed and don't always have to be nutritious, I felt disappointed to learn that my favorite confection is essentially a mixture of sugar and fat. I value foods that are both enjoyable and healthful. From now on, I may find it more difficult to purchase white chocolate casually. Yet this very fact may make it taste all the more special, offering a kind of guilty pleasure.
Sept. 17, 2025
Nunca mais é sábado
Introdução (está sempre igual para todas as expressões)
Encontrei, num website, 55 expressões que se crê serem usadas no dia a dia dos portugueses. Não sei se é a verdade. Não tenho a certeza de como usar algumas delas em conversas. Vou inventar situações com essas expressões, uma a uma, para provar que as compreendo corretamente.
1. O meu chefe está sempre a adiar a conversa sobre a minha promoção. Estou farta. Nunca mais é sábado.
2. Ainda estou à espera da tua resposta. Nunca mais é sábado. Diz se queres ir à Madeira este ano ou não. Corremos o risco de ficar sem alojamento se demorares a decisão por mais tempo.
Este espressão pode ser usada assim?
Sept. 17, 2025
Sept. 17, 2025
Sept. 17, 2025
This year
There were many challenges this year.
I quit my job at a library last year. I didn't want to stay there. My colleagues tried to mob me, and the job was boring. I was going to get a job in IT. I quit, having no offer, because being surrounded by the colleagues became intolerable. I started to send my CV and make a lot of test tasks. I was rejected again and again. I applied even to other cities.
In the end, I got an offer in a neighboring city. My partner was studying at the university at that time. So, he had to stay. I moved all alone.
I rented an apartment, bought necessary things (it was difficult, by the way).My best friend came to me. She had lived in our home town and wanted to move out. But she decided to come back after seven months.
I visited my boyfriend every week. Going by bus took a big part of my weekends.
We are together now. We wanted to get married, but got sick. I'm writing it and coughing because although I don't have the sickness, I still have to suffer from remaining effects. I hate pneumonia, I'm exhausted because of this. I've been suffering since June.
To make a long story short, I've handled the long-distance relationship, my best friend moving away, the cardinal change of job, two moves, a repair and the pneumonia this year. I can't even choose the biggest challenge. Maybe it's the sickness.
Sept. 17, 2025
Guǒzi(果子)
A very popular traditional pastry where I live is guǒzi (果子), which is an indispensable gift when visiting relatives during the Chinese New Year.
It is made mainly from wheat flour, oil and sugar. It represents respect and sincerity to elder generations.
The pastry comes in different shapes, such as cuboids, cylinders, spheres and semilunes. But the most popular one is the cylinder.
A package of the pastry usually weighs 0.25 kilograms. It is packaged in special yellow paper, shaped like a rectangle, covered with a red label, and then tied with a thin paper rope.
It is impolite to take an odd-numbered package of the pastry to visit relatives; instead, taking even-numbered packages (for example, two, four or six) is polite. However, two is the most popular, and four is the maximum, because of poor living conditions in the past.
In the past, this pastry was the only type of pastry that people in the countryside could eat, so they couldn’t bear to eat much of it at one go. They would only eat one or two pieces each time, then store the rest somewhere hard to find.
My maternal grandmother liked to eat it secretly. Once she heard someone walking towards her house, she immediately hid the pastry somewhere, because she couldn’t bear to share it with others.
This pastry still exists in both cities and the countryside, but it is certainly not as precious as it was in the past, thanks to improved living conditions.
Nevertheless, people still buy it for their elderly relatives as a sign of respect and sincerity during the Chinese New Year. The pastry has already become a symbol of the Chinese New Year, just like mooncakes are for the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Sept. 17, 2025
9/16 (火) アニメにLGBTQのテーマを見つけた思い出
正直に子供の時からクィヤメディアが面白いなと思ったけど、周りはいつも「いや、ちょっとダメ」と言われた。あの時にディズニーとかに育てられてアメリカのクィヤメディアはちょっと正しくないからいいLGBTQ人とテーマくらいを見えなかった。LGBTQテーマを見たらアニメを見始めただけだった。ベルサイユのばら、ジョジョの奇妙な冒険、たまに美少女戦士セーラームーンとか。本当にびっくりした。あの時に、日本はすごく保守的の国と思うんだった、特に他のアニメフャンがそう思った。どうしてこんなアニメがたくさんありそう？と思った。地味にこのアニメからすべて日本のメディアがめっちゃハマってた。日本語が分からなくてもおばあちゃんとたまに日本のニュースを見ると思い出す。たぶんこのアニメについておばあちゃんに問った。え？ナニイッテンネンオマエ？っていつも応えた。ところで、いまよかったからアメリカと日本にもっとアニメに当たり前のLGBTQのテーマが見つけそうと思う。
Sept. 17, 2025
Starting learn english
Hello, my name's salim, i'm algerian, that's my first paragraph I will write in this site, I'm already started learning English, so I hope every one of you help me to become better in this language for my career in future. Right know I'm Canada as temporary resident(study permit) in Moncton University, I'm in my second session, I'm studying business and administration program, when I will finish my program, I will apply for work permit.
Sept. 16, 2025
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (4/12)
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (4/12)
Kanji sono difficili ...
Ricordo la prima volta che ho visto un giornale giapponese. Pensavo di essere ubriaco. Pensavo che questa non fosse una lingua, ma un codice alieno. ... Come diavolo possa qualcuno leggere questo?
Vabbè, forse è stata una reazione eccessiva. Per leggere un giornale o per funzionare nella vita quotidiane in Giappone, il Ministero dell'Istruzione raccomanda di imparare esattamente 1945 kanji. Perché 1945? Perché c'è l'anno in cui finì la guerra. Non sto scherzando, è la vera ragione. Si chiama "joyo kanji" ed è il numero di kanji che i bambini dovrebbero conoscere entro la fine della scuola media, all'età di 15. Naturalmente la maggior parte dei giapponesi conosce migliaia di kanji. La lingua giapponese (come le lingue ovunque) è in continua evoluzione, ma il sistema di kanji (e dell'hiragana e del katakana) è strettamente standardizzato e sistematico.
(Ho appena letto su Wikipedia che nel 2010 la lista di
"joyo kanji" è stato ampliato a 2136 caratteri. Perché 2136? Non lo so la ragione.)
Kanji sono difficili ... molto molto dificili.
Sept. 16, 2025
How old is the Moon?
Moon, a necessary planet for our survival. Since ancient times, when people looked at that big planet, they said : “Is it possible to arrive there?” if the ancients could see what the current era can do, they certainly consider us a God.
We achieve the sky, the land, the ocean, the air. But we want more and more, to go beyond the earth, our next objective:Space. Maybe find a new planet to colonize?
During the cold war, when the United States and Russia were disputing, one of the objectives was: who was the first to arrive on the moon. In the end the US were the first to arrive on the moon. The video uploaded, made a lot of conspiracy theories about your veracity and integrity. But it’s not the topic today, because we want to find out how old is the Moon?
Well, according to 1972, during the Apollo 17 mission, astronauts gathered moon rocks and soil.Scientists studied special crystals called zircon. These crystals were found in a rock collected by astronaut Harrison Schmitt. They are important because they tell us about the Moon’s age and how it formed.The study showed that the Moon is about 40 million years older than we thought. It formed more than 4.46 billion years ago, after a giant object hit Earth a long time ago. That big impact is how the Moon began to exist.To find the Moon’s age, scientists use special methods to measure the rocks. Knowing how old the Moon is also helps us learn more about Earth’s history.The Moon is very important for our planet. It keeps Earth steady, helps life to be possible, and controls the tides in the oceans. People admire the Moon, and it continues to inspire space exploration.
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
Reise nach London
Im Sommer 2025 habe ich sechs Wochen in London studiert. Ich bin mit ein paar Klassenkameraden von Newark nach London geflogen. Ich habe in einem Wohnheim mit meinen zwei Freundinnen, Paola und Lizzie, gewohnt. Ich habe viele Museen und Geschäfte besucht, zum Beispiel The Tate Modern. Es gab keine Mensa, also meine Mitbewohnerinnen und ich haben Frühstück, Mittagessen, und Abendessen gekocht. Manchmal haben wir nicht gegessen, weil wir zu faul waren oder nicht genug Lebensmittel gekauft haben. Ich hatte zwei Stunden Unterricht einmal oder zweimal pro Tag. Ich habe Sozialwissenschaft, Rhetorik, und Geisteswissenschaft gemacht. Mein Lieblingsfach war auf jeden Fall Rhetorik, weil ich den Professor prima fand. Ich hoffe, dass ich London wieder besuchen kann.
Sept. 16, 2025
Fair Fashion
Weiter mit dem gestringen Thema...
Ansttat Fash Fashion oder High-End-Maken zu konsumieren, können wir Fair Mode konsumieren.
Es gibt die sogenannte Fair Fashion oder auf Deutsch faire Mode, bei der Fashion Mode nachhaltig hergestellt wird. Das bedeutet: Bessere Arbeitsbedingungen, keine Kinderarbeit und die Klamotten sind von besserer Qualität, deswegen sind dauerhaft. Das einzige Problem sind die höheren Kosten. Trotzdem sollten wir überlegen, dass es vielleicht besser ist, eine gute Produkte zu kaufen, das mehreren Jahren dauert werden, anstatt viele, schlechte Produkte, die nur einmal benützen werden können. Trotzdem konsumiere ich zurzeit nur Fast Fashion. Ich kann mich nicht im Moment ein 60 Euro T-Shirt kaufen, jedoch versuche ich, nur das zu kaufen, was ich brauche. 😊
Sept. 16, 2025
Heutige Arbeit
Heute haben wir “Planen Tag” in unserer Firma. Es war sehr chaotisch. Es gibt viele Grund, warum das der Fall ist. Erstens, unsere Tooling ist Scheisse. Ich weiß gar nicht, warum wir kann Jira nicht richtig benutzt.
Die Miro App hat seit 3 Jahren so viel verbessert, aber wir unsere Methode nichts verändert haben. Keine Veränderungen ist gleich mit keinen Verbesserungen.
Irgendwie haben wir Excel auch benutzen. Warum?? Ich bin total verwirrt. Wir haben drei Tools, um ein Ziel zu erreichen. Ich denke, das einzige ist genug, nicht drei.
Es ist so lächerlich.
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
Sept. 16, 2025
16/09/2025
J'étais malade. En fait, je ne me sens totalement bien encore. Tout a commencé dimanche, quand je me suis réveillée, j'ai découvré je me sentais particulièrement fatiguée, malgré j'avais dormi assez. Ensuite ma gorge a commencé a douler et un autre symptôme est apparu - le nez qui coule.
J'ai passé le jour entière en lit à boire le thé et dormir.
Le lunedi je suis allée à l'école.
Maintenant je me sens mieux.
Aujourd'hui nous avons connu notre nouvelle professeure du math. Elle fait tout trop vite, nous nous sentons perdu. De plus, elle nous a donné beaucoup des devoires. Honnêtement elle est un peu angoissante.
Sept. 16, 2025