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Rabdom story 3 : Queen of the Swamps
- Ragnar Stormbreaker -
Our group went throw the Swamps. The wood road was long and wide. Around us was water, mud and trees. Everything was dark and misterious. It was almoust dark when we heard wierd noises. We stoped... Gebrin want to say something but I shuted him down and listen. Then something behind us snapped. We truned around and saw humen whit mask. Then he threw a thing that explode. It was too fast. In one moment there was onli one persone but then there were lots of strange people with guns and explosives. Than started big fight.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Der Ausflug
Gestern habe ich einen Ausflug mit meinem Mann nach Regensburg gemacht. Wir haben die Kirche und die Brücke besucht. Danach sind wir nach den Einkaufszentrum gefahren. Mein Mann hat neue Schuhe gebraucht. Er hat viele Schuhe probiert. Die Verkäuferin war sehr nett und sehr nützlich. Endlich, hat er zwei paar Schuhe gefunden. Sie haben er sehr gut gafallen . Die Preise sind günstig. Es war ein spaß Ausflug.
Sept. 21, 2025
How to learn English?
Hi, I wanna improve my English but I don't know what I have to do for this.
you know, I know all the tenses but sometimes I forget how to speak English.
do you have any advice guys?
and it there anyone here to help me?
someone I can practice with her and tell me how to make my English better.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Sleepover with my friends
Saturday at 19 pm my friend and I met in front of my others friends house. Than we went into it and gave our presents to our friends mum because it was her birthday. Our friends mum was really happy about our presents. Then my friends and me went to my friends room and made the bed's. A few minutes later, our Pizza comes and we ate it. After we finished eating we went back to my friends room and did put on our Pajamas. Then we played Mario Cart. When we didn’t feel like it anymore we played truth or dare, but after one or two round, we still didn’t feel like it anymore too. Then we Chatted and ate cake and watermelon after an how it was boring and we played Mario Cart again We ate Chips and Jelly babies. At 12 pm we brushed our teeth and felled a steep. The next morning I wake up at half past seven in the morning. I played Hayday on my phone till the others waked up too. When everyone was awake, we talked about our Chemie teacher. (But not good). Then we did pull on some other clothes and went to a bakery. We walked 15 Minutes to the bakery and back. When we was back at the house from my friends, I made some fruits for the breakfast. While I made some fruits the others set the table outside. When my friends, me and my friends mums were outside, it started rain. Then we have cleared the table and set the table inside again.
After breakfast we played Mario Cart again, till
my friend and I had to pack our bags and went home.
I really liked this sleepover!
Sept. 21, 2025
Strange Taste Habits
I watched Wednesday series. The Wednesday’s family eats very unusual food. And I have a topic about food habits in my reserve. And… have a mood to write today.
By the way, off the topic, I remember that old movie Addams Family, 1991, staring Christopher Lloyd (he appears in 2th season of Wednesday, too). There’s typical cliche scene in the movie – the dance Mahushka – “…A Kozak taught us this dance! Mahmushka! Mahmushka! Hey! Hey!...” There’s no such a word, by the way.
If you have a mood to watch,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EldT0FJUE3I
and you may try this one, too
https://youtu.be/SzkjmtvWZtM?si=k90t_CaaF85JXj2A
Well, let’s return to our foods. We won’t be talking about Surströmming, Igunaq/ kopalgyn, some Asian extremal exotic etc. For an appetizer starting with Stuhden/Hohlohdetc/Aspic and buckwheat porridge. The Western people never eat them, don’t they? I heard that if you haven’t eaten buckwheat porridge from childhood (like Polish and Ukrainian people do), you never accept its taste – it can have some sense, but Stuhden is meat and dense boullon just cold. For people drinking with meals ice tea or ice cola… Try студень with ice brandy. Also ther’s Khash in Armenian cousin. This dish has the same ingredients and cocked the same way, but it’s eaten hot.
Next some personal. I’m a food outcast. I don’t eat fish, salo (I’m not a vegetarian and I don’t have allergy), pluck (exept tongue). I have low hemoglobin now – such a pity I never try blood sausage. I don’t like milk. I hate boiled onion. Life is so hard… (a joke, don’t take to heart). I knew a guy who didn’t eat cucumbers. I heard about a man who didn’t eat tomato if it was cut. Children usually hat milk skin. Oh! I almost forgot – pickled watermelon.
What about you?
(I hope you’re not starving)
Sept. 21, 2025
Beitrag
Heute habe ich weder Lust noch Konzentration, etwas Langes zu schreiben, weswegen ich mich für einen kurzen Text bzw. eine Frage entschieden habe. In der Prüfung, die ich ablegen muss, gibt es einen Teil, in dem ich einen Beitrag verfassen und darin über ein bestimmtes Thema argumentieren muss. In einem Beitrag sollte eine neutrale Sprache verwendet werden. Das heißt, man sollte nichts Offizielles schreiben aber auch keine Umgangssprache verwenden. Meine Frage ist also, ob ihr jemals einen Beitrag geschrieben habt und euere Meinung über etwas geäußert habt. Außerdem möchte ich wissen, wie man nach eurer Meinung einen Beitrag schreibt.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
ニュースの記事の翻訳 九月二十一日 一年米の量について
国（くに）は、来年六月までの一年間に必要（ひつよう）米（こめ）の量（りょう）を計算（けいさん）しました。
人が食べるための米の量は697万ｔから711万ｔになりそうだと言っています。一番多（おお）い場合（ばあい）でも、前の年と同（おな）じぐらいにらると考え（かんがえ）ています。
国は今まで必要（ひつよう）な米が毎年１０万ｔずつ少（すく）なくなると考え（かんがえ）ていました。
しかし、二年続（つづ）けて、国の計算（けいさん）より多くの米必要（ひつよう）になりました。このため、米の値段（ねだん）が上（あ）がったと言われています。
今年は、旅行にくる外国人が食べる量なども考え（かんがえ）て計算（けいさん）しました。国によると、今年とれる米は、７２８万ｔから７４５万ｔになりそうです。
国は、必要（ひつよう）な量より多くの米がとれそうだといっています。
Sept. 21, 2025
Food
Fun fact, I have porridge for breakfast every day. I've got used to it since my boyfriend and I started to live together. Before this I had a tea and some sweet things like cookies for breakfast. We have been eating cereal in the morning for approximately one year. Then we switched to buckwheat porridge. We add some fruits and toppings to the dish so we've not got tired of it. Sometimes we cook something else, for example, an omelette or pancakes. But we cook the porridge more often.
There's one more thing I usually eat, it's chocolate. I think it's a bad day if I don't get any chocolate.
Sept. 21, 2025
Elektro- und Oberleitungsbusse
Ich fahre mit dem Bus nur dann, wenn ich irgendeine Strecke überwinden muss, wo Fahrräder nicht erlaubt sind, zum Beispiel auf einer Autobahn ohne den Gehweg. Um mein Fahrrad nicht fallen zu lassen, muss ich ihn halten und folglich stehen.
In Moskau waren vor einigen Jahren alle Busse durch Elektrobusse ersetzt, die sehr angenehm sind: Dort gibt es viel Platz und sogar Ladegeräte.
2020 hat die Stadtregierung endlich auf alle Oberleitungsbusse verzichten, da sie hässlich aussehen und zu viel Geld erfordern. Seitdem habe ich keinen einzigen Trolleybus gesehen.
Sept. 21, 2025
Do you use Audible?
This year earlier, I started using Audible. At first, listening to audiobooks was too hard for me, so I took a gap. This month, I picked it up again. But it seems that I can't try a simple of an audiobook before I buy it. That's odd, I remember I used to do so. Did Amazon just change the policy?
Sept. 21, 2025
My trip to Switzerland: Day 4, morning
On the last day of our trip, My wife and I took a ropeway to the viewpoint of Harder Kulm. The weather was the best during the trip. The line of tourists waiting for ropeway was much shorter than that we saw on the first day of the trip. We could take a ride within only 10 minutes after waiting in the line. The gondola was full of people, but it didn't feel very uncomfortable as all of the passengers looked very energetic and pleasant. From the destination of the ropeway there was a narrow but a tad long pathway to the view point. Along this way there were a couple of wooden dolls playing the Swiss traditional wind instrument (I forgot the name.) The view from the pathway was already stunning, but the scenery from the view point was far more beautiful. The lakes that engulfed Interlaken were reflecting the sunlight and the water looked shining green. Over the lakes was some of the giant famous mountains, such as the Eiger. Everything looked like shining. We couldn't help without asking another tourist to take our photos with the scenery. After being back to Interlaken, we picked up our luggage in the hotel and headed to a supermarket next to the main station. We grabbed sandwiches and water to prepare for our 6 hours train ride, and took a train to Heidelberg.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Production 1
I arrived a week ago in Lyon, and it was a difficult week to discover a new city. First, I have travelled 7 hours with only one break to eat, and endured an hour of traffic jam to come late to the inventory of my new apartment.
Just after my quick inventory, I met my new flatmates, and one say immediately " do they say you about cockroaches, bedbugs, and water leaks ?", a nightmare !
I didn't dinner after all this adventures, and stayed almost all the time in my bedroom for three days.
In fact Lyon is not so dramatical, with a lot of courage and a little bit of beautiful weather, i have visited Lyon to find a better neighbourhood to live since today.
I came here to study, I just begin a new cursus so in summary thats like a totally new departure, like I start from 0 without nobody to reassure me.
Sept. 21, 2025
The 1+1 Dilemma
On the morning of one day in summer when I was hanging out with other children in my village, my father told me that it was time for me to start school, although the elementary school in my village had started a new semester a few weeks earlier. At that moment, I was wearing shorts and a Breton shirt.
On the afternoon of that day, I went to school with a few other older children in my village. The elementary school was right behind my village and was only separated by a small moat. That was how I started my school life.
Since I didn't start school at the beginning of that semester, I had no idea what to do when doing my seatwork. I remember one piece of seatwork was a math problem, 1 + 1 = . I didn't know how to do it, so I had to see how my deskmates did theirs. The deskmate on my left wrote 1. Then I wrote 1 on my exercise book. But when I saw what my deskmate on the right wrote, it was 0. I had to erase the answer I just wrote down and write 0 instead.
I remember I changed the answer between 1 and 0 several times so that the paper in the answer area even wore out. However, I can't remember what the exact answer was when I finally handed my seatwork in.
That is a very interesting memory that happened in my elementary school, and I can't forget it even now.
Sept. 21, 2025
Who do you want to turn into someone famous for one day?
I wouldn't want to turn into anyone famous even for just one day, because after all I will turn back myself. The power or a lot of money can't be anything for just one day, and I'm going to feel vain. Rather than that, I want to improve myself as soon as possible.
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (8/12)
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (8/12)
C'erano due revisioni maggiori alla lingua giapponesi, una volta negli anni 1870, dopo la restaurazione dell'imperatore, e un'altra negli 1940 dopo la guerra durante l'occupazione. In entrambe le occasioni, molto kanji erano semplificati o eliminati per facilitarne l'alfabetizzazione.
Ricordate il kanji per imparare, 学? Prima del 1945, il kanji aveva questo aspetto: 學. Non troppo difficile, vero? Ma questo è solo uno esempio. Ce ne sono migliaia, e alcuni molto più complicato dell'esempio sopra. Per esempio, uno, due, tre （一、二、三）tutti lo sanno. Pero, prima del 1945 ... preparatevi ... 壱、弐、参. Aie!
Ricordate quando ho detto che ci sono "circa" 47 lettere del hiragana. Prima del 1945 si usavano (ゐ) e (ゑ) e gli altri esotici caratteri. Per leggere un giornale stampato prima del 1945 avreste bisogno di un molto bello dizionario o delle risorse dell'internet. Vabbé, non ci era nessun internet nel 1925.
Leggere un libro stampato prima del 1870 è impossibile per un profano. Dovresti essere un esperto di giapponese medievale per capirlo.
Oggi possiamo trovare i classici della letteratura nelle librerie o nelle biblioteche, ma sono tutti tradotti in giapponese moderno.
Sept. 21, 2025
短い文なのに、難しい文がある
日本語には、よく短い文があるけど、これは分かりにくいと思います。この間勉強会のみんなとさくらももこが書いた「もものかんづめ」という本を読んでいます。これには様々な面白い作文があります。作文の一つには、さくらさんがある雑誌のバカな記事について書きました。例えば、記事には「妻があきれた馬鹿っ夫」の一つだそうです。さくらさんは雑誌に関して「こんなもの載せてる方こそ”馬鹿っ雑誌”である。」と書きました。「載せて(い)る方こそ」というのは一番難しい部分だと思います。「方」は「方法」のような意味の気がします。「こそ」は「こちらこそ」の「こそ」と同じ言葉でしょうか。意味の全体は、雑誌がバカの理由はバカの記事を載せているの他に理由の必要がないと分かりました。
Sept. 21, 2025
Sept. 21, 2025
Drawing
I like drawing since... I don't know, I can't remember. When I realized I was living, I already like making lines with colors. I remember when I making cartoons characters on my textbook, haha, brings back memories.
Sometimes I made my friends mad at me because of the jealousy. I don't even understand why, why they put so much attention to this 'talent' of mine. Like, I can't even make my life with this talent. It can't give you lots of money. Well, it does, sometimes I got asked from my friend on Facebook to make drawing for them, and they'll pay for it. And I like sharing my arts to my social media, like those days. My arts been everywhere because of the funny things I put on it. Suddenly I got lots of followers. They came to my account to see my arts and memes (I do draw and memes, they like funny things, and I like drawing, so why don't we just do both?).
I got famous like... Instantly.
“not bad!” I said.
But I guess dude named Mark Zuckerberg didn't like it. About 1 month ago, my account got disabled for (S word) reason. All my arts, memes, progress, FRIENDS all GONE!!!
Now, I barely open drawing software on my phone. I can't find the right time, simply because I got to work. And thanks Mark, you make the situation even worse.