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Manhã ocupada
Eu acordei cedo hoje de manhã, no início estava ensolarado mas depois começou chovendo então eu tive que correr para pegar as roupas dentro. Eu comprei um café antes trabalho porque preciso o açúcar depois o caos. Todos tinham um manhã mal, minha colegas estava atrasada mesmo que ela correu para o ônibus dela. O ar condicionado estava mutio forte, eu reclamei para meu outro colega. Eu coloquei a jaqueta dele porque eu esqueci meu e senti frio. Espero que sim todos tieve um dia melhour demanhã.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Which photo you most hated and why?
Response of https://langcorrect.com/journals/qual-foto-sua-voc%C3%AA-mais-odeia-e-por-qu%C3%AA/
I read the text of brian926 and I had two imprtants memories of past. How the text as long I will devided in two.
As frist, answer the question of the text, one photographic it i always hated was taken on preschool, where all childrens dressed as angel. Was a beautiful pictures but, how my hair was big I looks like a girl. The people make fun of me when seeing this pictures so I burned it. My mom was sad but is water under the bridge.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 29
Anna said, "I think you should leave me here in this situation to save yourself. Sorry, I was wrong. Sorry for my misunderstanding."
Alok replied, "It's okay. We have to leave this place as soon as possible before the jacket comes alive."
So Anna and Alok ran away from that place.
Then they went to Alok's house. Alok said, "Oh my God, so you tell me the truth about your story. But I have a doubt. When I said the glass jar was broken, you looked worried. Is there something special in the jar?"
Anna replied, "Yes, in the jar my brother's and a lady's soul were trapped."
Aug. 27, 2025
Un'email
Cara Laura,
Mi manchi tantissimo e spero che tu stia bene! Da quando mi sono trasferita a Parigi, non ci sentiamo da un bel po'.
Per fortuna restiamo ancora in contatto sui social. Ho pubblicato alcune foto su Facebook, ma immagino che tu non abbia avuto molto tempo per stare sui social ultimamente.
Devo proprio raccontarti tutto quello che ho fatto! Mi sono iscritta a un corso di ballo ed è piuttosto interessante. Ci vado tre volte alla settimana e mi diverto un sacco: è incredibile, era proprio ciò che mi mancava.
Purtroppo, l’ultima volta che ho ballato mi sono rotta la caviglia e adesso devo riposarmi un po'. In fondo, credo che una pausa mi farà bene.
Ti mando un abbraccio da lontano e aspetto che mi scriva indietro.
A presto,
A
Aug. 27, 2025
Artemis ve geyik
Bir gün Artemis çıplak bir kaynakta banyo yapmış. Bir avcı, Akteon, ve av köpeğiler ona şehvetle bakmış. Birinin ona çıplak gördüğünü için öfkelenmiş ve utanmış. Bu yüzden, tanrıça adamı bir geyiğe çevirmiş ve avcı onun köpekleri tarafından yenmiş. Mitoloji alimeri bu efsaneye farklı yorumlar verdi.
Aug. 27, 2025
PART 1 Are celebrities good role models for young people?
The role of finding the right example for young people is hard to overestimate. Nowadays, plenty of youngsters are inspired by famous Hollywood stars, all sorts of influencers and other celebrities and try to emulate them. While some argue that media widen the range of role models, others believe that it can create an array of self-esteem and mental health problems. This essay will examine both positive and negative sides of this trend before asserting that it is rather a detrimental one.
On the one hand, having the whole internet on hand to find an appropriate role model can help tremendously. Moreover, not everyone was lucky enough to born in a decent family. For example, when a parent is dependent on drugs, it would be much better to take an example from someone advocating for healthy lifestyle and self-improvement. From this standpoint, being exposed to an enormous number of potential role models as someone who struggles to find a right example among family members can be more than valuable.
Aug. 27, 2025
My diary
Today get up at 6:20 am, I did a lit bit lazy but I get up bed at 6:30 am them I made the bed, I made the lunch, I prepared fried eggs with cheese and a americano, after a made a hot bath at 7:00 am I dressed with a formal outfit, them I put make up and I went out take a transmilenio.
In transmilenio was quickly, I arrive to office at 9:00 am and I checked my schedule and my mail, at 10:00 am I ate a delicius pinaple and that's it.
Aug. 27, 2025
Qual foto sua você mais odeia e por quê?
Há uma foto de mim que era quando eu fazia parte da equipe de luta romana no ensino médio. Era uma luta durante um torneio com muitas outras escolas. Na foto eu estava perdendo e meu oponente estava olhando diretamente para à câmara. Era uma boa foto para ele. A foto era no jornal num artigo sobre nossa equipe perdia o torneio. Era um mau dia por mim e quando olho à foto, siempre tenho lembranças sobre perdendo.
Aug. 27, 2025
Sell Baby Chickens on Credit
When I was a child, people in my village sold baby chickens on credit to make money, which was their only source of income.
In spring, they started hatching baby chickens. They bought eggs from farmers first, then checked the eggs to pick out unfertilized ones.
The doors of a hatch house had two small holes. When checking the eggs, they stayed inside the house, closed the doors, and placed the eggs against the holes to see inside them.
However, I was too young to understand the secret of identifying unfertilized eggs. I never asked them about it, though.
They placed the fertilized eggs in a bed and covered them with a blanket. Then they heated the house to maintain a temperature suitable for the eggs to hatch. After the eggs hatched and the chicks grew to a certain stage, they started selling the baby chickens.
They carried two baskets on either side of their bike’s rear seat. They placed the baby chickens in the baskets and rode to surrounding villages to sell them.
They sold the baby chickens on credit. They recorded information in their notebooks, such as the buyer’s name, village, and the number of chickens purchased.
In autumn, after people harvested their crops, they took their notebooks to the surrounding villages to collect money for the baby chickens sold on credit.
I don’t know how much money they earned each year; however, it was their only means of making money. Even if the earnings were modest, I think they were still vital for families in those tough living conditions. Unfortunately, some dishonest buyers wouldn’t pay or would only pay partially.
Aug. 27, 2025
What do you do when you're on holiday?
I live in the south and I can visit the sea and the mountain. That's what I usually do, but this summer I'm in my lock-in era. I learn English for my dream, practise ballroom dancing and learn C/C++ with computer architecture. Sometimes I feel what I'm trying to do too many things at once. But I can't sit on the lounge and do nothing. Which do you prefer, lazy holidays or active learning?
Aug. 27, 2025
Fight Club
Recently, I watched an interview Andrey Bezrukov (a former illegal intelligence agent). At the end of the interview he was asked a book or movie that left a strong impression. He said it was “The Defeat of the West” by Emmanuel Todd. I’ve downloaded an audio version of the book and finished it today.
(it seems that the book is available in French and Russian only, so I can’t recommend it to you)
Yesterday, I reviewed Fight Club – an underestimated movie from 1999. I wanted to write an entry about some analogies between the movie and the book. Something like “An Unheard Prophesy” or “Outpouring from 1999”…
There’s a few point really, but that is a silly idea, so I won’t.
The end.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
About My User ID
As you can see, my username here is 'LLLeslie'. Why is that? When I first came here and tried to sign up for this website, I was planning to go by 'Leslie', as it's my English name. But unfortunately, it's already been taken, so I have to come up with another one. Good for me, I am a creative person! (That's not true.) You see, all I have to do is repeat the first letter until I get an available name! Thus, the 'LLLeslie' was born! That, or 'LL' stands for 'Lifelong Learner'. I don't know which story is true. Your call.
Aug. 27, 2025
Nachbarschaftsproblem
Ich habe ein Probleme mit meine Nachbarn. Sie sind sehr laut und machen gross Partys sehr oft. Ich kann nicht schlafen. Ich bin mude und ich habe ein schlecht Laune. Meine Mutter sagt, dass ich nicht mich beschweren muss. Das ist, weil die Nachbarin ist seine Freundin.
Ich bin so wütend.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Turkish Coffee
Turkish Coffee is not as much recognition as Italy's espresso even tough it was made in Ottoman (today's Türkiye) in the history. There is a couple of reasons for this lack of recognition.
First, Ottoman's did not use to get on well with Europen countries and could not spread this coffee culture into Europe. Even Italy used to make coffee same way as Turks did. First espresso machine was invented in early of 1900. Right after World War II, espresso became popular worldwide. A coffepod, which costs 5 EUR, is enough for making Turkish coffee, which means it is much cheaper than espresso. Despite all, espresso is still one of the most popular baverage in the world.
Second reason, it is marketing. Today, Starbucks in Türkiye sell Turkish coffee but they do not sell it abroad. That's why Turkish coffee is still in espresso's shadow.
Aug. 27, 2025
English and German language learning
Hallo ich heiße Jovana. Ich bin 25 Jahre alt. Ich bin Krankenschwester und UX/UI designer vo Beruf. Ich komme aus Macedonien. Ich möchte gerne Deutsch und English lernen weil das ich brauche ihre hielfe. Was kann ich machen für besser sprechen und schreiben? Danke sehr.
Hi guys, my name is Jovana. I’m 15 years old. I am nurse and UX/UI designer by profession. I’m Macedonian but I live in Germany for about 1 year. I would like to learn these rwo languages fluent so I need your help. What can I do to achieve that? I would like to learn speaking and writing. Thanks
Aug. 27, 2025
Where do you think you will be 10 years from now?
I hope to be where it's not too rural and live there with my wife and child.However, I'm single and don't even have a girlfriend now. There haven't been opportunity to meet someone at private time since I started working. I think it's about time to try matching apps.
Aug. 27, 2025
French and English
If you can only speak Mandarin, you can only communicate with people who speak Mandarin.
If you can speak French and English, you can communicate with about 80% of people all over the world, across different cultures, countries and continents.
I'm just a beginner in French.
So I seldom post French journals.
Aug. 27, 2025
practice english writing skills
hello
this is my first text i'm writing so i'm a little nervous.
let me introduce myself
my name is sarvenaz and i'm 27
at the moment i'm preparing myself for ielts exam and for me this is very challenging
learning new things always make me stressed
anyway, i'm currently planning to write in this website almost everyday to improve my english skill
and i'm willing to get any feedbacks and helps from all you guys.
from tomorrow i'm going to write essays more academic with advance grammars and academic vocabularies.
Aug. 27, 2025
Cotton Plant
Cotton used to be a common crop planted in my hometown. At that time, living conditions in the countryside were very poor. Farmers didn’t have money to buy clothes, so they planted cotton to make their own clothing.
Cotton in my area is sown at the end of April or the beginning of May and harvested from early September to early November.
Cotton stalks are stronger and more solid than those of any other crops and are considered the best firewood for farmers.
Wild hares like to stay in cotton fields. Every year, before the cotton stalks are pulled out of the fields, villagers use a net to block one side of the fields to catch the wild hares, which always excites children.
Mothers in the villages are very talented. They know how to turn cotton into pieces of cloth. They use old, primitive machines to spin cotton into threads and weave it into cloth.
However, it’s now very rare to see cotton fields in my area because farmers are not as poor as they were decades ago. They have money to buy clothes and no longer need to make their own clothing from cotton.
Aug. 27, 2025
Permettez-moi de me présenter.
Bonjour, je m’appelle Kaname.
Je suis japonaise et je suis étudiante.
Je veux être une professeure. J’aime les enfants et Je veux voir les sourire.
J’aime la musique beaucoup, par exemple J-POP et HIP-HOP. Mon préféré est HANA et SKI-HY, Da-iCE. Mais, je n’aime pas musique classique, parce que ce n’est pas amusante.
J'aime aussi les distributeurs de jeux.
En particulier, j’aime un distributeur nommé Radda.
Enchantée !