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The Science of Falling in Love
Indeed, falling in love is a really interesting subject to talk about. I thought it had nothing with sciences but I was totally wrong. There are 3 différents aspects from love. First, the physical attraction. People who aren't asexuel (someone who don't have sexual attraction) can have lust from someone. And the journalist who said that said that it was Fair to think it's thanks to that that we can live because without reproduction we should be extincted. The cells responsable of lust is the testosterone for men and I don't remember the women cell's name. Also, there is the passion about your partner cause about the dopamine.
Thanks for reading !
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Notes from the Feedback on My First 10 Texts
First of all, I thank all of the correctors for their help! I've decided to make a summary of my first 10 texts. I would really appreciate if you could give me your feedback on these notes. I'm not sure that I got everything from the feedback right.
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Starting a sentence with "now" implies you were doing something else before, so it's inappropriate at the very beginning of a text. If you're talking about the current moment, you can say "right now." For example: "Right now, I'm looking..." Alternatively, you can remove "right now" altogether, as the verb tense will be enough to convey the meaning.
"Desire" expresses a strong, deep wish. "Want" is more appropriate in most common situations.
"To go downtown" is more idiomatic than "to visit town."
When making a list, it's better to use the serial comma (a comma before the last item, even when there is an "and"). It's also better to use "and." For example: "...apples, bananas, and oranges."
In a rhetorical question like "You could ask: [question]...", you should use "could," not "would." For example: "You could ask me: 'What...?'"
The verb for rewriting a text is "rewrite," not "recreate."
"End up doing" is an idiomatic expression, similar to "eventually deciding" or "ending up with a decision." It's a natural alternative to "decide." For example: "If I end up discussing topics that... I will quit..."
If an event is "approaching," it's more natural to say it is "coming up" rather than just "coming." For example: "My birthday is coming up."
It's important to use linking words (conjunctions, etc.). In English, coherence is valued; being choppy is not considered a style.
"Admire" is used for a person, a group of people, or a thing. For an activity, "enjoy" is more suitable. For example: "I enjoy creating towns. I admire city planners."
I don't know when to use "the" versus "a" with a first mention followed by a defining relative clause. For example: "...working on a/the town named..." Even though it's the first mention, the clause makes it specific, which often calls for "the." I'm puzzled.
Using "there is" isn't suitable when talking about something you created. For instance, if you created a town in a game, you should say, "I made..." because it emphasizes your work.
The verb "tell" requires an object. If there isn't one, use "talk." For example: "Tell me about..." or "Let's talk about..."
"Top" is primarily an adjective, not a noun. You would say "one of my top projects," not "one of my tops."
"Building and creating" is considered a single concept (a compound subject), so it takes a singular verb: "is detailed," not "are detailed." Why? Because the activities are so closely linked they are treated as one idea.
Short sentences are often better when joined with a conjunction or a semicolon for better flow.
Instead of "only books," it's more natural to say "just some books."
Use "I could understand" (not "can") when referring to a hypothetical or potential action by someone else. "Could" is less absolute.
When writing a person's thoughts, it's better to use quotation marks for clarity.
"Communicating" is not the same as "to chat".You can be communicating through Morse code or body language. For social interaction, "talk to a person" is better.
"Alcoholic beverages" can be shortened to "alcohol." Native speakers generally prefer more concise terms, and "alcohol" sounds more natural.
The word "parties" is typically used with the verb "enjoy."
Use the noun "normalization," not the gerund "normalizing," in phrases like "the normalization of..."
"Deal with something" is often better than "face" because it implies active management or handling of a situation, whereas "face" can be more passive.
Come = move towards you
Go = move away from you
Avoid omitting the object in a sentence.
The common idiom is "Long story short," not the full phrase "To make a long story short."
"I managed to get it done" is used for completing a specific task, similar to "managed to cope."
In programming contexts, you "build a feature," not "create" one, and you "review" files, not "analyze" them.
The word "competition" is used without an article. For example, "in competition with..."
A more natural phrasing is, "It's not my style to choose the easy way," rather than "choose something easy."
In hypothetical or "unreal" conditional sentences, use "were," not "was." For example: "If my path were easier..." This is similar to "If I were...".
The word "unfreedom" does not exist.
Use the plural "choices" because having options implies there is more than one choice.
"Option" is more common and natural than "variant."
Instead of "in another way," use "differently." For example, "Cats see the world differently." It sounds more natural.
"Homeless" is an adjective. Using it as a noun (e.g., "the homeless") can be considered offensive. It's better to say "homeless people."
The word "fundament" is outdated; use "fundamental" instead. For example, "Chaos is fundamental in the world."
Sept. 27, 2025
Food-delivery apps and kitchen
Food-delivery is often touted as the dealth of kitchen.Reserach from London School of Economics study shows that more than a half people in today society prefer clean and healthy diet.Compare to takeout food,the dishes cooked by themselves are favored by them.Food delivery industry is supposed to enhanced hygiene management.Compare to convenient life,a healthy lifestyle is what we truly need.
Sept. 27, 2025
My Fourth Day
I don't have much time to write every day, but I keep going toward my goal. Today I have some questions for you guys. I'd really appreciated, if you could reply. If you're not a native speaker, but you have C1 level of English, you passed exams IELTS etc., maybe you have good speaking skills, what did you do to achieve this level? What sources did you use for it? What motivated you to reach your goal?
Sept. 27, 2025
Hello
I want to become a public school teacher because I believe that education is the most powerful tool to transform lives. Teaching in the public school system will allow me to serve a diverse community of learners, especially those who need guidance, encouragement, and opportunities to succeed. As a teacher, I can contribute to the development of learners by providing meaningful and engaging lessons, instilling positive values, and creating a classroom environment where every child feels accepted and capable. Beyond the classroom, I will help society by shaping responsible, compassionate, and lifelong learners who can contribute to nation-building. Teaching is not only a profession for me—it is a calling to serve, inspire, and make a difference.
Sept. 27, 2025
Mein Arzttermin
Seit sechzehn Jahren ich habe viele Gesundheitsprobleme. In 2010 hatte ich Endometriumkrebs, und in 2016 hatte ich Gastrointestinaler Stromatumor (GIST). Der zweite Krebs ist immer noch ein Problem. Ich muss ein mal im Monate zu meiner Onkologin gehen. Meine Onkologin und die Krankenschwesterin sind sehr nett. Die Onkologin kann sehr gut Englisch sprechen, deshalb wir haben miteinander Englisch gesprochen. Aber das letzte Mal, haben wir Deutsch (Hochdeutsch, nicht Schweizerdeutsch) gesprochen, und ich könnte fast alles verstanden! Ich war so aufgeregt, weil ich habe nur seit 3 Monaten Deutsch in Ernt gelernt.
Sept. 27, 2025
The First Day of My Holiday
I got up so early to take the train to Quanzhou this morning that I felt tired and sleepy during the train ride.
I'm currently sitting in the hotel room, waiting for my friends. Maybe it's due to the delicious local food, I feel refreshed again.
The hotel we're staying at tonight belongs to the IHG. It was booked by one of my friends. Her husband likes international brands. I think she shares the same preference, even though she didn't agree.
I myself prefer local hotels with a good reputation, which are mostly new and with some special local decoration or food.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Mein Morgen
Ich habe heute Morgen um 8:30 Uhr aufgewacht.
Ich war gut, ich habe den Wecker nur einmal aufgeschoben.
Zuerst mache ich mein Bett, dann esse ich ein bisschen Frühstück: Kaffee und Müsli, so lecker!
Dann ich habe eine Episode meines Lieblings Fernsehserie gesehen, es macht mir viel Spaß.
Danach begann ich zu studieren, es ist echt schwer, aber ich möchte bis Dezember bereit Deutsch zu sprechen.
Ich brauchte eine Pause, so ging ich in den Garten für ein bisschen Luft.
Ich habe für zwei Stunden studiert, und jetzt kann ich endlich ruhen.
Heute Abend ich möchte meine Schwester anrufen, um sie mein gestern Interview zu erzählen.
Später will ich die Trilogie der "Der Pate" sehen.
Jetzt bin ich sehr hungrig, so ich esse gleich.
Bis später!
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Analyze yourself
You are an animal with mind and awareness, so you shouldn't be Arrogant. Being aware creature that put on your shoulders the importance of life ,how you will run the world around you. Also as you the most brilliant Enity you should to be wise to don't destroy organisms around you. Humans were created as a kind creatures , when we release the virtues and good behaviors , we immerse in world wars which become our life worst.
Sept. 27, 2025
手紙
『ファン・ゴッホの手紙』を読み始めた。弟さんへの手紙だから、文章はそれほど長くなくて、だいたいは日常生活をシャアするような内容だ。
今日は休みがどうか、自分が何をしたか、他の人の暮らしをちょっと記録したりして、特別なことではないけれど、読んでみるとゴッホは優しそうで、生活を愛する人と思う。
それ以外、言葉を勉強中の私には、すこし考えさせられるところがあった。例えば、ゴッホは「誰かと一緒に地図を描いた」ということまで手紙に書いて、弟さんに読んでもらった。もし、これがゴッホじゃなく、わたしの手紙だったら、面白いと感じてもらえるだろうか。
わたしは何かを書きたいと思っても、「これは記録する意味がなくて、ただのつまらないことだ」と考えて、結局なにもしないことがよくある。きっと「特別で、平凡とは違うこと」しか書かないのだろう。母語ではそうだ。
でも、外国語を勉強し始めてからは「なんでも書ける」という気持ちを持つようになった。慣れない言葉で、どんなにつまらないこと書いても、「ああ、わたし、すごい｜」と思って書き続けられるよになった。
Sept. 27, 2025
Mein Traumhaus und wo es stehen sollte:
Mein Traumhaus ist nicht sehr groß, aber gemütlich. Es hat einen Garten mit vielen Blumen und vielleicht auch ein kleines Schwimmbad. Im Haus gibt es ein helles Wohnzimmer, eine modere Küche und drei Schlafzimmer.
Ich möchte, das mein Traumhaus am Meer steht. dort kann ich die frische Luft genießen und jeden Tag den Sonnenuntergang sehen. Das macht mich glücklich und entspannt.
Sept. 27, 2025
A Website That Helps You Come Up With Ideas 作文のアイディアのためのサイト
I've been thinking about how I can utilize LangCorrect for my English learning. Now that I've written essays every day for two months, I feel like I'm running out of ideas for topics to write about. I hate to admit it, but it's getting harder to come up with good topics. Since I work from home, my life is pretty mundane. I don't come across interesting things on a daily basis. It's not that I can't find anything to write about, but I just don't want to spend too much time trying to find one.
Then I found a good website called "Random Words Gacha (ランダム単語ガチャ https://tango-gacha.com/)." On this website, at the click of a button, one to ten keywords pop up automatically. When I tried it, words such as classroom, lightsaber, poke, and kangaroo appeared. I may not write an essay on every word it generates, but within several tries I can get good enough ones to work with. I'm going to try using this website just for fun.
Sept. 27, 2025
Daily Life: Part 23
Recently, I have been feeling something continuing to bother me, but I can't describe what exactly that feeling is. I begin to be aware that something is pressing me, making me fed up. Just like everything I can't order them well. i don't know what happened to me. But I can say that's not good. I want to prove something that I still struggle with it. Nobody believes I can achieve these things except my father. Should I just obey another person's opinion? Maybe these things are fake stuff that I imagine. god bless me, I think I can pass out these tests.
Sept. 27, 2025
Are you a tightwad or a apendthrift?
It depends on the items. I'm not that interested in electronic equipments and clothes. I don't mostly spend a money to them. However, I've really invested to things related with espresso like coffee beans at SCAJ. I have to refrain from overspending for the time being.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sabato 27 settembre
Pur essendo malata, continuo a sbrigare alcune faccende. Non mi piace affatto stare semplicemente senza fare niente.
Tuttavia, credo di stare imparando una lezione importante in questi giorni: se non ti riposi, il corpo lo farà per te.
Avevo avuto dei piani per questo weekend e il fatto che ora devo riposarmi è un vero campanello d’allarme per me.
Forse devo imparare a rallentare il ritmo e dedicare più tempo alle cose importanti che alle faccende.
Molte cose sono porogabili, ma non il riposo.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
Почему я хочу изучать русский язык
Привет всём. Я хочу изучать по русски потому что я обожаю россию, за ей культру, и истории. Я тоже желаю читать книги достоевский в его родном языке. Я тоже хочу поехать в россию, может быть после войны. Прежде всего я хочу наслаждаться другими языками, и я планироваю изучать им.
Sept. 27, 2025
El futuro de la inteligencia artificial
No dudo que la inteligencia artificial en los próximos diez años sea más poderosa, especialmente con el auge de las LLMs como ChatGPT, Perplexity IA, Gemini, Microsoft Copilot y Pi IA. Por supuesto, hay algunas aplicaciones en las que la IA ya tiene mucho poder, especialmente cuando creo fotos. Ahora, las fotos creadas por IA son un poco espeluznantes.
Cuando generé fotos mías con Gemini, no eran realistas y estaban fuera de lugar. Yo aparecía muy blanca y tenía el pelo castaño. Sin embargo, pienso que las fotos de IA se verán más realistas en el futuro. Por ejemplo, podré tener fotos más realistas de mí misma con el pelo negro y las mismas expresiones faciales. Además, creo que la IA podrá producir vídeos más realistas, y las personas tendrán mucho trabajo para distinguir los vídeos producidos por humanos de los generados por ordenadores.
De todos modos, el futuro de la inteligencia artificial es muy emocionante porque ahora hay muchas LLMs como ChatGPT y Gemini. En los próximos diez años, la IA será más poderosa que los humanos porque habrá alcanzado la inteligencia artificial general.
Sept. 27, 2025
Sept. 27, 2025
일본어 4주차 복습
'-を します'는 '-을/를 합니다'라는 뜻의 동사이다. 명사랑 함께 사용해서 다양한 행위를 표현함.
'-が -あります'는 '-이/가 있습니다'라는 뜻이다. 어떤 장소에 사물이 존재하고 있는 상태를 나타냄. が는 명사 뒤에 붙어 주어를 나타내는 조사이고, 화제 속에서 처음 언급할 때 쓰인다.
//숫자에 'つ'가 붙으면 읽는 방법이 달라진다.
동사의テ형은 문장 중간에 동사가 오면 연결형으로 쓰인다. 여기서 동사의テ형은 끝이 て와 で형인 동사를 말한다. ます형 동사를 바꿀 때 ます를 빼고 뒤에 テ를 붙인다. '동사의テ형+ください'은 무엇을 해달라고 부탁할 때 쓰인다.
'なんじですか'는 몇 시입니까? 라는 뜻이다. 여기서 'なん'은 '무엇'이고, 'じ'는 '시'이다. 기본적으로는 ます형을 テ형 동사로 바꿀 때 끝을 바꿔주면 되지만 앞 음절이 어떻냐에 따라 달라지는 경우가 있다.(문법 부록 참조)
'ます형 동사'의 과거형은 'ました'이다. 'います'는 사람과 동물의 존재를 나타내는 동사이다. 즉, 자신의 의지대로 움직일 수 있는 존재일 때 사용한다. 하지만 주어가 무생물인 경우 즉, 자신의 의지대로 움직일 수 없는 경우에는 'あります'를 사용하여 사물의 존재를 나타낸다.