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Aug. 26, 2025
尊敬する有名人
下の文法や表現を使って、「私は尊敬する有名人」という題で作文を書きなさい。（300〜400字）
- 名詞修飾
- 「（〜によると）〜そうだ」「らしい」
私が尊敬する有名人はルイスハミルトンというF1レーサーです。何回もF1で優勝しました。記者によると厳しくて健康にいい習慣を作るそうです。生活は忙しいらしいのに、優しい人らしいです。たとえば、厳しい国に行く時、LGBTQの権利について発言します。それに、インタビューをする時冷静な声を使います。実は、私の一番好きなレーサーはハミルトンじゃなくてピアストリですけど一番尊敬する人はハミルトンです。でも、ハミルトンは長年になったからすぐF1を辞めると思うから、ピアストリに支持するつもりです。多分F1の後、彼は良いことをし続けると思っています。今、女の子たちにレーサーになることを促しています。そのことを続けるそうです。
Aug. 26, 2025
Das Gehalt
Seit einigen Wochen wiederholt mein Freund einen bestimmten Satz, der wir jetzt lustig finden: "wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten, werden wir es kaufen".
Ich erkläre. Wir leben in Deutschland seit anderhalb Jahr, und seitdem haben wir hier mit unseren Sparnisse und Gelehien gewohnen, bis letzten Monat. Mein Freund hat am 15. August mit der Arbeit angefangen. Er hat, wie erwartet, nur hälfte des Gehalt bekommen, deswegen konnten wir nur die wichtigste wie die Miete und den Einkaufen bezahlen. Wir haben natürlich andere Bedürfnisse. Also, gestern habe ich gesagt: "meine Liebe, ich habe viel gelaufen und deswegen habe ich Schmerzen in der Ferße", worauf er antwortete: "Keine Sorge, wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten, werde ich dir eine Sportschuh kaufen". Wir haben diesen Ausdruck in vielen anderen Situationen, sowohl für Dinge, die dringend sind, als auch für Dinge, die nicht, dass wir jetzt denken, dass das Gehalt nicht genug wird. Vor kurzem habe ich nur gesagt: "wir brauchen" … und wir haben sofort gelacht. Wir wussten die Antwort: "wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten..."
Aug. 26, 2025
Votos de matrimonio
¡Hola! Por favor ayudame con mis votos matrimoniales - tengo un prometido catracho.
I remember you once told me, “I always wanted to find a girl like you.” And I joked back, “You always wanted to find an Asian gringa from Baltimore?” And you said, casually but earnestly, “No, I’ve always wanted to find someone I can be myself with.”
And that really touched me. It was such a sweet and genuine thing to say. And I realized that I felt the same. With you, I can be my true self. I know that, no matter what, you’ll accept me and appreciate me. Even when I’m driving you crazy, you love me. And I know this is true because it’s the same for me. Even when you’re driving me crazy, I love you. And you drive me crazy a lot.
Recuerdo, una vez, me lo dijiste, “Siempre yo quería encontrar una mujer como tú.” Y yo bromeé de vuelta, “Siempre querías encontrar una gringa Asiática de Baltimore?” Y tú, con facilidad y sinceridad, dijiste, “No, siempre quería encontrar a alguien con quien pudiera ser yo mismo.”
Y eso me conmovió tanto. Eso fue muy tierno, muy genuino. Y me di cuenta que sentí lo mismo. Contigo, puedo ser mi verdadera yo. Sé que, no importa qué, me aceptas y me aprecias. Incluso cuando te estoy volviendo loco, me amas. Lo sé esto porque siento lo mismo. Incluso cuando me estas volviendo loco, te amo. Y a veces tu me vuelves loco en puta.
There’s a short story I like, it’s called El Mundo. I’m going to read it to you now, first in the original Spanish, and then I’ll translate.
Hay un microcuento que me gusta que se llama El Mundo. Voy a leerlo ahora.
El mundo es un mar de fueguitos. Cada persona brilla con luz propia entre todas las demás. No hay dos fuegos iguales. Hay fuegos grandes y fuegos chicos y fuegos de todos los colores. Hay gente de fuego sereno, que ni se entera del viento, y gente de fuego loco, que llena el aire de chispas. Algunos fuegos, fuegos bobos, no alumbran ni queman; pero otros arden la vida con tantas ganas que no se puede mirarlos sin parpadear, y quien se acerca, se enciende.
Por supuesto tú tienes un fuego muy loco. Pero tu fuego alumbra mi vida y me guarda caliente, y ojalá mi fuego haga lo mismo para tí. Aunque ardamos, ardemos brillos juntos.
The world is an ocean of little fires. Each person shines with their own light among the others. No two fires are alike. There are big fires and little fires and fires of all colors. There are people with calm fires that don’t even notice the wind, and people with crazy fires, filling the air with sparks. Some fires, silly fires, don’t light or burn, while others burn with so much passion that you can’t look at them without blinking, and whoever comes close catches fire.
Obviously you have a crazy fire. But your fire lights up my life and keeps me warm, and I hope my fire does the same for you. Even if we burn, we'll burn bright together.
I love you. Te amo.
I can’t wait to spend my life with you. No puedo esperar pasar el resto de mi vida contigo. Siñá nagúrabahan nasügürüni sun nibágari buma.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Sesame Plant
Sesame is a popular crop in my hometown, but people don’t plant it on large farmlands as it is not a staple crop in my area.
People usually sow sesame at the beginning of June after harvesting wheat.
The sesame flower is white. We have an old saying about it: “Sesame flowers grow higher with each joint,” which means things are getting better and better.
Sesame leaves are edible. People pick them, boil them, dry them, and then eat them as vegetables in their daily lives.
Sesame stalks are a very good source of firewood. Farmers use dried sesame stalks for their earthen pots.
We use sesame to make edible oil for our meals. It’s very fragrant, even when we use only a few drops in our dishes.
People also use sesame as an ingredient when making flour-based foods. Foods with added sesame are very fragrant and delicious.
The only drawback of sesame is that its yield is not high. That’s why it’s not a staple crop in my area.
Aug. 26, 2025
Sesame Plant
Sesame is a popular crop in my hometown, but people don’t plant it on large farmlands as it is not a staple crop in my area.
People usually sow sesame at the beginning of June after harvesting wheat.
The sesame flower is white. We have an old saying about it: “Sesame flowers grow higher with each joint,” which means things are getting better and better.
Sesame leaves are edible. People pick them, boil them, dry them, and then eat them as vegetables in their daily lives.
Sesame stalks are a very good source of firewood. Farmers use dried sesame stalks for their earthen pots.
We use sesame to make edible oil for our meals. It’s very fragrant, even when we use only a few drops in our dishes.
People also use sesame as an ingredient when making flour-based foods. Foods with added sesame are very fragrant and delicious.
The only drawback of sesame is that its yield is not high. That’s why it’s not a staple crop in my area.
Aug. 26, 2025
Domingo
No domingo nós fomos para a casa de uma amiga para o aniversário dela. Na estrada meu amigos não consegui decidir ouvir que música, então nós não tínhamos qualquer música. Quando nós chegamos ela nos mostrou a casa e serviu algum vinho para nós.
Todos nós andamos na cidade e fomos ao shopping para jogarmos boliche. Era muito ocupado porque por causa do feriado.
Depois a gente foi para o jantar em um restaurante japonês. Eles tinham coquetéis muito sofisticados.
Nós voltamos para a casa de minha amiga e algumas pessoas jogaram jogos de tabuleiro mas nós precisamos voltar para casa. Foi um dia agradável mas eu estava muito cansada depois.
Aug. 26, 2025
Come scegliere i vincitori?
Ho partecipato tre colloqui in Italia.
Due colloqui sono per l'esame d'ammissione della scuola e uno colloquio è per la master class.
Ma due su tre colloqui sono stati strani, perché la giuria mi ha chiesto delle domande che non c'entrano niente sul colloquio.
Probabilmente la giuria ha già scelto i vincitori prima del colloquio, secondo me.
Allora che senso ha il colloquio in Italia?
Se avete capacità di superare il colloquio, vorrei sapere il vostro segreto.
Dovevo sorridere di più durante il colloquio? O dovevo truccarmi meglio?
Per fortuna, il mio curriculm vitae viene corretto dalla mia ex insegnante d'italiano.
Sarei molto grata se mi rispondeste.
Aug. 26, 2025
Mon voyage à Le Havre
Je dois dire, que c'est vraiment un échange scolaire. Il y a quelques années, quand je suis allée à Le Havre avec ma classe. C'était très excitant, parce que je ne connaissais personne. Malgré tout, c'était mon voyage préféré.
Tout d'abord, parce que c'était très amusant pendant le voyage dans le bus. Je me suis assis à l'avant avec six filles. Nous avons commencé à chanter avec la chanson 'my heart will go on'. Personne ne pouvait chanter et mon professeur, qui peux chanter excellent, devait pleurer de rire. Après notre concert magnifique, il venait à nous pour expliquer, comment nous devons chanter. Je ne vais jamais oublier ton leçon (et ses larmes).
Deuxièmement, nous avons promené à Étretat. La vue était très belle. La mer écrasait contre les rochers. Je ne verais jamais quelques chose comme ça. Après la promenade, moi et 6 autres éléves ont bu du chocola chaud dans un beau restaurant. L'interieur ressemble un peu du style Moyen âge.
Aug. 26, 2025
Lo que me gusta sobre el Alemán
Algo que es interesante para mí sobre el Alemán es que todo los sustantivos tienen que ir en mayúsculas. Yo ha notado que el Alemán es el único idioma que hace esto. A veces me confundo y pongo los sustantivos en mayúsculas cuando estoy escribiendo en inglés. No mucho pero si me ha pasado algunas veces(lol). También me gusta que el Alemán tiene a letra eszett (ß). La letra eszett se ve muy differente al los otros letras y se ve chido.
Aug. 26, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 28
But the jackal saw Anna while she was running away from the place, so it chased her. While Anna was running, she fell down after stepping on a trap. Alok also stopped and tried to free Anna from that trap, but it couldn’t.
Since Alok couldn’t free Anna, he ran away from that place to save itself from the jackal who sucked human blood.
After some time, the bloodthirsty jackal reached the place where Anna was trapped. Then the jackal said, “At last you are caught by me. Now I am going to kill you and take your blood to my master, so they can perform a ritual with it and become immortal. Do you think the person who killed me in the jungle will save you again? He will not save you from me this time.”
At that moment, a gunshot was heard. The jackal fell down with a scream. Anna, with a confused expression, said, “Alok! You saved me twice. Thank you.”
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Street Animals
Who doesn't love animals? These adorable creatures, been a part of us, existing since the beginning of time. Cats, dogs, birds, hamsters, which you prefer. So, unfortunately, we are facing so much struggle trying to handle so many cases involving abandoned animals and mistreatments. It’s really so sad see street animals, without food, without home, and if is not sufficient, have sick peoples who desire torture these creatures, son of bitch, just think about it, make my nerves ferving. Like as people said “People who don't like animals, it’s not a good person” And I have place to talk, I lost two cats, because people gave poison to them. I saw this, animals are pure and innocent creatures which deserve lovely and care, for a better future for them.
Aug. 26, 2025
Dites « non « aux produits américains
Une guerre commerciale est en cours entre le Canada et les État-Unis. De nombreux canadiens boycottent produits des État-Unis. Je ne voyagerai pas aux État-Unis dans l’avenir proche. Bien que essaie de ne pas acheter produits des État-Unis, j’ai acheté des fruits et des légumes. Il est important que nous mangions plusieurs portions de fruits et légumes par jour.
Aug. 26, 2025
A challange I recently faced
Last Tuesday I came home from work very late at night, and I was craving for a long, warm, relaxing shower before going to bed. But when I tried to have one I realized there was no hot water. I checked the boiler and it turned out it wasn't receiving gas because the methane supply had been cut off two hours before. I had to tough it out: a freezing shower would not have killed me!
Aug. 26, 2025
People trash many clothes
Every day, people throw away millions of pieces of clothing. Starting with this sentence, I would like to introduce how insane the quantity is from discarded clothes, so much that it is impossible to recycle all of them. Maybe it’s just a reflection to our society, and the fast changes in fashion, proves to be an obstacle for those who want to always stay in fashion. In my opinion, if you are going to throw it away, why not donate? be for your family, or people who need it, make a good choice, help who need. Toys, clothes, books, I know with the right consciousness, we can change this.
Aug. 26, 2025
Pollution and how to solve this problem
Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the environment. Do you think these problems can be solved?
The battle to protect the environment has been one of the main topic of concern in the last decade. Millions of people fight against pollution, asking for better laws to protect our planet and more attention by the politicians. But the problem can be partially solved without the help of the government.
First of all, nowadays, cars took over cities and every family has at least two cars. This not only made small towns and big metropolis highly trafficked, but also over polluted. People should start by using less their vehicles and more public transportation or bikes, which do not use gas.
Moreover, rivers and seas are increasingly getting more contaminated, especially due to plastic litters and waste substances which are released in waters by industries. People should be more observant when it comes to throwing rubbish and avoid polluting the environment.
Lastly, I personally feel that promote volunteer among teens and young adult, who would have the possibility to engage with other people their age, to clean cities and natural places so that the rate of pollution would decrease.
In conclusion, there are a lot of things we can do to protect our planet, and we should do all it takes to save it.
Aug. 26, 2025
Mein perfekter Tag in Lake Buena Vista
An meinem perfekten Tag in Lake Buena Vista, würde ich am Schwimmbad zwei Stunden lang schwimmen, damit ich mit anderen Menschen schwimmen kann, weil ich das liebe. Zum Beispiel möchte ich heute im Bonnet Creek Resort schwimmen, weil es Möglichkeiten, um mit anderen Gästen zu sprechen. Gestern Abend habe ich mit anderen Gast im Bonnet Creek Resort gesprochen. Leider weiß ich nicht seiner Nam, aber ich erinnere mich, dass wir über Florida und unsere Zeiten im Bonnet Creek Resort gesprochen haben. Nach diesem Gespräch war ich am Schwimmbad in der Nähe mindestens 20 Minuten lang schwimmen. Idealerweise würde ich am Schwimmbad mindestens 45 Minuten lang schwimmen, zumal ich Rundenschwimmen üben möchte. Persönlich liebe ich Rückwärtsfahren und Freestyle, da ich viele Runden mit dieser Schwimmbewegung. Ich kann also Brustschwimmen tun, aber ich mag gerne Rückwärtsfahren.
Darüber hinaus würde ich im Fitnessstudio Sport machen, zumal ich in Laufband laufe. Nach dem Laufen möchte ich Zirkeltraining machen, weil ich Muskeln aufbauen will, vor allem an den Armen. Außerdem möchte ich in meinem Schlafzimmer tanzen, wo ich die Musik auswählen kann.
Zum Schluss würde ich in den Jacuzzi gehen, um mich zu entspannen. Es wäre spannend, überhaupt nicht zu denken. Wenn ich in den Jacuzzi gehe, bin ich ruhiger.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Double Standard
Language discrimination means the difference between standard English and blue-collar dialects.
Standard English discriminates against blue-collar dialects.
Meanwhile, among the same group of people, those who speak standard English admire French very much.
More than a thousand years ago, French speakers were the upper class.
French was actually the official language in England for around 300 years.
They believe that French culture is superior to Anglo-Saxon culture.
Until now, there will be some people who think French culture is better.
So, the British culture has double standard.
Aug. 26, 2025
Le nazioni celtiche
Nei tempi antichi, la civilizzazione celtica si estendava dalla Romania al Portogallo di oggi. Col passare degli anni, molti di questi celtici si sono romanizzati e gli altri sono stati respinti dalle invasioni germanichi, ció che ha ridotto l'area culturale in cui le culture celtiche erano predominanti.
Tuttavia, si considera che esistano ancora sei nazioni celtiche: l'Irlanda, la Scozia, il Galles, la Cornovaglia, l'isola di Man e la Bretagna. In tutte si parla al meno una lengua celtica. Tutte queste lingue sono ora minacciate (la lingua cornica era persino morta prima lo sforzo di revitalizzazione nel XX secolo).
Alla lista delle nazioni celtiche si aggiunge spesso la Galizia. Sebbene la lingua galliziana (il gallego) sia una lengua romana, le tradizioni celtiche sono rimaste molto vivaci in questa provincia spagnola. La Galizia è regolarmente invitata al Festival Interceltico di Lorient. Per dieci giorni, questo festival che ha luogo ogni anno in Bretagna raccoglie decine di gruppe folkloristiche di tutte le nazioni celtiche in una bella serie di sfilati, concerti e altri eventi culturali.
I nomi "Galizia", "Galles", come "Gallia", provengono tutti da una parola di proto-germanico, *walh che designava i popoli che non parlavano una lengua tedesca, soprattutto i celtici.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025