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Aug. 24, 2023
Mon Appartement
Mon appartement n'est pas vraiment grand. Il n'y a que trois salles : deux chambres et une cuisine. La cuisine est aussi un salon, avec un canapé, deux télévisions et trois fenêtres. J'ai appris faire la cuisine l'année dernière et maintenant je l'aime beaucoup. D'habitude, je fais cuire du steak avec des légumes. Pour boire, j'ai du lait. La plupart du temps, le repas est bon, particulièrement quand j'utilise l'appareil de sous vide pour cuisiner la viande. Écrire ce m'a fait vraiment faim, donc je dois faire la cuisine maintenant !
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Aug. 24, 2023
Please Review My Essay
Some people believe that the higher a product's price, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a belief that a product's price and its desirability are positively correlated. However, I strongly disagree, as I believe that for most cases, this correlation does not hold true.
Indeed, for specific consumers, an increase in price enhances a product's desirability. This stems from their assumption that a higher price signifies superior quality, prestige, or exclusivity. This phenomenon is particularly evident in the luxury goods sector, where some individuals are willing to spend substantial sums, often in the thousands or even millions of dollars, on premium items. While some are drawn by the promise of impeccable craftsmanship, others make these extravagant purchases to signal their social or economic status, even when the actual quality of the product may not fully justify its exorbitant cost.
However, in the majority of cases, a higher price does not necessarily translate to increased desirability. Consumers have become increasingly discerning in their purchasing decisions. Most no longer automatically associate a higher price with superior quality or desirability. Instead, they carefully evaluate products by weighing the benefits they expect to receive against the product's price. Products that offer exceptional value for their price tend to be more appealing. In fact, high prices can sometimes dissuade potential buyers, particularly when the perceived value does not align with the cost. Imagine a scenario where consumers are presented with two products of similar quality but different prices. More often than not, consumers opt for the more affordable option, viewing the expensive product as overpriced. Furthermore, consumers' economic circumstances significantly influence a product's appeal. When financial constraints are a concern, affordable options are typically considered more attractive choices.
In conclusion, the association of higher prices with superior quality, prestige, and exclusivity does indeed attract some individuals to costlier items. However, the general trend among consumers is to select products that give them excellent value for the price.
Aug. 24, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay
The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity?
Staff performance carries considerable weight in determining the fate of a business. There are two strategies companies can adopt to improve staff performance, namely training and development programs, and regular performance evaluations.
Regular performance evaluations are powerful tools for enhancing employee productivity. These evaluations establish a structured platform where managers can provide constructive feedback to their employees. This feedback allows employees to identify areas for improvements and channel their efforts accordingly, ultimately leading to improved performance. During these evaluations, employers also have the opportunity to acknowledge, praise, and reward hard-working and productive employees.. When employees feel that their efforts are valued and appreciated, it significantly boosts their morale and motivation, resulting in them maintaining or even surpassing their performance levels.
Training and development programs serve as powerful instruments to increase staff productivity as well. They offer employees valuable opportunities to hone their existing skills or acquire new ones. With these enhanced skill sets, employees become more proficient and effective in their roles, resulting in increased productivity. Training and development sessions may also introduce employees to more efficient work methods and strategies for process optimization, enabling them to streamline their workflows, eliminate inefficiencies, and ultimately boost their output. Extensive research and surveys consistently demonstrate the positive impact of such initiatives on employee performance. For instance, a report from McKinsey highlights that organizations prioritizing continuous learning and employee development often experience a significant surge in productivity, typically ranging from 10% to 15%.
In conclusion, training and development programs can upskill staff members and equip them with techniques for work efficiency, while regular performance evaluations can help them identify and improve areas of weakness, as well as reinforce positive behaviors. Consequently, these initiatives contribute to a significant improvement in output.
Aug. 24, 2023
My study rutine
Now I don't study at the university or school. My study rutine include just English lessons with myself. I wrote 'with myself' because i learn this language by my own program without teacher. It's interesting experiens to prepared all nessesary studing materials alone. I spend 2-3 hours per 5 days a week on it. During lessons I try to improve my speaking , listerning , writing and reading skills. I think that the biggest part of the time i spend on speaking. From my opinion I should start pay more attention for my grammar and vocabulary. On my lessons I use different exercise books. Sometimes I learn lyrics of my favourite English songs that helps me to wide my lexicon.
The next weak I will commute from Poland to Belarus. I hope I will have enought disipline to continue my studying. Also in Belarus I will have more free time and maybe i will spend more time on English.
My study/life balance isn't perfect but I'm strongly try to fixed it :)
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La lumière
Quand le soleil est en train de se coucher, sa lumière dévoile le grain de la surface des champs et des routes comme une pellicule en noir et blanc.
L'éclat des gens qui viennent de nager longtemps dans les lacs et qui marchent affamés dans les rues du soir.
Le visage rayonnant de la petite fille qui aide son père à traverser la rue. Il avance à peine avec ses béquilles.
Aug. 24, 2023
Tagebuch (3)
Heute ist es so warm in Berlin. Ich habe den Eindruck, das ich schmelzen werde.
Wenn Menschen echt auf Eis wären, würde Berlin ein riesige Swimmingpool sein.
Aber es ist eine gute Bereitung für meine Reise in Brasilien nächste Woche. Ich werde nach Belo Horizonte fahren, in der Familie meiner Freundin. Dort wird es warm, aber nicht wärmer als in Para, im Nord, wo ich 5 Tage bleiben werde. Ich bin so aufgeregt, die Amazonien Wald zum erstes Mal entdecken. Aber eben dort werde ich versuchen, Deutsch jeden Tag zu üben.
Das ist alles für heute, bis morgen!
Aug. 24, 2023
A Chat Message
Hello Matt,
Sorry for the delay.
In the past few days, I had two work trips, so I was not able to reply to you.
WeChat does have a function for paying, but I don't think it also pays for delivery.
When I buy things at shops, I use my WeChat to scan the shop owner's WeChat collection QR code to pay them.
When I buy things on Taobao, I use Alipay (I can't use WeChat pay since the two of them are competitors).
WeChat doesn't have its own professional online purchasing platform, so it can't offer delivery services.
However, you can use WeChat pay to buy things on some online purchasing platforms that are accepting WeChat pay, then the shop owners on the platform will be responsible for delivering you the goods you buy.
Aug. 24, 2023
Bozhou
Bozhou is a prefecture-level city in the northwest part of Anhui Province. It used to be a county-level city governed by Fuyang city—the prefecture-level city in Anhui Province.
In 2020, Bozhou separated from Fuyang, becoming a prefecture-level city starting to govern Mengchen, Guoyang and Lixin counties and Qiaocheng District. These counties and Qiaocheng District were governed by Fuyang before then.
The area I live in is the Huaihe River Basin (valley). One of the tributaries of the Huaihe River is Guo River, the second longest tributary of the Huaihe River.
Bozhou is located by the Guo River. It's said that in ancient times, cities in China were all built by rivers, because it was convenient to transport.
Bozhou is a historical and cultural city in China, also known as the hometown of the famous historical figures of Caocao, Laozi and Huamulan, and the biggest traditional Chinese medicine trade market.
The appearance of Bozhou nowadays looks comfortable and beautiful. The streets in Bozhou are clean and tidy. Inside the city, there are many trees, bushes and flowers, which make it like a garden.
Aug. 24, 2023
Entschuldiegen über ein Firmenfest.
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
zunächst möchte mich bei Ihnen bedanken für Ihre Einladung,
aber leider kann ich nicht kommen. Der Grund dafür ist, dass ich zu dieser Zeit einen Termin beim Arzt habe.
Vielen Dank für Ihr Verständnis.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Yazan Koukeh
Aug. 24, 2023
Ein typischer Tag
Heute ist Donnerstag. Keine Neuigkeiten. Viele Arbeit soll ich machen, aber ich will das überhaupt nicht. Statt zu arbeiten, schreibe ich diesen Text. Zum Glück arbeite ich aus der Ferne, deswegen kennt mein Arbeitgeber nicht, dass ich schon eine halbe Stunde vergeblich verschwenden habe. Alle meine Gedanken sind über das Wochenende, weil meine Mutter ankommt. Es macht mich froh, ich habe sie schon seit einem Jahr nicht gesehen. Leider sind die Flugtickets aus Russland momentan wirklich teuer, aber das ist keine Überraschung. Am 29. August habe ich Geburtstag. Ich bin fast 28. Ich plane mit meinen Mutter, Frau und Tochter zusammen nach einem Lokal gehen, das in der Nähe liegt. Ich war dort einmal. Es ist ein netter Ort mit höflichen Kellner und einer schönen Terrasse. Glücklicherweise ist das Wetter in Serbien noch heiß. Das letzte Mal, wann die Mutter ihre Enkelin gesehen hat, war im Herbst 2022. Sie war jünger als 1 Jahr alt. Heute ist sie schon 1 Jahr und 8 Monate alt und sieht ganz anders aus. Ich frage mich, wie die Mutter darauf reagieren wird. Bestimmt positiv!
Aug. 24, 2023
Son haftalarda
Son haftalarda arastırmacılar konuşamaz yapma bir hastalık geçiren insanlari için konuşmanın daha kolay ve verimli bir sekil buldular. Şimdiye kadar onlar diğer insanlarla konuşabilmakiçin tek bilgisayar kullanabildilar, ama şimdi onların beyniye tellerden oluşturma cihaz koyarak benin düsüncelerin direkt olarak okuyabilirmiz. Ancak bundan endişlim, cünkü diğer amaçlara dönüştürmerek bu cihazlar suçlular hackliyebiliyorlar.
Aug. 24, 2023
Alerte aux oura
Les habitants de Los Angeles s’inquiètent puisque une grande ouragan approche. L’ouragan vient du Mexique où elle a inondé de nombreuses villes. J’ai vu des photos et c’était horrible. Le bureau de la météorologie américain a prévu que l’ouragan traverserait la frontière entre le Mexique et l’État de Californie. Le gouverneur de Californie a annoncé l’état d’urgence. Son porte parole a encouragé le public à se préparer.
Le sud de Californie est le plus menacé : les villes comme San Diego et Los Angeles. Apparement, tout le monde restent à l’intérieur à cause de l’alerte et il n’y a que quelques voitures sur les rues. Un journaliste a rapporté que les rayons des supermarchés sont vides. Le publique est paniqué
Mon cousin vit à Los Angeles et il est anxieux. D’après lui, cette ouragan est la première depuis presque 90 ans. Normalement, les habitants de Californie subissent des tremblements de terre et des incendies, jamais des ouragans. Heureusement, juste maintenant, je viens d’entendre sur les nouvelles que l’ouragan a été rétrogradée au niveau 2, pas au niveau 4 comme prévue. En plus, la meilleure nouvelle est que ce n’est plus classé comme une ouragan mais a été reclassée comme une tempête. Ça, c’est une bonne nouvelle.
Aug. 24, 2023
Sentence Making #3
1. {long overdue} Last night I headed out to a bar with my bestie Kate. Our date was long overdue.
2. {je ne sais quoi} I saw a guy in that bar. He wasn't handsome, but he had a certain je ne sais quoi which made me want to know him more.
3. {come-hither} So I gave him a come-hither look.
4. {clear on} He wasn't very clear on what I was hinting, and then he walked right out the door.
5. {a lost cause} I thought it was a lost cause so I continued eating.
6. {a mouthful of} Then he came back and walked towards me, and said, "Sorry I had to take a phone call". But he caught me a mouthful of fried chicken. That guy smiled awkwardly, but still asked for my number.
7. {beat yourself up} After he left, Kate said, "Don't beat yourself up! You still have a chance."
8. {shooting fish in a barrel} "Yeah but I told you, I'm not like you. You can get any guy you want like shooting fish in a barrel," I smiled bitterly.
Aug. 24, 2023
ポール・マッカートニーについて
私が尊敬する有名人はシンガーソングライターポール・マッカートニーだ。イギリスのリヴァプール出身で、ロクバンドビートルズと多くの人気がある音楽を作った。世界中で一番こうかてきなアーテｲストだろう。
マッカートニーは若いの時から、覚えやすいや今も世界中で人々が聞いている作曲を書いている。例えば、「イエスタデー」という作曲は1965に書いて、古くても、ラジオとか音楽を聞くためのアプリでよく聞くだろう。その歌を聞く人が「ギーターでこの歌を習いたいよ。」と考えるだろう。
ロックバンド、ビートルズと200曲以上書いて、1970にビートルズが別れた時、マッカートニーは一人で、音楽を作曲するようになった。リンゴスターのビートルズのバンドメンバーによると、ポールは、歌がかんべきになるまで、何度もバンドメンバーに歌を練習させたそうだ。つまり、結果を出すまで、あきらめないほうがいいと思っていたらしい。
このように、ポールの作曲がグラミー賞を18も受賞しただろう。
マッカートニーは、一人でギーターをひいたり、歌ったり、ピアノをひいたり習ったし、忘れられなくて、感動させる歌をたくさん書いたし、世界中で本当に尊敬しているだろう。実は、最近８０歳になったのに、まだ大きいコンサートをして多くの人々の前でやる。
Aug. 24, 2023
Giovedì
È nuvoloso, ma fa ancora caldo. Non vedo l'ora che sia l'autunno. È la mia stagione preferita, anche se sono nata in primavera. In rumeno diciamo che le persone nate in una certa stagione preferiscono quella stagione. Non sono d'accordo, sono una prova me stessa. Non mi piace il caldo per nulla, mi piace più tremare dal freddo che morire del caldo.
Sabato sera andiamo al ristorante con una coppia di vicini ( viviamo tutti nello stesso complesso residenziale), quindi voglio fare le pulizie e studiare questi giorni.
Sabato anche giocherò a Pokemon Go - parteciperò ad un evento. Posso dire che sarà un weekend pieno di gioia e possibilità.
Fra poco inizierò a lavorare, a domani!
Aug. 24, 2023
Autofreie Innenstadt.
"Autofreie Innenstadt" ist ein interessantes Thema, über welches heutzutage oft diskutiert wird. Als ich ein Kind war, habe ich in der Stadt gewohnt und ich stimme Kinans Meinung zu.
Mehr und mehr Leute besitzen ihr eigenes Auto. Deshalb steht man öfter im Stau und mehr CO₂wird ausgestoßen. Durch eine autofreie Innenstadt kann man viel Geld sparen, die Umwelt schützen und gesünder leben, da man mit dem Fahrrad fährt oder zu Fuß geht.
Ich gebe zu, es wird schwerer, zur Arbeit oder zum Supermarkt zu kommen.
Ja, die Innenstädte sollten autofrei werden, aber im Autoland, wie Deutschland, ist das leider nicht so einfach umzusetzen.
Das ist sehr schade.
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Who I am and what's I need
My name's Arpi. I'm from Armenia. I'm 17 years old. I'm studying music in special musical school. I'm playing harp already 5 years, before that I studied piano. Now also playing piano, as second instrument. Last year I started taking cello lessons. This academic year I'm going to enter the conservatory. Now I want to learn english to continue my studies abroad.
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