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Aug. 21, 2023
Fitnesscenter
In meinem Thema geht es um Fitnesswelle. Ich möchte zur Sprache bringen , dass Sport unter Menschen vor allem Jugendlichen immer beliebter wurden.Hauptsächlich besuchen Menschen ein Fitnesscenter , um fit zu bleiben und Ausdauer zu entwickeln. Es gibt andere Gründe dafür. An dieser Stelle möchte ich betonen ,dass Medien in diesem Fall große Rolle spielen. Jugendliche werden durch die Medien beeinflusst,aus diesem Grund passen sie auf ihr Aussehen auf und deshalb besuchen sie ein Fitnesscenter. Dafür spricht die Tatsache ,dass man einige Krankheiten wie zum Beispiel Herzinfarkt verbeugen kann, indem man Sport treibt. Außerdem fördern die Mitglieder In Fitnesscenter einander. Darüber hinaus kann man dort eine Freundschaft schließen. Andererseits bringt das Fintescenter einige Probleme mit sich..Man darf nicht außer Acht lassen , dass man dazu animiert werden kann, ungesunde , künstliche Mittels zu sich zu nehmen . Demzufolge kann das einige schwerwiegende Konsequenzen zur Folge haben. Also haben diese Mittels negative Auswirkungen auf Gesundheit. Persönlich treibe ich Spot in Maßen und bin der Meinung ,dass man auf solche Mittels verzichten sollte. Auch in meinem Heimatland hat in letzter Zeit Fitnesscenter vorwiegend unter Jugendlichen an Populatrität insbesondere gewonnen. Viele Menschen besuchen dort, um ihr Aussehen verbessern. Zusammenfassend lässt sich sagen, dass man Sport in Maßen treiben und ungesunde Mittels nicht in Anspruch nehmen sollte.
Aug. 21, 2023
Wieder Umweltschutz
Teilweise stimme ich dem Kommentar zu. Die Menschen haben nur einen Planeten zum Leben. Natürlich tragen wir alle Verantwortung für den. Aber ich muss auch beachten, dass die Einwohner der Länder oft verschiedene Möglichkeit haben, die Umweltschutz zu helfen. Zum Beispiel in meiner Heimat haben wir keine Mülltrennung. Es gibt noch ein wichtiger Moment. Im Vergleich zu den Betrieben verschmutzen die Menschen die Umwelt nicht so schwer. Deswegen glaube ich, dass jeder Stadt vor allem die Tätigkeit von den Betrieben regeln soll.
Aug. 21, 2023
L'arrêt
Il y a des arrêts de bus où les chauffeurs sont obligés de faire une pause. Personne n'y monte ou descend. Parfois, je les regarde de loin. Je ne les vois jamais manger quelque chose ou parler à quelqu'un. Ils restent tout seuls assis dans leur bus en regardant à travers la pare-brise comme s'ils digèrent les visages, gestes et conversations des passagers pendant le trajet.
J'aimerais que tout le monde soit obligé de faire une telle pause sans divertissements chaque jour. J'aimerais qu'on puisse regarder tous ces gens le faisant. Les caissières au supermarché, les ouvriers à l'usine, les infirmières à l'hôpital…
Durant un bref moment, chacun arrête le temps.
Aug. 21, 2023
Über die Musik
Ehrlich gesagt, höre ich auch kostenlos Musik auf einigen Webseiten. Zum Beispiel auf Youtube, wenn ich langweilige Arbeit machen soll. Aber ich stimme nicht zu, dass man kein Geld dafür ausgeben muss. Um die Musikindustrie und Lieblingsmusiker zu unterstützen, kann man direkt Geld spenden. Sehr häufig machen die Musiker auf ihren Webseiten diese Möglichkeit. Ohne Unterstützung werden die talentierte Musiker weniger Zahlungen bekommen und deswegen werden sie auch weniger großartige Lieder produzieren. Das ist ja sehr schade. Und deswegen versuche ich immer zumindest einen Musiker zu unterstützen.
Aug. 21, 2023
Die andere Meinung
Leider kann ich Margarethe nicht zustimmen. Zwar verstehe ich sie ziemlich gut, weil meine Freunde mich auch sehr oft enttäuschen, aber ein Leben komplett ohne Freunde ist keine Lösung. Für mich ist das Internet nur ein Mittel, um mit meinen Freunden und Verwandelten in Kontakt zu bleiben. Wenn man keine Freunde hat, verpasst man viele lustige Momente, die man zusammen mit Freunden erleben könnten. Ich würde Margarethe wünschen, mit ihren Freunden ein bischen nachsichtig zu sein. Endlich haben Ihre Freunde keine Pflichten, oder?
Aug. 21, 2023
Le nomade digital
Sujet: À l’ère nomandise digital, les salariés n’ont pas vraiment de jours chômés / repos. Qu’en pensez-vous de ce mode de travail?
De nos jours, le travail se diversifie sur plusieurs types différentes: en présentiel, télétravail etc… dont le nomade digital est le plus préféré chez les salariés. Pourtant, certaines personnes concernent qu’ils n’ont pas vraiment de jours repos si on suit cette mode professionnelle. Personnellement, je ne partage pas cet avis pour ces deux raisons ci-dessous.
Tout d’abord, qui dit le nomade digital, dit relâcher en travaillant. En effet, ces salariés décident à voyager au lieu de rester au bureau et le point à noter ici est qu’ils ne ratent jamais la date limite de leurs tâches. Malgré un tel comfort exessif, ils assurent toujours non seulement la qualité mais aussi la productivité du travail. Donc, c’est évident que les nomdades digitaux ont beaucoup de jours chômés tout en obtenant mensuellement le salaire comme d’autres.
Ensuite, l’une des raisons pour lesquelles les employés préfèrent de plus en plus ce mode profesionnel est pour sa nature. En effet, on constate que la plupart d’entre eux finit leurs tâches tout doucement et avec l’aisance grâce au bien-être au travail qui n’impose pas strictement les règles aux salariés digitaux. Donc, ils gardent toujours une attitude positive vers le travail en le peaufinant.
Cependant, il est difficile pour les nomades digitaux de maintenir la concentration pendant les séjours professionnels. Effectivement, bien qu’ils puissent finir leurs tâches de manière dévouée, mais il y a beaucoup d’attraction autour d’eux qui empêchent ces employés de travailler sérieusement.
En conclusion, les nomades digitaux ont vraiment de jours chômés incarnant leurs séjours professionnels en même temps. Mais toute médaille a son revers, cette type de télétravail représente aussi des inconvénients dont la déconcentration est représentatif. Donc, on doit poser des limites quand on divertit ou quand on travaille afin de optimiser tous ses aspects.
Aug. 21, 2023
De Tas
C'est améliore de tas par tas est le meilleur moyen à mon avis. Au lieu d'imiter les moyens des autres on ferai mieux d'analyser plusieurs moyens et construire son propre moyen avec ces infomations. Quand on a trouvé ce qui marche mieux pour nous il faut être fidéle a cet moyen. C'est bien d'avoir le désir de s'améliore mais ce n'est pas suffisant, en fin de compte ça depend nous si l'on y parvient. C'est une fait que nos rêves se réalisent uniquement quand on travaille pour eux et surtout travailler dur. Il faut rester en route et jamais oublier son objectif même si ça prend longtemps avec le temps ces petits tas qui on prend en quotidien vont finir à surmonter une montagne
Aug. 21, 2023
Erinnerungslöcher
Ich sehe immer noch Artikel über wie die Gesellschaft post-Covid sich verändert hat. Viele haben Titel wie ,,Die Leute haben wie man in der Öffentlichkeit sich verhält vergessen.'' Ich sehe Dinge aber anders. Meiner Meinung nach, was die Leute vergessen haben ist nicht wie man sich verhält, sondern wie nervend und erbärmlich die Leute immer waren.
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IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay
Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?
In certain workplaces, employees are required to wear uniforms during their shifts. This essay will delve into the benefits of this requirement for both the employees and the company.
For companies, having a uniform can build customer trust and team unity. In our society, we have been conditioned to associate uniforms with certain professions or roles that require specialized skills and expertise. Take doctors, police officers, or airline pilots, for example. They are all recognized as experts in their respective fields and are typically seen wearing uniforms. This conditioning naturally leads people to place more trust and confidence in uniformed employees, as they assume that these employees have undergone expensive training and possess the necessary skills and knowledge for their roles. This, in turn, positively effects their interactions with these employees and contributes to the company's image as a reputable and trusted brand. Furthermore, wearing the same attire promotes a sense of belonging and shared identity among employees, making them feel like they are part of a larger community collaborating towards a common goal. This, in turn, can improve teamwork, cooperation, and therefore overall effectiveness in the workplace. The military serves a prime example of how uniforms play a vital role in fostering esprit de corps and creating a tight-knit community where soldiers can rely on one another in challenging situations.
For employees, uniforms offer time and cost savings, along with improved safety. Having a designated uniform eliminates the need to spend valuable time each morning deciding what to wear to meet the company's dress code or look professional. It also relieves employees from the financial burden of purchasing and maintaining a separate work wardrobe. In safety-sensitive industries, companies often provide uniforms with built-in safety features and protective elements. For instance, uniforms designed for street sweepers incorporate bright colors and reflective strips or patches, ensuring high visibility even in dimly lit or dark areas. This reduces the risk of collisions with drivers and enhances overall safety.
In conclusion, having a uniform can help companies cultivate customer trust and workplace unity while enabling their employees to save time, money, and work more safely.
Aug. 21, 2023
Aug. 21, 2023
A Story of a Broken Phone
It's a summer day that started out with cloudy weather. I decided to put on a light black jacket to keep myself warm and headed for my driving lesson. I also took an umbrella, just in case it started raining. Because recently I got caught by a heavy rain. I would even say a stormy rain. Luckily, only my clothes was fully drenched, and I emerged out of it fully in tact.
By the time I reached the place where my driving lessons start the clouds dissipated and the sun started shining heavily and we are back to a scorching hot day. I'm yet to master my driving. Having a yelling instructor doesn't help much. However, he has changed his approach to a more silent way of teaching.
When I finally returned home, I drank some coffee with some dark chocolate, drinking some supplements along the way. I listened to a Harry Potter audiobook and then I sat down behind my laptop. That's when I noticed my old broken phone on the table. It broke last December. I remember the exact day, it broke on Decemeber 29th. I was only half surprised. Why half? Well, that phone had a history of meeting with an asphalt surface and surviving with only a little scratch. You should have seen how it fell. I'm a tall person, the phone fell about 5-6 years ago when a friend of mine decided to give me a fright and jumped at me from behind. I happen to be speaking on the phone. I dropped it out of fright. To my surprise, the phone continued working properly!
But last year, the battery on the phone became weaker and weaker. The charge only lased for a day. In December we had some harsh winter days and in those days the battery died before about mid afternoon. On December 29th I discharged before noon and I recharged but then I died again and never went back to life.
I then took it to a repair shop where I learned that it's impossible to fix due to some problem with a motherboard. So I thought I would sell it for parts. At one place I was given a price of 150 rubles. Which is very little. After a couple of months I happened to stumble upon another repair shop so I asked how much they would give me for the broken phone. They gave a double price of 300 rubles. I brought the phone and the guy, looking at the phone, suggested that he would try to repair the phone and I agreed. He thought that the problem was with a display. We then ordered a brand-new display from China and it took 2 months to deliver.
However, after him trying to repair the phone, he came to the same conclusion - the motherboard is dead and couldn't be revived. So now the phone is sitting at my desk and I'm thinking of going to a shop and selling for 150 rubles. Yes, it's a ridiculously low price. But should I better throw it in the garbage?
Aug. 21, 2023
« Fare qualcosa al nasometro »
Nella domanda a cui sto rispondiendo, si tratta di spiegare un’espessione della madrelingua. L’ho già fatto più volte in alcuni testi, ma mi sono dimenticato di parlare del “pifomètre”. Il “pif” è una parola familiare per il “naso”, e il suffisso “-mètre” è lo stesso che si incontra in “altimetro”, “barometro” e otri strumenti di misura. Si potrebbe tradurre come “nasometro” in italiano (penso che suoni bene!). Per capire cos’è il “pifomètre”, bisogna conoscere l’espressione “à vue de nez”, que significa “a occhio, da qual che sembra”.
Forse hanno indovinato ormai che il nasometro è lo strumento delle stime approssimative, e “faire quelque chose au pifomètre” (“fare qualcosa al nasometro”) significa valutare qualcosa senza precisione, a tastoni o addirittura a caso. Il contrario del rigore matematico, per la gente che ama vivere pericolosamente. Cucinare “al nasometro” non è la garantia di avere un piatto commestibile al fino. Calculare l’altezza di un veicolo “al nasometro” prima di entrare in un tunnel può causare alcune sorprese, e se calculano la traiettoria di un razzo spaziale di questo modo dubbioso, non sono sicuro che i sui astronauti rivengono vivi!
Tuttavia, il nasometro può essere un buon aiuto in situazioni diverse, e a volte, si rivela essere sorprendentemente affidabile. Perciò, se hanno naso, loro consiglio di usare il nasometro!
Aug. 21, 2023
Aug. 21, 2023
A Special Man
I met an American middle-aged man who lives in Arizona State on a website. He said that he hasn't been using Twitter, Facebook and other similar social platforms. I agreed with him that we both believe the words on the main social platforms are actually dominated or led by some political group.
I expressed my own idea that it's normal for people just in 20 years, some of us would be compulsorily implanted with electronic chips for some reason. Additionally, he surprised me by thinking that all the healthcare was free in my country, however, it is not.
Aug. 21, 2023
Lunedì
Non ho molte cose da fare oggi. Ho già fatto una passeggiata ( è stata corta perché fa caldissimo ) e la spesa. Mi serve un chilo di pomodori per un'insalata, quindi credo che ne comprerò fra poco.
Fra un'ora pranzeremo, e poi leggerò qualcosa di interessante e farò un pisolino. Il lunedì è sempre una giornata tranquilla per me, almeno questo mese - il lunedì non lavoro.
Oggi fa più caldo di ieri - questo pomeriggio starò sul balcone e berrò un succo freddo.
A domani!
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IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay
If the product is good and meets consumer needs then advertising is unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
My essay:
Some individuals believe that advertising becomes unnecessary when a product is of high quality and satisfies consumer requirements. I completely disagree as even top-notch products can fail to reach their intended audience and get overshadowed by competitors if they lack proper advertising.
One primary reason why advertising remains crucial even for exceptional products is the need to create awareness. Without advertising, even the most exceptional product may go unnoticed by the target audience. However, strategic advertising campaigns, such as television commercials, online ads, and social media promotions, can bring attention to the product, ensuring that potential customers are aware of its existence and quality. This can lead to increased sales and market penetration. Studies have shown that consumers are more likely to consider and purchase products that they are familiar with, which can be achieved through effective advertising strategies.
Another key reason why companies with high-quality products still need to invest in advertising is to gain a competitive advantage. In today's fiercely competitive market where numerous companies offer similar products catering to consumer needs, simply having a good product may not be enough to succeed. With effective advertising strategies, companies can highlight their products’ unique selling points and establish a favorable perception among consumers, building a brand identity and differentiating themselves from rivals. Without advertising, even a great product may fade into the background as competitors who invest in marketing create a stronger presence in the market. For example, through catchy slogans, memorable jingles, and engaging commercials, McDonald’s creates a distinctive brand image, stays top-of-mind, and stands out among several
similar-quality fast-food chains.
In conclusion, investing in advertising is essential for businesses, regardless of the quality and suitability of their products for customer needs. It allows them to gain visibility, awareness, and competitive advantage, thereby increasing sales and market share.
Aug. 21, 2023
Passage au hasard 9
C'était un nid de rats. Pas littéralement, mais c’est ce que ses cheveux semblaient ressembler chaque matin quand elle s’est réveillée. Ça allait prendre une heure pour le gérer et elle en avait marre. Elle a regardé dans le miroir et pensait que s'il valait le coup. Ce n’etait pas. Elle a ouvert le tiroir et a ramassé les pinces à cheveux.
Aug. 20, 2023
La fête d’anniversaire de la première année
Mon amie organise la fête d’anniversaire de la première année de son petit-fils qui va avoir un an ce dimanche. Il habite dans une autre ville et mon amie m’a montré ses photos et j’admets qu’il est très mignon. Sa mère a déjà choisi le thème : tout va être en bleu : pas très original, mais facile a exécuté.
Il y aura une vingtaine d’invités : une combinaison d’enfants et d’ adultes. La fête aura lieu chez eux puisqu’ils ont un grand jardin. La mère a déjà commandé un trampoline et certains jouets pour les enfants. Elle est très organisée et elle a aussi demandé l’aide des deux grands-mères.
L’autre grand-mère a responsabilité de préparer la nourriture. Il y aura des sandwichs, des hot-dogs et des muffins. Le gâteau d’anniversaire sera une voiture bleue. Mon amie a responsabilité de décorer le jardin. Elle m’a dit qu’elle a commandé des ballons et des banderoles sur Amazon : tout en bleu. Elle a aussi fait un grand panneau avec les mots : Joyeux Anniversaire Tom. Je suis certaine que la fête va être un grand succès.
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