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Please Review My Essay
Some people believe that price shapes customer behavior. Do you think price is a critical factor in purchasing decisions? What are other factors that influence purchasing behavior?
There is a belief that price is the driving force behind buyer behavior. However, in my opinion, price is only one of the contributing factors. Advertising, as well as quality and performance, also hold significance.
Price plays a pivotal role in purchasing decisions. It directly affects a consumer’s ability to make a purchase. Higher prices can exclude certain consumers, while lower prices can widen a product's accessibility. Furthermore, price often influences how consumers perceive a product’s value. For some, a higher price signifies superior quality, prestige, and exclusivity, thereby increasing a product's appeal. The success of fashion brands like Louis Vuitton and Rolex in using high prices to attract those equating cost with superior craftsmanship and social status exemplifies this phenomenon. Conversely, a lower price often attracts budget-conscious customers, even with potential quality trade-offs. This value perception is evident in promotional tactics like discounts and sales, which help in portraying products as excellent deals and stimulating sales.
However, the quality and performance of a product, coupled with advertising, can also wield substantial influence over consumer behavior. A product that's dependable, efficient, and outperforms its peers frequently garners interest, even at an expensive price. A prime example is Apple's line of premium-priced products, which has built a large and loyal customer base owing to its exceptional quality, innovative features, and seamless user experience. In contrast, when a product falls short in terms of quality and performance, even a low price may not win over consumers, especially those who are discerning about quality. Many consumers are willing to pay extra for a product that aligns with their expectations and needs, even if it means foregoing a cheaper option with subpar capabilities. Additionally, through various channels such as TV, radio, print media, and online platforms, advertising can introduce a product to a wide audience and highlight its features, benefits, and unique selling points. This not only generates awareness but also sparks interest and shapes consumer perceptions, ultimately influencing their purchasing decisions. Take any major brand, for example. Despite the presence of numerous alternatives with similar quality and pricing, their substantial advertising budgets have helped them dominate the market.
In conclusion, while price is an important consideration for consumers, it is not the sole determinant of their behavior. Some value quality and performance over price, while others are swayed by the power of advertising.
Aug. 25, 2023
Aug. 25, 2023
My summer, my dreams
Summer is finishing and I am remembering that I did this summer and that i remember about it. I found a beautiful old movie theatre where I try to go now. At first time I sow there the last Was Anderson’s movie Asteroid City. This movie didn’t become my favourite movie from this director, but I still liked this trip to the cinema. I like to go alone to the movie theatre so that nobody distracts me. This is my date with the movie theatre. I would like to go to the movie theatre more often, but I study a lot now. And also I want to learn the language faster because I would like to watch the film in the original language and to hear the actors' voices
Aug. 25, 2023
JLPT N3/N4 Practice 67
N3
１．さて、今日は映画を見に行きましょうか。
２．昨日、めっちゃ眠かったし、雨が降ったよね。つまり、パーティーに行かなかった。
３．彼女の顔はまるで他の友達の顔みたいだ。
４．今日は雨が降るような気がします。
５．これはホテルではなくて、学校です。
６．私の猫が一番かわいいのは言うまでもない。
７．中心で君を見たとき、幸せなことに。
８．そのアパートはどんなに高いことか。
９．いくらお腹が空いても、冷蔵庫に一枚のピザがあるだけに過ぎない。
１０．言語を学ぶために、ネイティブスピーカーと話すに限る。
１１．ヨーロッパでは英語を話すに限らない。
１２．漢字は一字ずつ勉強するべきだ。
１３．私にとって、このレストランは決して高くないよ。
１４．なぜ私は日本語を勉強しているかと言うと、日本に住みたいからだ。
１５．この車は金持ちの車に違いない。
１６．この夏は去年の夏よりもっと暑いというのは事実だ。
１７．この練習から言うと、彼は日本語が上手です。
N4
１．来年の三月に日本に行くことにしました。
２．両親は来年の三月に日本に行かないことになりました。
３．日本に住んでいるときから、毎日日本語を話すようになりました。
４．彼女はどこにいるかな。
５．みなとさんはあきこさんから山本さんが今日に学校に行かなかったと聞きました。
Aug. 25, 2023
Aug. 25, 2023
Das emfehlenge Spiel
Wie geht es ihnen, meine lieben Korrektorinnen und Korrektor? I hoffe, dass es ziemlich gut ist. Was mich angeht, genieße ich diesen Tag schon ab Morgen. Freitag doch. Gibt es eigentlich einen besseren Tag, wenn man weiß, dass Morgen Wochenende ist? Jetzt muss ich etwas erzählen. Ohne ein Thema kann ich doch nicht weiterschreiben. Letztes Wochenende haben ich und meine Frau ein neues kurzes Spiel, das "When the Past Was Around" heißt, auf X-Box geschlagen. Das Genre des Spiels ist "Point and Click", deswegen kann meine Frau doch selbst spielen, obwohl ist Sie keine erfahrene Spielerin. Das Spiel erzählt eine tragische Geschichte über Liebe und Verlust. Ich erinnere mich am besten das Lied aus dem Hauptmenü. Das Mädchen spielt das mit einer Geige zusammen mit der Eule, die eigentlich keine Eule ist, sondern ein Mann. Ich glaube, als er lebendig war, nennt sie ihn irgendwie "Eule" oder so. Und deswegen zeigt ihr Gedächtnis ihn als eine Eule. Übrigens ist es üblich, dass die Verliebte einander mit den Namen von Tieren nennen. Meine Frau nennt mich oft "Seehund", weil ich etwa 80 Kilo wiege. Zu schwer für sie. Wahrscheinlich waren die gleichen Einstellungen zwischen dem jungen Mädchen und ihrem Freund. Um dieses Lied zu hören, typen Sie auf YouTube "When the Past Was Around (Original Soundtrack)". Danach klicken Sie das erste Video an. Viel Spaß beim Zuhören!
Aug. 25, 2023
Le doute
Si l'on a un rêve que l'on veut réaliser les doutes sont vraisemblablement pas loin. C'est tout en fait normal d'avoir des doutes c'est une signe que l'on est réaliste avec soi. C'est la preuve que l'on voit les choses en clair au moins parfois. Bien sûr il y a aussi les gens qui ont simplement aucune confiance en soi et abandonne avant qu'ils aient tenté quoi ce soit. Pour éviter cet eventualité il faut avoir deux aptitudes, la confiance en soi et une vif d'esprit. C'est-à-dire croyant que l'on va remporter la victoire mais aussi être réalistic avec soi. Quand on est au courant de ses forces et des ses faiblesses on sait toujours ce que l'on peut faire et que l'on ne peut pas faire.
Aug. 25, 2023
Russian Hellotalk по-русски 651
С кем вы приехал? Идите прямо, спуститесь на двух лифтах вверх и поверните направо. Вам поговорить с человеком, который организовал ваше бронирование. Куда вы пойдете следующий?
Who did you arrive with? Go straight, take two elevators up, and then turn right. You need to speak to the person who arranged your reservation. Where will you go next?
Aug. 25, 2023
Aug. 25, 2023
Ego und Individualität
Beim Lesen Friedrich Nietzsche habe ich ein Thema sehr häufig und wichtig gefunden: die Zentralität des Ego, der Individualität. Das Nachschlagewerk ist ,,Die fröhliche Wissenschaft'' und sein zweiundzwanzigste Textstelle ,,An die Lehrer der Selbstlosigkeit''. Hier schreibt Nietzsche, dass die Tugend gefährlich für der Virtuose ist, tatsächlich will die Gesellschaft diese Tugenden ausnutzen, ohne die Tugend zu betrachten. Als Lösung schlägt der Autor vor, dass diese Tugenden ihre Ego füttern; sie sollten um der Gesellschaft entfliehen, weil sie viel wertvoller sind. Diese Selbstgefälligkeit (offensichtlich denkt Nietzsche, dass er ein Virtuose ist) ist zentral in seinen Werken: der Übermensch, der Mann, der steigen über die anderen Männer kann. Aber ist diese Erhebung ein Beispiel der Selbsterkenntnis, und nicht eine Manifestation des seines Hass gegen die Menschen.
Aug. 25, 2023
模擬国連部委員会に参加する
模擬国連というのは、国際政治、外交などに興味がある方に向けの国際連合の模擬です。国連の委員会一つに入って、皆が国をいただきます。特定された問題として、本物の国連の風に討論したり、他国とブロックに組み合い、決議を作ります。僕の大学のように、模擬国連部がいろいろな大学にあります。僕は去年入ってみて、意外と楽しかったです。ずっと、ディベート、政治、ロールプレイ好きなので、ぴったり合います。
この学年に、大学の模擬国連委員会に参加しています。秘書になりました。昨日、うちのインスタグラムページに委員会紹介の投稿して、皆は楽しみにしているようです。うまくサークルを運営できるといいんですけどね！
Aug. 25, 2023
沒有丟臉的天數: 0
好像不能上傳圖像, 那你只能想想吧
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午後雷震雨結束了. 我騎YouBike去見面朋友. 就在那時我發生了圖像的情況. 我有綠燈, 汽車司機在等著我過路. 汽車後面的公車司機沒有汽車司機那麽耐心, 給他按喇叭. 汽車司機一點自信也沒有, 開始加速. 他加速的時候我已經離路很近, 趕緊刹車. 然而, 由於剛結束的大於, 地面還是很濕, 超級滑. 單車的兩個輪在地上滑動, 我只能棄船. 不用説我很尷尬地摔倒了. 汽車刹車, 看著我. 公車裏的人看著我, 附近的行人都看著我. 哎呀哎呀哎呀, 太災難了, 不好意思極了. 我馬上站起來, 笑著給附近示意我沒事. 汽車司機利用這個機會快開走. 公車司機跟我做一個手勢我該先過路.好吧. 剛過半路時有後面的一個人叫我: 摔倒時掉了雨傘. 哎呀. 我轉身那好傘. 這時我因爲讓公車等那麽九覺得特別不好意思, 所以要趕緊過路, 結果我過得太快了, 失去了我的拖鞋. 又尷尬地轉身把拖鞋取回. 終於成功過路時我看著公車司機笑著看我, 好像很好奇我是不是開玩笑的樣子. 我也在笑, 接著趕快逃離現場. 臉很紅很紅.
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Aug. 25, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay
The reason that most individuals are in debt are due to the overuse as well as irresponsible use of credit cards, banks should not issue credit cards unless they are completely sure of an individuals’ ability to pay back their debts. To what extent do you agree with this?
Many individuals find themselves in debt because of their reckless overspending with credit cards. This leads to some arguing that a bank should only grant credit cards to applicants when it is certain of their ability to repay debt. I completely disagree.
Firstly, card issuers have the capability to examine the credit reports of applicants who have prior credit history to gain insights into their spending patterns and make decisions regarding approvals, credit limits, and interest rates. However, this approach cannot guarantee that cardholders will not exceed their credit limits. Unanticipated expenses such as medical bills or sudden car repairs can push individuals beyond their planned budgets. Additionally, unforeseen life events like illness or job loss can have adverse effects on one's financial stability, impairing their capacity to meet debt obligations. Even individuals with commendable credit scores may find themselves in debt as a result of these unpredictable circumstances. Consequently, requiring that issuers grant credit cards only when they are confident about their applicants' ability to repay is unfeasible.
Secondly, it is challenging, and at times even impossible, for issuers to gauge the financial habits, spending behaviors, and credit management capabilities of first time applicants due to their lack of prior credit history. There is no surefire tool or formula that can provide an accurate prediction of whether someone will become an impulse buyer who accumulates debt every month or a prudent spender. Demanding that financial institutions must have absolute certainty regarding the repayment capacity of such applicants before granting a credit card is impractical. Such a requirement would likely result in very few, if any, approvals for first-time credit card applicants, hindering the introduction of new users into the credit system.
In conclusion, issuing institutions cannot predict the spending habits of first-time cardholders or any of several situations that may lead to debt. As a result, they never can be absolutely sure of anyone's ability to pay off their debt.
Aug. 25, 2023
Aug. 25, 2023
Venerdì
Oggi sarò molto impegnata al lavoro. Dovrò aiutare qualcuno di nuovo, gli spighierò cose riguardo al lavoro. Dato che lui vive in un altro fuso orario, oggi lavorerò dalle 8 e mezzo. Fortunatamente oggi è la sola giornata in cui devo aiutarlo.
Mi sono già allenata alla Switch e ho già fatto il caffè per berlo un po' tardi.
Questo pomeriggio mia mamma verrà a trovarci, quindi così va la giornata - in fretta. Sono abituata a passare il tempo in fretta, non c'è nessun problema.
A domani!
Aug. 25, 2023
Défi d’écriture - jour 14
Note : Je sais que lorsque l’on écrit une histoire en français, on doit utiliser le passé simple. Mais dans mon cas, je voudrais pratiquer le passé composé et l’imparfait (et le plus-que-parfait si c’est pertinent).
« Mon portefeuille est là ! Sur la table ! Prends-le !» a dit David. « Prends tout ce que tu veux!»
« Je prendrai tout ce que je veux !» a répondu le vampire.
« Bien ! C’est bien ! On ne t’arrêtera pas, je le promets !» criait David.
« Vous ne m’arrêterez pas. Je le promets !» a répondu le vampire.
La lumière éclairait les dents tranchantes. Une pensée terrible est venue à l’esprit de David et Emma en même temps.
« Regarde ses dents. C’est un … ?»
« Un vampire !!»
« Lequel ?» a sifflé le vampire. « Il ne peut être qu’une personne !»
Les yeux du couple étaient grands et terrifiés. Leurs bouches se sont ouvertes d’horreur. Ils se tenaient la main et leurs estomacs se sont remplis de peur.
« Déjà ce soir,» continuait le vampire, « J’ai bu trois personnes. Une de plus … puis … je peux … dormir … et me sentir jeune à nouveau.»
Le vampire avançait vers eux. L’instinct a poussé David à se placer devant Emma pour la protéger. Avec reconnaissance, Emma a tenu son dos.
Aug. 25, 2023
Please Review My Essay
Sales companies should recruit people who are hungry for money as they will make the most dedicated workers.
Do you think money is the driving force behind hard work?
What factors should be taken into consideration when recruiting staff for
sales positions?
Some recommend sales businesses hire individuals with a strong desire for money as they tend to be the most committed employees. While the pursuit of monetary rewards is indeed a primary driver of diligent work, there are other equally significant contributors. When hiring personnel for sales roles, customer orientation and communication skills need to be considered.
Money is not the sole or universal motivator for workers. Many individuals do work diligently with the goal of financial gain. Their desire for money tends to stem from the fact that it is essential not only for meeting basic needs but also for leading a comfortable, safe, and enjoyable life. However, there are additional factors that contribute to a dedicated workforce. Some workers go above and beyond in their roles because they are deeply passionate about what they do. They do not view work merely as a means for making a living but as a fulfilling, purpose-driven pursuit. For example, many traditional artists invest significant time and effort into perfecting their performances, even when the financial rewards are limited, as they are devoted to preserving and promoting their cultural heritage.
Communication skills and customer orientation are crucial considerations when recruiting for sales roles. Salespeople with strong communication abilities can persuasively convey the benefits of a product or service, making it easier for customers to understand and appreciate what is being offered and therefore increasing the chances of closing a sale. Additionally, salespeople with a customer-oriented mindset prioritize customer satisfaction and needs above all else. They strive to understand customer's requirements, preferences, and pain points. They then seek to provide personalized solutions and adjust their approach to address specific needs. This customer-centric approach can lead to high levels of customer satisfaction, foster rapport, and ultimately generate repeat business and positive word-of-mouth recommendations.
In conclusion, besides the allure of money, there are other factors driving diligence in the workplace, including passion. When selecting candidates for sales positions, strong communication skills and a customer-centric mindset should be top considerations to ensure success in closing deals and customer satisfaction.
Aug. 25, 2023
Aug. 25, 2023
Un refugio a la hora de comer
Cuando me estreso, uno de los lugares a los que me encanta escaparme es un restaurante indio situado a dos manzanas de mi edificio de trabajo. En primer lugar, es un lugar discreto. No hay luces brillantes ni intermitentes en la entrada ni carteles en el escaparate. No tiene nada más que un cartel colgado junto a la puerta con el nombre escrito. Si no supieras que está ahí, lo más probable es que pasaras de largo.
Para entrar, hay que hacer fuerza empujando la puerta. Cuando entras, lo primero que notas es lo humilde y pequeño que es el interior. Las paredes son grises. Hay pocas mesas y sillas dispuestas en fila. A diferencia de la mayoría de los restaurantes y locales típicos de esta zona, que se esfuerzan por crear un ambiente estimulante y llamativo, éste es un lugar que se centra en lo que importa: preparar buena comida. Por eso siempre está lleno de gente a la hora de comer. Siempre ha sido un lugar de confianza que me permite comprar batidos de mango y especialidades para el almuerzo a un precio razonable, y me hace muy feliz trabajar cerca de él.
Aug. 25, 2023
Two Chat Messages
No worries. Covid is not a big deal nowadays. I had covid in January this year, and all the medicine I took were only two acetaminophen pills. If you really have Covid, you should take a good rest, eat well and sleep well. Take care, and I hope you get well soon.
Sorry Matt, I don’t. When I had covid, I only had a fever for one day. I did have pains in my body, but after the fever was gone, I felt well quickly. Covid didn’t affect my appetite. I could eat food those days. If you feel unwell staying home, please go see a doctor to get system treatment.
Aug. 25, 2023
Aug. 24, 2023
Mon Appartement
Mon appartement n'est pas vraiment grand. Il n'y a que trois salles : deux chambres et une cuisine. La cuisine est aussi un salon, avec un canapé, deux télévisions et trois fenêtres. J'ai appris faire la cuisine l'année dernière et maintenant je l'aime beaucoup. D'habitude, je fais cuire du steak avec des légumes. Pour boire, j'ai du lait. La plupart du temps, le repas est bon, particulièrement quand j'utilise l'appareil de sous vide pour cuisiner la viande. Écrire ce m'a fait vraiment faim, donc je dois faire la cuisine maintenant !
Aug. 24, 2023
Aug. 24, 2023
Please Review My Essay
Some people believe that the higher a product's price, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a belief that a product's price and its desirability are positively correlated. However, I strongly disagree, as I believe that for most cases, this correlation does not hold true.
Indeed, for specific consumers, an increase in price enhances a product's desirability. This stems from their assumption that a higher price signifies superior quality, prestige, or exclusivity. This phenomenon is particularly evident in the luxury goods sector, where some individuals are willing to spend substantial sums, often in the thousands or even millions of dollars, on premium items. While some are drawn by the promise of impeccable craftsmanship, others make these extravagant purchases to signal their social or economic status, even when the actual quality of the product may not fully justify its exorbitant cost.
However, in the majority of cases, a higher price does not necessarily translate to increased desirability. Consumers have become increasingly discerning in their purchasing decisions. Most no longer automatically associate a higher price with superior quality or desirability. Instead, they carefully evaluate products by weighing the benefits they expect to receive against the product's price. Products that offer exceptional value for their price tend to be more appealing. In fact, high prices can sometimes dissuade potential buyers, particularly when the perceived value does not align with the cost. Imagine a scenario where consumers are presented with two products of similar quality but different prices. More often than not, consumers opt for the more affordable option, viewing the expensive product as overpriced. Furthermore, consumers' economic circumstances significantly influence a product's appeal. When financial constraints are a concern, affordable options are typically considered more attractive choices.
In conclusion, the association of higher prices with superior quality, prestige, and exclusivity does indeed attract some individuals to costlier items. However, the general trend among consumers is to select products that give them excellent value for the price.
Aug. 24, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay
The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity?
Staff performance carries considerable weight in determining the fate of a business. There are two strategies companies can adopt to improve staff performance, namely training and development programs, and regular performance evaluations.
Regular performance evaluations are powerful tools for enhancing employee productivity. These evaluations establish a structured platform where managers can provide constructive feedback to their employees. This feedback allows employees to identify areas for improvements and channel their efforts accordingly, ultimately leading to improved performance. During these evaluations, employers also have the opportunity to acknowledge, praise, and reward hard-working and productive employees.. When employees feel that their efforts are valued and appreciated, it significantly boosts their morale and motivation, resulting in them maintaining or even surpassing their performance levels.
Training and development programs serve as powerful instruments to increase staff productivity as well. They offer employees valuable opportunities to hone their existing skills or acquire new ones. With these enhanced skill sets, employees become more proficient and effective in their roles, resulting in increased productivity. Training and development sessions may also introduce employees to more efficient work methods and strategies for process optimization, enabling them to streamline their workflows, eliminate inefficiencies, and ultimately boost their output. Extensive research and surveys consistently demonstrate the positive impact of such initiatives on employee performance. For instance, a report from McKinsey highlights that organizations prioritizing continuous learning and employee development often experience a significant surge in productivity, typically ranging from 10% to 15%.
In conclusion, training and development programs can upskill staff members and equip them with techniques for work efficiency, while regular performance evaluations can help them identify and improve areas of weakness, as well as reinforce positive behaviors. Consequently, these initiatives contribute to a significant improvement in output.
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