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日本での初日
前回は日本まで飛行機旅について書きました。今回は私の日本での初日について書きたいと思います。
飛行機は夜中に到着したので、終電に間に合うのは無理でした。その時、オプションはタクシーを呼ぶのと午前5時まで空港で待つのがしかありません。
タクシーは高すぎるので、空港で待つのを決めました。時間がたくさんから、税関の書類を日本語で記入しました。手で漢字を書くのは苦手なんですので、大変でした。
でも、勉強になりました。税関を越す後で、いろんな空港で働いている方と日本語で会話しました。楽しかったです！あの方は暇のようでしたから、「誰かと会話してよかった」と思うかもしれません。
そして、私は睡眠のために静かな所を探していました。そんな所を見当ててベンチに横になって4時40分ぐらいまで寝ました。
Oct. 9, 2023
La sovrabbondanza di informazioni
Il diluvio informativo che fornisce l’internet potrebbe essere sia un bene sia un male. Da un lato, da il potere di imparare o communicare quasi tutto da soli, da qualsiasi parte del mondo. Questo potere porta un forte importanza per i cittadini di paesi in cui l’accesso a qualche informazione è vietato, aiutando la gente di questi zoni a lottare per i diritti civili.
Tuttavia, il costante concorso di informazioni potrebbe anche causare le difficoltà per chi deve valutare la veracità di una notizia. In un mondo in cui chiunque si può pubblicare le informazione senza limiti o controllo, diventa quasi impossibile decidere se si legge una notizia vera o falsa. Questo fenomeno è aumentato dalla crescita di IA, che frequentamente presenta informazioni assolutamente sbagliate con un livello di autorità preoccupante.
A mio parere, un mondo in cui è possibile controllare la verità di tutte le informazione pubblicate online è un traguardo irragiungibile. Invece, dobbiamo dare alla gente la capacità di analizzare criticamente cosa legge, sia sui social sia nei giornali. Superare questa sfida bisognerebbe un cambiamento culturale per l’educazione, valorizzando la capacità di esaminare le informazioni oltre alla capacita di ricordarle.
Oct. 9, 2023
Le cycle de vie de la pappillion monarque
Les pappillions monarque vie en Amerique de sud dans l'hiver. Ils vont en Amérique du nord en printemps. Ils mangeant du nectar des fleurs. On les voit sur les arbres. A propos de le period de gestasion. Quand il sont jeunes chenilles, ils mangeant plus de feuilles devant de fair ses cocoons. Ils peuvent manger treinte fois son poid. Apres entre dix a vingt jours dan ses cocoons ils se deviennent pappillions. Il y a beaucoup de personnes qui voyager pour les visités dans l'éte. Moi, j'ai acheté mon billet pour les voir au forret du nord.
Oct. 9, 2023
Мой каникул в Алматы - часть один
Немного напишу о своём времени в Алматы.
Это был мой первый раз путешествовать одинокого. Первый день был очень длинный.
Я ездил в аэропорт поездом а потом полетел в Алматы через турцию. Прилетел в аэропотре алматы был очень устал.
Мне все равно пришлось снимать деньги с банкомата. Был так нервный я забыл мою карточку в банкомате.
К частью что-то заметел и вернул ей мне. Очень благодарен за ето.
Затем мне нужно было доехать на автобусе до квартиры, которую я снимал. Но не мог найти автобусную остоновку. Ещё раз к частью что-то помогал мне и показал мне направления. Я знал что трафик не будет как, так дома, но всё равно очень удивил. Я видел девушку, которая стояла посреди четырехполосной дороги и переходила ее, ожидая, пока ее пропустят следующие полосы. Для меня был безумный но кажеться она сделать то езжедневно. Затем случайно вышел с австобуса три остановки порано.
У меня не было мобилные данны. Я долчен было купить сим карточка в Аэропорте но не сделал потому что собирался купить это в центре города. У меня толко был скрееншот карты. И я не хотел включить роаминг потому что он очень дорогой. Но к счастью случайно появился в правильном улице. Мне толко надо было найти правильную квартиру, что заняло слишком много времени, но наконец нашёл её.
Когда я видел хозяинку был очень рад. Она очень быстро показала квартиру и объяснала что не могу пить воду крана. Она ушла и у меня был время чтобы отдыхать. У меня был интерет и мог сообщить родителям, что со мной все в порядке.
После отдыха я вышел чтобы купить сим карточку в магазине Кселла. Мне был трудно объяснить продовцу что мне нужен. Я чуствовал как идиот. Но всё шло хорошо, очень медленно, но наконец я получил карточку. Потом я купил несколько продуктов, вернулся к квартиру и лёг спать.
Oct. 9, 2023
Oct. 9, 2023
Journal #19: "How I'm learning English"
In this journal I will continue to tell you story how I met my friend.
My friend sat down on bench and we told about our future life at university, how we will learn different subjects, will meet maybe interesting people, what we will do after university. My friend can play the guitar wery good. He teached me how to play the guitar. I learned some song, but I never didn't play in public. Maybe I must tried, because I think it's interesting experience. I and Amga are the best friends to this day. I think we are must to talk more than now. We are have each our interests, but we don't stop be friends.
Thank for reading my journal.
Oct. 9, 2023
Hello!
Hello everyone , I am Hinata . I am a English beginner so I can't speak/write English very well . But I wish the member of the langcorrect here can help with me and make me better . English is a universal language , I even not have to say that it's how important to learn English well . Actually , I am a language learning lover who want to learn at least one language of each language family within the Indo European language family . ( Well , what a great dream qaq )
It's my luky to know about this website , I want to learn a lot here .
Oct. 9, 2023
Journal #18: “How I’m learning English”
Today, I want to tell you about my friend. His name is Amga. We met in university at first course before study. We met on a work, when students come to the university before study and work. You ask me: What type of work we did? We painted walls, floor or celling. It was carry university furniture. In general, we did hard and dirty work and this work we did free for university. Yea, it’s strange thing. I think we didn’t do this free. I tell you in details how we met. I and other future students ended our work and we took a break. I sat down on the bench in the backyard our future university. After 5 minutes, girl set down on my bench. Her name was Mari. We talked about different themes which was interesting for us. I asked Mari when her birthday and she said 1th May. I said her me too. I was born on 1th May. It was so strange. After that, Amga set down and when he set down at once, she said him on this bench can sit only people who was born on 1th May. He smiled and said I was born on 1th May too. It was so strange.
To be continued …
Thanks for reading my journal.
Oct. 9, 2023
Las partes de un libro
Un libro es una maravillosa creación en la que la sabiduría y la imaginación se fusionan en letras y palabras. Para disfrutar de un libro al máximo, primero debemos entender sus partes.
La portada es la cara del libro. Refleja el título, el nombre del autor y el diseño de la portada. También puede incluir una ilustración que muestre el contenido del libro.
La contraportada se encuentra en la parte trasera del libro y a menudo presenta una breve reseña de la historia o una sinopsis. A veces también puedes encontrar una biografía del autor o recomendaciones de otros lectores.
El lomo es la parte del libro que se encuentra entre la portada y la contraportada. Aquí se indica el título del libro y el nombre del autor. En algunas ediciones, también puede mostrar el nombre del editor y el número de edición.
Las guardas son las hojas que se encuentran al principio y al final del libro. Sirven para proteger el contenido del libro y también pueden mostrar algunos datos relevantes, como el ISBN o el nombre de la editorial.
El prólogo es el texto escrito por otra persona que presenta el libro. En él, el autor puede explicar la motivación detrás del libro o proporcionar información adicional sobre el contenido.
El índice es una lista de capítulos o secciones, incluidas en el libro y su ubicación.
El contenido del libro es donde se encuentra toda la información y la historia que queremos leer. Puede estar dividido en capítulos, secciones, o simplemente en páginas.
Al entender las partes de un libro, podemos apreciar mejor toda la maravillosa creación que es un libro.
Oct. 9, 2023
Oct. 9, 2023
Lunedì
Mi sento meglio di ieri, ma fra poco farò un pisolino prima di lavorare per sentirmi rinfrescata. Voglio essere pronta per affrontare la settimana lavorativa.
Ho già fatto una breve passeggiata - mi sono vestita con una felpa perché faceva freddo. L'autunno è arrivato e non potrei essere più felice! Non vedo l'ora che arrivi l'inverno.
Questo mese lavoro dalle 15 e mezzo fino a mezzanotte. Non mi piace per nulla, ma ho più tempo libero la mattina. Almeno ho la domenica e il sabato liberi.
Ho pranzato ( ho mangiato qualcosa di leggero ) e fra uno o due giorni compreremo ( io e mio marito ) più cibo. Non ci piace sprecare il cibo, quindi abbiamo sempre abbastanza quantità.
Sto per riposarmi. A domani!
Oct. 8, 2023
Some Questions
There is some points which I don’t understand;
- Why HR Department of the Corporate does not get in touch with Mr John on inflation forecast? Because if they get wrong information about the inflation, they give us less rise. For example, Inflation forecast for 2023 is 65% but Corporate thinks it is 50%.
- Why the Corporate does not find a permanent solution on our salary problem? Because the estimation of minimum wage rise in 2024 will be 40%. In this case Mary’s salary will be under minimum wage next year, mine will be very close to minimum wage. HR Department of the Corporate approves Dany’s salary paying EURO-indexed but not for us. I think they discriminat BCC Laboratory’s staff against BCC Oman’s staffs.
Oct. 8, 2023
Einladung zum Musikkonzert
Sehr geehrte Frau Franke,
Vielen Dank für Ihre Einladung zum Musikkonzert. Es tut mir sehr leid, dass ich nicht dazu kommen kann. Meine Freundin hatte einen Unfall und ich muss mit ihr im Krankenhaus bleiben. Ich entschuldige mich dafür. Vielen Dank für Ihre Verständnis.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Ksbfrkdb
Oct. 8, 2023
Oct. 8, 2023
Practicing new words in context
Of course, I’m selfish too. From time to time I think that all my peers are idiots, except me.
1. I’d like to expand my muscles
2. You’re too rich. You needn’t expand a salary
3. Expanding breast isn’t the best idea
1. You can’t come in, because you haven’t got an access
2. He never got an access to the library
3. You will get an access to that store, when you turn 18
1. All employees hate their employer
2. I’ve never seen an employer. I work at home
3. John, I’m your employer. You’d better to listen to me
1. I laid cash in my wallet.
2. I often lay a bottle of coke on the table
3. If she lays her hand at your knee, I’ll kill her
1. Our company have the best personnel in the world
2. Be careful with Alex. He is mad! He has fired almost all personnel
3. I’ve never seen such the worst personnel
1. There are a lot of allusions to War and Piece in this movie.
2. I didn’t get only one allusion, but this doesn’t mean that I didn’t understand at all
3. My older brother won’t rest until he finds all allusions
1. Vladimir Lenin affected at the world
2. My sister is affected by anime
3. You can’t affect at your kid ever
1. I am not used to expending money at girls
2. Jack expended all his life for sport
3. It isn’t necessary to expend power. I will do it alone
1. I didn’t have brakes at my bike. I could have died!
2. Brake right now. There isn’t the road anymore
3. Sakers made brakes.
1. I seem my occupation to be poor for all my life
2. - What is your occupation?
- What do you mean?
- I mean your job
3. Clara has always had a lot of occupations
1. Eminem is eminent :)
2. David was the most eminent teacher I’ve ever met
3. Eminent people die too young
1. My female peers sleep more than 12 hours every day. In my point of view It’s excess.
2. I have many problems with my health. I worked excess.
3. You paid too much. It obviosly was excess
1. When I was 14 years old, I had really finely hands. I didn’t do any sports
2. The walls are finely. We’re gonna freeze
3. She’s pretty cool. She has got wonderful eyes and finely lips
Oct. 8, 2023
Oct. 8, 2023
Severe Conflict
Two days ago, a shocking news startled me. Hamas, a terrorist organization in Palestine, suddenly launched approximately 5000 rockets at Israel. It was reported that hundreds of people in Israel died and thousands were injured, the even more hazardous is that Hamas claimed they had captured 163 people in Gaza including some women and children.
I noticed that the news in my country is a bit different from Western media. First, they don't report that some civilians were kidnapped by Hamas. Instead, they focused on the anti-missile systems were ineffective, many of which are backed by the USA. In addition, a significant number of the comments support for Hamas, arguing they are defending the invaders. I know these comments are what the propaganda agency wants us to see. The political issues are quite complex and contentious.
There's no doubt that Hamas is a terrorist group because they often target regular people.
Oct. 8, 2023
Brief schreiben
01
Sehr geehrter Herr Weigert,
Ich schreibe Ihnen, weil ich ein Problem habe.
Am Freitag haben Sie mir ein Arbeitszeugnis ausgehändigt, das von mir verloren wurde.
Ich vermute, dass ich es im Bus oder im Supermarkt verloren habe, weil ich zu Hause bemerkt habe, dass meine Tasche kaputt ist.
Ich muss mich bei Ihnen dafür entschuldigen und bitten Sie um die Erstellung eines neuen Arbeitszeugnisse. Nächste Woche muss ich an vielen Abteilungsmeetings teilnehmen, deswegen möchte ich wissen, wann ich ein neues Arbeitszeugnis bekommen könnte.
Ich bitte um Ihr Verständnis und warte auf Ihr Rückmeldung.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Satyras
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Sehr geehrte Frau Krolop,
Ich hoffe sehr, dass es Ihnen gut geht und die Arbeit gut läuft.
Ich schreibe Ihnen, weil ich eine Bitte habe. Wie Sie wissen, dass unsere Gruppe ein Praktikum bei Ihnen gemacht hat, was sehr sinnvoll und interessant ist. Wir haben so viele schöne Erfahrung gesammelt und dadurch wird unsere Sprachkenntnisse verbessert.
Leider ist die Zeit des Praktikums zu kurz.
Aus diesem Grund möchten wir Sie bitten, das Praktikum zu verlängern.
Wir sind auch bereit, am Wochenende zu arbeiten oder die Spätschicht zu übernehmen.
Das Praktikum ist wirklich sehr hilfreich für uns. Ich bitte Sie noch einmal, um unseren Wunsch zu überlegen und ich warte auf Ihre Rückmeldung.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Satyras
Oct. 8, 2023
ペットの飼育をめぐる問題
ペットの飼育をめぐる問題は現代社会を色濃(いろこ)く反映しているだけでなく、今日の日本の若者の生活の傾向(けいこう)も示(しめ)していると思います。
現在、日本は世界で最も出生率(しゅっしょうりつ)が低(ひく)い国の一つです。男性は安定した仕事を見つけるのが難しくことや女性は結婚や子供よりも仕事を重視(じゅうし)する事や高価な生活水準のことなどの理由です。したがって、多くの人は子供を育てる代わりに、費用が低いペットを育てることを選択(せんたく)します。だんだんに若者の流行(りゅうこう)になってきています。それで、ペットのサービスは急速(きゅうそく)に開発しています。今では、ペットが子どもの数よりも多いことになるが、これがおそらく最も悲しいことでしょう。日本の若者は家族の愛情(あいじょう)を大切にせず、社会とのつながりを持ちにくいというのは本当だろうか。もちろん、ペットを飼うことには良い面も悪い面もあり、ストレスが軽減(けいげん)され、気分が良くなり、動物(どうぶつ)がより尊重(そんちょう)され、保護(ほご)されます。しかしその一方で、飼い主に経済的余裕(よゆう)や本来の愛情がなくなった場合、簡単に捨てられてしまうペットも少なくありません。また、多くの若者が自分の決定(けってい)に対して無責任であることも反映しています。では、子どもを大人になるまで育てる責任と自覚(じかく)はあるのでしょうか？
これは日本社会の悲しい現状であり、私たちはこの問題を真剣に考える必要があると思います。
Oct. 8, 2023
Oct. 8, 2023
Please Review My Essay
Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both vies and give your own opinion.
In the modern era, it has been argue by some that children should start learning formally as early as possible, but others believe that they should wait until they turn 7 years old. From my perspective, i would assert that starting on going to school early is more beneficial than the later one.
In most nations, there are several reasons why parents should not send their children at a very e arly age. First of all, beginning children’s education early cannot allow them to enjoy their childhood. In other words, children who have to go to school may have less time for their hobbies and their peers, adversely affecting their development. A pertinent instance for this is that the lastest news on BBC demonstrated that children who spread less time playing with their friends or doing games that they love would not have more chances to develop their imagination and creativity. Moreover, they are likely to suffer from mental issues due to their stress and anxiety at school. These problems can cause them to rebel and have infavourable view of school, holding a negative attitude towards learning when they get older. Therefore, the impact of starting children’s education at an early age could cause serious problems in the mental health as well as their childhood.
However, there are some benefits for younger people when attending school at an very early age. Firstly, parents tend to resort to sendingn their children to school given that they want their child to develop their self-dependence and overcome their shyness. In classes, children may have numerous opportunities to interact and communicate with their friends, helping the, become more confident in communication. Additionally, the younger an individual is, the easier is is to acquire knowledge and information. As a result, these children would have a head start over their peers when pursuing higher education. Besides, the young can have more chances to find out their natural talents seeing that educational programs are designed to suit not only their ages of children, but also the needs of them. With professional courses, teachers are trained to deliver knowledge in attractive and fun ways, so children may be encouraged to develop their potential advantages as well as become effective learners. Thus, attending school at a very early age would generate various positive outcomes for children in higher education.
In conclusion, sending children at an early age may have both drawbacks and benefits. Nevertheless, i believe that children who are exposed to education from an early age would be likely to improve their soft skills as well as develop their potential talents thoroughly.
Oct. 8, 2023
Les référendums en Australie
Comme j’ai déjà raconté, un référendum se tiendra le 14 octobre. Son objectif est d’inclure une référence à un organe consultatif autochtone dans la Constitution australienne. Comme ce sujet m’intéresse beaucoup, j’ai effectué quelques recherches. Depuis 1906, 44 référendums ont eu lieu. Cependant, seulement 8 référendums ont été remportés. Cela démontre que dans l’ensemble les citoyens rejettent les référendums ou autrement dit, ils répondent «non» à la question. J’imagine que les gens ne soutiennent pas de changement.
Le référendum de cette année concerne le bien-être des peuples indigènes et s’il est remporté, on espère qu’il va améliorer la vie des peuples indigènes. En ce moment, ils ont une espérance de vie plus faible et leur niveau d’éducation et d’emploi est plus médiocre que la moyenne australienne.
Le dernier référendum sur le sujet des indigènes a eu lieu en 1967. Ce référendum là a été remporté par 91 %. Grâce à ce résultat, désormais, le gouvernement a la capacité de promulguer des lois spéciales uniquement pour la population indigène.
Oct. 8, 2023
Un référendum : la Voix
The gouvernement australien a organisé un référendum qui aura lieu le 14 octobre. C’est surnommée la Voix puisque l’objectif est de donner une voix aux personnes autochtones. La proposition vise à modifier la Constitution pour y inclure une référence à un organe consultatif. Cet organe consultatif va avoir la responsabilité de faire des recommandations et de conseiller le gouvernement sur les questions autochtones.
Le 14 octobre, toutes personnes ayant le droit de vote répondront à la question du référendum. La question est simple : est ce qu’on est d’accord de modifier la Constitution pour établir un organe consultatif autochtone ? Sur le bulletin de vote, il y aura une boîte, dans laquelle il faut écrire «oui» ou «non». C’est une question importante et pendant les derniers mois, il y avait beaucoup de discussions, de fake news et de rassemblements. Bien entendu, il y a un oui camp et un non camp.
Pour restituer le contexte, en ce moment il y a environ 17,6 millions de personnes qui ont le droit de vote en Australie où c’est obligatoire de voter. Si on ne vote pas, il faut payer une amende. J’imagine qu’à cause de cela, le taux de participation des électeurs est toujours extrêmement élevé.
Oct. 8, 2023
Oct. 8, 2023
Please Review My Essay
https://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseEvaluateIeltsWritingTask-1/bqwxdh/post.htm
That is the link of the image for the graph.
My essay:
The compared illustration delineates the number of five different types of vehicles represented in Australia in three years 2010, 2012, and 2014.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there was no correlation between the types of vehicles using in Australia. While the passenger vehicles held the first position, the opposite was true for Light trucks. However, Motorcycles witnessed a substantial increase of 30,7% over the period.
In terms of Passenger Vehicles and Commercial Vehicles grew moderately of approximately 18% from 2010 to 2014. In 2010, 11 million passenger vehicles were registered, whereas the figure for Commercial ones were subsequently lower representing 2,3 million. With respect to Motorcycles, Heavy Trucks and Light Trucks, the greatest upward trend was recorded for Motorcycles which increased of 175 000 people between 2010 and 2014 in comparison with roughly 50 000 using heavy trucks, a rise of around 28%. During the same period, there was not a considerable rise in the number of heavy trucks registered, representing 384000 people in 2010 and registering 423000 people in 2014, a growth of 10.2%.
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