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Sept. 26, 2024
Who Am I?
This is a speech I'm going to say in a English class I study about "Who am I?":
I’m Eliel and I work as a Telecommunication Specialist. I consider myself as a person who has many values and want to practice them always I can. These are: Love, not only myself but the people who I have near to me. Tolerance, respect, compassion, fellowship and humbleness.
I’m passionate about my beliefs, you already know I’m Christian and I’m profoundly committed to it, it’s the way I’ve decided to live, sometimes has been difficult but sometimes has been peaceful and quiet. Something I enjoy is sharing my faith to others, maybe that’s why I talked much about it here. Also, I like my job in the telecommunications field, there’s a say: “There’s no more lucky man than the one that has a good wife and enjoy the job he has”. It’s a good say and at this point of my life in a certain way represents me, maybe not 100% but a big percentage of it. I’m not married yet but I’m with a good girl and in the say it’s a good way to express what I’m talking.
Despite having now many good things in my life and having reached many goals I wanted I don’t think that makes me happier than before moments in my life. At the end I’m not my goals and I’m not the things I’ve reached (and part of the joking is I haven’t reached so many), I’m a human being with flaws that think life is still enjoyable even without many things and being obsessed with reaching goals and projects.
Sept. 26, 2024
好きな日本文芸
好きな日本文芸は漫画です。日本語が全然できない頃にも英語訳の何冊もの漫画を読みました。今でも漫画に夢中になります。
アニメにある煌めく色とか興奮させる音楽とかは漫画にありません。映画で見る俳優の微妙な表情の変化も漫画でなかなか描写できません。小説にある美しくて詳細な文章はあまり漫画に書かれていませんね。
なのに漫画はいくつかの物語にぴったりな文芸ではありませんか。例えば「ドラゴンボール」が小説だったらちょっと変な感じがするんですね。場合によって、「アキラ」のように社会的な問題を指摘したり哲学を主張したりする作品も漫画に最適だと思います。
そして漫画いっぱいの本棚がなんかおしゃれですよね。
漫画を描く才能があったらいいなと思うけど、読むだけでも嬉しいです。あなたの好きな文芸は何ですか？
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読んでくれてありがとうございます。
また明日！
Sept. 26, 2024
About the Community
I've been using this website for a while and I'm loving the feedback that everyone gives me, but I noticed that the Portuguese writing community is basically dead. I haven't seen any entries in Portuguese for me to correct them, and the last message was sent almost three weeks ago. The only entries I can correct are the old ones which are previously there. Not bad enough, most texts were sent by one account, which means that every time I correct it, its correction indicator goes up.
This looks very unbalanced since we all need a good correction rate. All the feedback goes to one single person who will have to make way more corrections to its native language to be able to write more texts. I wish more people had knew about this website so this problem could be fixed. The website creators should've invest more on ads or something that could bring more users around. I feel a bit guilty when I have to correct texts from the same person so many times, especially the ones that were previously corrected by other person. Lang Correct has everything we need to improve our language learning, it only needs to be more well-known.
Sept. 25, 2024
Sept. 25, 2024
Mein neuer Job als Datenanalyst
Ich habe jetzt einen neuen Job als Datenanalyst. Ich liebe meine Arbeit, weil sie interessant ist est und ich mit Daten arbeite. Ich mag die Aussicht im Büro, denn sie ist atemberaubend. Ich mag meine Kollegen und meinen Chef. Sie sind nett und freundlich. Es gibt viele gesellschaftliche Ereignisse im Büro.
Sept. 25, 2024
La bêtise
Aujourd'hui, je travaillais avec mon collègue sur un problème quand je me suis rendu compte que j'avais fait une bêtise en omettant une partie importante de mon programme. Nous avons perdu presque deux heures à cause d'elle. Je l'ai réglé et cela a résolu la plupart des problèmes, mais certains d'entre eux reste encore. Je dois me réveiller très tôt demain pour finir mon projet à l'heure.
Sept. 25, 2024
(#2) Plus à propos de mes examens.
Bonsoir! J'ai sais je trouverai cet site web plutôt enjoyable, même si la française étais difficile, ce qui c'est certainement ! Heureusement, mes examens de la française n'est pas trop près, mais malheureusement, j'ai beaucoup d'examens demain ! J'ai un examen de la chemie pour passer, et en vendredi, j'passerai un examen de la physique et de la bio ! Cepandant, je l'ai préparé beaucoup bien, vu que j'ai écrit beacoup des ____ en la passé, ce qui aiderais moi demain !
Je dois continuer mon préparation, donc...bon huite!
Sept. 25, 2024
syyskuun 25. päivä 2024
Viime aikoina mä oon lukenut Ylen selkouutisia opiskellakseni suomea.
Tämän päivän yksi aihe oli panda.
Uutisissa sanottiin, että kaksi pandaa annetaan takaisin Kiinaan, koska pandojen hoito maksaa paljon.
Lisäksi uutiset sanoivat, että turistit ei tullut enemmän kuin odotettu.
Se oli mielenkiintoinen. Japanissa pandat ovat tosi suosittuja, mutta Suomessa eivätkö pandat suosittuja paljon?
Sept. 25, 2024
Who I want to be?
I want to walk with a straight back. I want not to waste a time for useless thing. I want a quality rest. I want be really smart woman. I want a clear skin and clear mind. I want to love, to be loves and hang out with lovely people. I want to be more confident. I want to be brave, little cheeky and a bit scare of my plan because it is huge. I want not scary watch in eyes people which don’t like me for any reason. I want to talk even I am choking on anxiety. I want to build my health and my future.
Sept. 25, 2024
der Strike
Die Gewerkschaft hat einen Streik in Berlin und Hamburg organisiert. Der Streik dauert schon 4 Wochen. Die Mitarbeiteren des Gewerkschaftes fordern den Lohn zu erhöchen sonst werden sie ab 5. September nichr mehr Müll aus der Stadt sammeln. Sofort hat Die Verwaltung Verhandlungen geführt, aber zurzeit haben beide Seiten keinen Kompromiss finden können. Es ist eine zeitliche Lösungen für die Situation - den Müll auf die Straße einfach abzuwaschen, trotzdem viele Einwohner nicht zufrieden darüber sind.
Sept. 25, 2024
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木曜日
マッチングアプリではいわゆるヤリモクとメシモクがいます。ヤリモクというのは体目的の人であって、メシモクは飯目的の人です。調べたところ、日本のマッチングアプリは大体男女率が7：3です。つまり、男性の数は女性の2倍ということですよ。なぜそんなアンバランスがあるのかと考えると、ヤリモクは男性の方が多いからじゃないかと思うかもしれないけど、それだけだと男性の半分がヤリモクということになるので、納得しかねます。あと、風習的に大体男性が払うことになっているので、メシモクは女性の方が多いけど、それでも男性の数に全然ついていけないみたいです。男性の方が必死なのかなとも思うかもしれないけど、結婚相談所の方では、男女率が5：5らしいです。なので不思議さが消えません。マッチングアプリでは安全な面が女性に遠慮されるということもありますかね。
Sept. 25, 2024
Die zwölfte Lektion
Das ist noch eine kurze Lektion.
Zwei Frauen sprachen miteinander.
Ein Mensch, der des Mannes einer der Zwei Frau ist, kocht, und die andere Frau probiert, was er kocht.
Es schmeckt gut.
Die Frau des Mannes sagt, dass er oft kocht.
Die andere sagt, dass ihr freunde glücklich ist, denn "Ein guter Koch ist ein guter Arzt".
Sept. 25, 2024
Mercoledì 25 settembre
Che giornata piena di faccende! Non ho camminato molto oggi. Stavo facendo una passeggiata quando mio marito mi ha telefonato e mi ha chiesto di andare con lui in un negozio di occhiali.
Era ora che comprasse un paio nuovo. Quelli vecchi si erano rotti. L'ho aiutato a sceglierne uno bello, perfetto anche per stare tanto tempo di fronte al computer.
Credo di comprarmene uno entro la fine dell'anno. Dovrei sempre mettermi gli occhiali, ma non penso che mi stiano bene. Almeno li metto solo quando lavoro perché passo molte ore al giorno al computer.
Ho approfittato della pausa pranzo e ho già preparato il pasto per le prossime giornate. Domani sarò impegnatissima e non avrò il tempo per cucinare.
Sept. 25, 2024
Sept. 25, 2024
Sept. 25, 2024
My pigeon's fake story
I want to make sentences with the words below:
woodpecker, overcome, arson, asylum, monarch, biodiversity, celestial, concussion, fungus, pigeon, sewer, torrential, blow.
last year my pigeon died because of a concussion that happened after a blow by a penguin.
of course his death had no effect on biodiversity but in my heart an enormous typhoon started.
he became celestial but I was still on earth or even in subterranean. so after that incident I decided on revenge. I tried to arson the penguin's house but she sought asylum for the monarch. that time fungus was monarch.
I didn't get disheartened and even got more angary and promised my pigeon that try so hard to overcome in this revenge plan.
with woodpecker's agreement I decided to make a typhoon with sewer waters near the fungus's house, just this torrential attack calmed his soul and mine.
Sept. 25, 2024
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Sept. 25, 2024
An Ancient Village
There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province.
The first one is a village built near the top of a mountain. Its biggest feature is the buildings made of rammed earth.
It's said that first people came here from Henan Province to avoid a war. It was more than 800 years ago. At that time, it was difficult to transport materials up to the mountain. As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains.
You can find some pictures here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM
I really love this small village. It's cozy and relaxing, even just walking along the small stone path.