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オリジナルより有名なカバー
２００２年にジョニーキャッシュがカバーの歌「Hurt」を作りました。原作は１９９５年でナイン・インチ・ネイルズを作った歌でした。原作のテーマはクスリの中毒でした。ナイン・インチ・ネイルズのジャンルが好きな人に原作は少し人気です。ジョニーキャッシュは１９６０年代に人気でした。はじめに１９９０年代のバンドの歌をカバーするのは変な決定と考えられていた。トピックとジャンルは他の世代のと考えられていましたから。
それにしても、カバーがすごく人気になりました。同じ歌詞でも、新しい意味を見つけました。テーマは老年の後悔でした。動画もそのテーマを見せました。歌手の病気、孤独、全然が見せられました。すごく人気だっても、すごく豊かになっても、悲しみはすごく明らかでした。
原作よりカバーがすごく人気になりました。一年間のあと、ジョニーキャッシが亡くなりました。その後、歌が記憶の歌そうになりました。
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
My adventure with lang
Today I want to talk about my adventure. I'm with my wife since 2021 and married in 2024. She's my paradise and represents everything for me. Before her, I was a little gamer boy and now I'm learning Italian, Spanish and want to improve my English. It's all because of my family who lives in every continent.
More since my son. It's for his future that I'm sure to take those efforts.
It's incredible how can a life change and I'm sure now, My family is the most important.
April 16, 2025
La prononciation aux deux côtés de la mer
Cela fait plus ou mois un an que j'apprends le français. Depuis que j'ai commencé à l'apprendre, j'étais sûr que je voulait apprendre le français canadien. Pourtant plusieurs ressources conseillaient de ne pas prendre la peine de faire une distinction entre les deux dialectes, puisque les deux sont assez similaires et les differences apparaissent surtout dans la langue familière.
C'est vrai que, surtout au début de d'apprentissage, il n'en vaut la peine. Mais je dirais que la différence en prononciation mérite d'être plus d'attention. Les différences phonétiques entre les deux dialectes sont, à mon avis, très evidentes.
Comparé au français "parisien" standard, le français canadien fait plus de distinctions entre les sons nasales (« en » vs « un »), les voyelles fermés et ouvertes (« ferais » vs « ferai ») et autres sons (« a » vs « â »). Ils ont aussi la tendance à prononcer plusieurs voyelles différemment, selon la région (voir la prononciation de « fête » et « être »).
Après avoir appris le français en utilisant principalement des ressources européens, je peux constater qu'il est plus difficile de comprendre les canadiens que les européens quand ils parlent. Je suis sûr que cela deviendra plus facile avec le temps, au fur et à mesure que je faire en sorte d'écouter plus de contenu en français canadien.
April 16, 2025
My pool party
It has been a long time since my last post. I've been studying a lot of subjects and skills, one of which is programming and building. But my principal point is to communicate with you about my birthday and pool party. I decided not to go to the army, instead my mind has requested me for a big and funny party. I would invite many girls and friends to a mind-blowing event. The problem is I don´t have enough cash to finance this event. I would be ashamed if people paid for entrance, but it is not an action that an anfitrion should do. However, the high cost may cancel the party, and I had to make a little, poor, boring house party. I could deal with that, but I want this. Does anybody have any advice?
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Übung zur Verwendung von "im Austausch für"
Meine Tochter hat etwas Geld im Austausch für ihre Hilfe im Haushalt bekommen. (Klingt "bei der Hausarbeit" natürlicher?)
Ich habe einige frische Eier vom Bauernhof bekommen.
Im Austausch für sie habe ich ihm Gemüse aus dem eigenen Garten gegeben.
Im Austausch für den leckeren Kuchen bekommt mein Mann einen Kuss von mir.
Er sieht irgendwie enttäuscht aus.
Der Mann ist sehr verärgert, da er ein gebrauchtes Fahrrad im Austausch für sein neues Auto bekommen hat.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Un Mythe de Ma Ville
Dans ma ville, il y a une roche avec empreinte que ressemble à un pied pointu. La légende est le pied est un pied de le diable. La roche est près de une école. Selon le mythe, le fondateur de l'école a promis le diable sa âme pour d'argent. Un jour, le diable a allé à l'école pour obtenir l'âme, mais le fondateur n'a pas été là. La femme de le fondateur a été là. Elle n'a pas su pour la promesse, et elle a chassé le diable. Le diable a sauté par la fenêtre et a atterri sur la roche.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Un fine settimana con la mia famiglia
Cercherò di nuovo di scrivere un breve testo; a volte mi sembra noioso scrivere sempre le stesse cose.
Preferisco stare da sola o soltanto con mio marito quando ho il weekend libero. Però, di tanto in tanto vado a trovare mio papà o mia mamma viene a trovarci.
Lo scorso sabato, io e mio marito siamo andati da mio papà per cenare assieme. A mio papà piace tanto cucinare, soprattutto gli piace preparare piatti diversi e complicati.
La zuppa fatta da lui era buonissima, però ho dovuto mettere un po' di sale per ottenere quel gusto perfetto.
Dopo essere tornati a casa, mia mamma è venuta a trovarci. È stata l'ultima volta che ha dato da mangiare alla nostra gatta. Anche adesso piange pensandoci.
Ho lavorato domenica, però non mi è dispiaciuto; lavorando, ho potuto affrontare la giornata.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Introduction
Bounjour
J m’palle alex . Je suis un canadien. j ai vingt quarte ai . J’ habite une Toronto une canada . Je suis banque . J’aime football et la musique . J’ habite une appartement un milieu et ville . J’ ai un petite famille mon pére , mon mére et mon fére . Mon pére est homme de affire , Mon mére est is professeure Mon fére est étudiante.
April 16, 2025
My Eldest Brother
My eldest brother is twelve years older than me. I can’t remember many things when I lived with him. When he joined the army, I was only in Grade Two at a primary school.
He completed high school courses in our local high school, but he couldn’t take the university entrance exam as the exam was canceled in China from 1966 to 1977.
At that time, living conditions in the countryside were extremely tough. We didn’t even have enough food and clothes. Therefore, my eldest brother decided to join the army, which was the only path for him to get a better life.
Three years after he started serving in the army, he got promoted to be an officer. His position started from a platoon leader and ended as a battalion commander.
After he was discharged from the army, he was allocated a job in a state-owned company in Shanghai. He was one of the leaders in that company.
Now, he has been retired for ten years. His family lives in Shanghai. He has a son, my nephew, who also lives and works in Shanghai.
My eldest brother received many awards while he was serving in the army and he also took part in a war between China and a country. My family worried a lot about his life when he was in that war.
I hope my eldest brother and his family stay healthy, happy and peaceful.
April 16, 2025
Today's Reading
I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent.Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor.However,the reality is more likely to be there no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Type Of Music I Enjoy To Listen To
I don't have a favorite genre of music, but I'm always trying to listen to musics which have a good frequency and good lyrics.
I believe that music inflicts in your behavior, for this reason I don't listen to music which has violent lyrics or low frequency rhythm.
I don't know if there are any scientific evidence about this, but I believe it anyways.
April 16, 2025
Was kann man am Wochenende machen?
Es gibt viele Kulturangebote in meiner Stadt. Man kann eine Stadtrundfahrt machen., verschiedene schöne Sehenwürdigkeiten besuchen und leckeres Essen schmecken.
1. Ich interessiere mich Fotografie machen.
2. Ich möchte mir gerne neue Filme anschauen.
3. Ich gehe oft ins Kino.
4. Ich fühle mich in einem Park wohl.
5. Ich freue mich auf das neue Stück im Stadttheather.
6. Ich möchte gerne Kunst sehen.
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
April 16, 2025
Being better is not same as being hard for yourself
I know I am not writing properly. The first step I need is to keep consistent by doing baby steps. Don't make yourself upset doing this. It's like doing exercise. If you only feel enough for 5 repetitions, it's proper to try harder until six or 7 repetitions. Don't excessively, it's not wise.