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A night flight
On the swaying plane, there was a little girl wearing pink thigh-high socks who was probably not taller than the airplane seat. She stretched her arm, trying her best to reach the overhead luggage compartment. Her cheeks flushed slightly, her eyes looked around to look for someone who could help her. But everyone was too busy, and she was lost in a society where everyone was always rushing, they looked ahead and behind, and few people paid attention to what their feet had stepped on.
May 4, 2025
Tired Holiday
I felt more tired during the past three days than during my work day.
On May 1st, it took me and my friends three times as long to arrive at the hike destination. One of my friends complained a lot on the bus during the traffic jam. At first, I kept calm down because it was the normal situation on national holidays. After comforting her several times, I felt tired and just let it go.
That's the reason I decided to stay in Shanghai for the last two days of this holiday. I'll take a stroll in the parks and look at the flowers, and then back home to sort out the videos and photos on my phone.
I sorted out some last night.
I have uploaded two videos about my hike in Baiyunshan on my YouTube channel. You can check them out here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/pkg_YvFztPA & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/8xGFBkVVa24
May 4, 2025
Difficult Parts In Learning English.
The first part is singular and plural. Most words have the same rule, but there are many exceptions for other words. That is too difficult to remember, even for young people whose memory ability is very strong.
The second part is the part of speech. A word has its noun form, verb form, and adjective form, etc. There are too many to remember.
The third part is synonyms. Many words have similar meanings. I often don’t know which one is the most appropriate in a specific context.
The fourth part is vocabulary. There are too many words to remember. I can only remember about five thousand to seven thousand.
The sixth part is listening. Listening to English is very difficult. Different people speak English in different ways. It’s easy to understand English teachers, but it’s very difficult to understand non - English teachers.
The seventh part is speaking. The ultimate goal of learning English is to speak, but it is very difficult. I can only speak basic English, slowly and with a Chinese accent, although I have been learning to speak for almost four years.
May 4, 2025
Das Messen des Fortschritts, Teil Viereinhalb
Beim Schreiben des letzten Eintrag hatte ich ein bisschen Schreibblockade und wollte ihn noch etwas ergänzen, am besten am gleichen Tag.
Unser vorgestellte Lerner hat einen Plan und verwirklicht seinen Plan, teils durch das Lesen von Büchern. Aber wie da steht, die Frage ist, ob das Ergebnis wirklich sein Ziel entspricht. Vielleicht scheint es euch klar, dass unser Lerner solche bedenken wird, aber meinen Erfahrungen nach ist das halt nicht so, zumindest nicht immer so. Es kommt mir oft vor, dass Lerner nicht sehr präzis und durchsehend die echten Unterscheidungen zwischen unterschiedliche Übungen begreifen. Oder vielleicht sogar bedenken sie sie nicht.
Ich sage erneut, dass ich behaupte, dass was man übt, besser wird, und mit diesem Bücherlesen wird unser Lerner besser im Lesen. Nicht das Sprechen, nicht das Schreiben, vielleicht nicht mal die Zeitung zu lesen. Und unser Lerner sollte wirklich so wahrnehmend wie möglich bedenken, was seine ausgewählten Methoden verbessern. Zur Latein oder Altgriechisch kann ich ohne weiteres vorstellen, dass bloß das Lesen reicht, aber Deutsch oder Koreanisch oder Swahili zu erlernen sicher nicht.
Eine Sprache wirklich zu handhaben bedeutet die vier passenden Kompetenzen zu beherrschen: Hören, Sprechen, Lesen, und Schreiben, ungefähr Wichtigkeit absteigend nach. Und man muss zugleich das Gleichgewicht zwischen die Vier pflegen, aber auch auf die Effizienz jedes davon achten.
Mit diesem auch relativ kurzem Eintrag fühle ich mich, als ob ich es hier stehen lassen kann. Aber diese quasi Aufsätze scheinen wirklich nie zur Sache kommen, ohne dass ich einen Plan herstelle.
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
MON JOUR
Aujoudhui, j'ai visite mon copine a chez elle. Nous n'avions pas vu mutuellement depuis dernier semaine donc c'etait bonne encore la voir. Elle a achete nourriture en le matin pour nous et en mangeant, nous regarde le film d'action. Apres, nous avait a bonne conversation concernant elles relation. J'ai parti autour six heure ce soir en velo.
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
Beispielsätze zur Korrektur und Verbesserung
Ich wollte halt nicht in so eine Beziehung hineinstolpern, dass ich es später bereuen könnte.
Das Thema ist schon total abgegriffen.
Ich muss mir ein neues Profilbild aussuchen, dieses ist ganz schön ausgelutscht.
Wen sollen wir jetzt zu dieser Aufgabe einsetzen.
Die letzten drei Jahre meines Lebens habe ich richtig vertrödelt.
Eine Eroberung Russlands wäre weit hergeholt.
Nach der Einführung neuer Zölle verlegten die Unternehmen sich auf die Hilfe von Agenturen, die deren Produkte illegal nach Afrika rüberbringen können.
Er versucht, uns etwas rüberzubringen, aber wir kapieren es nicht.
May 3, 2025
Lernen die Kinder in Deutschland eine Schreibschrift?
Lernen die Kinder in Deutschland eine Schreibschrift in der Schule?
In Japan lernen sie sie (es?) heuzutage nicht.
Meiner Mutter kann sie schreiben, da sie in der Schule gelernt hat.
Ich möchte in diesem Jahr sie beherrschen. Ich finde sie elegant und stilvoll.
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
Emotional support
At this point in my life, I think everyone needs someone with whom he/she can share everything. Our parents are not from our generation, and most of them are not as educated as we are. They don't understand the complexity of today's life and can't give that emotional support. No matter how much one achieves, nothing is enough for them. They will force you to be social while you prefer to stay alone. They won't try to understand the emotional turmoil you are going through. But they are always present whenever you are in danger. They look for our health and well-being, but sometimes they forget about our mental health. These are all my opinions. If you guys think differently, feel free to share.
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
Meine frühere Schule
Ich erinnere mich oft die gute Zeiten meiner früherer Schule. Wegen eines Umzugs muss ich in einer neuen Schule gehen. Ich überlege mir: was können sein hätte, wenn ich dort bleiben würde. Nach den Umzug fühlte ich mich eine Sehnsucht für meine frühere Klasse aber mit der Zeit wurde ich sehr zufrieden mit dem. Trotzdem stelle ich mir machmal vor wie anders mein Leben hätte werden können. Ehrlich gesagt würde es wahrscheinlich schlechter gewesen. Wenn ich meine frühere Schule mit einem Wort beschreiben müsste, würde ich "Intensiv" wählen, weil dort alles verstärkt ist. Obwohl dort gibt es einerseits einen grossen Sinn für Brüderlichkeit, Lernen, und Spannung gibt es auch anderseits mehr Kopfschmerzen, strenge Regeln, und Angst. Darum bin ich zufrieden mit meiner derzeitigen Situation.
May 3, 2025
La prima vacanza con l’aereo
Un estate quando avevo 10 anni, i miei genitori prenotarono una settimana di vacanza a Cipro. Era il mio primo viaggio con l’aereo e non vedevo l'ora di partire! Io e mia sorella amavamo l’hotel così tanto che non volevamo lasciare neanche la piscina per andare sulla spiaggia (ma naturalmente visitammo la spiaggia più volte). La colazione e la cena a buffet erano comprese nel prezzo, e mangiai tantissimi cibi nuovi per la prima volta. Mi sentivo veramente come una principessa! Inoltre, c’erano dei gattini stracarini ogni sera sotto i tavoli, che rendevano le serate più divertenti. Purtroppo la vacanza finì dopo una settimana e dovemmo ritornare in Ungheria.
In Ungheria ero così triste di non essere a Cipro, che ogni sera piangevo mentre facevo la doccia. Il mio metodo di fare "il lutto"... Dopo alcuni giorni di questo rituale lacrimoso, un giorno trovai mia sorella, che piangeva nel bagno. Lei mi rivelò, che gli mancava Cipro e piangeva per questo. Iniziai anch’io a piangere ed insieme piangemmo per alcuni giorni in più come se fosse un nostro rituale comunitario. Oggi questa storia mi fa tanto ridere, perché i miei genitori riuscirono ad organizzare una vacanza così incredibile, che le loro figlie facevano il lutto per un paio di settimane.
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
Vida cotidiana 84
Casi me había olvidado del hábito de escribir en este sitio semanalmente. Me había convencido de que no tenía el tiempo suficiente para hacerlo, y no sé si fue la decisión correcta o no. Pero lo cierto es que he encontrado otras maneras de practicar. ¿Quién sabe si son mejores o no? Continúo repasando palabras de vocabulario y aprendiendo nuevas frases cuando las encuentro, pero si tengo un poquito de tiempo extra, estoy platicando con ChatGPT. Si empiezas con las indicaciones para que te corrija con cada cosa que digas, y después que te responda, puede ser algo muy útil. Sé que hay aplicaciones basadas en IA que hasta pueden hablar contigo, pero todavía no las he buscado. Por ahora, prefiero hablar con mis amigos a través de videollamadas, en vez de hablar con una computadora.
May 3, 2025
練習「古いけど、あまり古くない建物」
建物について話したい。国では、あまり古代な建物はない。
国内で最も古い建てられた建造物は約400年だけだ。
「または、 。。。わずか400年です。どれのほうがいい？」
「くらい・ぐらい」を使える？
その建造物は教会だ。「大聖堂」
1600年くらいに建てられた。「または、 。。1600年代頃くらいに建てられた。」
本当に強いので、たくさん地震にも耐えた。
「または、生き残る？-> たくさん地震を生き残りた。」
建てるようにその材料はとても高品質と言うこともできる。
「または、 。。使用されている材料が非常に高品質であることがわかる」
「どちらもただしい？」
国は日本と違う。
ほぼすべては結構古くて建物は1000年以上も古い日本とは違う。
いずれにせよ、僕たちはそれを誇りに思っている。
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
Questo dialogo ti sembra naturale?
Vorrei tradurre e doppiare in italiano un cortometraggio animato che ho realizzato in portoghese.
Ho usato Google Translate per tradurre il dialogo, ma non so se suona naturale in italiano. Il cortometraggio animato è questo: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C_D1fv2dE6Q (è in portoghese)
Dipartimento di Difesa dei Sogni.
Gnln: Cosa è successo ora?
Rilevata invasione dei sogni
Gnln: Qualcuno sta invadendo i sogni?
Gnln: Entità astratta? Lo risolverò adesso!
Gnln: Pronto. Ora non mi resta che cercarla...
Gnln: Ei, tu!
Entità Astratta: Ciao Gnln! ti sono mancato?
Gnln: Come sei fuggito dalla prigione?
Entità Astratta: È un segreto.
Entità Astratta: Ti è piaciuto il nuovo mostro che ho creato? Molto meglio di quell'unicorno, eh?
Gnln: Entità astratta, ti prenderò!
Entità Astratta: Puoi provare, ma non ci riuscirai mai.
Gnln: Dico sul serio; Sto arrivando!
Entità Astratta: Ciao ciao.
Gnln: È vero, può teletrasportarsi.
Narratore: E poi
Narratore: Gnln ha provato
Gnln: Con questo costume verrà qui e finalmente la prenderò.
Trasformarmi in un mostro.
Mannaggia! <3
Narratore: Molte, molte volte,
Narratore: Ma alla fine ha sempre fallito.
Entità Astratta: Una torta gratis? Che gentile da parte sua!
Torta gratis (non è una trappola, lo prometto) firmato: Gnln
Gabbia antiportale
Narratore: Che fesso.
Gnln: L'HO SENTITO!
Gnln: Oh... ci deve essere qualcosa che non ho ancora provato-
Gnln: So cosa fare!
Entità Astratta: Ciao Glnl! Anche tu sei venuto a vedere il combattimento? Lei è molto...eh?
Gnln: SVEGLIATI IDIOTA; SEI IN UN SOGNO!
Sottotitolato:
Devo smettere di guardare i cartoni animati fino a tardi.
May 3, 2025
Translating Sentences That Caught My Eye (Part 4)
1. His career was at a low ebb after the scandal, so much so that nothing could have been further from the truth than his earlier swagger and boasts of success. It was time for him to clean out the stable of his old image and start anew. He continued to opine about his innocence, but few listened.
2. Providing false information to the authorities could be seen as aiding and abetting the suspect. Her explanation didn't wash with the investigators, despite sounding plausible at first glance, not because of any factual errors, but because her nervous demeanor undermined her credibility.
3. It felt like a Sisyphean task; suggestions often went unheeded. Management needed to get with the times, but seemed content to whistle past the graveyard. (omitted) Despite being surprisingly inept at basic tasks, he was incredibly adept at charming important people. He would often swagger into meetings, patronizing junior staff, while others just gawked at his conceited behavior.
4. The manager, utterly distraught about his team riven with internal disputes, realized he had to get a leg up in the increasingly competitive market. However, his attempts to broach necessary but unpopular changes often smacked of desperation, and his inclination to pander to influential clients was not so much good business sense as a fear of confrontation. sometimes he just wanted everyone to get out of his hair.
May 3, 2025
May 3, 2025
Esercizi di frasi semplici - Parte Tredici
Cioè, non volevo offenderti, stavo solo scherzando.
Faccio fatica a comprendere quello che dice quando parla veloce.
Lavoro presso uno studio medico in centro.
Hai ragione, dovevamo partire prima, perché ora siamo in ritardo.
Non può esistere un amore così grande senza fiducia.
Cosa intendi dire con quella frase?
Siamo saliti in macchina e siamo partiti subito.
È arrivato appena in tempo per il treno.
È caduto mentre correva, ma per fortuna niente di grave.
Ha un carattere forte, ma è anche molto gentile.
Non voglio perdere questa occasione.
Ha rotto il vaso senza volerlo.
Voleva fare una bella figura al colloquio, quindi si è vestito elegante.
La sua azione ha fatto la differenza in quel momento difficile.