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A Funny Memory
Today, I was listening to a Shakira song that reminded me of a funny moment. It was when I listened to songs without understanding the meaning, because I was innocent and a kid, five or six years old.
The song's name is If you go (Si te vas) and a part of this says "all new brooms always sweep well, but later you will see their bristles worn."
The funny part is that in Spanish, "bristles" is translated as "cerdas", and "cerdas" is a word that have many meanings, for example, "female pigs". So, as a child, I didn't understand the metaphor.
I didn't understand why Shakira was making a relation between pigs and brooms, but because I was a huge Shakira fan, I accepted her mistake, I believed in her and her words. 😂🤣
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
Cold and Dead? Not at All!
I believe that each season has it's own beauty and meaning for us. If I had to choose between them, maybe it would be winter. It's not an easy choice, because spring is the "wake up" season, which is the most colorful and alive season, but people can discourage winter because they believe it's just about cold, lost leaves and silent death, but it's not that simple. I admire nature's set of awesome skills, which makes it able to survive and prepare for spring.
July 10, 2025
Today
I fall asleep while watching a movie. I woke up with a tremendeus headache and uncomfort and remove my laptop and phone off of the bed. I slept again. I woke up at 6.30 am. I spent some time by going to toilet, walking and finished the remain part of the yesterday nights movie. I just couldnt able to get out of the bed so i started to watch another movie. The movies called ummm what was it?? I checked out my Opera history but couldnt find the movie. There was a beautiful french actress. Also, she was playing in the movie The Beach i watched yesterday night. This is my all day with happiness and frustration. I am eating one meal since 4-5 day. I thinl I lost some weight. I am not on diet or trying to lose weight. It is just I don't have money to eat. Sometimes I am happy sometimes sad. Sometimes anxious then care about nothing at all. At that times I feel like I can do everything I can. I can travel to another universe with the songs. I imagine myself being a leader, businessman, traveler even a hippie pr psychonout. It is so strange that where we born determine who we are. We could be someone completely different. So Why this life?
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
Day 6: Why I Write? Because Screaming Is Still Weird
Screaming in the street is still socially unacceptable, even if it's technically cheaper than therapy. So we write instead, because even a brain meltdown can be more sophisticated when typed out.
No one asks why we write things like "The ceiling collapsed on me again today, but I'm still fine, thanks." They assume it's a creative self-expression, but sorry, it's just backup. Ctrl+S on the soul. We just hope that by writing it down, we might have something to return to when tomorrow somehow turns out to be even worse than today.
Anyone could know, writing doesn't work during the day. Everyone's bustling, clinking, or trying to conquer Mount Everest in the kitchen with nothing but a frying pan. I could say, "Life can distract our thoughts", but no, it does. Always. Then the night comes, and the only things that stay with me are silence and darkness. Like two loyal friends, right? No more strange noises from the other room, no more impossible expectations from people I don't even know, just me and my own tolerated chaos.
Oh, what? A night owl? Please. I just wait until the world shuts up so I don’t have to fake a functional personality. At night, no one expects me to be “doing great”, I can finally be what I actually am: someone who thinks too much, sleeps too little, and isn’t busy pretending otherwise. I can just exist.
In the end, writing doesn’t solve anything, it just makes my mental chaos look like a well-structured paragraph. I write just because even the biggest mess looks cooler in Times New Roman with 1.5 line spacing.
July 10, 2025
Theater experience
In March, when the Snow White live-action movie was realeased, we wanted to watch it in family - me, my sister, my mother and my nephew, but because of my sister's schedule, we couldn't go because she never has time, so we didn't watch the movie in theaters, it was so annoying because a whole experience was lost because she couldn't find time and my mother didn't want to leave her out of the experience, so in fact we're all out of the experience. Because of that, I promissed to myself that I was never going let this happens again, if have a movie on theaters that I really want to watch, I'm going to, even if I have to do it by myself. After that, I did it with final destination 6 movie, I watched it in theaters alone and it was fire, a good memory and a good experience.
July 10, 2025
New york
The place I would visit is New York .New York is a wonderfull place because it’s a city with many history and magnificent landscapes .
My passion is fashion and I thinks New York is great place to improuve my style and my outfits. The city is full of shopping place and I love this because there is many choice of clothes,shoes,and accessories. USA is my dream country to visit so I really think to go ah this place.
July 10, 2025
Working In The Office
I'm working in the office today.
In order to be in the office at 07:00 AM, means that I need to be out of my house at 05:00 AM.
Right now, I'm happy with my working schedule, Since I need to wake up early only 2 days per week to go to the office, the remaining three days are work from home.
Working in a hybrid company is great, but you also need to learn how to rest well when nobody is watching you, because if you're not going to bed early or wasting your time when working at home, that could lead to bad habits forming through the years, I know this problem since I started my working life at the end of 2019. Be aware that good rest and clear goals can help you achieve more complex projects in the future.
July 10, 2025
漫画を探すのを手伝って
以下の内容は5ちゃんねるなどに投稿したいです。添削をください。
漫画喫茶店で呼んだ漫画を探しています。男子高校生には幽霊が見えるので、あいつはそれを以って探偵しています。殺害された幽霊たちは話さず、ヒントを指し示すだけですが、主人公に憑いた一人の女子高生の幽霊がいて、この子は話をします。思いつく場面は、事件現場で、主人公は弾痕について何かを言ったとき、この女子幽霊は、「だんこん」という言葉につぼったシーンです。ちょうど「男根ｗ」と書かれたと思います。
読んだのは2020年ですが、その時は古いか新しいか分かりません。複数の単行本があったと思いますが、沢山ではないはずです。2～7冊かもしれません。
July 10, 2025
La deuxième semaine que j’écris sur ce site
Hier, ma soeur et moi nous sommes allées au théâtre voir “Mousetrap” par Agatha Christie. C’était ma première fois que je voyais cette pièce. La scène était bien conçue. Ma soeur a aprécié la pièce. Elle a lu le livre et elle connaissant l’histoire. En fait, ma soeur a lu tous les livres d’Agatha Christie. Je pense que Christie a écrit environs soixante livres. J’ai trouvé que la pièce était moyenne.
July 10, 2025
Nature
There are many species in our planet earth. But Humans are the wisest, cleverest a smartest one. We have thinking power that's make us different form other species. God made this planet for all species , but We are became very selfish . In every situation we saw our side , We don't think after that what happen , For an example when We cut a tree we don't think about bird who lives in the tree. Due to this cruel nature of human many species are extinct and many are have to extinct .Due to this nature is disbalanced , so we have to faces many problems like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis ,wildfires and many more . If we play with the nature the nature will also play with us reveling his destructive nature.
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
My beginning
Hi my name is farouk and i am writing for the first time since my begin of learning english i hope you can help me and advice me for better learning in less time and correct the mistakes in this small paragraph please dont laugh at me because it's my first time i write even i have enough word and i can do better. I'm proud of my progress even it's slow .
Thank you.
July 10, 2025
About my friends
Today after school, I was consulted not to be able to make a friends. He wanted to make a friends in his class, but there are no people to along with him. Therefore, he talked with his friends in 1-1class(he was in 1-1 class years 1 old.)And today, they don't get along.And I knew that my junior high school friend is lonely from his information. I want to help them, but my class is difference so it is difficult.
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
Der Erste Eintrag
Hallo! Ich bin ein Student und möchte wirklich Deutsch lernen. Meine Mutter kommt aus Österreich und spricht sehr viel Deutsch mit mir, aber ich habe es nie gelernt, weil ich in den USA erwaschen geworden bin. Ich kann Deutsch wirklich gut verstehen (wenn ich es höre und lese), aber ich kann nicht gut schreiben und sprechen. Nächste Monat fahre ich nach Wien. Da mach ich einen Monat-lang Deutschkurs. Ich hoffe dass ich am A2.2 Niveau bin vom Kursbeginn. Dann kann ich nach dem Kurs in die Uni Wien anmelden und weiter Deustch lernen (ich muss A2 haben ins Universität zu gehen).
July 10, 2025
Los muebles
A mí me fascinan los muebles. Son muy distintos y tienen diferentes estilos. Hay unos que estén hechos de madera, vidrio, ladrillo, incluso piedra. Mi mueble preferido es donde se encuentre mis amigos y mi familia. Si estamos juntos, no importa el tipo de mueble que tengamos. No importa el tamaño o la comodidad del mueble. Quiero que estén mis queridos conmigo.
I would like corrections from a native spanish speaker only. I would also like a more advanced vocab recommendations to make it sound less dry. Thank you!
July 10, 2025
Am Strand, aber krank
Ich war ein bisschen krank bevor wir sind hier gekommen. Ich bin aber gestern im Pool geschwommen, und danach fühlte mich schlechter. Dann am Nacht konnte ich kaum schlafen, es war eine Folter. Ich habe Halsschmerzen und meine Stimme klingt furchtbar. Gestern war auch bewölkt, während ich habe geschwommen, und auch wegen der Klimaanlage im Haus, würde ich kränker. Heute weiß ich nicht, ob ich schwimmen werde. Mal sehen.
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
meeting a friend
This weekend i need meeting my friends , ı like friends ı call friends jack said ı am busy sorry after ı call ali , Ali said of course i need come meet for you
i feel happy after call Bee , said ok ı need come i feel good , weekend monday time is ten o clock in the coffee after walking beach
i arrived to coffee at ten o clock i waiting friends Ali ten minutes ago went to coffee i talking ali , Bee quarter past ten went to coffee
we said welcome a talking after order coffe a walking beach to be night said good by a arrived to home
July 10, 2025
El transporte público en Polonia
Esta tarde tomé el tren para viajar de Cracovia a Varsovia (dos ciudades polacas grandes) y me sorprendió la alta calidad de este transporte. En primer lugar, el precio que ofrecen para un viaje tan largo se me hace bastante barato. Pagué alrededor de setenta euros para dos viajadores y escogí el tren un poco más "premium" así que creí que el precio sería más alto. Si quería escoger el tren de "baja calidad" (uno que ya tomé en el pasado y no me parecía de baja calidad) el precio sería alrededor de treinta euros para dos viajadores. Además los transportes públicos aquí en Polonia son muy limpios y me parecen seguros. Normalmente viajo con mi novia y me dijo que nunca se sentía en peligro. Ella viene de los E.E. U.U. y me dijo que nunca le gusta viajar en los transportes públicos allí pero que aquí se siente incluso mejor en los trenes que en los Uber o los taxis. La razón por qué los transportes públicos polacos son tan desarrollados es el presupuesto enorme que recibimos de la Union Europea. Por esa razón, no entiendo tan las personas, y especialmente los politicos, que quieren que Polonia sale de la Union Europea. Claro que hay leyes que no me gustan tan en esta Union pero por un país como Polonia, creo quedarse ofrece mas ventajas que desventajas.
July 10, 2025
La recolte d'été
J'ai, selon le décompte d'aujourd'hui, quatre pruniers de différentes espèces. Le jaune et le jaune-rose perdent activement leurs fruits, et c'est beaucoup plus que nous pouvons manger, et je n'ai pas de place dans le congélateur. Alors on a invité des amis hier pour les ramasser et emporter. Selon eux, le jaune est une mirabelle classique et le jaune-rose semble être une mirabelle hybride. Je ne sais pas les noms des pruniers vert et violet ; ils ne sont pas encore mûrs.
On a découvert deux noisetiers et un noyer. Les buissons que je pensais être des myrtilles sont en fait des mahonias. Je ne connais pas cette baie, mais après avoir fait des recherches, j'ai découvert qu'ils sont très acidulés et riches en pectine. Je sais déjà que les anciens propriétaires faisaient de la confiture, donc j'imagine qu'ils l'ont utilisée à cette fin.
J'ai aussi quatre figuiers verts, et nos amis nous ont dit qu'ils sont mûrs aussi. Si on les appuie, c'est doux. Mais ils sont quand même toujours tous verts, et ils ne se détachent pas facilement, donc j'avais des doubes. Selon YouTube, j'ai trouvé qu'ils ne sont pas encore mûrs. Nos amis en ont ramassé beaucoup, mais ce n'est pas grave, il nous en reste beaucoup en plus. Je pense faire plus tard des biscuits aux figues, comme les « Fig Newtons » qui sont populaires aux États-Unis.