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上课
(老师进了教室。)
老师:上课!
同学们:老师早!
老师:同学们,早上课!
Tom:报告!
老师:Tom, 你迟到了。你今天怎么这么晚?怎么现在才来?
Tom:对不起,老师。今天早上我爸妈没叫我,所以我起晚了。
老师:以后别迟到,快进来。现在我们开始上课。今天我们学习第八课的生词和对话,还有语法。你们都预习了吗?
同学们:预习了。
老师:太好了。学新课文以前,我们有一个听写小测试。 请大家准备一张纸和一支笔。快一点儿。Jenny, 你怎么没有笔?Mike,你的纸呢?好,现在我们开始。我念一个生词,你们写一个,懂了吗?
同学们:懂了。
(听写小测试以后)
老师:下面我们开始学对话,请你们听一遍录音,再回答我的问题。如果你们想回答问题,请举手。
June 27, 2025
¿Cuál es tu recuerdo favorito?
No sé cuál sea mi recuerdo favorito, pero hoy me vino a la mente uno de los más antiguos. Estaba en una playa de California, jugando en la arena. Hacía un día soleado, y recuerdo vívidamente estar bajo un gran embarcadero, a la sombra. Mi hermana ya debía de haber nacido, pero solo recuerdo estar allí con mis padres y mi hermano mayor. Ese es el fin del recuerdo, pero también guardo buenos recuerdos más recientes de visitar esa playa con frecuencia y comer tiburón y mariscos. ¡El mundo parecía más bonito en aquellos días!
June 27, 2025
Ligue canadienne de football
J’ai le temps libre aussi alors je regarde football canadienne sur la télévision. C’est très différent que football américain. Vous avez trois essai, pas quatre, et le chàmp est plus grand. Et les joueurs courent avant le début de le coup. Pour que une équipe est situé à Montreal, qui s’appelle les Alouettes, ils parlent français peu. Mais ce soir, le jeu est Edmonton contre Winnipeg. Je regarderais les Alouettes demain. Mais je ferais autre chose aussi. Nous verrai!
June 27, 2025
June 27, 2025
Ma routine du jour
Récemment, j'ai créé une nouvelle routine du jour. Avant que j'ai commencé mon boulot, j'ai eu trop de temps pour défiler sur *TikTok* et Instagram pendant mon temps libre. Après plusieurs heures, j'ai sens mal à la tête parce que l'écran était mauvais pour mes yeux. J'ai les lunettes pour voir à la distance. Alors, quand j'ai commencé mon boulot, je me suis dit que je veux avoir moins de quatre heures de temps d'écrans chaque jour. J'utilise une application, *ScreenZen*, qui se bloque les applications et mets les restrictions sur les numéros de temps que je peux les accéder. De plus, j'ai ajouté toutes mes tâches pour la semaine sur Notion, une application organisationnel.
Maintenant mes jours sont les mêmes pendant la semaine. Chaque jour, je me réveille à sept heures et demie et je me douche, je me brosse les dents et je déjeune. À huit heures, je pratique mon français par suivi mon programme de français. À huit heures et demie, je prépare ma collation pour l'après-midi et je conduis au travail. Je travaille de neuf heures à dix-sept heures et demie, auprès, je retourne chez moi. Quand j'arrive, j'ai une heure pour faire n'importe quoi puis je prépare le dîner. Chaque autre jour, à vingt heures, je cours pour une heure et les autres, je regarde une émission avec ma sœur. En ce moment, je suis très fatigué et je veux dormir, mais je pratique mon français pendant une heure avant de sommeil. J'essaie de dormir pour neuf heures chaque nuit mais c'est difficile si j'ai des autres responsabilités. Chaque week-end est différent parce que je les passe avec mes amis. Chaque rendez-vous est decider par l'autre ou les autres personnes mais intéressante quand même.
J'essayais de suivre ma routine, mais la vie chaque jour a les échecs et les autres chemins qui ouvrent. Je n'avais jamais manqué un jour de course mais je ne peux pas dire la même pour mon programme de français. Je vais continuer avec cette routine, mais si vous avez les loisirs que vous aimez, dites-moi et j'aimerais essayer !
June 27, 2025
June 27, 2025
Bogotá, Colombia
Hello, good evening! I'm from Colombia and I know that the first idea when I introduce myself is "Oh, she is from Medellín. She is "paisa"". I don't feel uncomfortable with this, I feel that it's like a compliment. But people need to know more about other cities, one of them is Bogotá, the capital. The capital has an environment for more culture like museums, and people there are more focused on their jobs or studies. Also, Bogotá is a city with a Rock culture. Colombia isn't only reggaeton music or party.
June 27, 2025
A Dangerous Village
Hello, good evening!
During a family trip, we visited a village named Aguachica in Colombia. This village is close to Venezuela. We needed to spend a night there because we were on a long trip in our car and we needed to rest. Since the first moment, we felt bad vibes like darkness. The streets were empty and when we found a hotel, the lobby was empty too. It was the only hotel open with lights on. After a few minutes a receptionist appeared. She gave us a room and an alert too. She told us that we couldn't leave our car alone, because the village was full of criminals. So, if we wanted to go out from there the next day, we needed to pay a parking or better spend the night in another country. She explained to us that the situation there was terrible since Venezuela's problems. Then, we decided to continue driving until we found a better hotel.
June 27, 2025
Some tricks for be more productive...
Well, today I will try to present some tricks that I use for to be more productive.
1. Have a clear system of organization, but this system needs to work for you.
2. Have a planner, and in this planner you need to organizing your schedule into in some categories: (1) actions with a schedule, (2) actions without a schedule, (3) informations, and (4) values - in this one you include the most important activities that you have, that can help you to reached your goals.
3. Don't put your tasks in your planner, separe a specific place for them. For example a task list, I used the app "to do ist" for it. And in it, I put all the activities that I need to do, and categorizing them into four places: (1) today, (2) this week, (3) this month, and (4) not urgent. With this I can see what I need to do.
4. Finally, when I have a clear system, you can see all the activities you need to do. And, the next step is go to action. For this, I put my cellphone in another room, and turn off all the things that can change my focus. Them, I put my phones, a good music, and started to do what I need.
That's it! Just some tricks that I use, and ever help me with the daily tasks.
June 27, 2025
My Animal Sanctuary
Hello, good evening!
If I win a lot of money, I won't donate to anybody. Because money makes people corrupt. So, I will create my own animal sanctuary, it will be like a spa for animals without a home. I will like to help them, because they don't have the ability to win their own money.
June 27, 2025
A Dramatic and Gossip Show
Hello, good evening!
I have been watching a controversial show since a few years ago. I discovered it watching TV, it was broadcast in a channel called Discovery Home & Health. Its name is "90 day fiancé", I loved it. I started watching it in Spanish, but now, I'm studying by watching it in English. I enjoy the dramatic stories, even though I know they are fake. My husband told me that it isn't a good show for me because I'm learning bad words too hahaha.
I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity. I need to put my entire attention to understand the whole gossip hahahha.
June 27, 2025
《黑暗渐变》：走出时间之外的邀请
图像：从一颗纯白耀眼的心中，黑曜石般的三角形悄然绽放，如一场静默的爆炸—一场对立元素在寂静中跳舞的缓慢爆发。
琳达：（沉浸在画面的深处）这个神秘的形状有种奇异的魅力——仿佛不断向内坠落，却永远无法触及地面。
莉丝： 确实，黑与白看起来并非敌对。那种古老的对立，也许早已不再必要。
莱克斯：（点头）它们彼此交织，优雅地达成一种和谐的平衡。
摘摘要： 一个神秘的曼陀罗，邀请人们冥想对立与整体；在其中，二元的界限逐渐模糊，平衡悄然浮现。
关键词：曼陀罗、神圣艺术、二元消融、视觉公案、光影交融、对立统一
《财富》：对财富观念的再思考（重塑版）
在古老松林的低语中，或在浪涛破碎的轰鸣里，
在篝火劈啪的呼吸中，或野猫温柔的咕噜声里——发现那无言的敬畏。
真正富有的人，是那些能与古老雪松的心材对话，或在春日里轻触新生竹的柔嫩茸毛的人。
这个世界源于无尽的丰饶：让我们以智慧分享，并守护它的生命之源。
塔拉： 我不喜欢这位作者谈论“财富”的方式。这个世界上，还有太多人正在挨饿。
美丽不能填饱肚子。
约瑟夫： 确实如此。但作者并没有对饥饿视而不见。
他只是想说：当喜悦来敲门时，别拒之门外。
我们感受到的喜悦，难道不总是短暂如梦？
摘要：一场关于简朴、喜悦与内在丰盈的抒情冥想。
关键词：敬畏、自然之富、精神富足、正念之乐、生活满足
June 26, 2025
June 26, 2025
Creando Un Horario de Estudiar
Creí que necesitado un horario de estudiar, así que podría practicar todos los habilidades que tengo que igualmente (hablando, leyendo, escribiendo, escuchando, y habilidades de conversaciones). Todos los días quiero escribir, y usaré este sitio de web por mi práctica de escribiendo.
En lunes, tengo práctica de escuchar, por viendo series, películas, y videos de YouTube, o escuchando a podcasts.
En martes, tengo práctica de leyendo, por leyendo cosas en sitios de webs, o jugando videojuegos con diálogo escrito.
En miércoles, tengo práctica de conversación y vocabulario. Por vocabulario, quiero usar el aplicación “Spanish Dictionary”, como tiene un función vocabulario bueno, y es divertido usar. Y por conversión, tengo un amigo que dijo que podría practicar conmigo si quise. Pero no es siempre consecuente, a veces olvidamos, y a veces no podemos.
En jueves, tengo práctica de escuchando otra vez.
En viernes, tengo práctica de leyendo, y práctica de hablando. Por práctica de hablando, quiero grabar a mí mismo hablando. Creo que podría ayudar con mi pronunciación y habilidades de hablando en general.
En sábado/domingo, tengo prática de conversación y vocabulario.
Creo que ese es un horario bien, a veces no siempre lo surgió, es solo algo que puede dar me una idea de qué necesito hacer. Eso es todo que tengo decir, gracias por leer, adiós :D
June 26, 2025
June 26, 2025
June 26, 2025
June 26, 2025
June 26, 2025
My first time
Hi, this it's my first time in this platform, Always I'm always have problems with writing , and I'm looking for how to solve this, so ChatGPT recommended me this platform to become better on this writing ability. I'm trying to improve my English abilities studying different aspect as listening, speaking, writing of course, and so on. My vocabulary is limit, the words exists in my mind, and I know many words however when it's moment to speak or write, my mind becomes to blank, additionally, I can read words and understand many words on technical documentation, portals,etc; however I don't know how to utilize them. In my opinion, this exercise it will open and expand my mind and develop this ability that is so important.
Many regards.
June 26, 2025
June 26, 2025
¿Qué harías si un día despiertas y estas solo en el mundo?
Para ser 100% honesta, si un dìa me despierto y estoy sola en el mundo no creo que sobreviviera por mucho tiempo jaja. Pero ponemos que si quieria estar en un mundo sin gente. Creo que mi primer objectivo sería buscar una mascota para tener compañía. Despues iria a la capital de mi país y intenteré de encontrar alguna explicacion de por que la gente desaparecio. Tambien buscaria documentos secretos porque soy chismosa. Luego, buscaria una casa ubicada en la playa. Buscaria un bote para pasar mis días tomando el sol y pescando. Además podría usar mi bote para viajar entre varias islas.
June 26, 2025
Difference between physical attraction and love.
We need to difference between physical attraction and love. The attraction can be superficial and instantly, but the connection or the sensation like "I met you before" or "I feel secure with you", it is the first step for something stronger. So, I consider the "first sight" like a first date, and of this manner, is possible to feel "I fell in love at first sight".
Thank you for reading. Have a good day!
June 26, 2025
25 de Junio
Ayer estuve tan enfermo para escribir esta entrada. Por desgracia, creo que se me perdió la racha.
Todavía estoy enfermo hoy y además creo que estoy peor que ayer. He estado leyendo "Notes from Underground" por Dostoevsky. Es la tercera vez que lo he leído. A lo mejor no es el mejor libro leer cuando uno esté malo porque las palabras que se usan son muy visual y no son muy feliz. La razón que me gusta este libro es que, cada vez que lo leo, me ensaña un nuevo perspectivo de la vida. Tal vez es mejor que lea algo ligera como "Alice in Wonderland" o "The Wind in the Willows" para alimentar la alma cuando esté malo...
June 26, 2025
Medicine
Good afternoon! With the time, I learned how valuable is to sleep well. I hate a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day. So, to take Melatonina during sleepless nights helps me a lot. But, I need to be careful with the quantity, or if not I can obtain the contrary effect.
Thank you for reading. Have a good day!
June 26, 2025
A special memory with my family
I have a special memory with my family. This memory was when I was a teenager and I lived in parent's house. My father loves traveling a lot, especially in his car. Since I was a kid, my parents taught me the love for traveling in our car; with stops, visiting new places, tasting foods on way to our destination. So, I have a memory deep in my soul of a long trip that we did with my parents, my aunt and my dog (my dog was ill during this trip).
We started in Bogotá, Colombia's capital and our destination was to go to the Cabo de la Vela. The last is a wonderful place in the tip of Colombia. The distance between The Cabo de la Vela and the capital Bogotá is one thousand one hundred twenty kilometers. So, on the way, we lived many experiences, bad and funny moments. When we were almost arriving to the Cabo, a military man give us an alert. He told us that if we decided to continue driving in this street, it would be our own responsibility if something bad happened with us. It was scary, but my father decided to continue, because he met other people that had made their trip safely. We drove a few kilometers, then a car passed us in the opposite direction, with four people with masks. It was like a signal, so we decided to go back.
We visited different places in our return to the capital, and we had a scary anecdote. With the time, we learned that you need to pay for a tour to visit this place, with security and more people.