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Prendo il treno
Adesso sono prendendo il treno da New York City a Mystic, Connecticut. C'è un film molto famoso su Mystic con Julia Roberts chiama Mystic Pizza. Viaggio con le mie cugine per una festa di bachelorette. Non facevo il viaggio tra un pò, quindi sono emozionata per rilassare. Andremo una spa per i massaggi e le facciale. È un viaggio corto—saremo lì solo da giovedì a domenica.
May 15, 2025
Pouvez-vous m’aidez avec ces phrases si vous plait?
1. Cette jupe est la mienne!
2. La maison avec la porte verte? C’est les nôtres.
3. Celles filles sont très grande.
4. Ma voiture est bleu, la leur est rouge.
5. Tu connais Pierre? cette voiture-là est le sien.
6. quelle est ta matière préférée?
7. quelles sont les idées meilleurs?
8. cette voiture est rouge. Cette celle est bleu
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May 15, 2025
Santé et sport
Pour rester en bonne santé, une alimentation saine et équilibrée est essentielle. De bonnes habitudes alimentaires contribuent à un poids santé, à une réduction des risques de maladies comme le cancer, le diabète et les maladies cardiovasculaires, et à un taux de cholestérol sain. Parmi les habitudes alimentaires saines, on peut citer : préparer ses repas à l'avance, consommer beaucoup de fruits et légumes, griller ou cuire à la vapeur plutôt que frire, et éviter les aliments trop transformés.
L'obésité est une maladie où le poids affecte la santé. Elle peut être d'origine génétique, mais une alimentation saine peut contribuer à réduire le risque d'obésité. L'Irlande affichait l'un des taux d'obésité les plus élevés d'Europe, avec environ 60 % de la population en surpoids. « Ozempic » est un nouveau médicament utilisé pour traiter l'obésité, mais ses effets à long terme sont encore largement méconnus.
Il est bien connu que l'alcool et le tabac ont des effets néfastes sur la santé. L'alcool peut provoquer des maladies cardiaques et hépatiques, et le tabagisme peut provoquer le cancer du poumon. On pense souvent que les Irlandais boivent trop souvent et en excès. De plus, les jeunes peuvent être victimes de la pression sociale en matière d'alcool et de tabac.
Le sport est excellent pour la santé physique, mais il peut aussi être très bénéfique pour la santé mentale. Il stimule la libération d'endorphines par le cerveau, améliorant ainsi notre humeur. De plus, la pratique de sports d'équipe comme le football gaélique, le football américain ou le hockey peut contribuer à un sentiment de bonheur et à la réduction de l'isolement.
May 15, 2025
May 15, 2025
Pourquoi j'apprends français
Pourquoi j’apprends la langue française? Premièrement c’est parce que j’aime apprendre les langues en général. J’étudie l’arabe dans l’université et un jour je veux avoir un métier où j’ai besoin de parler plusieurs langues. Mais l’arabe est facile parce que j’apprends tout ce que j’en ai besoin dans le cours et je dois simplement faire mes devoirs. Mais apprendre français me rends désespérée. C’est trop difficile! J’ai appris français en l’école pour cinq ans, mais maintenant sans le cours je ne sais quoi faire. Ma capacité deviens pire et pire et je ne devient pas meilleur. C’est frustrant. Mais tant pis, qu’est-ce qu’on peut faire. J’essaie à apprendre de beaucoup mots nouveaux et lire, écrire, écouter, etc., mais je ne parle jamais et, d’ailleures, ma grammaire ne s’améliore aucunement et ça c’est mal. Je suis trop pessimiste. Je n’ai pas d’autre choix que de continuer.
Merci d'avoir corrigé!
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Жизнь
Сегодня я проснулась в 5.25 утра. Я завтракала. Я смотрела фильм на русском языке. После этого, я обед готовила в 11 утра. Потом, мама пришла дома с работы для обеда. Мы обедали вместе. Мама пошла на работу в 1. Затем, я помыла посуду. Снова я смотрела фильм и немножко спала. Я начинала готовить плов в 5. Мы сделали ужин в 6.30 и я снова помыла посуду. Вечером я сделала русские уроки.
May 15, 2025
May 15, 2025
Estoy usando el verbo 'ser'
Yo soy Jacob. Soy un trabajador de Jimmy John's, dondé trabajo con muchas personas quien no pueden encontrar un trabajo en otras lugares.
Fueron alumnos en la universidad, estudiaron muchos materias, pero ahora encontrar un trabajo que pague bien es difícil, y será más difícil en el futuro.
Yo creo que esto es Estados Unidos no puede competir económicamente China, así que trabajos en Estados Unidos van a otras países de Tercer Mundo y China.
Estados Unidos fue, es, y será un país imperialista. Sí no fuera, no sería un país rico.
Pero la sistema de imperialismo global que Estados Unidos ha creado genera condiciones que llevan a su propio suicidio.
Creo que un mundo sin Estados Unidos sería un mundo mejor para todos.
May 15, 2025
I want to know people outside of the daily work
In software development industry work meetings, I always feel misplaced. I don't know if it's the job itself or that I feel dumb talking with that people in English. It feels like I couldn't go as fast as I go with my native language (Spanish) talking. So, for some part, I need to close that gap to more easily communicate my thinking and my ideas about how to improve the system and for other part I feel that I need to connect more with people in their language first...
May 15, 2025
Mijn familie
Hoi. Vandaag ga ik over mijn familie schrijven. Ik woon in India met mijn familie in de hoofstand van een stat. Mij familie bestaan mijn moeder, Vader en opa. Ik houd van mijn orders want ze zijn heel vrijdelijk en begripvol. Ze zijn de belangrijste gedeelt van mijn leven. Ik Ben heel dankbar om mijn ouders te hebben. Ik heb ook een kleine schatse nichte en ze is vier jaar our. Ze woont in de verenigde staten met haar ouders. Wij spreken vaak met Elkaar door Telefon. Ik kijk altijd Ernaar uit om met Haar te praten. Ik vind het belangrijk om met familie te praten en ik vind het heel leuk.
May 15, 2025
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As soon as he got home,
My son started unpacking his luggage from the overnight field trip. I was surprised how quickly he did that because I always had to tell him to unpack his bags again and again after every trip we had. Does this phenomenon mean that he has grown? Or just a transient mood for that? I was not sure. However I just felt that I loved my son all the more, who was somewhat different today.
May 15, 2025
What is Flash panning? 2.0
Do you have heard this before? Let me explain.
While I was bored in my home, I stopped to reading the news, and so, one of them drew me.
From what I understood, it seems like a meeting between two people, maybe a “couple” or the first encounter, so, it doesn't matter. The central point is, to make a quick relationship, they can even pretend to be a couple, but, since the first troubles appear, they just give up. Of course, It’s not good for anyone, but it is what it is. It is more common in young people. In Brazil, we call, “Ficante, or peguete” something like “ It’s my girlfriend/Boyfriend but not official.”
I know, it’s confusing, but I guess you got it. So, I have a ask to you, what do you think about this?
Please, feel free to comment and share your opinion, i really interested to know
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May 15, 2025
Paragraph Sketches, No. 1 - X-Eyed Friend
Mr. N-0B0 was standing on the chair beside my study desk again. He’d been with me since I was six. I first read about him in a toddler’s book, and after that, he appeared in my room and never left. He’s entirely made of metal. I’ve never seen a single spot of rust on his body. He wears a cone-shaped hat, and his nose is a metal cylinder – like Pinocchio’s. He’s short. As a child, I often thought about hugging him like a doll – but I never did. He has a warm smile now. He didn’t always. At first, he had no expression – just two X-shaped eyes scratched into his face. When I was eight, I decided to draw a smile on his bare face with a purple crayon. It’s still there.
May 15, 2025
Writing 30 Sentences
1. He is trying not to care about it.
2. Her mind is likely caught in a tenacious struggle.
3. In case she has any questions.
4. They belong to the co-called “pretty girls” group, of which Nancy is also a part.
5. Sometimes learning something can be a long-time process and take more time than you expected.
6. Give me 5 stars at a time, and I’ll do my best to give you constructive feedback on how they are made.
7. Imagine 5 strawberries in condensed milk, and then imagine pouring it in a glass and drinking it in one gulp.
8. I think it’s exciting to be friend with her and sharing our minds together.
9. Entering a new age era is somehow like levelling up in an adventure game.
10. The new items and skills are opened, so you can explore newly discovered quests and routes as well.
11. It is almost the most important period of your life. So, you will ask yourself, What are you going to do? What are you going to work on?
12. And it gets more serious when you start to put your thoughts into action to see tangible results.
13. You will start to find clues on where to start exactly, and you’ll try to realize the required skills you need to obtain to smash your goals.
14. Sometimes I just want to say I don’t want to do it.
15. Foolish thoughts such as these kept coming to me in rapid succession.
16. Soon I became so engrossed in doing my assignments that at times I even skipped food and sleep. Such a pleasure, actually.
17. The dark art is all three things for me: It gives comfort, excitement, and simultaneously intellectual stimulation.
18. It is more about the aesthetic pleasure and perhaps the good feeling of contemplating such fields.
19. I think we usually avoid discussing or observing the perplexity surrounding difficult aspects of life, or how much it can be sometimes feel insane that it doesn't align with what we know.
20. As a result, we find efforts in these types of art or expression that attempt to address topics that are forbidden, ambiguous, or too grey to categorise as just black and white.
21. I appreciate the opportunity it gives us to reflect on the things we normally evade, even if just for a moment or a low stock.
22. To understand something, I believe we first have to allow ourselves to see it from all sides, without judgement and absolutely with courage.
23. In doing so, we can gain the needed insights that empower us to act and understand probably much better.
24. Mulberries are delicious. It’s somehow cute how it feels crushing between your teeth.
25. The little boy won a globe map ball for his top test scores. He is pushing his finger on the names of countries, muttering them, and imagining himself teleporting instantly to the locations by only touching the ball, as if it were magical.
26. The desire to go back and rewrite your experiences is a powerful, almost primal urge.
27. It is true that this approach is well-intentioned, but actually this is misguided and can be emotionally draining and lead to burnout.
28. She asked me: “What would you like to learn right now?” and I thought immediately about the required knowledge to make games.
29. One of the possible reasons for self-struggle sometimes could be that part of your entity impose limits, which other parts of you recognize it and rise up against it.
30. The popping sounds of notifications, which my classmates bombarding the social group with their last-moment questions about the exam’s content, pinged repeatedly in the background.
May 15, 2025
El significado del consumo responsable
En los últimos años se ha establecido un crecimiento considerable en el consumismo en todo el mundo. Esta tendencia tiene no solo influencia por la nuestras carteras, sino también por la ecología y los recursos naturales. Aunque vivimos en los años más abundantes en la historia y no nos falta casi nada esencial, siempre buscamos algo que podría completar el hueco en la nuestra vida cotidiana.Hay diversos factores que han causado el empeoramiento del consumismo en el último siglo. En cuanto nos hacemos más ricos y llenos de los objetos físicos, tenemos siempre la convicción que hay siempre el espacio para alterar y cambiar algo en nuestros alrededores. Este comportamiento va asociado con nuestras ganas de recibir más dopamina desde afuera que no nos hace nunca satisfecho y feliz. En el desarrollo de las redes sociales nos sentimos casi agredidos de las publicidades de los diversos productos, la mayoría de ellos no nos necesitamos y somos solo captados por su atractividad transmitida a través de las imágenes virtuales. Tengo que admitir que soy un gran aficionado a las compras online. Gracias a ellos, puedo ahorrar tiempo y dinero y a veces tengo una disponibilidad mayor en comparación con los negocios tradicionales. Todos los beneficios de la compra virtual tienen un gancho peligroso. Cuando buscamos algo en internet, somos muy susceptibles a cualquier tipo de publicidad que crea sólo una ilusión de la necesidad de compra. La sociedad global tiene una posición poco clara sobre el consumo responsable. De un lado, nos aconseja comprar los artículos de segunda mano y prestar más atención al origen del producto, de otro lado nos empuja a crear más compras. Parece ser un cambio para el malo más pequeño. En mi opinión, tenemos que parar con el consumismo excesivo y crear los centros de reparación donde sí podría renovar los productos de calidad baja para prolongar su usabilidad. Me acuerdo que en los años de comunismo en Polonia este compartimento era más común y la gente apreciaba más el valor de los productos que tenía.
May 15, 2025