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Musik
Ich liebe es, Musik zu hören. Beim Urlaub habe ich gemerkt, dass ich Musik brauche, um mich gut und wohl zu fühlen. Da ich kaum oder gar nichts während meines Urlaubs gearbeitet habe, habe ich wahrgenommen, dass Musik ist wirklich wichtig für mich.
Während der Arbeit höre ich immer Musik, mein Lieblingsgenre ist Rock, speziell höre ich gerne Progressive, der macht mich immer froh.
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Meaning
Do you think life has meaning? I think it doesn't and that every person gives it the meaning they want. I still can't find meaning. I hope I can do it through purpose, but I don't have dreams, goals or ambitions. I have a rough idea of what I like and how I would like the world to be, so I guess I have to think more about that to find out what I want to do with my life. I think the lack of purpose is having me second guessing my decision of what I want to study in college.
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Translation exercise
Sandra und Paul sitzen in einem Restaurant. Ein Kellner begrüßt sie.
"Wisst ihr, was ihr trinken möchtet?" fragt der Kellner .
"Wasser und Orangensaft" sagt Sandra
"Danke sehr. Hier sind eure Speisekarten"
Der Kellner bringt Wasser für Paul und Orangensaft für Sandra.
"Was wünscht ihr nehmen?" fragt der Kellner.
"Ich möchte bitte ein Steak mit Kartoffelbrei" sagt Paul.
"Ich möchte auch das, aber mit grüne Bohne" sagt Sandra.
"Und zwei Brötchen" sagt Paul.
"sehr Gut. Ihr solltet es bald haben".
Der Kellner kommt später eine Stunde zurück.
"Entschuldigt ihr für das Warten, hier sind die zwei Steaks mit Kartoffelbrei und Brötchen"
"Ich bestimmt grühne Bohne mit meinem Steak" beklagt sich Sandra.
"Entschuldigen Sie, ich bring sie sofort"
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Translation Practice
How sad! The mom is poor: she left her hometown and was abducted, seriously ill, leaving a pair of children behind...... The mom is great, using the method of counting fingers, taught her daughter to remember her father’s address, then she went away alone. She left her last love for her daughter so that her daughter could find her father. But the older sister, to protect her younger brother to avoid being cracked down, chose to take all the suffering alone.
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Les professeurs
L’introduction actuelle des médias dans la classe non seulement offre aux élèves l’opportunité d’accéder à de connaissances variées mais aussi aide les enseignants à réduire leurs tâches et leur effort. C’est pourquoi, quelques personnes craignent la grande influence de ces technologies qui pourrait “menacer” la position des professeurs dans les cours. Je ne suis pas faveur de cette opinion car les professeurs occupent une place irremplacable dans l’acte d’apprentissage des enfants.
Tout d’abord, sans les professeurs, les élèves sont difficiles à concentrer sur leur apprentissage. En effet, ils sont très facilement distraits par plusieurs facteurs y compris les médias, ce qui les séduisent non seulement par des fins éducatifs mais également par des fins récréatifs. C’est pourquoi, il est nécessaire d’avoir les enseignants afin de les encourager à apprendre ainsi que les protéger contre l’addiction aux appareils électroniques.
De plus, de mon point de vue, les moyens technologiques manquent une chose très essentielle, il s'agit du côté relationnel, humain. Autrement dit, les professeurs écoutent normalement les problèmes et les difficultés des élèves, savent quels sont leurs points forts ou faibles et peuvent donc les donner les conseils nécessaires, les orienter en conséquence. Ce sont eux également qui peuvent proposer à leurs élèves les apprentissages qu’ils jugent les mieux adaptés à chacun tandis qu’il est impossible de trouver ça sur ces moyens.
En conclusion, on ne peut pas nier le rôle des technologies dans l’éducation des enfants, pourtant, ils sont juste un moyen supplémentaire qui permet de soutenir les professeurs.
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Falscher Bus
Vor kurzem habe ich mit einem meiner engsten Freunde nach verschiedene Dorfe zu besuchen angefangen. Wir finden es besser, die Zuge und die Busse zu nehmen, weil wir uns nicht um die Verfügung der Parking kümmern müssen.
Letzte Woche haben wir uns entschiedet, um ein kleines Dorf in der Nähe von uns zu wandern. Wir haben alles Wesentliches in unseren Rücksäcken gepackt: Wasserflaschen, kleine Snacks und Obst. Ich war um 9:30 mit ihm im Bahnhof verabredet. Er ist ein bisschen spät gekommen und ich war sehr nervös. Ich war so nervös, dass wir im falschen Bus eingestiegen sind. Das heißt, wir sind die falsche Richtung gegangen. Es war nicht bis Mitte der Fahrt, dass wir uns es bemerkt haben, weil wir miteinander gesprochen haben.
Glücklicherweise sind wir nicht so streng mit unseren Plänen. Manchmal gucken wir in Google Maps, ob es etwas Gutes in der Nähe gibt und wir haben einfach Spaß. Schließlich hatten wir eine gute Zeit und haben unsere Begleitung genossen.
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Translation Practice
The door opened, their father came out, the siblings ran over and cried bitterly while hugging their father. The older sister said: "We found dad, we have dad, and we were not wild kids anymore." It turned out that when the mom and her children were abducted, the older sister was eleven years old, and the younger brother was six years old. After that, the dad found them everywhere, but did not find them.
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The weather I like
I would say I am a big fan of cool weather which is not scorching hot or not freezing cold. The reason is that I am crazy about dress. When it comes spring, the weather becomes warm, I can wear my elegant dress to hang out with my friends. It is also a lovely season with all flowers in full bloom and everything is alive. Therefore, you could enjoy breathtaking scenery if you would travel with your friends. When it comes this season, you would feel you have mood to do everything you like. For example, you would feel comfortable with this weather when you go shopping, since you would not sweat like a pig. For me, I used to going traveling with my friends in this season and we are planning for our next journey. On top of that, It is also good for people’s skin when air is moist.
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Translation Practice
No mom, no dad. She thought that her and her younger brother had become orphans. Later, when she grew up, she started to think about making money to find her dad. She saved 500 yuan, and followed that address to find her father, but because she was a illiterate and couldn’t read, she did not find it.
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Translation Practice
She didn't dare to let her younger brother know about that because she was afraid that her younger brother could not stand that. Mom had passed away, no father. She was afraid her younger brother would commit suicide, and she didn't want to lose her younger brother again. If so, she would lose her only relatives.
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Translation Practice
All of these things, her younger brother didn't know, and she also didn't tell her younger brother. So all these years, the younger brother didn't know the truth about the abduction of his mom, the reason for committing suicide of his mom and where his father was. And all of this is because the older sister wanted to protect her younger brother.
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Translation Practice
Mom called her up, hugged her face crying, then hugged her younger brother crying. After that, she kissed her and her younger brother. Mom said to them while crying: "Sorry, mom cannot raise you up......" During that time, mom carrying two kids had escaped twice, but each time they were caught back by her husband.
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Translation Practice
When the last time his mom was hospitalized, because his family didn't have money, his mom didn't want to spend money again. She wanted her two children to have a good life and no foreign debt. While she was in the hospital, she worried about her kids a lot, not to wait to go through the discharge procedures, she ran out of the hospital.
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Estudando idiomas com LWT
Eu estou pesquisando um novo método para estudar os idiomas que eu estou aprendendo. Eu gostei do método do Steve (o senhor de LingQ) sobre ler o que eu mas possa, assim assimilar vocabulário em contexto. Agora eu estou utilizando o software LWT (Learning with texts) que me permite fazer algo parecido ao que oferece lingQ mais sim pagar. Eu gostaria de poder apoiar ao Steve mais em meu país o dólar está muito caro, entre três e quatro vezes mais.
Eu vou continuar lindo e tratando de me organizar. Muito obrigada pela sua ajuda.
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本棚
幼い頃から、私は本好きなので、段々たくさん本が積もった。私の本棚で6棚がある。正確に数えてないけど、400から600本があると思う。もちろんたくさんは短い短編集や漫画だ。他のたくさんは両親の古い本と図書館の景品の本だ。昔で全部の本は英語だった。中学生の頃で、少しはスペイン語だった。今は2棚は日本語の本だ。多分将来では半分の棚は日本語になる。
最近本の数が多すぎるので、2箱も満たした。この2箱を大学に持っていく。でも、家を出るときどうやって本棚の全部の本を持っていくのは大変だと思う。例えば他の国を住んでいると大好きな本だけを選ばないと。他のことをろくに買わないけど、多分少ない本を買う方がいいかも。
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Jan. 10, 2021 The Tree
In our culture, people believe when they died, they will get reincarnation. That means you will born as an another person or maybe an another species, like an animal. When the first time I knew that, I was thinking that I would like to be a big tree if I can choose the next life. A tree that's big, straight and tall. A tree that never moves, doesn't matter how the environment changes. A tree that always stable, kind and reliable.
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The invention of paper
Paper has been widely applied in every corner of our lives. You need paper to write, exchange, contain things, and solve sanitation problem. Due to the inexpensiveness of paper and its effectiveness as a writing medium, massive production of a significantly larger number of books can be achieved, producing knowledge cheaper, faster, farther, and easier. Paper’s traits also prompted the prosperity of economy.
1. Paper’s invention simplifies and lower the cost of making a book so that decrease rates of illiteracy, rising the level of education. Paper is an important invention because it replaced expensive parchment and papyrus as the storage medium of writing.
2. Extremely light weight decides paper’s storage and transportation are better than any other materials.
3. Paper money’s strength brought about radical changes in economy which replaced the foundation of financial structure. Businessmen trades with lighter, portable, and more reliable paper money, able to making more deals.
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