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Aug. 19, 2025
Je ne vapoterai jamais.
Les effets au corps sont trop mauvais pour vapoter. Une fois, j'ai parlé avec quelqu'un qui avait vapoté. Il m'a dit que je ne dois jamais vapoter. Il a dit qu'il a vomi. Je n'ai pas eu besoin de convaincre, mais égal... On peut imaginer que j'ai été surpris quand, quelques semaines en l'an de l'école, il a été suspendu car il a vapoté ! Pas moi, pas moi, je ne vapoterai jamais...
Aug. 19, 2025
Die Angriffe an Demokratie werden nie aufhören.
Wie jedes Regierungssystem, Demokratie wird immer Gegner haben. Diese gegner werden versuchen, ein verschiedenes, (wahrscheinlich autoritäres) System zu haben. Leute, die Demokratie mögen, müssen immer dafür kämpfen. Mit jedem System, das existierende muss sich schützen. Eine Diktatur muss paranoid sein, um das System zu halten. Wenn die Menschen eines Systems zu bequem werden, dann gibt es eine Lücke für die Gegner, die das System beenden können.
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
An Post in English
It's 2:29 at midnight and the temperature is 29. I still need to turn my air-conditioner on; otherwise, I can't sleep well due to the heat.
I keep waking up early in the morning these days for no reason, which I find a little bit torturous.
In order to pass the time while awake at midnight, I usually learn English, such as writing and reading in my mind.
I hope writing can improve my speaking skills. I used to do this for about one year. But I don't find an obvious relationship between these two skills. Maybe it only works to some extent.
As to speaking English, I am still a newbie. I can't speak fluently due to limited vocabulary, the usage of prepositions and tenses, as well as the flexibility of making sentences.
I don't know when I can achieve my goal in learning English. I don't even know that it's such a long way to go.
I really admire people who can speak English fluently. It seems that I can never reach that point.
Aug. 19, 2025
J'ai peur de faire des erreurs!
Je pense que la plus difficile chose à propos l’apprentissage de français est laisser de la peur de faire des erreurs.
Je crains constamment que je serai juger, et je ne sais pas comment m’affranchir de ces sentiments. Mais, pour devenir bon dans quelque chose, il est nécessaire de se tromper, de faire des erreurs. J’en sais déjà, et encore... je me sens que je doive être parfait, que je ne puisse pas faire des erreurs.
Et ce sentiment n’est pas limite à la contexte d’apprendre les langues - je me sens le pareil quand j’essayer à faire la plupart des choses!
Mais qui n’a pas peur de faire des erreurs, de se tromper? Je dois me rappeler du fait que je ne sois pas la seule personne qui se sent de cette manière.
Je pense qu'un des trucs important je puisse faire est continuer avec mes etudes. Et je me rappele de la raison principale pourquoi j’ai commencé -- pour communiquer avec mon amour est sa famille, une geste d'amour pour elle -- cela va me garder motivé.
Aug. 19, 2025
Erste Schreibprobe
Ich habe seit ungefähr sieben Jahren Deutsch gelernt, aber ich habe es nie formell studiert. Ich will ab diesem Herbst einen Kurs darin besuchen, deswegen mache ich mich bereit eine Einstufungsprüfung zu machen. Ich glaube ich kann die Sprache ziemlich gut verstehen und sprechen, aber meine Schreibfähigkeiten sind noch ziemlich schlecht, da ich ganz wenig Erfahrung habe. Deswegen wollte ich diese Website ausprobieren, um schreiben zu üben und meinen Wortschatz und Fähigkeiten hoffentlich zu verbessern.
Aug. 19, 2025
Martedì 19 agosto
Ho un altro test temuto al lavoro, e poi finalmente saprò se continuerò ad avere un lavoro oppure no.
Ho tanta paura, al punto che non riesco nemmeno a fare colazione, però devo mangiare comunque, almeno per il gusto di farlo.
Non facevo così tanti test da quando ero bambina, ma per fortuna i test sono stati a libro aperto.
Spero che stia ancora andando tutto bene: sono esausta e non vedo l'ora di portare a termine questo processo.
Se avessi potuto conoscere il futuro, sarei felice, però devo solo aspettare e pensare che ce la farò!
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Meine Reise in Europa : Folge 4
An diesem Tag, habe ich eine bisschen Natur gebraucht, deshalb bin ich in der Villa Borghese gegangen. Es gab viele große Baüme und, mit dem Klang der Zigaden, sah es aus wie die Savanne. Ich habe sogar eine kleine Eidesche die an einer Mauer stieg auf gesehen. Es hat mich den ganzen Morgen beschäftigt.
Am Nachmittag, habe ich das Nationaldenkmal Viktor Emanuels II besucht. Das wurde zwischen 1885 und 1911 zum Viktor Emmanuels, der König der hat Italien vereinheitlicht, Gedanken errichtet. Innen, gab es ein super interessant museum. Das Beste ist dass, ich auf dem Dach gestiegen konnte. Das Sehen war wunderbach und ich habe viele Photo gemacht. Ich denke dass, diese Gebäude ist das höchste von Rom.
Für mein letzter Abend in Rom habe ich ein Pizza vor dem Kolosseum gegessen.
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Un concert dans le parc
Hier soir je suis allée à un concert dans un parc. J’y ai rencontré mes amis. Nous avons apporté des couvertures pour nous asseoir sur l’herbe. Le concert a commencé à 18:30. Deux personnes jouaient de la musique classique au piano. Je ne connais pas grand-chose à la musique classique, mais j’apprécié passer du temps en plein air et la musique de fond était agréable. Le seul point négatif était que je n’ai pas pu discuter avec mes amis. Tous le monde écoutait le concert et ne parlait pas.
Aug. 19, 2025
I'm confused
Hi guys, I have no idea what to do. My friends and I have rented a cottage for one weekend, we really get on well with each other and I'm certain that we will spend a really good time there. You could be thinking, what's de problem here? Well, this summer I've spent lot of money during my holidays because I've travelled so much and I wasn't able to work in summer because the catering I worked for doesn't organise any weddings during this season.
The weekend that my friends are going to do this trip is the same as the catering comes back so I don't know what I should do, I need the money but I don't want my friends to be angry with me.
Aug. 19, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 21
After following the footprints, Alok and Anna reached the riverside. The footprints disappeared, as if the person had gone into the river.
Then Alok said, “How do we find the person in the river? His blood and footprints have vanished!”
Anna, with a distressed expression, replied, “I… I don’t know what to do.”
Suddenly, they heard a very painful noise — the scream of a human crying for help. They quickly followed the sound to rescue the person.
When they reached the place and saw the situation, they were shocked. In a frightened voice, Alok said, “Oh my God! A person is sucking blood from the neck of another human! Is it a vampire? We should help the person!”
Anna whispered, “Stay quiet! You can’t defeat that creature. Anyone who sucks blood isn’t vampire… I think it’s the same jackal , whom you kill in the jungle.”
Alok, angrily, replied, “Then what should we do? Can’t you see the person being attacked is almost dead?”
Anna answered, “The person is already dead. We need to hide behind the tree and wait to verify if it is the same Jackal or something else .”
Aug. 19, 2025
Letter
Hi Robbie,
Yes, I can help you in your essay. In my area there are a lot of food festival. Near me there is “Sbirrando” in every June, it is a beer festival. There You can find chicken with polenta, pizzas, french fries, pastas and a lot of different beers and drinks.
In this festival there is a different rock band every day, a lot of people dance in front of these bands.
I hope you answer me as soon as possible.
Thank you for reading.
Goodbye,
Edoardo
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Reading Books
Reading books is one of the best useful things you should doing in your day . Books give us knowlege and informations in several cultures like : Science ,History , Math ......... . reding books can also improve our skills, furthermore it help us to relax . Personally I read books and easy novels and story to improve my English and learn new words .
Reading books is very important to the brain and soul , and everyone should make time to read .
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
I have two questions about an English poem
A few days ago, I read a wonderful English poem titled My Symphony. If you haven't read it yet, you can see it here:https://www.yourdailypoem.com/listpoem.jsp?poem_id=932
However, I have two questions.
Firstly, who exactly wrote it? I found there are two versions of the writer, William Henry Channing and William Ellery Channing.
Then, I'm confused about the meaning of 'wealthy' and 'rich'. I was taught that rich has a wilder meaning than wealthy because the latter just focuses on the
money and possessions.
Would you please help me figure these out?
Aug. 19, 2025
Letter N°2
Hello,
Thank you for your email. In my free time I usually play video games or also ride my bike in my garden. I usually relax when I play video games.
Yes, this Sunday I am free. I don’t have any problem. But in the morning I’m not free, I have a medical visit in a clinical not far away.
For me going shopping in the centre or to a park doesn't change anything, for this you can ask Lily, she is very reliable.
Sorry, but in the evening I’m going to have a dinne with my Grandparents in the centre of a country not far away.
I hope you answer me as soon as possible.
Thank you for reading
Goodbye
Edoardo
Aug. 19, 2025
Story N°2
It’s important for small children to communicate with a mobile phone, because it is important to let him learn about digital well-being very soon. But it’s very important not to give it to him just to give him a distraction. I think the right age to have a mobile phone is ten for those things. I think that use must be checked by the parents or the siblings, I think the I think they should have the app for chats, calls, photos, writing, reading, listening to music and searching online.
Aug. 19, 2025
Un jour calme
Chaque matin, je regarde mes petits arbres bébés, qui sont des pommiers-cannelles. J'ai oublié quand j'ai planté les graines germées dans de petits pots ; je crois que ça fait 1 ou 2 semaines. Je suis très heureuse de les voir grandir. On a fait des magasins aujourd'hui pour acheter des pots plus larges pour eux, mais on n'a rien trouvé de bon. Demain, on ira chez Action et Jardiland pour voir plus d'articles. Je ne voulais pas les faire aujourd'hui car j'avais de la glace dans la voiture. :)
La canicule a cessé et il fait bon maintenant. Le ciel est couvert, et il ne fait ni chaud ni froid. Cependant, moi et mon mari sommes un peu fatigués donc on va passer un jour en repos et continuer le travail dans la maison et le jardin demain.
Aug. 19, 2025
Who is your favorite artists?
My favorite artist is Guy Dessapt. He has painted amazing oil paintings. The first time I encountered his art is when I was 14, since then I've been fan of his arts. He is the one of reason I started to oil paint, and I would like to paint magnificent works like his arts.
Aug. 19, 2025
Perché avere dei figli?
Prima si deve osservare che "perché avere dei figli?" è una domanda di gente che vive in Paesi sviluppati. Nel resto del mondo, fa proprio parte dell'ordine naturale, e la questione non si pone. Inoltre, in quelli Paesi, le infrastrutture amministrative e statali mancono. Non ci sono sistemi di pensione, per esempio. Perciò la solidarità intergenerazionale è il solo modo di avere una vita decente, per gli anziani. Spiega che anche le persone che vivono nello squalore abbiano figli.
Naturalmente, è bene di poter di chiedersi se avere dei figli sarebbe una buona cosa o no. Naturalmente, porta spesso moltissima gioia e moltissimo amore. Una famiglia unita è una delle più belle cose del mondo. Ma direi che in teoria, avere dei figli è un atto di amore incondizionale. È qualcosa che la nostra società moderna odia: una spesa senza ritorno garantito sull'investimento. Di fatto, quando qualcuno ha dei figli, in generale spende molti soldi e molta energia, ma senza essere sicuro di riceverne tanti in ritorno. A volte, i genitore amano moltissimo un figlio, fanno tutti per lui o lei, anche l'impossibile, eppure... Questo figlio li delude, perché ha fatto scelte che non sono capite, perché si mostra ingrato. Tanti genitori amorevoli si ritrovano con diavoletti come figli! Quindi, se una persona pensa "mi costerà caro" o "mi prenderà tempo" all'idea di avere un figlio, è probabilmente segno che non è fatta per averne uno.
Sfortunatamente, esistono persone che hanno figli solo per soddisfare il proprio ego. Per fare belle foto su Instagram, o per realizzare un sogno per procura. L'esempio tipico è papà che ha sempre voluto essere un atleta di alto livello, che ha devuto rinunciarci, e esercita una pressione enorme sul figlio affinché lui diventi un atleto. Per il papà, è un modo di realizzare un sogno per procura, e non gli importa che lo sport piaccia al figlio o no. Queste situazioni portano solo a conseguenze negative: bambini che non si sentono amati o capiti...
In sintesi, si può dire che la famiglia del Mulino bianco non esiste (è un'espressione italiana che ho imparato recentemente, mi piace molto!). Penso che invece di chiedersi "perché avere figli?", cioè "cosa potrebbero portarmi i figli?", si dovrebbe chiedersi "cosa io potrei portare ai miei figli eventuali?". Magari sarebbe una domanda migliore, una base migliore per prendere una decisione, qualunque essa sia.