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July 13, 2025
Ma journée
Ce matin ma femme et moi nous sommes réveillés assez tard, vers 8h. Généralement pour le petit-déjeuner, je prépare des oeufs ou du porridge, mais aujourd'hui on avait envie de manger quelque chose de différent. J'ai proposé un pannukakku - une crêpe finlandaise, assez épaisse, cuite au four et garni d'une pincée de cannelle. Ma femme l'a cuisinée et on s'en est régalé. Miam !
Cet après-midi, mes parents m'ont téléphoné et nous ont invité au cinéma pour voir le nouveau film Jurassic World : Renaissance. J'ai apprécié l'invitation et c'était une bonne excuse pour passer du temps en famille, mais le film n'était pas superbe. Je suis un peu critique. Visuellement, ça a été étonnant. De très bons acteurs jouent des rôles importants dans le film, mais l'intrigue était assez illogique.
Après, nous sommes allés dîner ensemble dans une pizzeria. Un repas classique et agréable !
Maintenant, je suis fatigué et décide si je veux aller me coucher tôt ou aller au gymnase. Évidemment j'ai bien mangé et peu bougé aujourd'hui, donc la bonne décision est facile à prendre, mais c'est difficile de trouver la motivation pour l'executer !
July 12, 2025
Algo inconexo
Tal vez debería tratar de escribir aquí por las mañanas por que esto es el tercero día consecutivo que postorgué escribir hasta casi medianoche UTC. Supongo que pueda escribir más tarde también, después de medianoche UTC cada noche.
Hoy leí en Moby Dick sobre el motín de Steelkit contra Radney y el capitán. Radney empujó los botones del marinero Steelkit cuando exigió que recogiera la escoba y barriera la cubierta, un trabajo para los niños a bordo del nave. Aunque Steelkit estaba preparada para matar a Radney, Moby Dick terminó matando a Radney y a hacer pedazos de él.
Quisiera intentar escribir más de este capítulo, pero ahora mi sobrino y yo tenemos que aparejarnos. Vamos a la piscina para que él pueda divertirse y superar su miedo de nadar.
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
Preparer de passer une semaine en France
J’apprends français depuis environ 5 années au collège et puis au l’équivalent de lycée je l’ai appris plus intensif pour A Level et maintenant je vais l’étudier à l’université alors je vais passer une semaine en France. Donc mon amie m’a conseillé d’essayer ce site pour pratiquer et j’espère que j’améliorerai. J’aime parler en des autres langues parce que c’est amusante et je veux communiquer avec d’autres sans difficulté (et je pense que c’est cool de connais un autre langue et aussi je veux parler avec mon amie dans un autre langue). Mon difficulté le plus grande, pourtant, est de comprendre et utiliser le langue familier parce que c’est très différent de le langue que j’ai appris au collège et lycée. Merci!
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
Day 8: Existential Dread and a Craving for Lasagna
Everyone says small talk is necessary. It's a bridge between people, especially people who don't know each other yet. But what if this bridge doesn't lead to anywhere? Maybe it's just floating between two sides, where no one wants to get across.
Something like this happened last week. I was ready to open up. Instead, I watched someone chase the sun for a selfie.
- It's raining all day. So sad.
- Yeah, just like me. You know, I'm thinking about the world, my life...
- Tomorrow will be cloudy again, I can't update my profile picture while the weather is so bad. It's frustrating. I just want a selfie.
- The future, our future. What do you think about it? What will the future be like?
- What? Oh hey, did you know that our neighbor died?
- That's what I'm talking about. Maybe we shouldn't live a worthless life. We should find our... life goal, you know?
- Oh, wait. The sun finally came out! Quick, take a picture!
No offense, small talk isn't a problem if it leads to real conversations or connections between people. But if it just happens because silence is awkward, then it's more about covering up an inner emptiness than creating a connection.
I don't need someone to ask how I am. I need them to want the answer. When "What's up?" comes, sometimes I answer with "Existential dread and a craving for lasagna." No one ever asks a follow-up.
Maybe small talk isn't the real problem. Maybe people don't dare to start real conversations, because they're afraid no one is interested in it.
July 12, 2025
Homestay three days
I went to theater today. It’s near the Elephant &Castle station.
My friend’s work in this theater, because I invitation the show.
I’m lucky.
Show was very fun.
It was about family history but I often don’t understand actor speak English.
I really want to speak fluently English, because I need to hardly study it every day!
After dinner, we talked about this show and drank.
It had good time.
July 12, 2025
I Watch Different Reality Shows
I am going to write my answer with informal English, it is my goal, I don't want to be perfect but understandable.
I watch different reality shows, principally in English. I feel that with my English level, I unlocked a new universe of gossip, hahaha. I watch 90 day fiancé, there I learn informal conversations and English in different accents. And lately, I have followed their fights in other social media. Also, it shows different stereotypes about many cultures, and it is interesting to watch how Colombian people seem to North American eyes.
It isn't not the only reality show that I watch, I like Makeup or Cooking competitions. Now, I'm watching Master Chef Colombia, it's really interesting to me, because their participants are famous people. And also, they show the Colombian gastronomy and I can learn new tips to cook.
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
Love this website!
When I read my answers, I felt gladly because I saw my mistakes. Thrust, I learned correctly to make sentences. I’m going to write everything and everytime. I love english! While I am watching English TV series, I enjoyed this language. Unfortunately I finished to learn English at level c1 a few years ago but this years I never enjoyed English and so also I forgot all of words. And now, time is learning again!
July 12, 2025
C’est ma trezième entrée de journal
Cette année, j’ai décidé de manger plus sainement. J’ai décidé que Je ne mangerais ni viande ni poulet. Je mangerais un peu du poisson et Je commencerais à manger haricots et lentilles. J’achèterais plus fruits et légumes. Maintenant j’ai plus d’énergie et mon humour s’est améliorée.
July 12, 2025
learning time
I was so excited when I heard to this website. English learning was so hard for me. Because I’m 27 :( I think its so late. But I don’t give up. At the moment, I am reading English books. State 1 now. I want to rise my level. I think my level a1 at now. Anyway, I will write some times. I think this develops me.
July 12, 2025
Diary — July 12 — Day six.
As normal, I'll get started talking about yesterday. Yesterday was a really good day, I did my routine as normal, but at afternoon, around 6 PM one of my friends messaged me and it says about go out and see an expo of graffiti. Obviously I said 'yes' and I dressed up.
I picked up another friend and we went to the expo, there was my friend and his crew. We drank some glasses of beer and saw the expo.
July 12, 2025
Money
In this world one thing is real that is money. If you have money then you can get anything that you want otherwise you are a loser in this world. If you are belong from a rich family then your life will shorted, But if you are from middle class background then you have to face many difficulties. You can't follow your dream due to lack of money , Due to lower financial condition of your family you want to change this , To change your financial condition you need money, so you have to leave your dream and start earning money . All these thing that I had said in this paragraph in the perspective of the oldest child of the family.
July 12, 2025
Long Friday
Yesterday, I went to the other side of the city, to wait for my girlfriend to finish his work day. She asked the security guard to let me enter the building, So I can make her compan,while she was finishing some requests that came at the last minute.
After she finished her work, we went to a Mexican restaurant with Colombian ingredients.
I liked the food, we ordered a burrito and a quesadilla, the burrito was mine, but I enjoyed more the quesadilla that had powder meat, ha ha.
July 12, 2025
写真にしか存在しない場所
一日一件の日記を書くと決めたのに、実は今日は少し気が乗りません。それで、ネットで題を探しました。
リストで一つのものは「今は写真だけに存在する場所」でした。
これで、最近見かけた投稿を思い出しました。数十年前にインドで流行っていた床タイルがあって、その投稿にはそのタイルの写真が載っていました。投稿の下には「おばあちゃんの家に行く時！」と書かれていました。本当にとても懐かしい模様です。今調べてみたら、「テラゾー」という名前なんだと知りました。
でも、一つ目のコメントは少し物悲しい感じがしました。「それは今、僕のおじさんの家だな。。。」って。
最近祖父母の家を訪ねたとき、私も似たようなことを考えました。祖父母も年を取ってきていて、この家は残っても、二人がいなくなったら、きっと同じではないんだと思います。
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
Downloading Music Or Films Without Paying Is A Crime
Nowadays, it is quite popular to download music, films, series, etc without paying and for free. Some people think that it is a some kind of a crime, other ones are sure that it is not. I want to explain why we can say that this is a crime as well as stealing.
Firstly, if something costs a money, that means you have to pay to get it. You can't get it for free. For instance, you want to buy some products from a shop, and of course you have to pay the money. You never go and steal it. Same with music and films. If you got it for free, it would count as a theft.
Secondly, it shows disrespect to people who worked on these projects, regardless of the music or the film industry. In addition, illegal downloads affect artists, actors, musicians and others who made a lot of effort. Everyone has the right to get as much recognition for their works as they expect.
To sum up, I believe paying for the music you are listening to, or paying for the films and series you are watching has to be a common thing, and is really significant and important to a team who worked hard to make it all.
July 12, 2025
July 12, 2025
Luigi
Mon mari a un chat de dix ans, qui s'appelle Luigi. Il est de la race exotique à poils-courts, qui est l'un des types ayant une face plate. Il est tout blanc sauf les extrémités (pattes, queue, oreilles) qui sont orange clair, et ses yeux sont un très pâle bleu. Il ne miaule pas comme un chat normal, il grogne. Il est corpulent, mais en bonne santé.
D'origine, il appartenait à une amie de mon mari. Mais cette femme s'est tragiquement suicidée. Son Luigi était trouvé plus tard, en mauvaise santé. Il avait une blessure sur le cou avec des vers dedans (désolée pour l'image). Mon mari l'a apporté au vétérinaire et le chat a guéri assez rapidement. Avec ça, il est devenu le chat de mon mari. C'était il y a environ 6 ans.
Ce type de race de chats et de chiens au visage plat ont des faiblesses particulières. Luigi, il pleure sans cesse. Les yeux fuient et les larmes s'accumulent autour des yeux et du nez. Il faut les nettoyer tous les jours, quelques gens même le font deux fois par jour. Même avec ça, l'obstruction des canaux lacrymaux est fréquente. Ils ont aussi des problèmes de réspiration, et pour cette raison il est très fréquent que les compagnies aériennes les interdisent de voyager en raison du risque d'étouffement. Enfin, ils sont un peu limités par leurs petites jambes. Luigi n'ose pas de sauter comme les autres chats.
Luigi est adorable et je l'aime. Mais en même temps, je trouve cruelle que nous continuions à reproduire des races d'animaux de compagnie qui auront certainement des problèmes de santé associés.
July 12, 2025
A new goal achieved
Sixteen days ago, I set a new goal to make sure the automatically recognized subtitles on YouTube match exactly what I intended to say.
To do that, I updated my English-learning approaches, spending more time on Duolingo and shadowing some US and UK TV series.
After uploading a video this morning, I found the subtitles matched what I intended to say exactly.
Well, maybe it's because I didn't say much, or the AI recognition system has been updated.
I felt happy anyway.
July 12, 2025
Want to be novelist
I found this site 4 years ago.
At that time I couldn't play video games, so I was free.
As a result, I was fascinated in novel world.
My best novel is Re:Zero − Starting Life in Another World.
Natsuki Subaru is main character who could rewind by dying.
I like that this main character is dedicated and humaneness.
Let's watching novel.
(novel is broadcast in anime.)