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July 10, 2025
Décris ta journée!
Ma journée est tres ennuyeuse maniement... Tout j'ai fais est regarder anime, nettoyer le cuisine et acheté un pizza. Ma mère est faite des courses sur la route. Comme faire du shopping et achète nourriture cuisiner. Mon frère est joue sur son casque VR. Même si je suis ennuyé, je suis tres heureuse! J'adore faire de ennuyé car je ne suis pas stresse. Non école, non devoir et non teste! Juste paix. Cependant, ça me manque des mes enseignants. Ils m'aident souvent même si je continue d'échouer.
Je vais continuer à m'ennuyer et profiter de mon été! AVOIR
July 10, 2025
spring is the revival
My favourite season in the year is definitively the spring, because all the nature get out from the wintr, open gently her eyes, fight a little with the cold who doesn't want to leave the place. Step by step animals begin to sing on the early morning, int the evening they begin to hunt and everything seems to be alive again.
July 10, 2025
A Funny Memory
Today, I was listening to a Shakira song that reminded me of a funny moment. It was when I listened to songs without understanding the meaning, because I was innocent and a kid, five or six years old.
The song's name is If you go (Si te vas) and a part of this says "all new brooms always sweep well, but later you will see their bristles worn."
The funny part is that in Spanish, "bristles" is translated as "cerdas", and "cerdas" is a word that have many meanings, for example, "female pigs". So, as a child, I didn't understand the metaphor.
I didn't understand why Shakira was making a relation between pigs and brooms, but because I was a huge Shakira fan, I accepted her mistake, I believed in her and her words. 😂🤣
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
Cold and Dead? Not at All!
I believe that each season has it's own beauty and meaning for us. If I had to choose between them, maybe it would be winter. It's not an easy choice, because spring is the "wake up" season, which is the most colorful and alive season, but people can discourage winter because they believe it's just about cold, lost leaves and silent death, but it's not that simple. I admire nature's set of awesome skills, which makes it able to survive and prepare for spring.
July 10, 2025
Today
I fall asleep while watching a movie. I woke up with a tremendeus headache and uncomfort and remove my laptop and phone off of the bed. I slept again. I woke up at 6.30 am. I spent some time by going to toilet, walking and finished the remain part of the yesterday nights movie. I just couldnt able to get out of the bed so i started to watch another movie. The movies called ummm what was it?? I checked out my Opera history but couldnt find the movie. There was a beautiful french actress. Also, she was playing in the movie The Beach i watched yesterday night. This is my all day with happiness and frustration. I am eating one meal since 4-5 day. I thinl I lost some weight. I am not on diet or trying to lose weight. It is just I don't have money to eat. Sometimes I am happy sometimes sad. Sometimes anxious then care about nothing at all. At that times I feel like I can do everything I can. I can travel to another universe with the songs. I imagine myself being a leader, businessman, traveler even a hippie pr psychonout. It is so strange that where we born determine who we are. We could be someone completely different. So Why this life?
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
Day 6: Why I Write? Because Screaming Is Still Weird
Screaming in the street is still socially unacceptable, even if it's technically cheaper than therapy. So we write instead, because even a brain meltdown can be more sophisticated when typed out.
No one asks why we write things like "The ceiling collapsed on me again today, but I'm still fine, thanks." They assume it's a creative self-expression, but sorry, it's just backup. Ctrl+S on the soul. We just hope that by writing it down, we might have something to return to when tomorrow somehow turns out to be even worse than today.
Anyone could know, writing doesn't work during the day. Everyone's bustling, clinking, or trying to conquer Mount Everest in the kitchen with nothing but a frying pan. I could say, "Life can distract our thoughts", but no, it does. Always. Then the night comes, and the only things that stay with me are silence and darkness. Like two loyal friends, right? No more strange noises from the other room, no more impossible expectations from people I don't even know, just me and my own tolerated chaos.
Oh, what? A night owl? Please. I just wait until the world shuts up so I don’t have to fake a functional personality. At night, no one expects me to be “doing great”, I can finally be what I actually am: someone who thinks too much, sleeps too little, and isn’t busy pretending otherwise. I can just exist.
In the end, writing doesn’t solve anything, it just makes my mental chaos look like a well-structured paragraph. I write just because even the biggest mess looks cooler in Times New Roman with 1.5 line spacing.
July 10, 2025
Theater experience
In March, when the Snow White live-action movie was realeased, we wanted to watch it in family - me, my sister, my mother and my nephew, but because of my sister's schedule, we couldn't go because she never has time, so we didn't watch the movie in theaters, it was so annoying because a whole experience was lost because she couldn't find time and my mother didn't want to leave her out of the experience, so in fact we're all out of the experience. Because of that, I promissed to myself that I was never going let this happens again, if have a movie on theaters that I really want to watch, I'm going to, even if I have to do it by myself. After that, I did it with final destination 6 movie, I watched it in theaters alone and it was fire, a good memory and a good experience.
July 10, 2025
New york
The place I would visit is New York .New York is a wonderfull place because it’s a city with many history and magnificent landscapes .
My passion is fashion and I thinks New York is great place to improuve my style and my outfits. The city is full of shopping place and I love this because there is many choice of clothes,shoes,and accessories. USA is my dream country to visit so I really think to go ah this place.
July 10, 2025
Working In The Office
I'm working in the office today.
In order to be in the office at 07:00 AM, means that I need to be out of my house at 05:00 AM.
Right now, I'm happy with my working schedule, Since I need to wake up early only 2 days per week to go to the office, the remaining three days are work from home.
Working in a hybrid company is great, but you also need to learn how to rest well when nobody is watching you, because if you're not going to bed early or wasting your time when working at home, that could lead to bad habits forming through the years, I know this problem since I started my working life at the end of 2019. Be aware that good rest and clear goals can help you achieve more complex projects in the future.
July 10, 2025
漫画を探すのを手伝って
以下の内容は5ちゃんねるなどに投稿したいです。添削をください。
漫画喫茶店で呼んだ漫画を探しています。男子高校生には幽霊が見えるので、あいつはそれを以って探偵しています。殺害された幽霊たちは話さず、ヒントを指し示すだけですが、主人公に憑いた一人の女子高生の幽霊がいて、この子は話をします。思いつく場面は、事件現場で、主人公は弾痕について何かを言ったとき、この女子幽霊は、「だんこん」という言葉につぼったシーンです。ちょうど「男根ｗ」と書かれたと思います。
読んだのは2020年ですが、その時は古いか新しいか分かりません。複数の単行本があったと思いますが、沢山ではないはずです。2～7冊かもしれません。
July 10, 2025
La deuxième semaine que j’écris sur ce site
Hier, ma soeur et moi nous sommes allées au théâtre voir “Mousetrap” par Agatha Christie. C’était ma première fois que je voyais cette pièce. La scène était bien conçue. Ma soeur a aprécié la pièce. Elle a lu le livre et elle connaissant l’histoire. En fait, ma soeur a lu tous les livres d’Agatha Christie. Je pense que Christie a écrit environs soixante livres. J’ai trouvé que la pièce était moyenne.
July 10, 2025
Nature
There are many species in our planet earth. But Humans are the wisest, cleverest a smartest one. We have thinking power that's make us different form other species. God made this planet for all species , but We are became very selfish . In every situation we saw our side , We don't think after that what happen , For an example when We cut a tree we don't think about bird who lives in the tree. Due to this cruel nature of human many species are extinct and many are have to extinct .Due to this nature is disbalanced , so we have to faces many problems like floods, earthquakes, tsunamis ,wildfires and many more . If we play with the nature the nature will also play with us reveling his destructive nature.
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
My beginning
Hi my name is farouk and i am writing for the first time since my begin of learning english i hope you can help me and advice me for better learning in less time and correct the mistakes in this small paragraph please dont laugh at me because it's my first time i write even i have enough word and i can do better. I'm proud of my progress even it's slow .
Thank you.
July 10, 2025
About my friends
Today after school, I was consulted not to be able to make a friends. He wanted to make a friends in his class, but there are no people to along with him. Therefore, he talked with his friends in 1-1class(he was in 1-1 class years 1 old.)And today, they don't get along.And I knew that my junior high school friend is lonely from his information. I want to help them, but my class is difference so it is difficult.
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
July 10, 2025
Der Erste Eintrag
Hallo! Ich bin ein Student und möchte wirklich Deutsch lernen. Meine Mutter kommt aus Österreich und spricht sehr viel Deutsch mit mir, aber ich habe es nie gelernt, weil ich in den USA erwaschen geworden bin. Ich kann Deutsch wirklich gut verstehen (wenn ich es höre und lese), aber ich kann nicht gut schreiben und sprechen. Nächste Monat fahre ich nach Wien. Da mach ich einen Monat-lang Deutschkurs. Ich hoffe dass ich am A2.2 Niveau bin vom Kursbeginn. Dann kann ich nach dem Kurs in die Uni Wien anmelden und weiter Deustch lernen (ich muss A2 haben ins Universität zu gehen).
July 10, 2025
Los muebles
A mí me fascinan los muebles. Son muy distintos y tienen diferentes estilos. Hay unos que estén hechos de madera, vidrio, ladrillo, incluso piedra. Mi mueble preferido es donde se encuentre mis amigos y mi familia. Si estamos juntos, no importa el tipo de mueble que tengamos. No importa el tamaño o la comodidad del mueble. Quiero que estén mis queridos conmigo.
I would like corrections from a native spanish speaker only. I would also like a more advanced vocab recommendations to make it sound less dry. Thank you!
July 10, 2025
Am Strand, aber krank
Ich war ein bisschen krank bevor wir sind hier gekommen. Ich bin aber gestern im Pool geschwommen, und danach fühlte mich schlechter. Dann am Nacht konnte ich kaum schlafen, es war eine Folter. Ich habe Halsschmerzen und meine Stimme klingt furchtbar. Gestern war auch bewölkt, während ich habe geschwommen, und auch wegen der Klimaanlage im Haus, würde ich kränker. Heute weiß ich nicht, ob ich schwimmen werde. Mal sehen.
July 10, 2025