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Короткая история без названия
Я боюсь разбудить. Когда я мечтаю, всё лучшее. Иногда во сне я маленький ребёнок и мама обнимает меня. Иногда я великий орёл, который летает над горами. Иногда ничего я не вижу во сне, но чувствую себя хорошо и счастлив. А когда я бужу, реальность грустит меня.
Я помню, что когда-нибудь я разбудился, а было тёмное в комнате. Я услышал голосы с темноты, которые говорили шёпотом друг с другом:
- Ещё спит?
- Ш-ш-ш! Он разбудился.
Я встал в кровати, чтобы открыть окно. Солнце осветило комнату. На одну секунду я видел две тени в виде человека близко к кровати. У них красные глаза и очень длинные руки. Я их видел только на секунду, а потом исчезли.
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Español en el trabajo
Estoy en busca de oportunidades para practicar hablando en español. A veces en mi trabajo, los clientes nos llaman para pedir información o iniciar un nuevo proyecto. Solo tengo un compañero de trabajo que habla español, y cuando hay un cliente que solo habla español, este compañero es la única persona en la oficina que puede ayudarle. Hoy pedí a mi compañero de trabajo que me dejara escuchar a uno de sus llamadas porque quiero poder ayudar a nuestros clientes hispanohablantes.
Noté el vocabulario que usó para describir los postes y los cables eléctricos y también me di cuenta de que usó "Usted" en vez de "tú." No he usado Usted mucho, así que tendré que practicar antes de llamar a un cliente.
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Jan. 20, 2021
Tarnung
Du bist nicht groß wie wir, Menschen, aber du hast eine Fähigkeit, die vielen beneiden: du kannst dich tarnen. Das erlaubt dich, nicht von deinen Gegner gesehen zu werden. Dann schaffst du, deine Lebenserwartung zu erhöhen. Ich gönne es dir! Jeder von uns verdient es, was uns gegeben wurde. Jeder von uns haben verschiedene Fähigkeiten und man sollte sich nicht mit den Anderen vergleichen, sondern mit uns selbst. Bin ich heute kluger als gestern? Habe ich wirklich von meinen vorherigen Fehler etwas gelernt? Kann ich alle gesammelte Erfahrung gut ausnutzen, um künftige Katastrophe aufzuhalten? Das ist wichtig.
Jan. 20, 2021
Shor
Shor es idioma turco, y se habla en las áreas Norestes de Siberia. Aunque turco y shor son parientes, la lejanía entre ellos es muy grande. ¡Y lo puedes decir ambos figuradamente y literalmente! ¿Cómo ha terminado shor tan lejos de sus primos? Pues, es por culpa de la historia y la migración. Cuando los turcos eran pueblos en los campos siberianos, la mayoría eran nómadas. Tras siglos, las poblaciones se muevan cada vez más lejos. A su alcance más grande, había pueblos turcos por toda Asia, ¡incluso en India!
Puesto que está muy lejos del idioma turco, hay muchas diferencias entre shor y turco. Lo más obvio, sin embargo, es la escritura. El turco se escribe con el alfabeto latino, o al menos desde el año 1928. Sin embargo, shor se escribe con el alfabeto cirílico. Hubo un periodo de tiempo en que se escribió con el alfabeto latino, pero era muy breve.
Tristemente, shor es idioma el peligro de extinción. Durante la era soviética, muchos niños de los pueblos nativos de Siberia se sacaban y se castigaban si hablaran en su idioma materno. Desafortunadamente, también sucedió en muchos otros países, incluso Estados Unidos e Inglaterra. Por culpa de estas técnicas, ahora mismo hay muy pocos hablantes de muchos idiomas alrededor del mundo. Opino que es un recordatorio terrible de que la exterminación de idiomas minoritarios sí sucede y que necesitamos pelear contra ella.
Dos oraciones con "recordar + a/que".
1. ¡Lo siento! Me recordaste que necesito depositar el cheque.
2. Me recuerdan las camisas de la tienda a las de mi padre.
Jan. 20, 2021
Shortsenteces32
1. Meslek lisesinde marangozluğu öğrenken biraz dolaplar ve bir adet merdiven inşa etmiştim. While studying carpentry in vocational school, I had built some cabinets and a set of stairs.
2. Çünkü Venezuela'nın maddi imkansızlıklarından bincilarca mülteci oradan ayrılmıştı. Because of Venezuela's financial difficulties, thousands of refugees had left from there.
3. Bayat koltuğumda otururken çok rahat hissetmiyorum. While sitting in my old armchair I don't feel very comfortable.
4. Ördekler için bayat parça ekmekleri gölete atabiliriz. We can throw the stale bread pieces into the pond for the ducks.
5. Sandviç yapmak için bütün malzemeler hazırlanırken ekmek olduğu bayattu fark ettim. I realized that the bread was stale while I was preparing all the ingredients to make a sandwich.
6. Tennessee'de geri dönerken orada cep telefonu aletimi unutmuştum. While on the way back from Tennessee, I realized I had forgot my cellphone charger there.
7. Şarj aletim cep telefonunla çalışmacak düşünmüyorum. I don't think my charger will work with your phone.
8. Bilgisayar şarj aletimi kırıldı, yeni şarj aleti almam lazım. My computer charger broke, I need to buy a yeni charger.
9. Hırsız Dükkanı içeri girmişti çünkü sahibi arka kapısını kilitlemedi. The thief had entered the shop because the owner did not lock the back door.
10. Evden çıkmadan önce odamın pencerelerini kilitlemeye emin oluyorum. Before leaving the house, I make sure to lock my room's windows.
11. Arka avlumuzdan köpeğimiz kaçırmıştı çünkü çitimizi kilitlemeye unuttum. Our dog had escaped from our backyard because I forgot to lock our fence.
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Jan. 20, 2021
In my dream, no masks
Last night I had a dream.
When I woke up, I can’t remember what was I dreaming.
But I do remember in my I was walking at a busy street.
And I saw no one wear mask.
At the moment I was so happy.
Because I through this place is “normal”.
I even see myself didn’t wear a mask too.
Do you feel any sad?
I am sure in the world someone will have the same dream just like me.
I don’t know when we can throw away our mask.
I miss the old time.
Jan. 19, 2021
Omakase
Ieri era il nostro terzo anniversario di matrimonio. Per commemorare questi tre anni, siamo andati ad un ristorante giapponese per provare “Omakase” per la prima volta.
Omakase significa “lascio a te” in giapponese. È una frase formale e gentile che si usa in contesti lavorativi. Nell’ambito del mondo di sushi, significa che lasci allo chef decidere il menù. Il menù cambia tutti i giorni perché si mangia solo materia prima della giornata, direttamente dai mercati di peschi, fatto con creatività e attenzione ai gusti.
Quindi è un tipo di menù degustazione. Si sede al balcone e guarda lo chef di sushi preparando i nigiri delicatissimi. Nigiri è riso e pesce puro, alle volte con shoyu, ponzu, gari, e wasabi. Lo chef corte le fette di peschi di fronte dei clienti e prepara la forma del riso usando le proprie mani. Lo chef porta il nigiri ad un piatto che rimane sopra del balcone e usi le bacchette per spostare il nigiri dal piatto al tuo piccolo piato di fronte. C’è un po’ di spettacolo nell’esperienza.
Il nostro menù aveva un piatto di sashimi e un di degustazione per cominciare. Dopo, c’erano 12 nigiri diversi, la pesca più fresca che ho mai mangiato. Abbiamo ordinato anche uno speciale – riccio di mare – che era interessante. La dolce era di yuzu, una frutta citrica giapponese. Mi è piaciuto molto e tornerei con certezza.
Jan. 19, 2021
Translation Practice
Just clicked on your phone, the things you want to buy can be delivered to your home, which was beyond your imagination in the past. With rapid development of the internet and mobile payment, these things become reality, and ordinary people’s lives are becoming more and more convenient.
In addition to buying clothes, daily necessities and some strange things, even hot pot, barbecue, Mala Tang can also be delivered directly. For those people who worked in the first- and second-tier cities, fast-paced lives make them save time by ordering takeout. Under the huge market demand, the take-out army is growing rapidly.
Nowadays, the take-out industry is almost “contracted” by Elema and Meituan groups. The takeout brothers in blue or yellow coats can be seen everywhere on the streets and most of them are between 25 to 35 years old. More and more young people have given up bored factory jobs and become takeout workers. There are two main reasons for this phenomenon: low threshold and high wages.
As long as you are in good health and have no criminal records, you can go to work by riding a battery bicycle. The level of salary depends entirely on your personal effort. In first-tier cities, there are plenty of people with monthly salaries of more than 10,000 yuan. Generally speaking, there are thousands, but the work intensity is very high, which is more than 10 hours or even longer.
Although the take-out industry is so hot, the Meituan group has lost thousands of billions.
Jan. 19, 2021
Minimal structure every meeting should have
Meetings are omnipresent, and they are often a waste of time. Why? Because they often lack structure and have no clear goal. It is easy to invite people to a meeting and giving it a headline like "Strategy" and everyone can have an own understanding of what that could mean. It is also luring because just setting up a meeting can give you the feeling that you are doing something, to solve a problem. And, strangely enough, many people will just accept your calendar invitation and share your feeling that you are working on an issue together. After an hour of meeting you discussed a lot and get the impression that you made huge progress only to ask yourself the next day how to proceed with the strategy and who does what. It will take you a lot of effort to connect the dots and make sense out of your messy meeting notes that you took.
If you invest time in planning a meeting and energy in facilitating it, you can save lots of people lots of time. There is a template called IDOARRT, which stands for "Intention, Desired Outcome, Agenda, Roles, Rules and Time", which is the gold standard of preparing meetings. This however requires a significant amount of time to prepare and a strong will to enforce rules and roles, especially when you work with the same people over and over (such as in a software team). A minimal version that requires less preparation, is less formal and also considers that you always do detours from the main topic could look as follows:
- Why do we meet?
- What is the desired result (decisions, action points)?
- Which topics do we need to talk about (ordered by descending priority)?
- What else did we briefly talk about? (aka the parking lot)? (you will fill this during the meeting and stop off-topic discussions with: "I put it in the parking lot, so we will not forget. Let us get back to the point!")
Jan. 19, 2021
die Amtseinführung!
Morgen ist Bidens Amtseinführung. Am 6, Januar wurde das Capitol von Trumps Anhänger angegriffen. Viele glaubte, dass es ein Angriff auf Demokratie sei. Ich denke, morgen wird in den USA eine ruhige Tag sein und die Amtseinführung wird in einer friedlichen Atmosphäre stattfinden.
Jan. 19, 2021
Las nuevas palabras del día
Hola a todos. Ahora mi manera número uno de obtener nuevas palabras es por mirar series de televisión o películas con mis amigos en Discord. Pienso que es una buena manera de aprender porque es posible de ver como los nativos usan el idioma y tengo la oportunidad de aprender algunas frases que normalmente son muy díficiles de traducir de inglés. Por ejemplo, por mirar la series que se llama La Casa De Papel, aprender muchas maneras de decir vulgaridades en una manera nativa. Por mirar otras series he aprendido frases como, "¿Me tomas el pelo?", "Cuente conmigo", "Me siento del nabo" y muchas más.
El idioma vive, vive con ello.
Jan. 19, 2021
Mi primera entrada en LangCorrect
Hola a todos, soy Mario y esa es mi primera entrada en LangCorrect.
Estoy examinando el sitio web para ver si es mejor que Lang8 que yo estaba usando antes. Seguramente, hay muchas diferencias pero pienso que es tan temprano juzgar que es el mejor.
Espero que ustedes vayan a ayudarme con mi aprendizaje de los idiomas. Yo estoy disponible para ayudar todas las personas que se requieren la ayuda.
Un saludo!
Jan. 19, 2021
16. Sömn
I går lärde jag mig om sömn genom en film att min SAS lärare skickade till mig för hemläxa. Jag är ganska intresserad i sömn och sovmönster så det var väldigt intressant. På morgonen vaknade jag klockan 7.55, några minuter före mitt alarm. Jag kände mig väl-utvilad och jag ville veta mer om sömn. Så öppnade jag en webbsidan om sömn och läste den liksom forskningar och studier om det temat. Jag lärde mig om sömncykler och hur det är viktigt att vakna i slutet av en sömncykel. Om man vaknar under en sömncykel, så att sömncykeln är inte slut, då är det svårare att kroppen och hjärnan vaknar. En sömncykel varar i ungefär en timme och trettio minuter. Vi har i allmänhet mellan fyra och sex sömncykeln om natten (sju om man är ett barn). För att vakna och känna sig väl-utvilad är det viktigt att ta hänsyn till hur många timmar vill vi sova och då numret av sömncyklar som vi vill ha. Till exempel, om jag vill vakna klockan 8 och sova nio timmar (6 sömncyklar) måste jag sova klockan 22.30. Jag måste också lägga till tjugo extra minuter ; det är tiden att man brukar behöva för att falla i sömn.
Vad som helst, det är jätteintressant!
Jan. 19, 2021
Preparación para el DELE
En treinta días voy a ir a Nueva York para tomar el DELE. Como quiero obtener un máster de traducción e interpretación, tengo que tener una acreditación del nivel C1. Cuando llegué a España hace un año, recibí el nivel B2.2. Realmente es un buen nivel, pero no sirve para solicitar la entrada a un programa de traducción. Entonces ahora tengo que prepararme para este examen. Lo bueno es que hay muchas guías en el internet con las que puede practicar, pero también he contratado a una preparadora del DELE. Ella me va a enseñar todos los secretos del examen para que pueda aprobar el examen. Lo malo es que el examen me costó mucha plata y si no lo apruebo, va a ser una pérdida verdadera.
Jan. 19, 2021
Die Freundschaft
Hello! This text is for my German class.
Can you help me with it?
Thanks!
Die Freundschaft ist eine sehr wichtige Sache für mich. Ein Freund ist wie die Geschwister, weil du ihm deine Geheimnisse vertrauen kannst und in guten und schlechten Zeiten zusammen teilen. Es ist nicht über die Vielzahl, sondern die Qualität. Heutzutage nennen wir jemanden „Freund“. Ich glaube, dass es verschiedenen Arten von Freunden gibt. Es gibt die Bekannter, mit denen wir sporadisch zu tun haben. Dann haben wir die Kollegen von der Arbeit oder vom Studium, die wir häufiger sehen, aber innerhalb eines konkreten Raums. Am Ende sind die wichtigen Freunden, diese Menschen mit uns gewöhnlich sprechen über unseres Lebens. Sie stehen bei uns nähe.
Wie können wir eine Freundschaft von ein Bekanntschaft unterscheiden? Es ist nicht einfach. Ich denke, man treffen und sprechen häufiger mit Freunden als mit Bekannter, aber gibt es einiger Freundschaften, der für verschiedenen Situationen (die Arbeit, die Ferne, die Familie) es kann nicht einen regeln Kommunikation halten, obwohl die Zuneigung gleich ist. Der Unterschied zwischen den beiden ist, dass in den schwierigen Zeiten nur ein wahrhafter Freund bei uns bleibt. Sie sind im Schmerzen, in der Angst und im Schwierigkeit Zeiten und natürlich vor dem Glücke Zeiten.
Zurzeit bedenke ich, dass zwei beste Freunden habe. Sie heißen Raquel und Álvaro. Sie ist aus Madrid und er ist aus León. Ich kenne Raquel seit vier Jahren. Sie war eine meiner ersten Freundinnen in der Stadt, als ich um Madrid zog. Álvaro kenne ich seit weniger Zeit. Er war mit Raquel befreundet und ihr hat uns in einen Kurs vorgestellt. Wir sind seitdem wie Geschwister.
Wir wissen nicht der Wendungen des Lebens, aber ich wirklich hoffe diese Freundschaft bis zum letzten Moment erhalten.
Die letzte Frage ist ein bisschen pessimistisch... Ob ich einen Umstand für uns nicht mehr zu sprechen denke, es kann ich mir nicht einbilden. Wir haben viele Sachen zusammen durchgelebt und wir haben alles überwunden.
Jan. 19, 2021
Was für einen Tag!
Um sechs Uhr morgen habe ich etwas sehr geräuschvoll gehört. Es kommt von draußen, neben meinem Schlafzimmerfenster. Ich habe das geöffnet, um zu sehen, was das Lärm gemacht hat, und habe eine Katze gefunden. Die zitterliche Katze hat mich kürzlich angesehen, dann ist sie schnell weg geflinkt. Und zwei Stunden früher als ich normalerweise aufstehe! Jeztz bin ich zu müde um etwas zu tun...
Jan. 19, 2021
Degooglizzazione
Molto spesso mi chiedo cosa succederà nel futuro, specialmente dentro di 10 anni. Cosa cambiarà, cosa sucederà. Ad esempio, ci sono tantissime persone che parlano di una Degoogling o Degooglizzazione della nostra vita, cioè, rinunciare a qualsiasi prodotto da Google, la ragione è semplice, privacy anzitutto e poi una questione eminentemente economica. Google è un Mastodonte nella web e un monopolio che impedisce altri attore di partecipare nel web business. Ma, ci sono altre ragione per qualsiasi persona lasciare google, ragione geopolitica. Tutti i metadati che condividiamo (consapevole oppure inconsapevolmente) sono utilizzati per aziende statunitense e allora tutti sanno che Il imperio è in rischio, non riesco a capire cosa potrei succedere con tutte i miei dati si quelle aziende sono andate in bancarotta.
Non tutto è perduto. Allora, ci sono alternative. Ho trovato piccole aziende che fanno guerra contro google, ad esempio duckduckgo oppure protonmail, ho cominciato a usare quegli servizi, ma ci sono tante oltre. Quando uso gli prodotti americani mi sento come in una gabbia dorata. E complicato uscire ma, non impossibile, adesso mi sento come David combattendo contra Goliath. So che non sto solo, so che ci sono tantissime persone che fanno lo stesso, credo che nella seguente decada saremmo più.
Jan. 19, 2021
Lust Teil 2
Heute habe ich mit einem Freund über die Ängste und die Zweifel gesprochen, die ich seit ein paar Wochen habe. Wie ich in meinem gestrigen Beitrag geschrieben habe, man muss niemals Produktivität mit Zufriedenheit gleichsetzen und das mache ich leider zu oft.
Ich hatte niemals gedacht, dass ich meinem derzeitigen Job haben konnte - es ist in zweifellos mein Traumberuf und daher bin ich auch gestresst, wenn ich fühle, dass ich meine Arbeit verloren könnte. Leider habe ich nur einen befristeten Arbeitsvertrag und in diesem Jahr werde ich wissen, ob ich eine Verlängerung des Vertrages bekommen werde. Das scheint der Fall zu sein, da ich ein gutes Mitarbeitergespräch letztes Jahr hatte aber nichts ist 100 Prozent sicher.
Es ist immer vernünftig, ein Plan B zu haben.
Jan. 19, 2021
Book review.
How would you feel if you wake up in the middle of an ocean surrounded by nothing, confused you are and scared while trying to look for land nearby or clear direction towards your salvation, suddenly the weather gets denser, and you start losing hope and wishing to miraculously get out from this nightmare, feeling overwhelmed by the prospect that you can't swim anymore or do anything because you don't know where to begin from and to which direction to aim.
Well, that is what usually most of the twentysomething (as Jay call them) feel after they finish school and start integrating with society, and unfortunately, schools don't prepare us with that, in schools and universities twentysomething has a clear vision of what they ought to do and what not to do, everything is predictable, getting As and doing your homework will grant you success in that stage, however, after graduation and the end of the grading system live begins to become aimless and at a loose end, that leads twentysomething Living without perspective in their twenties followed by tears shed when they reach thirties and forties because they are now paying a steep price professionally, romantically, economically, reproductively for a lack of vision in their twenties. Plus, our culture promotes the idea that, well, your twenties are extended adolescence where you goof around and have fun, leave adult responsibilities for later you still young. where that might be true in some way but they dismiss the fact that this decade is the foundation that defines our identity in the coming years and the time when the experiences that we have disproportionately influence the adult lives we will lead. Jay argues in her book that the twenties are real-time and ought to be lived that way and that twenties are the critical period of adulthood, and her presumption is based on her clinical practice as a clinical psychologist where she dealt with twentysomething patients. So, what should we do with our twenties you may ask? Well, there are certain points where you have to focus on, jay's argued, first one is your identity capital, identity capital as jay defines it and I quote " ... Is (identity capital) our collection of personal assets. It is the repertoire of individual resources that we assemble over time. These are the investments in ourselves...." end quote, and she categorized our identity capital into two sects, the one that goes on a resume such as degrees, jobs, etc, and the personal dimensions of identity capital which influences the way we speak, how we solve problems, etc. And to her identity capital is a baby step toward self-actualization and it is what we bring to the adult marketplace, it is the currency we use to purchase jobs and relationships... And that will result in getting a clearer sense about ourselves, greater life satisfaction, better stress management, strong reasoning, and resistance to conformity. But how to do it? to build your identity capital you have to explore the world and also equip yourself with true commitments which twentysomething apparently lack, get yourself into challenging situations, where you get something new out of that experience. meet new people, research in sociology shows that similarity breeds connection, and, people are more likely to form close relationships with those most like them, as a result, we have as jay referred to them in her book a homogeneous cliques. It feels comfortable to have a supporting people behind your Back, and that is one the prons of the homogeneous clique however there are some drawbacks to it too, and the obvious one is that they share similar minerality and assumptions which clinging to it might limit your overall improvement as a person and conceptualization of the world. on the other hand, getting with people that you don't necessarily share a common ground with forces us to communicate from a place of difference and that jay referred to as elaborated speech. Which doesn't presume that the listener is well-grounded with your beliefs and has the same information you have. And as a result, a form of communication will be forced that tend to be more organized and articulated by those who engaged in it, which give us access to something fresh and new and that what Jay called the strength of weak ties.
Our urge to grow towards our potential leaves us in a problematic situation known as the search for glory and the tyranny of the should. Which emerges from the confusion about what exactly growing toward out potential means.
Well, Jay affirms that to solve this obstacle twentysomethings have to realize their potential and gifts while acknowledging their limitations so they neither dream too big nor dream too small but have a dream that fits with the world around us which leads us toward realizing our authentic potential.
A search of glory is more like looking for an ideal rather than a goal to commit to. And that might manifest itself in the form of cultural press, where for example the culture press you to be an engineer as a form of an ideal state before you find your authentic self, any search of glory is propelled by the tyranny of the should. Work should be wow, I should go to graduate school, should masquerade as the paralyzing judgements from the outside and the oppressive obligations where goals direct us from the inside and are the manifestation of authentic dreams as Jay argue.
Reaching our potential is not an overnight process nor it is something that usually happens in our twenties, but, our twenties are the pathway towards our authentic self and getting things done correctly in this stage will, in the end, establish a meaningful life.
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Amboíno
Amboíno é uma ilha em Indonésia. Faz parte das Ilhas Maluku, o archipélago mais maluco do mundo!
Por causa de seus recursos naturais e sua história de comércio com os portugueses e holandeses, Amboíno tem uma população mas grande que Seram, a mais grande ilha vizinha. Uma vez foi uma chave pelas ilhas Banda, mas hoje não é uma ilha de grande valor estratégico.
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