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Kinyas and Kayra Part II
I see myself as an immortal. It has been years that I disconnected from time and space. I had fallen in love with a girl. I had to took 6 hour road to see her. One morning, I miss the train. I gave up on love. Only I know what is giving up on oneself. My name is Kaygusuz Abdal. I gave up on God. I gave up on death. Because If I die and the gatekeepers of reward and punishment system are waiting me there, I have to being in big fights. I don't want to die because I am afraid I kill God too. And noone can endure this kind of death except me... I wrote the Well Metaphor in counterpart of Platon's Cave Metaphor: I explained Humans falling after they born climbing the opprtunities passing quickly and with holding onto other people and only do this because they want to reach height of when they were born. Also, I explained the ones putting their hands to their mouth and dedicated to not climb. And I asked, Does the god above or below. I used to play pocker. Now I am playing to god is in below, at the ground of well. My life is on the table with some red game chip.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
How I study English every day
First of all, I open Anki app
Learn all the flashcards that due to today by the system (I mean I should be learn today)
Honestly, I don't learn all of this, only the flashcards that are words, phrases, sentences I added.
Some that I didn't clean or adjust yet, because I didn't apply the right methods that works for me.
I want to focus on add more useful relevants information that I need most right now.
I gotta adjust it later on.
Secondly, I create at least 10 flashcards.
Some that I take some grammar book (recently it's preposition, which I make wrong a lot)
Vocabulary I want to start on and improve: emotion, business, interview, thought, psychology etc.
Corrections I get on LangCorrect, from people make corrections for me, thanks y'll.
Which is for me is one of the best way to learn, through mistaken.
The last one, I try to write something to post on LangCorrect.
Some day, I don't really want to write anything.
I feel dizzy, so one day I just ask ChatGPT to suggest some ideas to write.
It works, but sometimes I still don't want to write anything.
Optional, I watch some English series, without subtible, to improve my listening skills.
Or practice reading some English books, if I have time to.
That's how I learn English, if you have any other ways to learn a language, you can leave a comment below, I'd love to hear your opinions.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Script editing
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Watch this video.
Team Japan’s ultimate defensive duo, Watanabe and Endo, face off against one of the fastest pairs in the world—India’s Shetty and Rankireddy.
The moment unfolds in the second game, deep into deuce.
Tension is sky-high—every shot could decide the match.
Watanabe and Endo cannot let the shuttle drop.
Suddenly, a lightning-fast smash tears through the air.
Rankireddy, the Guinness World Record holder for the fastest smash, unleashes a missile clocked at 565 km/h—faster than a bullet train.
The sheer speed transcends pro-level play.
They manage to return it with a high drive—
But standing in wait is the towering 187cm Shetty.
Yet even that is no match for Watanabe’s unbelievable defensive touch.
Ordinarily, you’d expect a textbook backhand return.
But in this moment, Watanabe twists his entire body 90 degrees, softens the shuttle’s momentum, and creates just enough space for a controlled shot.
Back and forth, neither side giving an inch—
Both pairs desperate to avoid giving away a clean smash.
Shetty insists on attacking from above, refusing to lift.
Endo counters with a delicate cross-court return, relying on nothing but wrist finesse.
Then another soft drive—met with an aggressive overhead touch from Endo.
Trying to bait Shetty, they push the rally to the back with a straight return.
Endo goes for a high lob—hoping for a counter opportunity—
But Shetty cuts it off at the net.
Still, Watanabe twists his body once more to dig the shuttle out.
The crowd is electrified.
And here’s the moment that turns everything—
Watanabe notices both Shetty and Rankireddy are stacked on the right side.
He leaps and fires a cross smash—
But Shetty somehow bends both knees and scrambles to meet it.
Half of the Japanese court is now wide open.
Watanabe, off-balance from the smash, is momentarily out of play.
It looks over.
The crowd gasps.
But then—this man moves.
Endo, falling to the ground, gets just enough contact to keep the rally alive.
And Watanabe, having drifted out of position, throws himself back into the rally—
Scooping it up from the brink.
And just like that, Japan steals the point.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
unforgettable day in my life
It was in 1999, and I was eight years old. My mother went with my uncle suddenly to my father's business place, and then I got to know that my dad had faced a tragic accident the previous night, and he was admitted to the hospital for surgery. He was a businessman who did his business in another town, not in my hometown. He used to come on weekends to see us. But his death changed my life unexpected way.
I can remember that I couldn't accept my father's death. for the funeral, my favorite cousins were also coming, which made me happy. Then I just wanted to spend my time with them, and then I could forget that pain for a moment, yes! it worked until my aunt forcefully took me to fulfill the daughter's duty for my father's death. That was the very first time I learned to skip the pain and remember something that makes you happy.
However, as an orphan living with disabled siblings who were affected with mentally disabled was challenging. additionally, I misunderstood some of my family members loved me. No! they just sympathized me. Thus, my father's funeral was a major loss in my life.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
A Question I Have Today
I came across a question while reading an email this morning. I'm holding onto this question until now to ask you, my online English teachers.
Thanks in advance.
The question is from this sentence: 'Complaining, blaming, pointing fingers—none of it will get you anywhere worth going.'
Why does this sentence use 'it', not 'them'?
I mean, there are three of them referred to, right？
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Email to Ceramics Studio
Bonjour Louise et Romane
Je suis une céramiste australienne en voyage à Bordeaux en avril 2024 pour un séjour de travail.
Comme je quitterai mon atelier à domicile, je recherche un atelier local où je pourrais proposer mes services comme assistante quelques jours par semaine, en échange de la possibilité d'utiliser l'atelier en dehors des heures de cours.
Cependant, je ne suis pas francophone (même si j'apprends).
Si votre atelier est intéressé, n'hésitez pas à me contacter pour discuter des modalités.
Merci de votre temps.
Bien à vous
Catherine
July 7, 2025
Siddhartha – Resumen y reseña (parte dos)
Tras hablar con Govinda, Siddhartha buscó al barquero Vasudeva, quien había encontrado paz en el río. El barquero lo reconoció y aceptó dejarlo trabajar a su lado. A partir de ese momento, Siddhartha llevó una vida sencilla e intentó hallar tranquilidad en el río.
Un día, corrió el rumor de que Gotama estaba gravemente enfermo y no le quedaba mucho tiempo de vida. Muchos de sus seguidores viajaron desde todas partes para cruzar el río y rendirle homenaje. Cerca del río, una de las seguidoras fue mordida por una serpiente y cayó gravemente enferma. Vasudeva oyó sus gritos y llevó a la mujer y a su hijo a la choza que compartía con Siddhartha. Siddhartha la reconoció como Kamala, ya envejecida, y ella le confesó que el niño era suyo. Esa noche, Kamala murió, y Siddhartha se convirtió en tutor del chico, quien también se llamaba Siddhartha. El joven estaba acostumbrado a una vida de lujos y llegó a odiar a su padre. Siddhartha amaba profundamente a su hijo, pero nada de lo que hacía lo satisfacía, y un día el muchacho se escapó. Vasudeva instó a Siddhartha a dejar que su hijo encontrara su propio camino, tal como él mismo lo había hecho cuando era joven, a pesar del dolor que eso le había causado a su propio padre.
Finalmente, Siddhartha accedió y se dedicó a aprender todos los secretos del río. Aprendió a escuchar las voces del río, que convergían en la palabra sagrada, Om. Con el tiempo, su dolor sanó y comenzó a comprender la unidad que Gotama había enseñado.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
Oggi
Oggi il mio telefono era un disastro, ho provato ad aggiornare il software del mio telefono con il computer di mio zio, in realtà mio zio l'ho fatto. Ma il mio telefono non si è più acceso, allora abbiamo dovuto di andare a un posto dove si riparano le cose elettroniche, alla fine tutto è andato bene. Dopo abbiamo mangiato in la casa di mia nonna, l'altro mio zio con i suoi figli e mia zia è venuto. Abbiamo anche mangiato un pie al limone. Grazie per le correzioni!
July 7, 2025
Heute
Heute haben wir in meiner Oma Haus gegessen, danach haben wir einen Zitronen Pie. Mittwoch gehen wir in den Strand, ich bin sehr aufgeregt. Heute fühle mich aber ein bisschen krank, aber ich kann nicht krank werden. Ich muss Deutsch und Italienisch lernen, heute hatte ich nicht so viel Zeit, weil ich die ganzen Tag mit meiner Familie war. Morgen werde ich auch nicht so viel Zeit haben. Jetzt muss ich gehen, danke für die Korrekturen!
July 7, 2025
Imagining a Conversation with Passport Control
Nous sommes entrés à Amsterdam car il est plus pratique d'acheter les billets « Global journey » qui incluent un transfert en bus, et l'aéroport d'Amsterdam a de nombreux vols en provenance des États-Unis. Nous venons d'aller à Tomorrowland en Belgique, et maintenant nous allons passer quelques jours à nous détendre sur les plages ici sur la Riviera. Nous mangerons au restaurant du Plongeoir, et passerons une journée au Castel Plague.
July 7, 2025
Que-est ce que j'ai fait
Récemment, j'ai commencé à revenir à des classes de piano. J'en suis très heureux parce que j'ai commencé à jour le piano depuis que j'avais six ans et J'avais oublié comment jouer certaines chansons. Alors, il y avait "sales" au centre commercial du coup j'ai acheté de nouveaux fringues et alors je vais aller au cinéma en Mercredi á voir Superman avec un ami.
July 7, 2025
July 7, 2025
July 6, 2025
July 6, 2025
Kinyas and Kayra Part I- translation of turkish novel
My name is Kinyas. The sun is setting. I have a headache. I have given my name to myself. An expression of unending fury and unending unhappiness. I am mad at all people. Because they live. Life is making me nauseous... I play with fire. With enough gasoline and with lighter of man's inside pocket who is sitting across me i can burn the world. My name is Neron. I travel at night with cars which I stole. I was born in Tokyo. I made my wrists cut by black man in return of 3 gram cocaine. When i wake up at the morning the ocean washed me. My name is Steve McQueen. I survive with vomiting everything i know. I saw David Bowie in my dream. I n the morning I dont have one of my eyes. I wrote poems. 3 of them. I grated on of them and pour it into pasta souce. I burnt the other and put the ashes into my sandglass. I earned some time whereas. I wrote the last one now.
July 6, 2025
Success
Success is an amazing feeling in person’s life. Success is siting goals and try to achieve it in a specific time. I firmly believe that, the most important things is your goal should be interested and has a meaning for you. Furthermore, you need to set a serious plan and take an action, work hard and never give up when you face challenges, this will help you to improve your personality. Therefore, we should organize our time carefully and do the best to achieve our goals, in order to feel comfortable. With a success, individuals will discover their abilities and new skills. It is a good way to have a better future and improve yourself as well.
There are different types of success: personal life success, relationships success, work success, study success and wealth success.
July 6, 2025