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Teil 5 Was?!
Ich war überrascht, aber ich konnte mir gar nicht vorstellen, was ich noch hören würde. Herr Suzuki hat mir gesagt, dass ich eingestellt werde und deswegen ich in die Firma ABC gehen konnte. Ich habe gar nicht verstanden und deswegen ihn gefragt?
- Firma ABC? Was soll das sein?
- Ah, wusstest du es nicht? Diese Stelle ist extern.
Ich weiß nicht genau, was man das auf Deutsch sagen kann. Er hat gemeint, dass es um kein Festplatz an dem Konsulat ging. Anstatt vom Konsulat eingestellt zu werden, wird die Person von einer Firma eingestellt. Kurz gesagt zahlt das Konsulat dieser Firma Geld und diese Firma zahlt vom diesem Geld ein Gehalt dieses Angestellten. Natürlich "isst" (bekommen) die Firma einen großen Teil dieses Gehalts. Warum macht das Konsulat es? Keine Ahnung. Das führt nur zu einem Ergebnis: Man bekommt ein niedriges Gehalt und die Firma bekommt monatlich Geld, um gar nichts zu tun.
Vorheriger Teil
https://langcorrect.com/journal/teil-4-etwas-mit-ihm-nicht-stimmt/
May 6, 2021
Donnerstag
So viel hat in dieser letzten Woche passiert, aber ich habe gar keine Energie mehr, darum zu denken. Statt meinen Erfahrungen zu beschreiben, werde ich um der kommenden Prüfung diskutieren. Es findet in fast genau einem Monat statt. Deshalb vorbereite ich, insoweit ich Zeit dafür frei habe, für den Test wann immer ich kann. Gerade habe ich entdeckt, dass es auch speziellen Anki Decks gibt, die sich auf den Fällen exklusiv fokussieren. Die Kasus sind mein Fehlerpunkt auf Deutsch, den ich verstärken muss, um einen guten Noten zu bekommen.
May 6, 2021
What is the most important condition to be successful?
I believed that people who work harder and try to make an effort to achieve their goal, they will be successful. However, the fact looks not so easy I imagined.
At first, entrepreneurs have to have a great ambition.
The secondly, they shouldn't give up their goals easily even though they face on many obstacles. Some successful people say that you never give up your dream until you are successful. That might be true but it is so difficult, because they have never known when their dream come true. It could take 5 years or 10 years. Then, how many challengers whose targets are so high will be able to keep on their motivation and energy such a long term. So that is one of divine test.
The next is that they have to look around with their sharp-eyed whether there is any chance near them. They should believe in their sense and inspiration deeply. Once they feel that this might be what they want, they immediately need to take an action for owning or taking it even if you sacrifice something.
I hope everybody can complete their goals for being happy and satisfied with our lives including me.
May 6, 2021
Aromantism
"When did you realise you were aromantic ?"
It's actually a story that I wanted to tell for a long time.
Before college, I wasn't really aware of the LGBTQ+. They existed, good for them, period. But in college, I made a bunch of friends who were in the community. I watched them grow, discover themself. Expecially a guy I was really close with, Martin.
First time I met him, he thought he was a lesbian, because it was clear for him that he liked women. Then, he realised he was not a girl, and identified as agender for 6 months. Meanwhile, he also discovered that he was on the asexual spectrum. Finally, he came out as trans, demi-sexual and panromantic.
He inspired me. He made me realised that there were a lot of different sexuality/gender/romantism, and that people don't always have a "oh yeah, I'm ..." moment. Sometimes (most of the time), you have to question your sexuality/gender/romantism to find it, and the first guess isn't necessary the right one.
So I did some research. I looked at some memes, some posts, some forums... Until I found the aromantic definission. That ringed a bell. I read stories from people, and I recognise myself in them. I always thought that people were thinking the same way as me, but then I found out that that was not "heteronormal".
I didn't immediatly think to myself "That's it. I'm aromantic!", it took several months before I got used to the idea, and a couple of more before I trully accepted it and identify myself as aro. So I can't really put a date on it, but it was somewhere between at the beginning of 2020 (yes, just before the pandemic).
May 6, 2021
Forgiving
More than fifteen years ago, my boyfriend broke up with me. I was deeply in love with him, for this reason I had a bad time.
I wasted a lot of energy trying to understand why. Was it my fault?. Was he in love with other person?. We were happy, weren't we?. I was angry and mislead. My attitude was taxing and after a while I understood there were no answers to this questions.
Finally I understood the only truth is that a relationship has to be balanced. If he was not anymore happy with our life, we could never be happy together. So maybe, breaking up was an honest decision. He was giving me the chance to find somebody that really cares about me. I felt so relieved and grateful.
Ever since I understood that, I try to forgive any person that hurts me. It's not always easy but in the long run it's more healthy.
May 6, 2021
La naturaleza
Me encanta la naturaleza. Crecí en un lugar rural con mucho acceso a los bosques, ríos, lagos, y otras cosas magníficas. Vivo en el centro de un gran sistema de lagos, y por eso, conozco a la belleza de los ambientes aquáticos. Cuando era niñe, podía ir afuera y explorar bosques con árboles grandes, flores delicadas, y estanques con ranas y peces. La naturaleza me da un sentido de calma.
Para mi, el cambio climático me da mucho miedo. Yo sé mucho sobre la ciencia del problema, y sé que muchas personas van a sufrir. También sé que la naturaleza y biodiversidad es muy importante a muchas personas y puede ser critical para algunas maneras de vida. Deseo que cada persona explore a nuestro mundo majestuoso y aprenda sobre estes asuntos.
May 6, 2021
Review: The Dilemma of Traditional Knowledge Collection
As cultural awareness improved, it was realized that archivists in the USA have historically been white and using English only. This inequality leads to an incomplete collection of archives. Therefore, open access to the general public is necessary. But what information need to collect requires rulemaking, which also faces issues of ethnicity and linguistic dominance.
May 6, 2021
My artist self
Since I've learned how to sit, I've always been trying to create something. No matter if I was carving in the ground with a wooden stick or smashing different kinds of berries to make my "own" paints, I've just wanted to somehow express myself through art. Few years later, I grew up and my mom signed me up for an art classes. It's been more than ten years since Iv ve started and I still love it. I love being part of the process of creating a painting or making small clay figurine. I've become more skilful with brushes and pencil, but I am still the same in essence. My latest project is the biggest painting I have ever painted. The canvas is about one meter wide and one and a half meter tall, which means a lot of space to cover with paint. But despite the big size, I am using only pretty small brushes, because I really want this painting to be as much "perfect" as possible. To make it clear... no matter how hard I try, my creations are never as beautiful as I imagined them before I've started the process. I am never able to make it look real enough. And that's okay! It's normal, every artist would tell that your art hardly ever turn out the way you want it. But the most important - for me - is effort. So I am still trying. Which also means that the process is truly slow, because I am putting on more and more layers of paint when I am not satisfied with the hue or something. On my painting, there are two figures, based on one of my favourites books. Actually, one of them is from the book, the other one is my own... I just added it because... well I simply wanted. For sure, painting the skin was the most difficult for me. I've been adding so many layers of dye and never was really happy with the result, but now I finally have the texture, hue and brightness I wanted. Painting dress and armor wasn't so hard however, another really challenging part is going to be making of faces. I've done hair without any bigger difficulties, yet I don't know how I will paint the faces. I am not good at painting little details like lips or eyes so... wish me luck!
May 6, 2021
LATEST/RECENT and FOR THE PAST FEW DAYS/FOR THE LAST FEW DAY
A. The cut on your palm doesn't look good. Is it a recent wound?
B. No, I got it some time ago while cutting the wood for the fireplace.
A. I can't wait to catch up with the recent/ the latest news.
B. Me neither.
A. The scrapes on your shoulder, is it something new? I didn’t see them earlier and there are not even scabs.
B. No, I have had them for the past few days/ for the last few days . They're just healing so slowly.
A. And what happened?
B. Not much. I must have rubbed it against the tube wall while speeding down the pool slide.
A. They said it in the news that playground slides are not safe.
B. Yes. Timmy has rubbed himself too much playing on them in recent days.
May 6, 2021
Diary: A Disappearing Bus Stop
Something very weird happened today. A bus stop suddenly stopped being used. Every Thursday, I always walk 20 minutes to that bus stop in order to get to my part-time job. Today when I got there, the bus stop sign was still there and I saw many people waiting for the bus there. Then I opened my phone app to check the bus arrival time, but I was shocked to find that I couldn't check this stop. Checking those bus numbers on the stop sign don't show this stop. There was also no search on the web to find a notice that the station was not in use. After a short hesitation, I immediately decided to walk 10 minutes to another station to take another bus, and luckily I wasn't late for work.
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My mottos
Writing my mottos is my daily routine in the morning.
There are nine sentences; two sentences are in Korean, two sentences are in Chinese, two sentences are in Japanese and three sentences are in English.
I will introduce them in English.
- Happy thinkings
- The flower in her hand, the flavor in my mind.
- Choose not to be harmed and you won't feel harmed.
- Everything depends on your way of thinking.
- When youth departs, may wisdom prove enough
- Frozen three feet is not a day's cold.
- There is an uncomfortable but interesting change in the border.
- Last droplet overflowing the cup of water
- Believe in you
When it is done to write them, I become calm and have courage to live better life.
May 6, 2021
Пытаюсь говорить по-венгерски. Часть 2.
[Этот текст - перевод этого видео: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LLHRC2y5CP0]
Каждый день я пытаюсь делать что-то маленькое на венгерском, например, использовать приложение, слушать подкасты, или говорить с друзьями в Tandem. Есть другое языковое приложение, что я использую, называется Bluebird, и слушаю на подкасты каждая утра когда я принимаю душ. Приложение хорошего, но немножко скучно. Иногда я использую другие приложения, например, Duolingo, или Mondly, и не такие известный приложения, как 'Do you speak Hungarian?'. Много приложения, да.
Сейчас я работаю из дома. Мне нравится слушать на подкасты когда работаю о дизайне продукта, или дизайне в целом. Я могу сконцентрироваться, потому что дизайн моя работа, и могу слушать на подкасты и музыке каждый день.
May 6, 2021
Spielplätze
Ich habe mich heute gefragt, ob Kinder noch auf Spielplätze spielen. Als Kind, würde mein Vater uns zu dem Park nehmen und ich würde dort auf die Spielplätze zusammen mit meiner Schwester spielen. Ich erinnere mich, dass es wirklich spannend war und manchmal würden wir auch andere Kinder kennenlernen. Heutzutage sind Kinder mit Smartphones etwas üblicher und ich frage mich, ob sie jemals auf Spielplätzen spielen. Die Situation ist etwas seltsamer mit der Pandemie. Ich glaube, dass einige Kinder für ein paar Jahre keine Spielplätze besuchen würden, was ein bisschen traurig ist.
May 6, 2021
May 6, 2021
Journal
As I remember, last year, we held the following types of training classes, such as vegetable planting, fruit planting, pig breeding, agricultural machinery management and so on. Each class usually ranges from 5 to 25 days. The class should include one-third of theoretical teaching and two - thirds of practical teaching. That is roughly it.
May 6, 2021
Les ombres
Il pleuvait. Les gouttes d'eau froides me reveillèrent tout d'un coup. En ouvrant les yeux, je regardai tout autour de moi : je me retrouvais sur le toit d'un immeuble. Ma mémoire était comme effacée et je n'arrivais pas à me souvenir de ce qu'il m'était arrivé. À ma droite il y avait un chien : il était un gros retriever doré qui aboya pour me saluer. Je le regardai surpris et puis je lui souriai. En face de moi il y avait un sac-à-dos noir qui n'avait pas l'air familier. Je l'ouvriai, curieux, et dedans il n'y avait que de briques. C'est à ce moment-là que je me rendis compte de la flaque de sang derrière moi. Le chien commença à me lécher, content de mon réveil. Je pensai que quelqu'un m'avait frappé avec ces briques, mais que le chien eut réussi à chasser mon aggresseur. C'était probablement pour cette raison qu'il se trouvait là à mes côtés, comme pour veiller sur moi. Ça expliquait aussi la blessure sur ma nuque. En tout cas j'avais trop de mal à la tête pour penser à ce qu'il avait pu m'arriver. Je me leva lentement et le chien commença à me suivre. En me penchant sur la corniche de l'immeuble, j'aperçus que les rues de la ville étaient complètement désertes. Aucun bruit ne resonnait et ça m'inquiétait. Le chien aboya pour attirer mon attention et m'indiqua avec sa gueule la porte qui menait aux escaliers de l'immeuble. Nous descendîmes, entourés par un silence sinistre, et sortîmes de l'immeuble. Un vent inquiétant dans son souffle faible nous accueillit. Puis le silence arriva. Même le chien s'approcha de moi, effrayé par cette atmosphère sombre.
Avec l'aube à nous accompagner, nous nous commençâmes à errer à la recherche d'une âme vivante. Pourtant tout autour il n'y avait que du silence. Le chien me suivait. Il cherchait à se montrer calme, mais je pouvais percevoir sa peur. Nous marchâmes pendant quelques heures sans rien trouver. Nos estomacs commencèrent à protester, donc nous entrâmes dans un supermarché. La musique de la radio nous accueilla. Dans les rayons tout était propre et bien rangé et pourtant il n'y avait personne. C'était comme si le temps s'était tout d'un coup arrêté, mais alors pourquoi tout le monde avait disparu? Le chien alla saccager la section de la nourriture à animaux. Je voulais aller prendre à manger, mais soudainement j'entendis un téléphone sonner. Je me paralysai. Je commençai à trembler involontairement sans avoir aucun contrôle sur mon corps. Quand le téléphone finit de sonner, je réacquis possession de mon corps. Le chien courut vers moi avec la bouche remplie de croquettes. Puis le haut-parleur s'écria : "Le monsieur est prié de se rendre à la caisse 4". Animé par la curiosité, je réussis à vaincre la peur qui m'avait paralysé auparavant. Le chien me suivait avec l'air menaçant, prêt à me protéger en cas de danger. À la caisse 4 il y avait une ombre antropomorphe qui me regardait fixe avec ses yeux rouges. Le chien tremblait et se cacha derrière moi. Tout le courage qu'il avait montré auparavant avait maintenant disparu. L'ombre avança et le chien s'échappa. Animé par la rage de n'avoir pas de réponses, j'avançai à mon tour vers l'ombre. "Ombre maudite" l'insultai-je "tu as fait quoi? Pourquoi il n'y a plus personne?". L'ombre me regarda surprise. "Tu... tu n'as pas peur de moi?" demanda-t-elle avec une voix frémissante. J'avançai encore, mais l'ombre disparut. À ce moment-là je me rendis compte que j'étais resté tout seul.
Je commençai à voir des ombres partout par la ville. Elles se cachaient derrière les maisons vides et désolées et me regardaient de loin. Je marchais tout seul par la ville, écœuré par cette situation. Mes amis, ma famille, mes collègues - ils étaient tous devenus des ombres horrifiques sans vie ni humanité. Je grignotais des chips que j'avais volées au supermarché, assaisonnées avec mes larmes de désespoir. Le monde était désormais devenu gris et sans aucune joie, avec ces ombres maudites qui le hantaient. Je décidai de chercher un abri dans une maison abandonnée. Une langueur opprimante gravait sur mon cœur. Je m'assis sur un canapé. Les ombres continuaient à me regarder derrière les coins et les meubles, mais je ne faisais plus attention. Une seule ombre avança vers moi : c'était l'ombre d'un chien, qui commença à me lécher content avec sa langue incorporelle. Ainsi je restai tout seul avec les ombres.
May 6, 2021
About Reading Bernard Cornwell
Have you ever read any book by Bernard Cornwell? Would you recommend it? His most famous saga is set in England and it is called "The Saxon Stories or The Last Kingdom). There is even a TV adaptation on Netflix, which is quite entertaining. I have watched it and I remember that I liked it, but I can't recall the plot or the secondary characters. So when the other day I bumped into a good review of the book, I got curious and interested. The reviewer said that the book is an amazing read, which he devoured it cover to cover in just two days. I would like to give it a try. I'm concerned about my English level not being high enough to understand the historical old fashion vocabulary, but I guess the only way to improve is by exposing myself to more demanding reads.
May 6, 2021
Journal
First of all, thank you very much and your Chinese is perfect. Here are some sentences I can't understand well, and I also put my understandings or questions inside the sentence. I hope you will give me some further explanations. Thank you very much.
At that time, China (subject) had begun (past perfect as predicate) development(object) of its real estate industry and the housing system for national staff had begun reforms.
My family went on(can ON be dropped?)to live there for 20 years.
Also, the area at which (please tell me the use of “AT WHICH” here) it was located was bad.
May 6, 2021
My friend
I'll try to introduce a friend of mine. He and I went to the same middle and high school. We became friends because we had been in the archery club for five years.
My impression of him is smart and diligent. He studied hard and now he's studying medicine at a university in our hometown. I think he will be a good doctor in the future. He liked world history, so I sometimes asked him how to study it, because I wasn't good at it. Instead, I taught him physics before an exam. He almost failed the previous physics test, but he got a better score than me after my lesson.
His favorites are star wars, baseball, and comedy. He often joked, and it was boring but funny on the contrary.
One of the best memories with him is that we talked over and stayed up all night, when we went to an away game of archery. The next day, we were drowsy, and almost fell to sleep while the waiting time.
May 6, 2021
Информационная грамотность (5)
В наши дни технология тоже влияет на то, как мы воспринимаем новую информацию. В последние годы мы всё чаще и чаще наблюдаем тенденцию, что технология применяет разные методы, чтобы сделать жизнь нам легче и проще.
Эта тенденция регулярно проявляется в поисках в интернете. Google, к примеру, обычно анализирует вашу историю поисков, чтобы предугадывать какую информацию вы будете искать в будущем. Цель процесса и связанного с ним алгоритмов — это удовлетворять ваши хотения, а не нужды.
Очень часто бывает, что так найденная информация не самая уместная или правдивая, так что оказываете все результаты, предоставленные Google в ответ на ваши поиски, под вопросом. Если что, эту ,,полезную,, функцию можно отключить в настройках Google. (Пока что. Трудно предсказать, что будет дальше.)
Что касается нашего восприятия и трактовки новой информации, тоже необходимо учитывать влияние нашей собственной субъективной психологии на оценку достоверности найденной информации. Человеческий вид развивался в дикой приподе за протяжение сотен тысяч, а то миллионов лет. За это время мы усваивали целое вооружение предубеждений, предрассудков, и предвзятых отношений [или предвзятого отношения?] к окрудающей среде. Всё это было выгодно в той же обстановке и в такие времена, когда создание огня считалось серьезным достижением. Разумеется, в 21-ом веке, несколько из этих предрассудов уже не выгодны. Многие из них даже мешают нам.
May 6, 2021
I'm very happy to have a chance to learn writing in English
Hi! My name is Tamako.
This is my first time to write about myself here. My friend introduced me this corner and I'm very happy to have a chance of writing and have my composition corrected by a native speaker of English. I always think that the three important factors of learning English is reading ,speaking and writing. From today I 've decided to write English sentence every day. If some one makes correction it will be such a delightful thing.
May 6, 2021
Urlaubstage
Meine Lehrerin hat mich gefragt, “Warum hast du deine Urlaubstag benutzt? Normalerweise benutzt man in dem Somme”.
Ich habe geantwortet, “Letztes Jahre, wegen Korona, bin ich zu anderes Land nicht gegangen und hatte ich kein Grund zu meine Urlaubstage verwenden, deswegen jetzt habe ich viele Urlaubstage.”
Ich habe auch gesagt “Bis gehe ich nach Berlin zum Arbeit und deswegen es ist schwierig zu Planen” Ich habe 27 Urlaubstage aber ich weiss nicht, was ich zu tun soll.
May 6, 2021
La moratoria de desalojos
El año pasado, en el inicio de la pandemia, el gobierno aprobó una ley se llama "la moratoria de desalojos". Esta ley dice que no es legal desalojar un inquilino si no puede pagar la renta debido a la pandemia. Fue necesario porque muchas personas perdieron sus trabajos en los primeros meses de la pandemia. Pero, por supuesto, a los dueños no les gustó esta ley. En muchos estados, ellos continuaba presentar los casos de desalojos. Jueces diferentes tenía interpretaciones diferentes sobre el significado de la ley; algunos creían que era legal, pero otros no. Porque hay muchos tribunales en los Estados Unidos (al nivel de municipio, estado, federal, etc), había mucho confusión. Pero la ley lograba proteger muchos inquilinos de desalojo, aunque los dueños usaba tecnicismos en la ley para desalojar algunos inquilinos.
Sin embargo, leí una noticia ayer que un juez poderoso (en una corte de apelación) declaró la ley illegal; digo que la parte del gobierno que creó la ley, el CDC, no tenía la autoridad para hacer esto. No sé que sucederá próximo - si esta decisión es final, muchas personas enfrentaría desalojo muy pronto.
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