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سفارة
أحب السفارة. البلد الأخير الذيه زرت هو المغرب. لست عربية ولكنني أحب أن أسافر إلى البلدان حيث يتكلم الشعب بالعربية. لا أريد أن أقول (( بلدان عربية )) لأنني أعرف أن أناس البلدان الأفريقية يقولون إنهم ليسوا عربا. زرت الأردن والمصر قبل بداية دراستي لللغة العربية إذا لم أستتع تمرين الحديث مع الناس محلي وعندما زرت المغرب لم أستتع تمرين الحديث لأن الناس يتكلمون العربية آخرا والفرنسية والبربري. في المستقبل يجب علي أن أسكن في بلد عربي لمدة نصف سنة أو أطول لدراستي الجامعتي وأريد أن أفعل هذا في الأردن لأنني أريد تعلم لهجة الشام. أرغب في أن أستتيع إقامتي في سوريا أو فلسطين أيضأ ولكن من اليمكن أن هذه البلدان سليسا آمن.
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Aug. 7, 2025
Should education be free at all levels?
The topic we are discussing today is whether education should be free at all levels -elementary and middle school, college, university...
There are some pros and cons on both sodes: in the first place, if studying is a right, why do we have to pay? Not everyone can afford school supplies and can eventually drop education and consequently their dreams. Then, more people would have a better knowledge, since new generations are leaking of it.
However, the state needs money to create great study programs all over the country. Plus, in my country, you pay your son's university bill based on what you earn every year, or you can win tons of scholarships based on your grades.
These are very great method to balance free education and support to universities, to mantain a stable situation in programs.
Aug. 7, 2025
Ma visite à New York
Il y a deux ans, je suis allée à New York. Il y a beaucoup de choses à voir et à faire là-bas. J’ai marché dans Central Park, traversé le pont de Brooklyn, et pris le ferry pour Staten Island pour apercevoir la Statue de la Liberté . J’ai visité le Mémorial du 11 septembre. Malheureusement, 2,971 personnes ont perdu leurs vies lors de l’attaque terroriste du September 11, 2001. Mon activité préféré était de voir les Rockettes au Radio City Music Hall. Le spectacle était spectaculaire. C’était ma deuxième visite à New York et j’espère que ne sera pas la dernière.
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The World Games 2025
The World Games 2025 is opening in Chengdu tonight.
This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.
The opening ceremony is amazing. I highly suggest you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.
There are some cute panda dolls, stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Foreign travel
Travelling abroad has a significant impact on the individual.
Engaging with a new culture helps people expand their knowledge of other cultures, in addition discovering new cuisines gives them a deep insight into that country's eating habits and finally foreign travels offerd the opportunity to encounter with people from different ethnicities.
Aug. 7, 2025
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Aug. 7, 2025
Do you like to shop online shopping or in person? Give reaso
Generally, I don't usually shop online and neither in person, because I don't have enough money to wast it buying clothes that I do not need. However, if I had to choose, I'd say shopping in person. The best thing of this option is that you can try every size of the clothes in the shop.
If you shop online and you choose accidentally a wrong size, you have to do a boring proccess for the return and wait a long time for the refund.
Aug. 7, 2025
what is my favorite animal, and why?
Since I was a kid, I've always wanted to have a dog, because I had a nintendo game that was based on taking care of a golden retriever. He was so loyal and loving. Moreover, I know lot of people who have dogs and they are really happy with them.
However, I began to love cats 4 years ago, because my girlfriend has to of them and they are adorable. I feel like their cats are mine too, and their independence make easier to take care of them, so I don't know what I will do in the future.
Aug. 7, 2025
Story of Ratnag part-9
After killing King Akram, Layla also killed all the family members of Akram and started his ritual on their dead bodies, with the help of his mother Kamli, who was a very powerful witch.
During the ritual, Kamli started to feel that something was going wrong, so she stopped the ritual and said to Layla, “I think something is wrong. The ritual process is having some issues.”
Layla said, “What are you saying, mother? I have done everything the right way!”
Kamli replied, “How can you be sure that there's no issue in the ritual? Look at our goddess statue her eyes are becoming red. I think our goddess is not happy.”
Then, the goddess appeared in front of Layla and Kamli. The goddess said, “Are you both fools?”
Layla asked, “What happened? Did we do something wrong in the ritual?!”
The goddess replied, “No. You did the ritual very perfectly. But Akram and his brothers whose blood you served me are not royal blood!”
Kamli said, “What? How is it possible?”
The goddess said, “King Akram and his brothers do not belong to this royal family. He is the son of a minister. The previous king of Ratnag, Abhay, has only one daughter. She is the only royal blood. You must serve her blood to me so that the ritual can be completed.”
Layla asked, “But goddess, where is King Abhay’s daughter now? What is her name?”
The goddess replied, “Her name is Annu, and she lives in the East Gurukul.”
Aug. 7, 2025
SOME SUGGESTIONS FOR YOUR B2
Are you going to do it with Cambridge? This one is the most difficult one. If you need some recommendations, you should be calm in the exam, because it's not as hard as teachers tell us. Moreover, it's a really important title because if you want to get a university title, you must have at least a B1.
Reading is the worst part for me, because it feels like you take more time than the reality.
For my part, listening went really well, because when I did this exam, teachers gave us headphones to do this part. That miracle made it easier to understand every single word I had to listen.
I would like to tell you more things about my exam, but I've forgotten everything about writing and speaking.
I wish you get that desired B2.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Goethe B1 Schreibenprüfung Teil 3
An der Bushaltestelle haben Sie in einer Suchanzeige gelesen, dass das Ehepaar Börlach seinen Hund verloren hat. Heute Morgen haben Sie den Hund gefunden.
Schreiben Sie an Herrn und Frau Borlach. Berichten Sie, wo Sie den Hund gefunden haben und teilen Sie dem Ehepaar höflich mit, wie und wann Sie erreicht werden können.
Sehr geehrter Herr Börlach, sehr geehrte Frau Börlach,
ich schreibe Ihnen, weil ich Ihren Hund heute Morgen im Stadtpark gefunden habe. Machen Sie keine Sorge, er ist unverletzt und momentan bei mir. Ich gehe morgen Vormittag wieder in den Stadtpark. Vielleicht können wir uns dort treffen. Sie können mich unter der Telefonnummer 123-4567 erreichen.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
X
Aug. 7, 2025
My Favorite Food
My favorite food is definitely pasta. I love pasta very much. I can cook many different types of pasta eat. There are many ways to cook pasta: by boiling it on the stove, simmering it, or baking it in the oven. All kinds of pasta are delicious: with tomato sauce, with minced meat, with vegetables...
Aug. 7, 2025
I'm learning english
I'm learning English from a few days to improve my level.
I travel a lot and my actual level isn't good to have simple conversations. I'm learning English also to find a new job in marketing and increase my responsibilities. With a good English level, I'll can work with a big international company. Actually, I'm very limited in my choice when I apply. And third reason, learning English gives me energy because it had been a long time since I had learned something new.
Aug. 7, 2025
La fatigue
Je suis épuisée aujourd'hui. Je me suis couchée tôt, et j'ai pu rester dans le lit ce matin, mais je n'ai pas réussi à dormir plus. Mais normalement, j'ai déjà dormi assez longtemps. J'ai fait du shopping ce matin avec mon mari, et je bâillais toutes les 5 minutes. Je ne comprends pas pourquoi. Je suis active en ce moment, mais ce n'est pas nouveau. Je fais des cauchemars presque chaque nuit, peut-être que ça n'aide pas.
Il y a trop de soleil aujourd'hui, donc je ne pense pas travailler sur mes bacs à compost. Au minimum, je sortirai pour récolter les raisins devant notre maison. On a plusieurs vignes, mais celles-ci ont le plus de soleil, et je ne pense pas que ces raisins deviendront plus mûrs qu'ils ne le sont actuellement. Je les ai déjà goûtés il y a quelques jours, ils sont bons. Je ne sais pas leur variété, mais ils sont violets.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Ich erzähl mich.
Hallo! Ich bin Tiago und ich bin sechzehn Jahre alt. Ich komme aus Portugal und ich wohne in Setúbal. Ich bin ein Jung. Ich bin ein Studen der Musik. Ich spiele das Klavier. Ich liebe es zu lernen un zu studieren. Ich liebe Literatur und Mathematik. Jetzt studiere ich Deutsch, weil ich liebe Sprache studieren auch. Ich spreche Potugiesisch, Englisch, Französisch und ein bisschen Deutsch.
Im Schule habe ich einige Freunde: Mariana, Sophia, Castro, Gonçalo und Caroline. Sie sind sehr gut Freunde. Ich gehe in die Schule gern.
Meine Familie ist sehr große. Der Name meiner Mutter ist Magda, und sie ist zweiundfünfzig Jahre alt. Der Name meines Vaters ist Filipe, und er ist einundfünfzig Jahre alt. Ich habe einen älter Bruder, Rafael, und eine junger Schwester, Ema. Ich habe viele Onkel und Tanten.
Aug. 7, 2025
Mon nouveau bureau
Comme je prépare mes consultations dans mon bureau à domicile j'ai décidé de le rénover.
Avant, je travaillais souvent uniquement avec mon ordinateur portable.
Maintenant, j'ai fait quelques investissements.
J'ai acheté un deuxième écran avec un bras articulé, ma propre imprimante et les câbles nécessaires.
Tout d'abord le travail avec deux écran est un peu bizarre mais on s'habitue très vite.
Aujourd'hui, ça me fait vraiment plaisir.
Je peux laisser mon système client ouvert sur un écran et travailler sur l'autre pendant je suis en attente au téléphone. C'est top !
Finalement, je peux vraiment devenir une vraie "workerholic".