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Social Media
In the past, I used to be addicted by social media and watch stupid thing, just scrolling and scrolling. But I was always feeling boring and the content become familier, nothing is new. So, I decided to try some other contents that I used to ignore them. I relised that I'm interesting in contents about self care, developping divers skills. I started to focus on my self and improve it, identify my goals and pursu it. At the meantime I have no intention to use social media and waste my time. I'm only consider my dream and work on it.
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Which country was the best in what respect?
I have been almost twent countries for two years. Unfortunately, I haven’t travelled any countries recently because I have to work. I miss new trips and meeting new friends.
Please, imagine ! When you arrive new country, you hear different sounds and look different many people. You might be excited or terrible. How can I go to city center? Which bus is going to my hotel? I miss it all…
I told that I travelled twenty country. Now, I am talking about these countries.
I think the best natural country was Switzerland. I have been Zurich, Interlaken, Lauterbrunnen Lungern, Luzern and Basel. Switzerland’s villages were like a dream. There were wonderful views everywhere. I have felt peace and relax. Switzerland is famuous for trains. These trains usually go to wonderful route as Bernia Express. I realized life was continuing slowly. People don’t care about theirs future because there wasn’t anything bad vibe for them. Economy is very well.
I think the best responsible country is Austria. I don’t like visit museums, but there were many important museaums in this country. You should go to Hallstat with daily tours. There were many things to discover.
I think the best old builds countries are Belgium and Czech. When you come to Belgium, you should definitely visit Brugge and Gent.
I think the best colorful and funny country is Netherlands. Oh, please don’t say Holland. Netherlands people hate it. I have tried nice cheeses. There were canals and old builds in Amsterdam. You should definitely get canal tour and visit Red Light district. Don’t trust to girl in there.
Zagreb, Bucharest and Sofia were boring.
The best interesting builds were in Italy. There were lots of good food in Italy. People were similar to Turkish ones. I have visited Venice, Florence and Toscana.
I have also visited other Europa countries. Hungry, Slovania, Slovakia, Greece, Denmark, Germany… Thanks for reading !
Aug. 4, 2025
Ein kompliziertes Verhältnis
Die Königin von Tahiti Pomaré IV. Folgte den Thron beim Tod ihres Bruder, der ihr Bruder und auch Cousin war. Ihr Vater Pomaré Ⅱ. heiratete Teriitaria und bekam Tere Moe Moe, Teriitarias Schwester, als Nebenfrau. Pomaré IV.s Bruder war Sohn von Pomaré Ⅱ. und Teriitaria. Pomaré IV. war Tochter der König und Tere Moe Moe. Pomaré IV. und ihr Bruder hatten einen gemeinsamen Vater. Teriitaria ist ihre Tante. Ich brauchte eine Weile, um dieses Verhältnis zu verstehen.
Aug. 4, 2025
おい、目がないぞ (第1話)
一年前に毎日家に帰ったら泥棒がいるそうだった。
いつも居間でボロボロの形式があって廊下もすごくひどい。玄関にも悪い状態になった。そしていつも変なことがある。
全ての他の部屋がいいだった。いつも。こいつがトイレとかベッドルームとかちゃんと前のいい状態を保つ。
警察官を呼んでみたりネットでこの沙汰を調べてみたり、でも何もない。両親と友達にも家を守ってくれると聞いたけどいつも彼らが何も起こらなかったか見えなかと言った。
知りたい。もちろん誰がやってると知りたい。長い間に俺の家に住んでるのは怖い思い出があるんだった。一人で家に入るということもできなかった。
４月くらいには怒って始めると思うんだからカメラがすべて家の隅に置いた。以前に思わばよかったと分かってる。でも二つのひどいバイトで働いてちょっとお金がなかったよ。俺にとって一つのカメラもすごく高かったじゃん。
その日の夜はホテルに宿してホテルから家を監視すると決まった。
見ることは説明できないんだ。
Aug. 4, 2025
ma routine quatidienne
generalment,je me leve a six heure du matin . je me brosse mes dent et je me douche froid et je prepare pour aller l'ecole environ sept heure du matin. apres retourne ma maison, je mange mon dejeuner et faire mon devoir.en soir, je joue au basket avec mes amis paceque c'est bon pour sante.enfin, je mange mon diner et je dors environs dix heure .
Aug. 4, 2025
Si cambiarebbe tutto?
L´IA e i robot sono temi atualli come non sono stati mai. Ma secondo me, non si può dire se sono veramente nemici o se portano anche delle cose buone. È chiaro che tutto quello porta dei rischi, ma penso che non è chiaro se sono nemici o no... Scopo di questo testo è analizzare i vantaggi e le sfide dei robot e dell´IA. I robot ci aiuta in tante cose, e dobbiamo dire chiaramente che semplifica anche le nostre vite quotidiane, ma dall´altro lato dovremmo vedere anche i rischi che portano con loro. Se tutto fanno i robot, noi non abbiamo più dei lavori, e sappiamo tutti che cosa significherebbe... E po il prossimo problema sarebbe l´educazione, noi diciamo ai bambini che devono imparare cose che non servono mai più nella vita. Purché tutte quelle cose che normalmente uno fa nella vita quotidiana a casa o anche nel lavoro in ufficio o anche nella cantiere, non esisterebbero più. Noi umani siamo poi solo qua per diciamo controllare tutto. E se noi dovremmo controllare i robot vuol dire che dovremmo anche imparare come possiamo controllare tutta quella tecnica nuova... Il sistema d´educazione si deve cambiare e noi con lui. Possiamo dire se ognuno faccia la sua cosa porta funzionare. Ma si serverebbe veramente un cambiamento della vita nostra, per garantire la nostra vita futura e il nostro posto lavoro. Questo sarebbe un punto importante, ma ancora più difficile è la problematica sociale. Se tutto fanno in robot, noi non ci incontriamo più con altri e la conseguenza sarà una quota delle amatati psicologici che non diminuisce. Avremmo più problemi con depressione e ansia saziale e cosi via. Quindi vale la pena confrontarsi adesso di questi problemi. Solo se ogni uni faccia qualcosa possiamo risolvere questa situazione difficile.
Aug. 4, 2025
やっぱり長い飛行機に乗るのは苦手になっていますよね。
最近飛行機に乗る事はどんどん興味がかくなって行く。なんでって言うと、初めて乗った時の感じと全然違います。この最近の７年の間には何回に乗ったのもう数えない。30くらいかな。もちろん、もっと乗った人があると思いますが、自分の国のパッスポットはこんなに強くないから30回乗ったのちょっと多いかなと思います。
ただ飛行機乗るの時々必要だと思いますが、そしていいところもある、だってアジアからアフリカに行く時とか飛行機乗るのは1番便利じゃないかなと思ってますがすごく時間かかりますね。だからやっぱり長い飛行機で旅するの何、私が苦手だとわかります。もちろんその長い旅で何も考えなく何回も寝て起きて繰り返しできるから、それは仕事から休むチャンスだと思うけど、私にとってはそれは大事な時間が無駄にしてるみたいです。
何も出来ないので本当やっだと考える。でも地元に行く時はそりしかないかなと思って、どうやってもっとその長い旅(飛行機で18時間とか)で時間が楽に立つにできるのか？いいアドバイスあればぜひシェアをできると嬉しいです。
Aug. 4, 2025
Le miroir
Au début de la cérémonie du thé, on tient une louche appelée « kagami hishaku » bien centrée devant soi, comme un miroir dirigé vers le cœur. Ce geste symbolise l’acte d’éclairer son propre esprit, de l’observer en toute sincérité. C’est à la fois une façon de s’assurer que l’on est intérieurement en paix, et un engagement silencieux à verser l’eau chaude dans le bol de thé avec une pleine conscience et une intention pure.
On devient véritablement soi-même au moment où l’on en prend conscience. Même temps, même lieu, mais selon l’état d’esprit, un monde entièrement différent peut s’ouvrir devant nous. Nous devenons simplement la personne que notre cœur imagine. Je crois que notre vie n’est rien d’autre que le reflet de notre propre esprit : un miroir. Si nous choisissons d’éclairer le monde avec un cœur rempli d’amour, de paix, d’humour et de joie, alors le monde, en retour, nous dévoilera cette version de lui-même.
Et vous, que voyez-vous dans votre miroir ？
Aug. 4, 2025
How I live in the HOT asf days?
To wrap up in the previous post of weather in Hanoi, Vietnam, which is for me is one of the hardest, suffocated placed to live in Vietnam.
At day, I always feel dizzy, tired, my head is always warm, feel like I'm about to get sick.
At night, the temperature is drop to around 84 °F, but the humid raises to 80-90%, which means sometimes I feel like it's even worse than at midday.
My night always fucked up if I don't use AC.
One of the reasons I always tired and spend hours in bed without being able to sleep.
I can only turn on the AC in the most hottest days, since I'm broken.
Otherwise, almost all days, I always feel like I'm done. I don't have any energy to do my work.
Every 25 minutes, my shorts always get wet, I gotta stand up for 5 minutes to wipe my butt, yes I'm not joking.
Every 1-3 hours, I gotta take a quick shower to get rid of sweat and heat on my body, which makes me feel cooler.
My phone get hot like boil in just 2 minutes of charging, even if I remove the phone case.
(hot asf, I almost feel burned my hand when I touch it)
What do I do? I put a fan toward that, put it onto my two bottle, make it like a bridge.
It's still so hot, but I don't really know what to do. And then I charge and remove the charger every around 10 minutes.
I only open the window and the curtain at night. Even though, it's nothing I can do.
I get jealous when seeing the weather of other cities in the world. It's lower than 50 to 70 °F.
Even though I do lie in bed for hours from suffering, I'm still proud of getting back to learn and work, even I feel tired.
I hope one day I can make a lot of money that I can go many place that feel better.
That's it, hope y'll going well too.
Aug. 4, 2025
La musique
J'aime beaucoup genres de musique différent. Le genre je préfère est le rap ou la musique de le 80s-2000s. J'aime beaucoup d'artist différents mais pour moi j'aime spécifique musique des spécifique lieux. Pour example je préférée la musique des les 80s dans la voiture.
Aug. 4, 2025
My English level !
few months ago, my level at English was B1 with 44 marks until I test it again recently and it was B1 with 49 marks!!
For me, it is a good progress, maybe it took me three months to raise it but I'm proud of me.
The real challenge now is to improve my reading and writing skills
So, i took a lot of steps contain using longcorrect as a tool to improve my writing skills.
Hope i wrote correctly and if not, I will wait your notes ^_^
Thanks, in advance
Aug. 4, 2025
The Extremely Hot Weather in Hanoi
It's been months, I lie in bed, feel like boiling, sometimes the weather is so suck, if turn on a fan towards me, it feels a lot hotter.
We invented something called Celsius and Fahrenheit (°C / °F) by Anders Celsius and Daniel Gabriel Fahrenheit in the 18th.
Nowadays, by measured in shade, 2m above the ground, using a sensor, we can know what the temperature is.
The thing is, it does not include maybe other factors like humid, wind speed etc.
I noticed that just by remembered foreigner in here often say a lot of how difference they feel when in other countries and after coming to Vietnam.
Let's bring it here:
First, humid
The higher of the humid, the sweat would harder to escape, which leads to feel heavier, sticky, and hotter
The lower, it would come out easier, you feel drier but can dehydrated fast.
Second, wind speed
More wind, more sweat evaporate.
No wind, you're going to suffocating of heat.
I just list these two cuz those are the most impacted onto how we feel actually.
For the past few months in Hanoi, the weather tend to always be around 29-38 °C, which is 84-100 °F.
If we also calculate these factors, average humid in here is 75–85%, 53-55% in the afternoon, up to 90% at night.
This is when the cloud day, if it's rain, it's even more humidity (a LOTTT).
And even Hanoi’s driest season (winter) would feel humid for someone from Europe, North America, or the Middle East.
Wind speed is 8-10mph during the midday, at night it's 6mph or less, very slow by global standards.
You feel a tiny wind, but definitely not enough to cool sweat on skin. On humid time, it feels like no wind at all.
It might seems difficult to image that.
In short, Hanoi is like an 24-hour sauna, with heat never be low because of humid, and the air is wrapping me like a blanket.
Not for months, nearly every months with extremely suffocating by hot weather, cold asf in the winter (not the type of cold in Western)
So, I would tell how I feel to you to get it, if you'd like to.
I'll upload it right away after posting this entry.
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Story of Ratnag part-6
The scene moves to the palace of Haripur, where a messenger from Ratnag goes to meet King Bipswan and give him a message from the queen of Ratnag.
Messenger:
"My lord, I am a messenger of Ratnag. Our queen gave me a message.
The prince, Akram, likes your daughter and wants to marry her."
King Bipswan:
"Oh! What a good news!"
Then King Bipswan called a soldier and sent him to call Princess Naeena, to ask her about the marriage proposal. The soldier went to the princess's room and said,
"Princess, my lord is calling you."
The princess, who was in the room, answered,
"I will come soon. You may go."
Then Princess Naeena went to the king and asked,
"Father, why have you called me? What is the reason?"
King Bipswan:
"I have good news for you. Do you know King Akram?"
Naeena:
"Yes, the King of Ratnag. I met him today in the jungle."
Bipswan:
"He likes you and wants to marry you. What is your opinion?"
Naeena:
"Father, I also like him. Today, he saved my life from eagles in the jungle."
Bipswan:
"Then you agree to this proposal?"
Naeena:
"Yes, father."
Bipswan:
"OK, then. Messenger, send this information to your queen — that we agree to this proposal."
Then the messenger went back to Ratnag and told the queen,
"The king of Bipswan agrees to this proposal."
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Welche Sprache ich jetzt lerne
Momentan lerne ich Deutsche. Ich habe seit 2022 in Österreich gewohnt, aber ich habe leider nicht so viel Deutsch gesprochen. Jetzt mache ich intensive Deutschkurse, so dass ich die Sprache schnell lernen kann. Vielen von meine Familie sprechen nur Deutsch, and ich will mehr mit sie reden. Ich möchte auch einen Job finden, und ich brauche gutes Deutsch für das.
Hätte ich doch früher Deutsch gelernt! Ich schäme mich manchmal, wenn jemand fragt 'Wie lang bist du jetzt in Österreich?', weil dann muss ich erklären dass ich wohnen hier seit 3 Jahren, aber kenne die Sprache noch nicht so gut. Natürlich, war es schwierig Deutschkurse zu machen wenn ich so viel gearbeitet hatte. Dennoch, ich habe keine Entschuldigen mehr. Wenn mann wohnt in eine Deutsche Land, muss man die Sprache auch lernen. Ich muss Deutsch lernen, für eine besseres Leben hier!
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Die Mietpreisbindung
Die Mietkrise steht heutzutage in Deutschland im Raum. Daher gewinnen die Ideen der Mietregulierung zwischen den Wähler an Fahrt. Heute möchte ich meine Meinung zu diesem Thema mitteilen, bzw. warum es ein Irrtum ist.
Glücklicherweise kann man sich der Geschichte zuwenden und die Fälle untersuchen, in denen diese Politik schon angewendet wurde, und zu welchen Konsequenzen sie geführt hat. Zum Beispiel während und unmittelbar nach dem Zweiten Weltkrieg entschied sich die US-Regierung, die Höchstpreise für die Miete festzusetzen. Die Nachfrage an Unterbringung steigerte deutlich, weil wegen der güngstigen Preisen vermehrt Menschen sie leisten konnten.
Schlussendlich hat sich die Qualität der Unterbringung verschlechtert, weil sie jedenfalls gemietet wird.
Seinerseits hat das Angebot reduziert, denn für den Vermieter ist es unrentabel geworden.Es ist so weit gekommen, dass manche Inhaber haben ihre Eigentum sogar liegenlassen, denn sie würden im umgekehrten Fall ins Minus gehen.
Außerdem ist Korruption erblüht. Am wichtigsten wurden neue Gebäude nicht gebaut, weil es auch unrentabel geworden ist.
Die ursprüngliche Idee bestand darin, die Zahl von Obdachlosen zu reduzieren. Allerdings ist wegen der steigernden Nachfrage und des reduzierenden Angebots das Umgekehrte passiert.
Aug. 4, 2025
My injury experience
My right thumb was injured by the knif when I peeled potatoes. The blood flowed to other fingers and I felt it was warm. I put my right hand in the pool in order for blood to flow away with water.And I was stupide that I let the wound came into contact with water. After that, I used a table towel to wrap my hand under the wood to prevent blood from flowing to the ground. Walked out of the kitchen, I changed the table towel, used cleaning paper to prevent blood. Gradually, I felt dizzy . I was scared by the situation, and I sat down the soft to send a message to my boyfriend and told him I was injured. At the same time, I started sweating, felt dizzier, had blurred vision, and my togue was numb. I realized I could faint at any time, so I send message to my boyfriend urging him came back soon. I just lay on the table waiting for my boyfriend came back.About ten miniutes later, he arrived home and asked how I felt was,I told him all my feelings ,he gave me a candy to eat,and wiped my sweat with a wet towel, I gradually felt better, I thought I might have low blood sugar because I lost so much blood.This is the worst injury I've had in years.
After I ate a candy and felt better, I put my head on the table and half raised my right hand, my boyfriend started to dealt with my wood,and I really appreciated him. I couldn't imagine how I should deal with this situation without him. I haven't had any experiences. When he dealt with my wood , I couldn't even be afraid of seeing my exposed wood. All I could feel was the pain from the wood. Anyway, this was an unhappy experience.
Aug. 4, 2025
Lunedì 4 agosto
Mi vengono in mente solo pensieri di paura, appena svegliata. Però solo le cose che ti fanno paura sono quelle che meritano attenzione.
Per fortuna non sono affatto di fretta, quindi ho avuto del tempo per svegliarmi lentamente.
Ci sono dei test durante il training al lavoro e temo di non passarne un altro. Anzi, non esiste il concetto di passare oppure no, conta solo ottenere un certo punteggio.
Non posso sapere cosa succederà in futuro, quindi devo sentirmi a mio agio, fare del mio meglio e aspettare di vedere come andranno le cose.
Aug. 4, 2025
Aug. 4, 2025
Zurück von dem Museum
Jetzt bin ich zu Hause, es ist aber sehr spät und ich habe gestern Nacht wenig geschlafen. Deshalb bin ich müde und ich brauche sofort Schlaf. Ich werde morgen den Tag erzählen. Ich hatte eine schöne Zeit. Ich war in einem Museum in Mexiko-Stadt, es heißt: "Museo Nacional de Antropología". Bis morgen!
Aug. 4, 2025
وظيفتي
في العام الأكاديمي، اعمل في مطعم متخصص في المأكولات التاكس ماكس، التي مزيحة من المأكولات المكسيكية والأمريكية. هدا نوع الطعام شعبية جدا في أمريكا ونحن مشغولون دائما عندما الطلاب دارسا.
من الناحية الاخرى، في الصيف ليس هناك ناس كثيرون في المدينة، فاغلب منهم يجيون في الفصول الأكاديمية فقط، ولدلك ليس عندنا مستهلكين كثيرين ولا نكسب اكثر اموال بسببه. ويصبح الوظيفة ممل جدا لإنّه ليس هناك عمل لنا
مع انني احب هذه الوظيفة واعتقد أنها احسن حدا من وظيفتي الماضي. غالية زملائي عندهم عمر حوال عمري، وادردش معهم كثيرا عن دراستنا وحياتنا ولماذا نريد الفعل بعد التخرج. بالإضافة اليه، انتهز الفرصة لأتعرف على ناس كثيرين في وظيفتة وأساعد لهم إستكشاف المدينة.
احيانا تمليني وظيفتة، ولكنها تعطيني فرص ممتازة ونكسب اموال من الممكن أن أستخدمها لبلوغ احلامي!