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May 21, 2022
Why would a child hit himself in the head?
Because children always put their mind on those things with full imagination and they don’t care the things in reality sometimes becasue they have a pure heart and innnocent mind. As adults, we should protect children to make them have more security space to do what they like because they have unlimited possibilities.
May 21, 2022
S'approcher
Exemple, tu as ranconté une nouvelle personne que te plait. Vous avez un bon connexion. Malheureusement tu es un peu gênant et lui est un peu timide. À cause de ca rien se passe contre vous. Votre connexion commence à devenir pire. Mais tu n'y veux pas, alôrs tu as aucune choix d'être courageux. N'aie pas peur de t'approcher de lui. Bien sûr ça peut devenir gênant mais tu sais que vous avez un connexion donc un peu de gênant ne fait rien.
May 21, 2022
日本の自殺
近年、日本の自殺は社会問題となっている。日本では、毎日最大90人が自殺で亡くなっている。
自殺の原因は何だ思う？男性、女性、若者の自殺の原因はたくさんある。
最初の原因はうつ病だ。これが最も一般的な理由だ。特にこの時代には、この病気に苦しむ人がたくさんいる。
二番目の理由は作業圧力によるものだ。日本人は月に100時間も働かなければならないことがあり、仕事で多くの倦怠感やストレスを引き起こし、自殺につながる。激しい職場環境の中で、日本のオフィス文化には「上司の前に帰宅することはできない」というルールがある。これは日本の辛い現実のひとつであり、結婚しないことで人口の高齢化が進んでいる理由のひとつでもある。
三番目の原因は学校問題だ。いじめや校内暴力は学校を悩ます問題だ。学校初日には、「先輩」によるいじめにより、生徒の自殺率が上がっている。さらに、学校の試験も学生に圧力をかけ、うつ病、倦怠感の原因にもなり、ゆっくりとうつ病や自殺につながる。
では、この問題を解決するために、日本は自殺率を下げるためにどのような政策をとらなければならなかったのでしょうか。政府はすべての人々のために多くの心理カウンセリングセンターを組織した。その上、日本はまた人々が疲れや落ち込んでいると感じたときにチャットすることを励ます。気分を良くするための感情的なバランスは、自殺率を大幅に低下させる。
May 21, 2022
A review: Puerto Venecia shopping center
There is a shopping center near my town called Puerto Venecia. The main difference with others malls is that it has a lot of open spaces, as an example, almost all restaurants are outside and have a terrace.
The variety of services is other of its strong points. Besides cloth and home stuff shops you can spend your time climbing, doing adventure sports, jumping on trampolines or rowing in a lake.
Even it's a really big shopping center, it's not outskirts and you can get there by bus or bike. Although many people prefer to drive in, I recommend you avoid it unless you really need to load something big or heavy, specially on the weekends. It also has a direct access by motorway used by many visitors coming from near villages and towns.
I recommend visiting Puerto Venecia to have a good time because you can find any thing to do whatever your age or interests is. Even if you aren't into shopping centers at al, Puerto Venecia was built among a pine forest, so you could go hikin or ride your MTB in its sourroundings.
May 21, 2022
May 21, 2022
Raadiot kuulates tööl
Olen viimasel ajal töö juures Eesti raadiot kuulanud. Ma ei saa peaaegu millestki aru, aga muusika on väga hea. Raadio kahel on kaks versiooni: "normaal", teadustajatega, ja R2 extra, jutuvaba veebiraadio.
Muud raadio, mida tööl kuulan on prantsuse RFI uudised, mu lemmilk. Lisaks olen kasutanud veebilehte "radio garden", et kuulata raadioid üle kogu maailma. Aga sul? Kas mõnda välismaa raadiot kuulad? milline? Ja miks? Kas arvad, et on võimalik võõrkeeli õppida raadiot kuulates?
May 21, 2022
日本語を学ぶ理由 (1)
こんにちは！このたび、日本語を学ぶ理由について投稿します。私がこのサイトに着くに至った経緯を教えます。話は長いので、二つの部分に分けます。
昔からずっと言語が好きです。現代人のある時点で勉強する英語の他、フランス語も話せます。でも実は、フランス語を学ぶ前に、日本語との出会いもありました。
高校一年生の時に、必須科目として日本語を初めて勉強しました。私にとって新しくて素敵な経験でした。なぜなら、高校に入学する前に、英語と中国語だけ勉強しました。高校で理系を選んだのに、実は科学が嫌いだった。だから、日本語の授業の時、本当にすっきりしました。授業で挨拶、数字、曜日などの簡単な概念だけ教えられました。文字もひらがなとカタカナだけ使いました。漢字を少しだけかじったことすらなかった。日本語に没頭していた私はネットで追加の学習資料をよく調べました。
残念ながら、高校二年生になった途端に、日本語に興味が薄まってしまいました。二年生の時、日本語は必須科目ではなくなりました。その結果、日本語の練習を怠って、復習もやめました。でも、２０２１年には、日本語を勉強するきっかけをもう一度見つけましたが、その話はまた次回。
May 21, 2022
LGBTの問題
皆さん、おはよう~👋👋今日はどうですか。嬉しいですか。良いことがいっぱあると望みます。これは書いた作文です。良かったらチェックしてくませんか。😸😸
Hi guys, how are you today? I hope you have a wonderful day ❤ Here is my short essay, please check it if you have time. Thank you~😘
現在世界にたくさん社会問題が起こっている。ベトナム人も努力し、社会問題を解決している。私にとって、複数の社会問題の中に最も関心するのがLGBTだ。ベトナムは昔からの固定的な性別役割の偏見がある国なので、ベトナムでのLGBTコミュニティは多くの困難な状況に直面してきた。
学校で、同性愛者の学生が身体的に暴力されて、言葉によるいじめられて、さらにセクハラされる。社会人になったLGBTの人は周りの人々からの見下す態度や厳しい言葉に耐えられる。就職ときにも、社長はLGBTのことを知っていると、より低い給料を支払って、彼らを会社に受け入れないという場合もある。さらに、家族のメンバーさえ多様性を受け入れない。その行動はLGBTの人々の心をひどく傷つけしてしまって、彼らの本当の性別を生きることができない。
でも、今この問題に明るい兆しが見える。新聞やテレビに、LGBTコミュニティについての積極的な情報が提供されたり、映画やドキュメンタリーなどが作成されたりする行動のおかげで、みんなはLGBTの状況と気持ちが深く分かって、将来本当の性で生活することをもっと受け入れやすいと信じる。
LGBTに関する差別を消すために、政府やLGBTの家族の社会全体がLGBTの問題にもっと認知や理解し、彼らへ支援に取り組むのが必要だと思う。
(コロナポストのテーマ)
コロナウイルスによって、社会の全面に大きく影響を与える。その中に映画業界にも影響を受ける。これから、ポストコロナの時代でコロナと共存できるために映画業界が何変化するのか？
まず、コロナウイルスが拡大している時に大勢が集まると危なくて、映画館へ行く人数がとても少なかった。今状況が落ち着いたので、映画館へ見に行く人数がだんだん増えてきた。でも、コロナウイルスがまだ存在しているので、映画館で感染防止のため、座席を半分で販売したり、１日の映される映画の数を減らしたり、映される回を増やしたりする対策がいいと思う。
次に、コロナウイルス感染症が流行している場所に映画館が休止になり、映画が映されることができない。その時にネットフリックスなどのンラインで映画を放送するサービスを利用して、公開されない新作映画が映されることができる。
最後、新しい状況に適応できるために、映画製作の会社は様々な方法を使用できる。大勢が一度に動くのを防ぐためスタッフが輪番体制で出勤し、新しい技術を応用して少人数で撮影し、風通しの良い安全な屋外の場所に映画を撮影できると思う。
それに従って映画業界はポストコロナ時代に早く適応できるために、一番大切なことはみんなの取り組みだと思う。
May 21, 2022
May 21, 2022
Georges St-Pierre
Je viens juste de finir l’autobiographie de Georges St-Pierre. C’était super fascinant. Pour ce qui connaissent pas cet homme il est un combatant Québécois. Il a battu dans le UFC pour plusieurs années mais en ce moment il est retraité.
Je vais pas résumer tout son histoire, je vais juste discuter quelques points que j’ai trouvé intéressant.
Le livre a commencé avec une discussion de comment il était intimidé quand il était plus jeune et qu’il a commencé d’apprendre le karaté pour se défendre. Son père avait une ceinture noir et il a commencé à l’enseigner dans leur sous-sol. Puis après quelques années Georges a commencé à suivre des cours à un dojo locale. Il n’était pas particulièrement doué et il voulait quitté plusieurs fois. Cependant, son père l’avait convaincu de continuer.
L’autre chose que j’ai appris c’est que Georges n’aime pas se battre. Il trouve les combats stressant et imprévisible. Il avait expliqué que tu sais jamais qu’est-ce qui va se passer et c’est facile de se blesser. Il adore s’entraîner dans les arts martiaux mais malheureusement pour gagner une vie dans ce domaine il faut se battre.
J’ai trouvé ca un peu bizarre mais l’auteur a expliqué qu’il y a une différence entre un combattant et quelqu’un qui pratique les arts martiaux. Un combattant c’est quelqu’un qui aime les combats. Il aime l’adrénaline et le competition. Ça c’est pas l’objectif des arts martiaux. C’est d’apprendre le discipline et de se défendre. Le but c’est d’essayer d’éviter les combats.
J’ai vraiment aimé le livre et je le recommande fortement.
May 20, 2022
Un pays francophone
Non pas encore. J'aimerais visiter la France ! J’ai des plans pour visiter Paris, Bordeaux et Nice. J’irai aux monuments dans les villes. Par exemple, l’Arc de Triomphe, les Galeries Lafayette, Le Louvre et plus ! Je rendrai visite à mes amis. J’ai hâte pour mes vacances ! Qu’est-ce que vous recommandez pour mes vacances ? Qu’est-ce que je dois voir ?
May 20, 2022
May 20, 2022
Präpositionen - lokal
Übung 1
Ergänzen Sie die Endungen.
a) Wir gingen in den großen Saal.
b) Zwischen den beiden Ländern fließt ein Fluss.
c) Was hast du da in der Hand?
d) Stell bitte den Stuhl im Flur.
e) Kannst du mir die Adresse auf einen kleinen Zettel schreiben?
f) Hinter mir standen eine Menge Leute an der Kinokasse.
g) In dieser Gegend regnet es häufig.
h) Stell den Koffer auf dem Boden.
i) Hinter dem Haus gibt es einen wunderschönen Obstgarten.
j) Wir setzten uns in den Schatten eines Baumes.
k) Auf dieser Insel gibt es sehr viele seltene Tiere.
l) Paul stellte sich zwischen Rita und mich.
m) An vielen Orten des Landes gibt es zu wenig Wasser.
n)Er stellte seine Hausschuhe unter das Sofa.
o)Du kannst dich ruhig neben mich setzen.
p) Das Haus liegt zwischen der Schillerstraße und dem Marktplatz.
q)Pass auf, wenn du über die Straße gehst!
r) Der Junge versteckte sich unter der Decke.
s)Setz die Mütze auf dem Kopf!
t) Es läutete und vor der Tür stand Max.
u) Du darfst hier keine Poster an den Wänden hängen.
May 20, 2022
La mia vita senza internet per una settimana
Ero vivo prima dell'inizio dell'internet, ma non mi ricordo bene delle cose che ho fatto nel mio tempo libero di quell'epoca.
Direi che se non avessi internet per una settimana, farei le stesse cose che faccio ora, ma senza il livello dell'esperienza aggiunto dall'internet. Per esempio, leggerei un libro senza usare un e-reader e se avessi il bisogno di cercare il significato di una parola, userei un dizionario a cartaceo. Guarderei i miei programmi su TV in diretta, o magari con un videoregistratore o lettore DVD, ma non userei lo streaming. Leggerei il giornale a cartaceo, invece di online, e leggerei una rivista invece di blog. Parlerei con i miei amici sul telefono invece di social media, Zoom, o chat. Inoltre ci sono videogiochi dell'epoca prima di internet che non richiedono un collegamento online.
Per tutti gli altri attività della mia vita, non ho bisogno grande di usare l'internet per passarsela bene. Potevo sempre andare in bici o incontrare i miei amici faccia a faccia al ristorante senza bisogno dell’internet. Ho scoperto che quando sono in vacanza, uso poco i social media e non me ne mancano mai.
May 20, 2022
Realismo mágico
Recientemente, he disfrutado mucho con el autor llamado Haruki Murakami en mis estudios de japonés. Este autor me presentó por primera vez al “realismo mágico”. Yo no sabía qué realismo mágico tenía fuertes conexiones con latino america y esto me sorprendió mucho. Encontré al autor Colombiano a Gabriel García Márquez. Antes de esto, no me interesaba mucho con los autores Latino Americanos, ni tampoco sabía mucho sobre pero me entusiasmé leer algunos libros de latino américa.
Uno de los libros más famosos de todos los tiempos de Márquez es Cien años de soledad. Para ser honesto, me pareció bastante confusa y aún no lo he terminado… pero, me gustan sus otros libros, específicamente sus historias cortas. Esta historia llamada “Ojos de perro azul” es mi favorita porque es muy surrealista. Las historias que parecen extrañas y surrealistas son mi favorita.
May 20, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 75
Summary no. 75
When constable Twitten woke up, he found himself bound in a flat position. He quickly realised that he was inside a cupboard in the police station—inside Inspector Steine’s office, to be precise. Though, he couldn’t remember how and why he had ended up there. But then it all gradually started to come back in clear details. He had come to uncover Mrs Groynes’ real identity all by himself. However, he hadn’t make it to report his astounding findings. Having been a step ahead of him all along, Mrs Groynes had lured him into a trap at the Albion Bank. After that it was all a blank.*
Astonishingly, Twitten gave no further thought to any of that, turning his attention to Inspector Steine and Sergeant Brunswick. He wondered what they would make of him as a policeman. The prospect of those two reproaching him for having made some mistakes was unbearable. He was adamant he had been thorough in his line of inquiry, therefore, he couldn’t have made any mistakes at all.
*I meant that Twitten had no further memories.
May 20, 2022
Talk 10
I wanna be speak like native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me. Do you speak English?
A: Uh~, little bit. But, sorry. I'm in a hurry. So I don't know if I can help you but what's wrong?
B: Oh, I'm fine, if you're in a hurry. Thanks!
A: Sorry I couldn't help you. If you have any questions, You might like to ask the station attendant.
B: Ok. I'll do that. Thanks!
May 20, 2022
Talk 9
I wanna be speak like native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me? Could you do me a favor?
A: Uh~, sorry. I'm in a hurry. So I don't know if I can help you but what's wrong?
B: Oh, thanks! Do you know how to get to Kinokuniya bookstore?
A: Sorry, I don't know. The station attendant might know. I can show you there, if you want.
B: Oh, really?! Thank you!
A: You're welcome. This way.
B: Okay.
A: Oh, come on. There's no one...
B: Really? Oh my...
A: Uh~, what was it? Your Destination.
B: Oh, Kinokuniya bookstore.
A: Okay. If it's close, I'll show you.
B: Oh, really?
A: but if it's far, I'm sorry. Please ask someone else.
B: Okay.
A: Well... Oh, it says about a five-minute walk, so I'll show you.
B: Oh, that's a great help. Thank you so much!
A: You're welcome! Then, let's go.
May 20, 2022
Talk 8
I wanna be speak like native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me? Could you do me a favor?
A: Uh~, sorry. I'm in a hurry. So I don't know if I can help you but what's wrong?
B: Oh, thanks! Do you know how to get to Kinokuniya bookstore?
A: Sorry, I don't know. The station attendant might know. So I can show you ticket counter, if you want.
B: Oh, really?! Thank you!
A: You're welcome. This way.
B: Okay.
Oh, wait. Isn't that guy over there a station attendant?
A: Oh, maybe yes! You can ask that person.
B: Oh, thank you so much!
A: Right here is fine? Just in case should I go with you?
B: Uh~, if you still have time for me, It's reassuring going together, haha.
A: Okay.
ーーー Five minutes later.
A: Are you going to be OK?
B: Yes! You've been very helpful. thank you so much!
A: Nah, haha. I didn't do anything after all. Anyways, have a good trip!
B: Thank you! Take care!
A: You too!
May 20, 2022
Talk 7
I wanna be speak like native!! Seriously!!🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️🔥🔥
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙏
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me? Would you happen to know where a rental store called "Tutaya" is?
A: Is there one nearby?
B: Yes. Probably.
A: Sorry. I don’t know.
Give me a sec, let me check.
B: Thank you.
A: Oh, It seems like the store is no longer in business.
B: Really?!
A: Yeah.
That's too bad.
Can I help with anything else?
B: Oh, It's okay. Thank you so much!
A: You're welcome. Take care.
B: You too.
May 20, 2022
Relation
Dans ma école il y a une fille. Je sais qu'elle m'aime et moi j'aime la aussi, bien sûr amical rien avec d'amour. Le probleme c'est que nous sommes très gênant, par exemple je ne suis pas un gars timide mais j'essayer de pas regarder dans ses yeux si on a un cour ensemble parce que ça me rend nerveux et je crois c'est la même situation pour elle. Mais je pense que on a fait de progrès maintenant on parle plus qu'avant. Je souhaite que nous devons d'amis proches.
May 20, 2022
A Trip
Tomorrow, we're going to get up very early because we will go to spend the day in Girona. We will take a high speed train, so the travel will be short, about thirty nine minutes. Usually, I don't take trains, but this is the better way to arrive girona city, besides fast and comfortable. Tomorrow there be will an urban sketcher meeting in that city, so we will spend drawing all morning. After lunch at the afternoon, we would like to visit this beautiful city. It will be funny.
May 20, 2022
20 mai 2022 - jalousie
Racontez-nous la dernière fois que vous avez vraiment jalousé quelqu’un.
Il y a longtemps que je n’ai pas eu cette sensation et la dernière fois que je l’ai eu, c’était en 5ème et 6ème année du lycée. À ce moment-là, j’étais toujours la chouchoute de ma prof préférée mais il y avait une autre camarade qui l’admirait aussi et elle était aussi la chouchoute de cette prof. On avait des notes similaires et on était tous les deux des élèves responsables. Peut-être qu’on voulait tous devenir la meilleure élève (ou simplement personne) sous les yeux de ma prof. En effet, j’étais jalouse chaque fois que ma camarade parlait plus à elle et pour une raison que je ne savais pas pourquoi, ma prof prêtait plus attention à ma camarade qu’à moi et je n’aimerais pas beaucoup cette camarade.
Pendant l’année pour préparer à l’examen publique, il y avait une fois que j’ai reçu une très mauvais note sur un des exercices de géographie et cette fois-ci, ma prof m’a écrit des mots d’encouragement et j’ai pu enfin sentir sa soin à moi. Mais après ça, je me suis réfléchis : elle avait prêtais plus attention à ma camarade, c’était parce que ma camarade avait plus de besoin que moi; et c’était parce qu’elle avait confiance en moi qu’elle ne me parlait pas trop.
May 20, 2022
Patients, Families Or Doctors
Please correct me and give me some advice about writing. Thank you very much!!!
Patients, Families Or Doctors, Who Should Be The Dicision-Maker?
With the improvement of medical and health awareness, people's concept of medical consumption is constantly changing. A consumption habit with clear demand and purpose is gradually taking shape. Although people's purpose and autonomy in the process of medical treatment avoid the waste of medical and health resources caused by blind consumption, they are also prone to disagreement with doctors in the process of diagnosis and treatment. And who should be the final medical decision maker has sparked heated discussions in the society.
Many people hold the view that the patient’s opinion is the most significant and decisive because they know best what they need. For them, the most important thing at the moment may not necessarily be survival, but the financial burden and quality of life of their loved ones. They will take their physical state, economic situation and social relationships into consideration before making what they think is the best dicision for themselves and the people around, and such a decision should be respected. Furthermore, patients have the right to participate in and make decisions about their own medical care, so respecting their choice reflects the respect for individual autonomy and the maintenance of dignity. Take euthanasia as an example, many late-state patients request it because it allows them to maintain a natural and intact state of life until the end of life, thus they can pend the last time of life with peace of mind and maintain their own dignity. In this case, when the choice is reasonable and feasible, medical staff should adopt it, rather than being stubborn about their own opinion with authority.
Patients do play an important role in medical decision-making, but most people believe that doctors always represent the authority in this field. Although the medical literacy of modern people is much higher than before, medicine is such a profound subject that it’s difficult for non-medical professionals to keep abreast of the latest medical advances. Therefore, medical staff who have undergone systematic study and training can judge the real situation of the disease more accurately than patients. What’s more, decisions made by doctors are not only more professional, but also more objective than those made by patients. Patients may, for a variety of reasons, make decisions that are not the result of thoughtful thinking, but are on a whim or in an emotional state, which often has irreversible consequences. Because of the concept that life is sacred, doctors always look at the problem from the perspective of health and interests, and can more calmly and accurately make decisions that are beneficial to patients.
There is a saying goes, it is a family matter when a person is sick, which suggests that family opinion is also an important factor in medical decision-making. Normally, the health status of patients is not only related to their personal life, but affects the mental state and life quality of their loved ones. Besides, some patients may be in an emotional state when they make decisions. For example, they have just quarreled with their families, or they want to resolve the conflict within the family by hurting themselves. At this time, the opinions of family should be considered to prevent patients from making decisions that they will regret.
In actual clinical diagnosis and treatment, who would be the ultimate dicision-maker should depend on the situation and ethical analysis when there is disagreement. First of all, it is necessary to determine whether the patient has the ability to make autonomous decisions. Those over the age of 18 have the ability to make independent decisions, while those under the age of 18 do not. When the patient has the ability to choose, but cannot agree with family, the patient's opinion should be considered first. When the patient does not have or loses the decision-making ability, the decision-maker should be his family. And if there is disagreement within the family, the views of family representative, such as father in most cases, should be considered first.
When the best plan of the medical staff is rejected by a patient or family member with normal ability to choose, they should find out the real reason for the rejection, and then do a targeted explanation. The choice should be respected and detailed medical records should be made if this kind of effort fails. But if a patient and his family members make a decision that goes against their life value and causes harm to society and others, medical staff can use the right to interfere such dicision and take measures to prevent uncontrollable consequences from happening.
All in all, no matter who makes the dicision, the interests of the patient should always be put first and the patient's autonomy should be fully respected.
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